Such a suprise!? (Fanfic)
Anonymous

Warrenton, VA

#21 Aug 18, 2012
I lov it write more plzz
Lauren

Brisbane, Australia

#22 Aug 18, 2012
MarryMeZayn wrote:
<quoted text>
So u dont want to be in it! and ikr!! so would i!!
I do i was saying thanks for saying u will put me in

“Forever & Always will love 1D”

Since: Jun 12

San Diego, California

#23 Aug 18, 2012
Lauren wrote:
<quoted text>
I do i was saying thanks for saying u will put me in
ok good!(: ill write more when i get more comments so tell more people to read it!
The Chosen One xD

Santa Maria, CA

#24 Aug 18, 2012
Keep writing it SOOOO good!!!!!
Vannesa

Valparaiso, IN

#25 Aug 18, 2012
Plzz keep writing

“ One Direction Is My Life <3”

Since: Jul 12

Location hidden

#26 Aug 19, 2012
This is soo good :) love it ! Please continue :)
Lauren Direction

Brisbane, Australia

#27 Aug 19, 2012
Please keep going
Luv ya Niall

Sydney, Australia

#28 Aug 19, 2012
Omg this is so good u have 2 continue I wanna find out we're they take u 4 dinner!!!:D

“Forever & Always will love 1D”

Since: Jun 12

San Diego, California

#29 Aug 19, 2012
I decided to wearmy purple sparkly strapless dress. First i got in the shower. i stood in there letting thew water run down my body. i washed my hair. my body and everything else. i got out of the shower and stood in front of the mirror. i had never noticed how bad my bruises and my cuts were. They covered my body, it looked horible. i will never think of myself pretty again. i started to cry and cry. My dad had put me in this pain and now all i wanted to do was hurt him. tired of looking at myself in the mirror i grabbed my towel and went to go put my dress on. it was gorgeous it can just a little above mid theigh. Then i straigtened my hair which made it very long. Then i applied so lip gloss and some mascara. Then did my shoes that made 6 inches taller. I stood in the mirror and i couldnt believe what i was seeing for just those few seconds i actually thought i looked pretty. But thn i thought of mom and she reminded im pretty no matter what and dont let people tell you different. tears started but i just blinked them away so i wouldnt ruin my makeup. I heard Zayn yell,"Kalee you ready!" "Yes, im coming." I started down the stairs to see Harry and Zayn waiting for me. Their eyes got huge and had the biggest smile planted on their faces. I giggled the looked funny. "You look gorgeous!" they both sayed. i blushed "Thanks!" "So you ready to go?" Zayn asked "Ya but where we going out to eat?" they didnt answer just escorted me to the limo. then we arrived at this french restraunt it was just beautiful.

Continue? sorry it shorts but i will post more later!

“Loves One Direction”

Since: Aug 12

A PLACE

#31 Aug 19, 2012
Love it Kalee
Lindsey Hoover

Lititz, PA

#32 Aug 19, 2012
Love it keep going

“Forever & Always will love 1D”

Since: Jun 12

San Diego, California

#33 Aug 19, 2012
The place was beautiful like gorgeous. Our waitor escorted us to our table and got out drinks. Ok im usually not this mean but this girl was a total slut. She was wearing a mini skirt, 10 inche heels and her boobs were hanging out of her shirt. Can someone say SLUT much.... The waitress came back with our drinks then asking us what we wanted while flirting with Harry and Zayn. I just wanted to stand up slap her and say they arent interested but i couldnt. The waitress left and Zayn said, "Well isnt she a charmer" We all laughed about that then i say a girl that was sitting at the bar! She looked like my BFF from California but she moved to...ENGLAND! I went to get up and Harry grabed my hand "Where you going?" "Dont worry ill be right back." i could feel them staring at me and just burning holes threw me. i walked up to the girl "Lauren..?" She turned around and surely enough it was her! "Kalee!!!!!" She jumped at me giving me the biggest hug knocking me to the ground.(Ok me and Lauren have been BFF sense we were 3. then she moved when we were 14. she had helped me threw everything. Ive told her everything. we had kinda had a BFF romance like bromances but for girls.) She was on top of me while we layed on the floor while people stared even Zayn and Harry. They had the most confused looks on their faces. Lauren and i just started laughing uncontroaby! "Why are you England?" She asked me and now i was on top of her. It was so weird but we were in love JK. We were in love as BFF forever and ever. "I ran away and now im staying with these two guys from One Direction!" "One direction.. that boy band?" "Ya.." "Holy crap you lucky duck i might just murder you right now and take you spot!" "you couldnt kill me with out balling your eyes out, you love me to much!" "Haha true that my lovely wife!" (As you can see me and Lauren are married but none of you can judge cuz i doubt you dont do this with your BFF) We finally got off each other and i took her to the boys. "Zayn, Harry this is my BFF, Lauren!" "well hello Lauren!" they both said while giving her the cutest smiles and Harry winked at her. i got very jealous.. wait no i can get jealous if Lauren wants to date Harry she can..No she cant cuz I like him. Well Lauren always got the guys as we were kids but she always told me i was way pretty then her and all the guys were just way to scared to ask me out. i always disagreed but she was like my mother. Lauren sat with us at the booth and thank god Lauren was her cuz she told off our slut waitress she didnt cuz if i did it it wouldnt be pretty. "Thank god you did that Lauren cuz if i did it wouldnt be pretty!" "ahh..i can still she your still the same girl i feel in love with!" The boys looked at us so weird and me and Lauren burst out laughing.. It was just priceless you should have seen their faces. we explained them our relationship and i think i get it. "Ahh so you guys have like a romance going on like a bromance but between girls." Zayn said "exactly!" and of course Harry being the weirdo he is said "Thats hot!" "Harry Styles you little weirdo!" I said to him. He just laughed at me and gave me a wink! I think the inside of me melted when he did that! Idk. I think i might like Harry but i think he likes Lauren. If he does ill be crushed but then their is Zayn. oh wait no hes not avaible cuz i remember him telling me he has a girlfriend name Perrie i think it was.. After our night Lauren decided to leave but she gave me her number so we could catch up. Then me Harry and Zayn left and went back to their place. We pulled an all nighter watching movies. It was quite fun. "You guys have made this the best birthday ever. Thanks so much!!" "Your very welcome darling!" Zayn said "Anything for you Kalee" Harry said while giving me that smile of his that just makes you fall in love with him!

Continue?! Kenzi youll come in next part in not then the part after that. Hope you guys like it. Try to get more people to read it! Love ya!(:
The Chosen One xD

Santa Maria, CA

#34 Aug 19, 2012
Keep going!!!! It's great!!!!:)
shy(:

Ewa Beach, HI

#35 Aug 19, 2012
It's great(:
Anonymous

Warrenton, VA

#36 Aug 19, 2012
More!!!!
Lindsey Hoover

Lititz, PA

#37 Aug 19, 2012
Keep going

“fml=food's my life ;)”

Since: Aug 12

the town of AWESOMENESS

#38 Aug 19, 2012
Mor please!

“Loves One Direction”

Since: Aug 12

A PLACE

#39 Aug 19, 2012
YAY!!! cant wait
Nayeli

United States

#40 Aug 19, 2012
Write more please
Lauren

Brisbane, Australia

#41 Aug 19, 2012
Naww i legit do that with ny biffle.heheh keep going!!

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