KatieHoranLovesN iall

London, UK

#21 Sep 18, 2012
Wow keep going I wanna here the end
AlennaMarie

Sarnia, Canada

#22 Sep 18, 2012
I woke up the next morning, and I was energized. In fact I was hyper. Super duper hyper.
"ZAYN ZAYN ZAYN!" I said.
He groaned.
I mimicked him.
"What is going ON in there?" I heard who I believe was Louis say.
"Dunno. But if he did my sister Im making sure she was ok with it." Liam whispered.
I was gunna have some fun.
"Ooooohhh, yeaaah." I said seductively.
"What are they DOING?" Harry said.
"That sounds intense." Niall whispered.
"Thats it.. ohhh." I said.
I bounced the bed, and then rolled off of it making a noise. I heard Liam say "I swear Zayn if she didnt want this.."
And then I giggled. Zayn woke up and I filled him
in. He laughed (quietly) and we continued the fun for 2 minutes.
We walked out fully dressed, hair nice and everything. Looking awake.
The boys opened their mouths, but I flased a smile and they shut up.
We were all eating breakfast, and Zayn and Harry were having a thumb war.
"How did you guys "sleep" last night Alenna and Zayn?" said Harry.
Zayn and I smirked.
"It was a lovely sleep, thanks. And you and Geralynne?" I asked.
"Fine.. she was sick a bit. Im gunna go cuddle her to see if shes okay." Harry said standing up.
Awww. Nice.
"Just lovely? Or LIVELY?" said Niall. Louis high fived him, and Liam just eyed me.
"Whatever do you mean?" I said smirking. Zayn looked ready to burst of laughter. He had that gorgeous true happiness smile.
Liam shifted.
"Look, we heard your little sleeping party, so dont act all innocent. You both agreed to it, right Zayno?" Liam said.
Me and Zayn lost it. We laughed for a good 3 minutes.
"What?" said Niall.
"We faked it, cos we heard you lads whisperin!" Zayn said.
The boys smiled.
"Oh.. phew!" Said Liam.
Hahah! We pulled a good one.
Eloves1Dandcarro ts

Brunswick, OH

#23 Sep 18, 2012
Love itt
KatieHoranLovesN iall

London, UK

#24 Sep 18, 2012
Lol
I am meant to be I bed but when I read this laughed really loud and my parents came in (I'm in England and its 9:50pm)
Geralynne-WMYB-T MH

San Antonio, TX

#25 Sep 18, 2012
Izzy Marquez luvs nandos wrote:
<quoted text>Om plz keep going!! And not to sound rude but I thought I was Lou's gf and ally was Niall's and Geralynne was Harry's?
yea I thought that too
Ally

Perris, CA

#26 Sep 18, 2012
who="Izzy Marquez luvs nandos"]<quoted text>Om plz keep going!! And not to sound rude but I thought I was Lou's gf and ally was Niall's and Geralynne was Harry's?

Lol and i did too
AshleyTavares

Sarnia, Canada

#27 Sep 19, 2012
Stop complaining- shes trying!
AlennaMarie

Sarnia, Canada

#28 Sep 19, 2012
Sorry loves! I got mixed up! Okay got it aha:) x Sorry!
And AshleyTavares? They werent being rude. Dont come in and be all bitchy. Thanks.
AlennaMarie

Sarnia, Canada

#29 Sep 19, 2012
"Where to?" asked Jennifer- Liams girlfriend.
Geralynne, Izzy, and Ally (Harry, Louis, Niall) looked at Liam.
I just hugged him. Liam had been a little upset because his best mate (out of the band) has cancer.
I didnt say anything, but he had told the boys and me, and Jen.
"I think we will have a lazy day." said Liam.
Zayn and the boys walked in, giving their girlfriends hugs ans kisses.
Zayn hugged Liam and whispered something in his ear, and rubbed his hair. Liam laughed and said "Love YOU!" and Zayn smiled.
"Lets watch paranormal activity, shall we?" I asked.
Eveyone agreed.
I was kinda scared because I has never seen PA before.
Zayn chuckled and read my mind.
"I will be right here love! You are MORE than welcome to cuddle." he said.
I snuggled up to him.
Harry was cuddling Geralynne, Niall was to Ally, And Louis to Izzy.
Liam was stroking Jens head. She looked comfy.
Zayn placed my head on his chest.
Great day.
Jennifer Loves Liam

Park Ridge, IL

#30 Sep 19, 2012
More more more!!!
AlennaMarie

Sarnia, Canada

#31 Sep 19, 2012
Zayn's POV

Man, Alenna is pretty. Like really pretty. But Im not a guy to slap her butt or whistle. I was raised to be a gentlemen, and thag women can outsmart me in a second. They arent toys and they arent objects.
Man, mum taught me well.
"Liam, how is everything?" I asked Liam. I felt bad for the poor lad.
"Oh, fine. Thanks mate, youre the best." he said. I nodded.
Just then Niall walked in, looking scared.
"Guys! Issue. There was a murder down the street and they think Harry did it!" Niall said.
Harry was in tears. I burned with anger. Harry? No. Harry may be a pervert, but he is one of the nicest people I know. He would never.
"Louis? You thinking what I am?" I said.
Louis nodded.
We hollered to the girls and left downstairs.
We peered out the window, and sure enough, the cops were there.
Ugh.
I walked up to them.
"Hello sir! Thanks for the buisness." Once again- raised too well.
"Yes. Youre Zayn and Louis!" he said.
Louis glared.
"Harry. WOULD. NEVER." he said.
"We know, its the press." I said.
I called Gerralyne. She was PISSED.
She came right down, Harry under her arm.
"DO YOU SEE WHAT THE FUCKING PRESS DID TO MY INNOCENT SWEET ANGEL HEARTED BOYFRIEND?" She yelled.
"Ger.." Harry began. She stopped him.
"NO! YOURE HURT!" She yelled.
"As he should be! Its all a lie! For PUBLICITY!" I said.
"Tell the press we will have them sued and arrested." Louis said.
"Relax.We were letting it all cool down today and then announcing it wasnt him." said the police.
"Better. Or I swear." I said.
The man nodded, and we left.

Nialls POV, Liams, and Lou and hazzas next!
Geralynne-WMYB-T MH

San Antonio, TX

#32 Sep 19, 2012
AlennaMarie wrote:
Zayn's POV
Man, Alenna is pretty. Like really pretty. But Im not a guy to slap her butt or whistle. I was raised to be a gentlemen, and thag women can outsmart me in a second. They arent toys and they arent objects.
Man, mum taught me well.
"Liam, how is everything?" I asked Liam. I felt bad for the poor lad.
"Oh, fine. Thanks mate, youre the best." he said. I nodded.
Just then Niall walked in, looking scared.
"Guys! Issue. There was a murder down the street and they think Harry did it!" Niall said.
Harry was in tears. I burned with anger. Harry? No. Harry may be a pervert, but he is one of the nicest people I know. He would never.
"Louis? You thinking what I am?" I said.
Louis nodded.
We hollered to the girls and left downstairs.
We peered out the window, and sure enough, the cops were there.
Ugh.
I walked up to them.
"Hello sir! Thanks for the buisness." Once again- raised too well.
"Yes. Youre Zayn and Louis!" he said.
Louis glared.
"Harry. WOULD. NEVER." he said.
"We know, its the press." I said.
I called Gerralyne. She was PISSED.
She came right down, Harry under her arm.
"DO YOU SEE WHAT THE FUCKING PRESS DID TO MY INNOCENT SWEET ANGEL HEARTED BOYFRIEND?" She yelled.
"Ger.." Harry began. She stopped him.
"NO! YOURE HURT!" She yelled.
"As he should be! Its all a lie! For PUBLICITY!" I said.
"Tell the press we will have them sued and arrested." Louis said.
"Relax.We were letting it all cool down today and then announcing it wasnt him." said the police.
"Better. Or I swear." I said.
The man nodded, and we left.
Nialls POV, Liams, and Lou and hazzas next!
Hahaha!!! That is hilliarous!! I'm like that in real life thank you!!! MORE!!
Jennifer Loves Liam

Park Ridge, IL

#33 Sep 19, 2012
More!!!!!! Soon!!!!!!
Ally

Perris, CA

#34 Sep 19, 2012
Please continue its amazing!
Geralynne-WMYB-T MH

Addison, TX

#35 Sep 22, 2012
alenna come back!!
AlennaMarie

Sarnia, Canada

#36 Sep 22, 2012
Sorry I was in the hospital:)

Liam's POV

Jennifer is a godess. She is gorgeous. I looked over at Zayn, he was cuddling Alenna. I looked into Jennifer's eyes, and she looked up at me.
"Jennifer, youre so gorgeous." I said.
She kissed me, and i picked her up and took her to our room. We had been dating 7 months, and I was getting ready to propose. I needed to talk to Harry and Zayn- I promised they could help me pick the ring.
I wanted it to be special.

Harry's POV

"Ger! Were going out love!" i yelled.
She walked out, and my jaw hit the floor. Zayn was behind me and he pushed my jaw back up.
"You look lovely Ger." Zayn said, as he continued walking.
She was wearing a strapless purple dress, that hugged all the right places, nude heels, and a sparkly purple necklace. Her hair was curled.
Wow.
"What Zayno said. Wow babe." I said.
She kissed me, and took my hand.
"We will be back by 10!" I yelled.
We left.
I was takkng her to the London Eye.
As we hopped on, it tt started to the top. I put my hand around her waist.
"This sunset is gorgeous." she said.
"It has nothing on you." I said.
She giggled.
We reached the top. It stopped, and we kissed for a while. I just kissed her and kissed her. It was perfect. She is perfect.

Nialls POV

"ZAYN. Truth or dare." I said.
"DAYUH!" he said in that Pakistani accent.
"Kiss Alenna." I said.
"OKEEEEE!" he yelled.
He kissed her.
"NIALL! TRUTH OR DAYUH?" he said.
"SHH!" Alenna said giggling.
"Truth!" I said.
"OK. So, how pretteh is Alleh?" Zayn said.
"Off the charts." I said.
Ally blushed. I put my arm around her. We continued to play, but all I could focus on was Ally.

Louis POV

Izzy is PERFECT.
"Izzy, do you want to go out to Stan and Ashlen's house? He called me..." I said.
"Sure!" said Izzy.
We drove off.
-
"STAAAAN!" I yelled.
"Hey Lou! Ashlen, lovey can you get that? Mally is on the phone."
"Sure love." Ashlen said.
Stan and I had gorgeous girls. Ashlen had bleach blonde hair, super long legs,medium tanned skin, and peircing turquoise eyes.
Izzy was just perfect. Absolutely PERFECT.
"Hey Ashlen!" I said.
"Hey Lou! Come on in. Hey Izzy! You look stunning." Ashlen said.
We ordered some Chinese and just hungout. I love being with the boys, but Stan is amazing. So are Izzy and Ashlen.

Sorry again! I was in the hospital.
Sorry for not being active.
Geralynne-WMYB-T MH

Addison, TX

#37 Sep 22, 2012
AlennaMarie wrote:
Sorry I was in the hospital:)
Liam's POV
Jennifer is a godess. She is gorgeous. I looked over at Zayn, he was cuddling Alenna. I looked into Jennifer's eyes, and she looked up at me.
"Jennifer, youre so gorgeous." I said.
She kissed me, and i picked her up and took her to our room. We had been dating 7 months, and I was getting ready to propose. I needed to talk to Harry and Zayn- I promised they could help me pick the ring.
I wanted it to be special.
Harry's POV
"Ger! Were going out love!" i yelled.
She walked out, and my jaw hit the floor. Zayn was behind me and he pushed my jaw back up.
"You look lovely Ger." Zayn said, as he continued walking.
She was wearing a strapless purple dress, that hugged all the right places, nude heels, and a sparkly purple necklace. Her hair was curled.
Wow.
"What Zayno said. Wow babe." I said.
She kissed me, and took my hand.
"We will be back by 10!" I yelled.
We left.
I was takkng her to the London Eye.
As we hopped on, it tt started to the top. I put my hand around her waist.
"This sunset is gorgeous." she said.
"It has nothing on you." I said.
She giggled.
We reached the top. It stopped, and we kissed for a while. I just kissed her and kissed her. It was perfect. She is perfect.
Nialls POV
"ZAYN. Truth or dare." I said.
"DAYUH!" he said in that Pakistani accent.
"Kiss Alenna." I said.
"OKEEEEE!" he yelled.
He kissed her.
"NIALL! TRUTH OR DAYUH?" he said.
"SHH!" Alenna said giggling.
"Truth!" I said.
"OK. So, how pretteh is Alleh?" Zayn said.
"Off the charts." I said.
Ally blushed. I put my arm around her. We continued to play, but all I could focus on was Ally.
Louis POV
Izzy is PERFECT.
"Izzy, do you want to go out to Stan and Ashlen's house? He called me..." I said.
"Sure!" said Izzy.
We drove off.
-
"STAAAAN!" I yelled.
"Hey Lou! Ashlen, lovey can you get that? Mally is on the phone."
"Sure love." Ashlen said.
Stan and I had gorgeous girls. Ashlen had bleach blonde hair, super long legs,medium tanned skin, and peircing turquoise eyes.
Izzy was just perfect. Absolutely PERFECT.
"Hey Ashlen!" I said.
"Hey Lou! Come on in. Hey Izzy! You look stunning." Ashlen said.
We ordered some Chinese and just hungout. I love being with the boys, but Stan is amazing. So are Izzy and Ashlen.
Sorry again! I was in the hospital.
Sorry for not being active.
omg its ok!! thank u!!! this story is SO FREAKING GOOD!!!
AlennaMarie

Sarnia, Canada

#38 Sep 22, 2012
Alennas POV

The boys had practice again for the tour. They left England in two days! What were we supposed to do?
Right, were going. Thats a little hard to process.
Louis and Zayn were chasing some poor pigeon.
"KEVIN GET BACK HERE YOUNG MAN!" Zayn yelled.
"KEVIN STOP BEING AN ASS YOU FILTHY PIGEON!" Louis yelled.
I sighed.
They caught up.
I looked at Zayn, but he didnt look back at me, he looked terrified. He was staring at a red head girl, with a flamboyant outfit. All the boys looked deathly scared.
"Jen, who is she?" I asked.
"She is Mally. Their old stylist before Lou." said Jen.
"Old stylist?" I asked. Geralynne, Izzy, and Aley looked equally confused as me. I looked at Jen.
"The boys will explain." she said.
"BOYS! How lobely to see yus!" Mally said.
They kept walking, so i held Zayns hand and followed.
Who was she?
We got inside and Louis locked the door. Everyone who needed to be inside was.
"Why is Mally so bad? Ashlen was talking about her yesterday." Izzy asked.
"She is a pedophile, a sexual harasser. Stay away. She nearly raped Niall." Liam said.
"What?!?!?! Baby!" said Ally hugging Niall. Poor lad.
"Got it! No pedo Mally! Easy enough." said Geralynne.
The boys were getting changed.
Soon Liam came back.
Jen looked at him.
"Liam? What would you change about me?" She asked.
Zayn and the boys grinned like idiots. What was up?
"Your last name." Liam said. "Jennifer, will you marry me?" Liam asked.
Jen began to cry.
"OF COURSE BABE!" she said, slipping on the gorgeous ring.
"Awwww!" everyone cheered.
We a hugged.
"Boys! Time for ha- Whats ggoing on?" asked Lou.
"LIAM AND JEN ARE ENGAAGED!" Louis yellled.
"Congrats loves!" Lou said.
She picked up Baby Lux and gave her to Zayn, who was magnificent with her. Awww.
Harry took the girls to the audience.
We watched the boys perform.
Then, in I Want, Zayn kneeled down.
"I want, I want, I want Alenna to marry me!" Zayn said.
Liam smiled.
"HUH? I yelled.
"MARRY HIM!" Geralynne and Ally shouted.
I hurdled the stage.
I kissed Zayn.
"Soo..." he said.
Hahah.
"OF COURSE ZAYN!" I said, kissing him.
Best day ever.
Jennifer Loves Liam

Park Ridge, IL

#39 Sep 22, 2012
Keep writing and thank you sooooooooooooooo much. It may sound cheesy but I wish this was real life.
KatieHoranLovesN iall

London, UK

#40 Sep 22, 2012
Keep going!!!!!!!!!!
NOW!!!!!!!!!!

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