Awesome chick loves Niall

Zion, IL

#74 Sep 13, 2012
Write more I wanna read more now!!!

“fml=food's my life ;)”

Since: Aug 12

the town of AWESOMENESS

#75 Sep 13, 2012
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Heather

Manama, Bahrain

#76 Sep 14, 2012
More!!!!!
Awesome chick loves Niall

Zion, IL

#77 Sep 14, 2012
One word more "
BradfordBadBoi

White Plains, NY

#78 Sep 14, 2012
we get into a room with people dancing & i see someone really familiar, it was my best friend Allyssa & Bella! " OMG! u guys r here?!?!" i say hugging them " yeah! hey Jenn!" says Allyssa, " OMG! ur with Zayn!?!?" says Bella " Yeah" i say, " Lucky!" she says, " can u hook Liam & me up?" she says, " sure!" i say then Zayn comes over & says " wanna dance?" he says, i look @ Bella & Allyssa & they're both smiling, i smile " ok" i say, we both walk 2 the dance floor & dance with eachother after the dance over Liam comes in, & Bella smiles @ me, i smile back & walk over 2 Liam " hey Liam" i say, " hey Jennifer" he says back " wanna meet my friend Bella?" i say, " sure" he says, i grab his arm & pull him 2 Bella, right when i showed him Bella he couldnt stop looking @ her " hi im Bella" she says shyly " hi im Li......Li......" he says , "i kno who u r" she laughs " lets go dance" he says " okay" she says putting her arm through his, then they walk 2 the dancefloor "its getting late i better go" i say 2 Zayn, "okay ill see u tomorrow" he says, i kiss him & go back 2 my room.........
BradfordBadBoi

White Plains, NY

#79 Sep 14, 2012
OH MY CARROTS!!!! a cute kid from my school that looks like Harry asked me out by singing Stole My Heart from 1D!!! it was so sweet!
Love1d

Levittown, NY

#80 Sep 14, 2012
BradfordBadBoi wrote:
OH MY CARROTS!!!! a cute kid from my school that looks like Harry asked me out by singing Stole My Heart from 1D!!! it was so sweet!
That guy is awesome!

“I love Liam<3”

Since: Jul 12

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#81 Sep 15, 2012
omg!! i luv it!!! thnk soo much 4 puttin me in the story!! & congratulations btw!!!
Heather

Manama, Bahrain

#82 Sep 15, 2012
More!!!
Awesome chick loves Niall

Zion, IL

#83 Sep 15, 2012
Write more
Juliet

Springdale, AR

#84 Sep 15, 2012
I love it!!! Please write more soon!!
Jessie_loves_Zay n_Malik

Virginia Beach, VA

#85 Sep 15, 2012
Write more!!!!!
Nayeli

Houston, TX

#86 Sep 15, 2012
Write more please!!
Geralynne-WMYB-T MH

San Antonio, TX

#87 Sep 15, 2012
Keep going!!
Awesome chick loves Niall

Zion, IL

#88 Sep 16, 2012
Write more NOWWW!!!!!!
Nayeli

Dallas, TX

#89 Sep 16, 2012
We are dying here so please write more
BradfordBadBoi

White Plains, NY

#91 Sep 17, 2012
the next morning i wake up & do my usual buisness with Kyle, in the afternoon, when Kyle leaves i get Zayn 2 come in my room " where do u want me?" i say " right there" he says pointing 2 this elegant red velvet couch in my room " ok just wait a second" i say cheekly while i go get my expensive braclet from the safe Kyle put in my room, i come back & take off my robe, Zayn looks @ me with his eyes wide & mouth open, " close ur mouth, ur gonna catch a fly" i laugh, he laughs 2 but nervously " right th...there on the couch" he says nervously, i lay on the couch, after about a few hrs he finishes, i put on my clothes, he gives me the painting " thx" i say as i kiss him on the lips, he laughs, i put the painting in the safe, then i hear the door knob move "cmon lets go!" i say as i grab my hand & we run into another room, then i see Kyle, Zayn & i start running & laughing until we get all the way 2 the nottom in a room full of cars, we stop @ a car , Zayn opens the car door " ladies 1st he says, i laugh & climb in the car & he climbs in after me, " Zayn u make me feel so free" i say, " cause i luv u" he says i look into his eyes & he leans in & starts kissing me we go 2 the back of the car, he starts taking my shirt off, "Zayn we cant do this here" i say, but he ignores, then i noticed there was no 1 here so i just go with it then we start kissing more ( btw srry im not trying 2 make it wierd) after that we were under a couple a sheets " i luv u Zayn" i say & kiss his forehead, he puts his head on my chest & we just stay there until..........
RachelF

Chesapeake, VA

#100 Sep 17, 2012
So good!

“I love Liam<3”

Since: Jul 12

Location hidden

#101 Sep 17, 2012
MOREE!!!

“fml=food's my life ;)”

Since: Aug 12

the town of AWESOMENESS

#102 Sep 17, 2012
Omg more

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