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Nov 11, 2012

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*No name* My gal can leave now, She don't blush to anything i say anymore I try to stay sweet,but maybe my cool ain't sweet When i look at these thoughts my heart hurts Shes got a place in there i guess You used to be loving, thats what she say Should i jus' let it be,and leave her Or should i jus' surrender my heart to her Where does this pride in me come from? Maybe its the obstacles i conquered in the past Is it my background or its jus' the way i turned out Yes im good at what i do, But without her what will i do Should i turn to heavens at this time Why didnt i do that when we used to smile My pride knows no superior at all 'em other gals seem to understand They know I can't stand anyone going into my mind But still they dont stay for long Can i really compare her to those broods Shes been around through the long haul ****this is my first rap verse, I need your help****  (Nov 11, 2012 | post #1)