“We Are Infinite.....”

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#22 Sep 18, 2012
Thanks!! will post late tonight at like 10:30 or somethin (ps- where i live it is around 3:20 or something)(pps- i wrote the first part at 630 in the morning and im supired it came out well since i barely was awake and aware of what the heck i was writting {(o.o)}
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#23 Sep 18, 2012
WOW!! This is 1Derful!!!:)
Lindsey Hoover

Manheim, PA

#24 Sep 18, 2012
Keep going

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#25 Sep 18, 2012
-Bridget- wrote:
Thanks!! will post late tonight at like 10:30 or somethin (ps- where i live it is around 3:20 or something)(pps- i wrote the first part at 630 in the morning and im supired it came out well since i barely was awake and aware of what the heck i was writting {(o.o)}
What state you in?! I'm in the same time zone:D 3:55 at the moment. Right?
Lindy

Garner, NC

#26 Sep 18, 2012
Eden Horan wrote:
<quoted text>What state you in?! I'm in the same time zone:D 3:55 at the moment. Right?
Same with me.

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#27 Sep 18, 2012
Lindy wrote:
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Same with me.
:O! Awesome haha I'm in PA
Lindy

Garner, NC

#28 Sep 18, 2012
Eden Horan wrote:
<quoted text>:O! Awesome haha I'm in PA
I'm in NC
Kittykat

Kingman, AZ

#29 Sep 18, 2012
I'm in love with your fanfic!!!!!!!! &#128159;
Stewie

Midlothian, IL

#30 Sep 18, 2012
I now want to be a mermaid haha your fanfic is amazing

“fml=food's my life ;)”

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#31 Sep 18, 2012
Stewie wrote:
I now want to be a mermaid haha your fanfic is amazing
Haha Ikr!!!!!!! Write more Bridget
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#32 Sep 18, 2012
By forever....I'm done with this app:( hope your fanfic goes well!!
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#33 Sep 18, 2012
Ok never-mind I'll still be reading the Fanfics but not writing more of my fanfics

“We Are Infinite.....”

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#34 Sep 18, 2012
thanks guys for your comments!! u guys probley already posted at least half of the comments on this fanfic than my other one!! oh and i live in OH

“We Are Infinite.....”

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#35 Sep 18, 2012
I had finished the chant correctly i believe..yep i did. My feet began to tingle and i could feel a tail beinging to form. There was only a slight glow. Then the even slightest glow faded away. I looked down to see what happened. OH MY GOD. I had a tail. And my clothes had disappeared. Like a bra there were shells over my boobs. They had, like, been super glued to my skin or my skin had comibined with the shells. My shoulder length hair was now to my stomach. I had always wanted long hair. Then I realized my hair was a different color. Whoa. It was a black with a lot of aqua, a dark silver and royal blue highlights/streaks. Then I had to look back at my tail. It was a saphire blue. It was absolutely beautiful! I could see the blue scales reflecting the moonlight. My fins were delicate looking but strong. I tried to swim and I thought I did quite well. I was prepared as a kid for this day. My family had a huge pool in the backyard and we all practiced swiming as if we had a tail. We would even tied our legs together. Izzy told me when I was 12 what it was like. Your instincts kick in, once you start swiming like a real mermaid, to go to atlantis. I looked up at the moon and stars one last time before I dove under. Everything was clear. Its not like when your human and you open your eyes, your eyes burn, and if you can see, it only goes to about 2 feet infront of you. Now, I could see everything clearly without my eyes burning. Plus, My contacts had evaporated. If you have eyesight troubles as a human, you dont as a mermaid. Our eyes are called ocean eyes for those reasons. Without them, it would be pointless to be a mermaid. A part of being a mermaid is to help others, the environment or creatures. All of this has to deal with underwater creatures. Or the underwater environment or humans that get into trouble on our waters. Like, some mermaids guided some of the survivors of the Titanic. Stuff like that. But some of us arent even made for that. We have other purposes too. It helps with our powers in our souls that we are destined for. I wouldnt find out mine till the ceremony. It was going to be crazy. Seeing the people, the city and my sisters. I have never seen them in mermaid form so it'll be neat. I just kept swimming by my instincts. It was weird since I'd like to know where Im going but I dont at the same time. Then I saw a faint glow in the distance.

“We Are Infinite.....”

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#37 Sep 18, 2012
It was Atlantis. It had a glow surrounding it. Its what made only mermaids able to find, see and go inside it. If you were in a submarine and happened to come across Atlantis, you wouldnt know it. The glow is the one of the altimmit magic powers left in the human world. It allows humans to pass through and once they enter the glow they are still on earth. Us mermaids are in a part of a pocket dimension, a small demension of our world but isnt in the actual human demension. The only pocket dimension that is known is the majick dimension. And yes it is spelled majick. I dont know why but that was how the ancients spelled it. Its still just pronouced magic.
I got closer and could see more destinctively. The big arched gate with a fancy A in a cirle on top of the arch. To the sides of the gates were tridents. The acutal sides of the gates had carvings in them of ancient writing. I couldnt understand the ancient writing but could understand the current form of writing. It was just like a weird cursive. I went under the arch and offically entered the city. There were a lot of mermaids here. There were even mermen. Usually the mermen dont really become mermen and just stay human. Everyone seamed so fancinating. It was incredible to me. No one bothered to look at me as I swam to the castle. I was glad they didnt, otherwise I would be even more nervous. I got up to the guarded open doors of the underwater castle. I hope I dont get in any trouble with these guys. Especially since they were armed and protected by a white gold chest and helmet armor and spears.

“fml=food's my life ;)”

Since: Aug 12

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#38 Sep 18, 2012
Moremoremore
Kittykat

Lake Havasu City, AZ

#39 Sep 18, 2012
Love it! Please write more soon!!!

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#40 Sep 19, 2012
Lindy wrote:
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I'm in NC
Wouldn't it be weird if each state had a different time zone? Haha
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#41 Sep 19, 2012
Love it!!

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#42 Sep 19, 2012
Keep going I love it!

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