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"i do" is not so easily said

I have a few questions can you answer them for me, The things I picture in my mind is that what you also see, Do you sit up late at night thinking of my smile? Have you dreamed of this kind of love we share since you were just a child? Do you look into my eyes and often get lost, Will you try to make this love last no matter what the cost? Do you look at me and think to yourself “Man I love this girl”, Could you easily say that you love me more than anything in the world? Do you think of me and smile for no reason at all, Do trust me to help you up sometimes when you may fall, Do you often find it very hard to get me off your mind? Can you try to promise me that you will never leave me behind? Do you often count the days up until you can hold me again or give me a kiss? Does it only take one day apart until it’s me you miss? Can you promise me that you will be the one to wipe away every tear that I cry? when things are rough will you take me by the hand and tell me it’ll be just fine, Will you be there to support me in every step of the way? Will you always love me as much if not more than you did the previous day? Can you promise me that your answers to all of the questions are true? if so, then ill tell you that my answer to every one of these questions is I do.  (Apr 3, 2011 | post #1)

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READ THIS AND CORRECT ME IF IM WRONG!! this is amazing wo...

Thus to you i look when i long for true love, to you i look, your hand i take hold of, to me you are everything, the reason i smile, lay me down upon the earth, kiss me for a while, you are my sunshine in the days of subdue, you shoulder to cry on is tried and true, ive kissed your lips time and time again, ive made love to you every now and then, ive looked into your eyes, gazing for sometime, and yet i still dream to lay close to you all during the night time, and rise in the morning from your arms, bare, the clock ticks on, lets continue our love affair, do the thing we have not yet done, make a list check them off one by one, doing things the world has undreamed of.  (Apr 3, 2011 | post #1)

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o vile heartbreak rate this thing, its genius

Heartbreak O vile heartbreak, why do u come, On days of sunshine, leaving me gloomy and glum, O vile heartbreak, do you revel, And find pleasure putting me through this hell, Can you begin to count the tears you’ve caused me to shed? Or the ounces of blood my heart has bled, O vile heartbreak, at you I scream, You’ve torn to pieces my every hope and dream, Just leave, don’t think of ever coming near, For I’ve fallen in love, and this time you shall not interfere, O vile heartbreak, why did you come, Stay far from my heart, for it has healed, it now beats like a drum.  (Apr 3, 2011 | post #1)

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my revised version of poetry on the story of romeo and ju...

Romeo and Juliet, Juliet and Romeo, Two young lovers in the city of Verona, At first site Romeo swore he was in love, Too bad young Juliet wanted to save herself for the one above, Her mind soon changed she was smitten by his charm, and the talk of his tongue, A week passed by and the wedding bells rung, It was all kept a secret neither the Montague’s nor Capulet’s could know, It was sad fate that the twos families where not friends, but instead foe, With the killing of Tybalt, Juliet’s cousin, Romeo was soon cast away, But the very next morning nude, in bed, together they lay, Out of her bed Romeo had to rush, Juliet mourned, and cried, she had been crushed, Her father thought of a way to dry her tears, But the plan he came up with was one of her biggest fears, He wanted to have her marry a man, whom she did not care for, She told him the truth and he threatened to put her on the street with the poor, Juliet thought long and hard for a plan to get out of this mess, She got sleeping potion and she was off hoping it would be a success, Too bad Romeo didn’t receive the letter, with which she had composed, Explaining the fake death note she had proposed, So when Romeo found her to be, what he thought was dead, He gulped down the poison, and fell on his head, Juliet awake very soon after, She had found her love Romeo dead, it was a disaster, With the kiss of his lips, she only wanted to die, Her eyes caught a glimpse of the dagger at Romeos side, She gripped it her hand, and said a few prayers, It’s crazy what one does when one really cares, Goodbye to Romeo, and a second farewell to Juliet, This story of love, is one I can never forget  (Apr 3, 2011 | post #1)

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my poem please tell me what you think, it is my way of ge...

You Think Sometimes we hurt those we love the most, and sometimes the ones who love us hurt us even more, when that person just abandons you, you’re left crying on the floor, they say they love you but they have to do what’s best, They think that leaving will help you but it leaves you more in a mess, Because you think of how no longer you can kiss them again, the pain you have without them can be seen even when you try to hide it with a grin, how you wish you could just spend another day with this person that you love, The one person you have so many good memories of, The one person who you can never ever forget, that they still love you is something you wish they would admit, you think of how surprised you were when they said this love should end, When that person told you not to long ago that your life together had just began, How you talked and talked about how great this person could make you feel, you just know that the feelings you had for each other were so real, you wonder how someone who loved you so much could so easily withdraw, how even when in a crowded room this person was the only one you saw, you just know in your mind that love like this is very rare, you don’t want to move on because you feel like no one can compare, We always hurt the ones we love, but they can hurt us even more, the place they had in your heart will forever be left sore.  (Apr 3, 2011 | post #1)

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Will you please judge my poem, tell me what you think

Heartbreak O vile heartbreak, why do you come, On days of sunshine, leaving me gloomy and glum, O vile heartbreak, do you revel, And find pleasure putting me through this hell, Can you begin to count the tears you’ve caused me to shed? Or the ounces of blood my heart has bled, O vile heartbreak, at you I scream, You’ve torn to pieces my every hope and dream, Just leave, don’t think of ever coming near, For I’ve fallen in love, and this time you shall not interfere, O vile heartbreak, why did you come, Stay far from my heart, for it has healed, it now beats like a drum.  (Jan 9, 2011 | post #1)