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Oct 18, 2012
 
"Liam I can't do this any longer....what the hell am I supposed to do??"

"Harry! Stop treating her like a toy. Just tell her"

"Ugh! You have NO idea how much I want to!"

"Well then do it Harry, it's been like what? 5 months?"

"Ugh, you know what I will!

I grabbed my jacket and stormed out of my flat.
Today I was prepared to tell Samantha the truth.
We all had to know the truth
This isn't a game, where the first one to complain loses, this is life. I grabbed my keys and jammed it into my car.
Today was the day, I thought.
I drove and drove the ten blocks to Samantha's house.
I parked in front of her house, and got out of my car.
Today, I just have to do it today, I can't wait any longer

I grabbed my set of keys to her house, and opened the front door to her flat

"Um, Samantha?" I said a bit loudly
I walked slowly and cautiously into her living room and looked around. She wasn't there
Funny, I thought, she's usually here
"Samantha?" I said a bit more loudly. I walked across the corner to her room.
I turned her rooms doorknob, wen it didn't budge.
I turned it a bit more times, before I realized it was locked from the inside
I started to furiously turn the doorknob while pounding on the door
Where the hell was Samanthat?
Unless...she was in there...with someone else
"Samantha! Open this door now!" I yelled furiously.
It took a few seconds more of my intense pounding, for Samantha to finally unlock the door
I was expecting to see her in nothing but a blanket, plus it wouldn't be such a shock to find out she was having other relationships with other men.
But to my suprise, she was in her normal house clothes. In baggy pants, and a t-shirt.
And it wasn't mine.
Thats wierd, she usually wears my clothes
"How'd you get In here Harry?"
I couldn't help but notice her blotchy skin around her eyes
Had she been? Nah, she was probably sleeping.
This is one girl, that never cries.
"I have keys remember?" I simply said
She didn't say anything, instead she went in her room and closed the door again
Except, my foot was in the way
This must be a record, she actually doesn't want to be near me
"Wow. Did you finally learn to stop bothering me?" I said
She said nothing and sat slowly on her bed
"Ha, so now you're not talking to me Huh?"
"Harry...Why are you here?" I couldn't help but notice the hint of pain in her voice. But I ignored it. Good, she was finally feeling what I had felt all this time with...her
"I came to tell you Something..."
She looked up and shrugged her shoulders "What?" She said
I sighed and decided to let it all out
"I can't do this any longer Samantha. It's not fair to me. This has been hell, and you know it-"

"Harry-"

"No, Samantha let me talk! This can't keep going, I just can't keep this going!-"

"Harry-"

"Samanthat you're dreaming! You think I love you, but I don't! I don't, and I won't ever will! Samantha I don't lo-"

"Harry please don't say it"

"-I don't love you"

I couldn't look up at her, it pained me to say it, but there I said it to her face.
It was a bit of an awkward silence after that. Although I knew I had hurt her, maybe I could take it back-

"Im pregnant."

I looked up at her. What has she just said?

"See? Two can play at this game." Samantha said as she walked out of her room, leaving me behind.

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Oct 18, 2012
 
Btw, that was Harry's POV
Forgot to add that -.-
Anyways this is my new story :D!
Came up with this, this morning, and decided to write it out!!
Tell me what you think!!

“Hezzooooooo!!I'm Rachel! XD”

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Oct 18, 2012
 
Its soooooo good!!! And are you holding auditions? Bcuz this is a fanfic I would most def luv 2 b in!!!!

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#4
Oct 18, 2012
 
Good do more!!:)
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#5
Oct 18, 2012
 
Omg please write more
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#6
Oct 18, 2012
 
Keep going this is a kool fanfic

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Oct 18, 2012
 
Harry's POV

As I walked out of Samantha's room, I found her curled up beside the couch

I expected her to be smirking at me and demanding me to be there for her, and most importantly even marry her

But, I saw her there curled up in a ball, silently crying into her arms.

Before I could even feel the tiniest of pity for her, I felt a big angry

But with myself.

I kneeled down beside her and silently whispered

"When?"

She brushed her hair past her ears and looked at me with disgust

"Like you would care..." she snarled back

I immeidatly felt ashamed of myself, because I knew what I had said hurt her...even more than I thought it would

"I care, because it's my baby"

"But you don't even love me..."

"So? This kid is my kid, and I swear I'll be the father I have to be to be sure it has everything it needs...no matter if I love you or not"

More pain flashed through her eyes as she let her tears flow down her rosy cheeks, as it fell down the side of her red thin lips

Nothing at all like Rachel's..

"I bet you wish this baby belonged to
you and Rachel." Samantha said

I looked down at the floor, not answering her question

"Harry, don't you think this suprises me as much as it does to you? Harry, I never planned for this to happen, I'm really sorry-"

"Save it samanth-"

"But I don't care that it came unplanned, this baby is now a part of me, and I'm not giving it up, no matter what happens, and I'm not at all pressuring you to be part of this. If you don't, than I'll go back to California with my parents, and never ever mention this to you."

"Samantha are you crazy? This is my kid too you know! I don't care that I don't love you, I want to be here for the kid, because it's part of me too."

Samantha got up and as she walked back to her room she whispered

"Im so sorry Harry..."
and than she locked her bedroom door again as I heard muffled cries coming from her room.

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Oct 18, 2012
 
RachelF wrote:
Its soooooo good!!! And are you holding auditions? Bcuz this is a fanfic I would most def luv 2 b in!!!!
um I probably will need, but not now, if that's okay with you
Im sorry though :(
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#9
Oct 18, 2012
 
More this is really really good! Write more soon

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#10
Oct 18, 2012
 
More
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Oct 18, 2012
 
More!
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#13
Oct 18, 2012
 
It's so good! Keep going!!
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#14
Oct 18, 2012
 
Keep going!! Pleasee!
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Oct 19, 2012
 
More soon it's super good
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Oct 19, 2012
 
Keep going this is great!!!
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#17
Oct 19, 2012
 
More plz LUV it
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#18
Oct 19, 2012
 
I love it! MORE!!

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Oct 19, 2012
 
Harry's POV

"Hello Harry, you alright?"

"Hellos who's this?"

"Haha, man I know we haven't seen each other for like three weeks, but aren't you over exaggerating?"

"Haha, yeah that's all funny, but seriously whos this?"

"Harry, stop."

"...Louis?"

"Oh my god! You actually know my name!?" He yelled sarcastically.

I sighed out

"Louis, I'm not up to jokes-"

"But Harry-"

"-Bye."
I sighed and hanged up, and brought my attention back to the front of the road
I drove and drove
I know, that it's almost 3 am in the morning, and I'm probably not allowed to be out this late according to Paul, but hey, I'm Harry Styles.
I kept on driving and started to play with the wheel
"Yeah, I play with death..." I whispered
Which only made me laugh at myself
"Im such a nerd..." I whispered
As soon as I got home, I shut the door slowly and gently threw my keys on the counter
Obviously not gently enough
"Harry...?" Liam whispered.
I sighed and let my breath out slowly
"Liam?" I asked back
"Samantha-"
"yeah, I know Liam, I already told Samantha so don't worry about nagging me any further, cause I get it alright? I get it, Liam! I told her! Alright? Are you happy now?" I said a bit too loudly

"No Harry-"

"What than Liam? What?"

"Right after you left, Samantha called, she said something about some unexpected news?"

"Yeah I know, she already told me..."

"Well? What was it??"

I nervously walked to the living room while Liam was following behind
"Harry?" He whispered.

"Look Liam, it's been a long night, I need some sleep..."

Liam nodded and walked away

I wanted to say everything to him, but I couldn't
I mean, how was I was suppossed to make Liam believe me, when I couldn't even believe it myself?
What if Samantha was making this all up?
Why if she was lieing?
What if she was just tricking me all over again?
What if it was one of her horrible lies that she made up, that seperated me and Rachel?
What if Samantha had never told me that?
Would Rachel still be my side?
I kicked my drawer and the lamp fell
I growled and sat on my bed
I wish I'd never kissed Samantha that day, I wish I would've kept fighting for Rachel, my one and only love...
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#20
Oct 19, 2012
 
More please
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#21
Oct 19, 2012
 
More!! It's extrodinharry!!

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