You owe me ten bucks!!!!! (Fanfic)

Since: Sep 12


#168 Oct 7, 2012
More oooo who's the random girl!


Since: Jul 12

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#169 Oct 7, 2012
Annie Javvad Malik

Gilbert, AZ

#170 Oct 7, 2012
Keep going!!!!!!!!!!

Albuquerque, NM

#171 Oct 7, 2012
"Haha hey baby!" Louis said standing up and wrapping his arms around her waist. "Hi!" She said to Louis smiling. When I look at her I imedentely feel self concious. She has light curl blond hair flipped over to one side. She has light sky blue eyes. She's wearing a leather jacket with purple skinny jeans and red lipstick. She looks bad-ass. In a soft way.
I on the other hand look like shit. I'm in a hospital gown with un-brushed hair. I look away. Disgusted with myself. "Oh my god I'm sorry!! I'm Erica! Louis's girlfriend!" She said sitting on my bed. "Amee, nice meeting you!" I say smiling. "Oh!! Your Nialls girlfriend!" She said laughing. "Oh uh no..I'm not." I say looking down. "Oh!! Shit, sorry! It's just the way he talks about you..I thought.." She said blushing. I laugh. "Uh can I go see Niall?" I ask Annie. "Yeah!! He would love that! Can you walk?" She asks laughing while I swing my legs over the bed. "Guess ill find out.." I say standing up. I walk just fine. "Can I change?" I ask Annie who's in her normal clothes. "Nope." She says smiling.
Me and Annie walk to Niall's room. Once we're four feet away from the door Annie tells me somthing.

Since: Aug 12

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#172 Oct 7, 2012
Keep going I need to know what happens!!!!!

Springdale, AR

#173 Oct 7, 2012
I need more!! post more soon!!
Amee loves 1D

Albuquerque, NM

#174 Oct 7, 2012
Hey guys! I changed my name!
Annie Jawaad Malik

Gilbert, AZ

#175 Oct 7, 2012
This is GREAT!!!:D keep Going:)
Annie Jawaad Malik

Gilbert, AZ

#176 Oct 7, 2012
Haha I wanna know what I say:D lol
Brooke T

Weatherford, TX

#177 Oct 7, 2012
Please write more this is a really really good fanfic!!!

White Plains, NY

#178 Oct 8, 2012
plz write more girly

“I love Liam<3”

Since: Jul 12

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#179 Oct 8, 2012
more plz!!
Erica loves Louis

Glen Allen, VA

#180 Oct 8, 2012
Awesome!!! I love how I'm all bad-ass and stuff!!! Thanks!
Kennedy Stylinson

Oshawa, Canada

#181 Oct 8, 2012
I just read the whole thing :) what does Annie tell you?!

“Hai o-o”

Since: Oct 12

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#182 Oct 8, 2012
Amee wrote:
KK here are the parts
Nialls gf-me <3
Liam's gf- Bella
Harry's gf-iswim_liveyourlifelike1D *i need your really name*
Zayns gf- Annie
Louis gf- Erica
If u want to be a friend or sister just ask
Can I be Harry's sister?

Marieville, Canada

#183 Oct 8, 2012

Decatur, IL

#184 Oct 8, 2012
I LOVE this story so much!!!!!! Please keep writing!!!!
Amee loves 1D

Albuquerque, NM

#185 Oct 8, 2012
Kk I might write more later right now I'm watching my fave movie!!!! The lorax!!
Amee loves 1D

Albuquerque, NM

#186 Oct 8, 2012
"Zayn asked me out!!" Annie told me jumping up and down. "Didn't he already?" I asked her. "No.." She said looking confused. "Oh just the way you guys look at each other..." I said smiling "congrats!" I said hugging her.
We walk in Nialls room. There is Liam sitting down with a girl. She has long black hair that fall half way down her back. With deep blue eyes *almost violet* she's wearing a white lace dress with purple heals.
Could I feel any uglier?!? "Amee!!" Liam says standing up. "Hey!!" I said hugging him. "Oh your the famous Amee?!? I'm Bella!" She says shaking my hand. "I'm hardly famous." I say and look over to Niall who's asleep. "Yeah well Niall won't shut up about you!!" Liam says laughing. I see Niall is starting to wake up.

Since: Sep 12


#187 Oct 8, 2012
Please write more! Just wondering when I'm coming in? Omg that sounded pushy I'm sorry

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