VZ Directioner

Montevideo, Uruguay

#104 Sep 30, 2012
Oh my... Continue please!
LouisLOVER

Tallahassee, FL

#106 Oct 2, 2012
Sorry I haven't updated this is a while... I have had a lot of homework... I will either write more tonight or tomorrow. :)
Erica loved Louis

Glen Allen, VA

#107 Oct 3, 2012
Okay!
Emily1005

Sykesville, MD

#108 Oct 3, 2012
Keep going you r a really good writer!:)
Tracy

Australia

#109 Oct 3, 2012
I need to know what happens!!!! I LOVE AND HATE the suspense!!!!!:O
LouisLOVER

Tallahassee, FL

#110 Oct 3, 2012
Emily1005 wrote:
Keep going you r a really good writer!:)
Awwww, thanks! I'm writing more right now!:)
LouisLOVER

Tallahassee, FL

#111 Oct 3, 2012
A steady beeping sound wakes me. I softly blink my eyes, and look around the room in confusion. I have no idea where I am or how I got here. I looked down to my left arm and there was a needle stuck into my wrist, hooked up to a bag with clear liquid in it. I was wearing a sheet like, baby blue gown. I saw beside me a computer screen with my heart rate on it. The door opened in front of me and Louis entered. When he looked at me his eyes widened. "Faith!" he said as he ran to the side of my bed. "Are you okay? I was so worried about you!" "I'm okay." I said while rubbing my head, like I had an headache. "Are you sure love?" he said while he brought my bangs out of my brown eyes. He had a deep look on his face. He really was worried. "Yeah, I think I am anyway." "Do you remember what happened at the pool?" "I remember diving into the pool with Carrie, but I can't recall anything after that." "You have been knocked out for two days!" "What?," my confused eyes glared down at my banket, then looked back up into Louis' eyes. "What about Carrie?!?!?!" I panicked! "Well, you see. Um, she is...
Tracy

Australia

#113 Oct 4, 2012
She is WHAT???!!!?? I LIERALY AM JUMPING UP AND DOWN(I secretly hope she and Louis start dating:).
Erica loved Louis

Glen Allen, VA

#114 Oct 4, 2012
What what???? I need to know
VZ Directioner

Montevideo, Uruguay

#115 Oct 4, 2012
What is it??? I need to know, actually we need to know! Continue please!:)
LouisLOVER

Tallahassee, FL

#116 Oct 4, 2012
"Well, you see. Um, she is in coma." Louis said sadly as he looked down to the hospital floor. My eyes stared hopelessly at his face, and they started to fill up with tears. "Where is she?!?!" "She's on the second floor." "And what floor are we on?" "The third." As soon as Louis answered my question, Josh comes barging into the room. "Oh my gosh!! You're awake," He exclaimed! "Yeah," I said as I grinned and embraced his hug. While looking over Josh's shoulder I stared deeply into Louis' eyes. The stare broke, when Josh started kissing me. I closed my eyes, so that I wouldn't have to see the look on Louis' face. "I'm starving," I exclaimed to Josh and Louis, as I pulled back from the kiss! "Oh yeah, you haven't eaten in two days!" Josh said. "Didn't you go get some Chinese food or something?" Louis asked Josh. "Yeah. Oh crap!! I left it in my car!" Josh said as he ran out the door. Louis and I just sat there, laughing hysterically! "Louis?" "Yeah love?" "Love?" "It comes natural to me," he said, and we both laughed. "Haha, well what did you want to ask me?" "Oh, um, is my family here?" "They left like an hour ago." "Oh. How long have you been here?" "I've been here since we first brought you into the hospital." Oh my gosh, he was here at this hospital day and night for me!
LouisLOVER

Tallahassee, FL

#117 Oct 4, 2012
That's all for tonight guys! 💗Thanks for reading!💋
Tracy

Australia

#118 Oct 4, 2012
Ohhhhh that is soooooooo SWEET!!!!!
Emily1005

Sykesville, MD

#119 Oct 5, 2012
Aww that is sooooo sweet :)
Heather

Manama, Bahrain

#120 Oct 5, 2012
Aaaaw more!!
Erica loved Louis

Glen Allen, VA

#121 Oct 5, 2012
Awwww now that is true love!
VZ Directioner

Montevideo, Uruguay

#122 Oct 5, 2012
OMG! Continue please!
Tracy

Australia

#123 Oct 5, 2012
Plz,write MORE!!! Ur soo good:)
Anonymous

Winchester, VA

#124 Oct 5, 2012
more!!!!!
LouisLOVER

Tallahassee, FL

#125 Oct 5, 2012
Thanks guys! I'm so glad y'all like it! I got home really late tonight... so I'm gonna try to write more tomorrow!:)

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