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Emma

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Jan 21, 2013
 
Chapter 1
BEEP BEEP BEEP!! Ugh, snooze! I don't want to get up today. School sucks. Out of all the 300 students, I have two friends, Andrea and Elle. It's not worth going. I get up anyway and start to get dressed. My wavy blonde hair is streaked with blue. According to the popular girls that makes me a "freak." I'm making a statement that fashion doesn't matter. I pull on my black fishnet tights and black shorts. A red tank top and blue bangle bracelets. Summer cannot come soon enough. "Good morning sweetie. Happy Birthday," my da is always trying to cheer me up an I love him for it. "Mornin Dad! Thanks, I gotta go Andrea planned a special breakfast for me."I rush out the door before my lil sis can stop me. Ever since my mom walked out on the family, dad has always tried to be super nice and calm to us. "Hey birthday girl!" Andrea says. She used to be one of the popular girls but I guess she took interest I me and Elle and left the in crowd. "Hey Andrea. Cute skirt!" I comment. I'm not goth, though I dress like it. I make fashion statements to prove it doesn't matter. Andrea thinks other wise. "You like it? I was taking a chance with it," I roll my eyes and smile. "C'mon lets pick up Elle before she thinks we ditched her."
I thought this was gonna be the best birthday of my life, because I was spending it with both my best friends. I though wrong.
Kaylie_And_Kenzi

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Jan 21, 2013
 
Emma wrote:
Chapter 1
BEEP BEEP BEEP!! Ugh, snooze! I don't want to get up today. School sucks. Out of all the 300 students, I have two friends, Andrea and Elle. It's not worth going. I get up anyway and start to get dressed. My wavy blonde hair is streaked with blue. According to the popular girls that makes me a "freak." I'm making a statement that fashion doesn't matter. I pull on my black fishnet tights and black shorts. A red tank top and blue bangle bracelets. Summer cannot come soon enough. "Good morning sweetie. Happy Birthday," my da is always trying to cheer me up an I love him for it. "Mornin Dad! Thanks, I gotta go Andrea planned a special breakfast for me."I rush out the door before my lil sis can stop me. Ever since my mom walked out on the family, dad has always tried to be super nice and calm to us. "Hey birthday girl!" Andrea says. She used to be one of the popular girls but I guess she took interest I me and Elle and left the in crowd. "Hey Andrea. Cute skirt!" I comment. I'm not goth, though I dress like it. I make fashion statements to prove it doesn't matter. Andrea thinks other wise. "You like it? I was taking a chance with it," I roll my eyes and smile. "C'mon lets pick up Elle before she thinks we ditched her."
I thought this was gonna be the best birthday of my life, because I was spending it with both my best friends. I though wrong.
Ok I finally found it lol I love it!
Sarah Horan

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Jan 21, 2013
 
more!!:D i love it!! <3
Emma

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Jan 21, 2013
 
Hey guys, my batteries low, so I'll write more after school tomorrow.
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#5
Jan 21, 2013
 
yah!

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Since: Dec 12

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Jan 21, 2013
 
It's really good'
Emma

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Jan 22, 2013
 
"Finally you guys got here! I was worried you left me," Elle said out of breath. She slides in the backseat of Andreas bright red jeep. I laugh at Elle. "Well good morning to you to," I say between giggles. "Ok guys I brought bagels and orange juice for breakfast," this was our tradition. Every Friday, one of us brought breakfast and we took the long way to school. "Yummy," Elle says an rubs her hands together, "Oh hey guys? Guess what!" I say with a mouth full of bagel, "I got our plane tickets to Hawaii for the summer!" Since we were all graduating within two weeks, we decided to go on a girls trip after graduation. "Awesome!" Elle says and pumps her fists in the air. Life couldn't get any sweeter. We were coming up on the intersection where the Starbucks is. Andrea turns around for a split second, "Hey Elle-" she is cut off by the sight of an out of control car coming toward us.

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#8
Jan 22, 2013
 
Keep going
Kaylie_And_Kenzi

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#9
Jan 22, 2013
 
Amazin!! Continue
Sarah Horan

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#10
Jan 22, 2013
 
omg more!!:D
Emma

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Jan 22, 2013
 
"Andrea look out!" I scream. She turns around and gets the car In control. She swerved so hard my door flies open and I am sucked out of the car. I'm thrown into the air and land with a thud and shatter of glass.

NIALL'S POV
"C'mon guys! Lets go." Liam calls out. We have a big cd signing that we can't miss. We all hop in te car an drive off. "Hey guys, where are we going again?" I ask. "Sacramento, three hours from here. Ugh. I hate car trips. Squished in a small space and having nothing to do. Harry spends his time on his phone and Louis is just, I don't know what he's doing. Dancing to the radio, I guess? "You alright Niall?"Zayn says while trying to drive at the same time. "Yeah I'm fine," I choke out. No I'm not. I haven't been home in four months because of this stupid world tour. I love my fans and all, but after awhile it gets overwhelming. Liam turns around and tries to talk to me, but I ignore him. After about five minutes I hear a loud pop on the side of the car and we swerve out of control. "Everyone hang on!" I hear Harry yell. "Zayn, quick!" I yell to get him to pay attention to the people around us and not just our situation. We miss the first couple of cars, but once we get to an intersection, we hit a bright red jeep. A girl comes flying out of the passenger door and lands on our hood. Once we slow to a stop I rush out of the car. "Oh no, no, no..." I whisper. A girl with a strange yet attractive sense of style landed through our windshield. She has cuts everywhere and her ankle is bent in an unnatural way. "Oh no, Kenzi!" I hear a girl yell. A girl dressed similar to the one on the car comes out. "Elle wait a second!" I hear. The boys make it out of the car and take in the scene. I couldn't believe this.

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Jan 22, 2013
 
OMC This is good!!!!!!!!!!Write MOre PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!

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#13
Jan 22, 2013
 
O EM GEE! Keep going this fan fic is AMAZAYN
Emma

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Jan 22, 2013
 
Sorry guys.... I'll have to leave you in suspense.... My phone is almost dead.
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#15
Jan 22, 2013
 
more!!:D
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Jan 23, 2013
 
ELLE'S POV
"Oh my Gummi bears... Where's Kenzi?" I manage to say. "I think she landed on that car.." Andrea says with all her might, "Are you all right?" She says. "I'm fine I'll be bruised and shaken, but not as bad as Kenzi," I reassure her. "Same," she says between deep breaths. I hop out of the car, and run over "Kenzi!!" I scream. "Elle wait!" Andrea says. I run up to her. "Oh Kenzi," Andrea says trying to fight back tears. She looks up and almost faints on the spot. A dude with a whiff catches her before she bumps her head. "Are you alright?" He says and sets Andrea on the ground. "You-you-you're..." She stammers and then blacks out. She'll be fine for now. "Someone, call 911." I say, then realize I'm standing amongst strangers. "I'll do it myself," I mumble. As I'm explaining the accident I look over. That blonde kid hasn't moved from the spot I found him in. He's just standing there, staring at Kenzi's possibly lifeless body. I look over at Andrea. She got up and looks like she just saw a ghost. "You're One Direction," she whispers. "Who?" I ask puzzled. "Remember that band I told you about? That's them," I look at Andrea and then back at the ragtag group of five. Great, to make this worse we have five ego maniacs over our shoulders. "We'll have to wait for the ambulance, " I say. I stare at the blonde. He's still starin at Kenzi. Kenzi will never forget THIS birthday.
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Jan 23, 2013
 
OMG keep going!!:D
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Jan 23, 2013
 
ANDREAS POV
OMIGOSH. I cannot believe I'm standing with One Direction. It's only destiny that they could be the ones to cause this. The universe wants something, but I don't know what. I'm standing by Kenzi, doing the best I can to help her. I put pressure on the bigger cuts on her body. It looks like she broke her ankle. The sirens of an ambulance roar by. "C'mon everyone! Step away from the girl," an obviously cranky nurse screeches. Niall steps back, but is still. Staring at Kenzi. "C'mon Andrea," Elle says, "lets go to the hospital to wait for her, do you guys want to tag along? Our car isn't nearly as bad as yours..." They all solemnly nod their heads. Niall and Zayn hop in, "We'll wait for the tow truck," Louis calls out. Niall nods his was and gets back in. "So what exactly happened back there?" Elle asks. Zayn speaks up while Niall stares out the window. "We where in our way to a cd signing when, I think, our tire went flat. And we lost control," Elle huffs under her breath. "Niall are you alright?" Zayn says. "No," he mumbles, "I-I think I know her..."
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#19
Jan 23, 2013
 
You have a very good writing style! More please.

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#20
Jan 23, 2013
 
WHAT?!?!? Niall thinks he knows Kenzi??!?!!!! OMC I must know more!!!!!!!!!!

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