"Falling In Love At A Coffee Shop" Fa...
AmandaV_loves_On eD

Davisburg, MI

#298 Aug 20, 2012
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ILove1D

Levittown, NY

#302 Aug 26, 2012
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Angel-Loves-Harr y

Reading, PA

#303 Sep 9, 2012
Write more please and i hope you feel better

“ One Direction Is My Life <3”

Since: Jul 12

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#304 Sep 9, 2012
Angel-Loves-Harry wrote:
Write more please and i hope you feel better
aw thanks soo much! I'm having problems posting but I'll try my best to keep trying :) thank so much for reading!~Karen :) xxx

Since: Aug 12

Indio, CA

#305 Sep 24, 2012
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“ One Direction Is My Life <3”

Since: Jul 12

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#306 Sep 25, 2012
Chapter 11
  Kimmie's POV
    "Rise and shine sleepy head!!" Louis said while jumping up and down on my bed. "Ughhhh. Just a little longer.." I mumbled. "oh no no" Louis said being all sassy. He took the blankets off of me making my skin shiver. "LOUIS!!" I yelled desperately wanting the warm covers to cuddle me again. "KIMMIE!!" he yelled back. I couldn't help but laugh. He picked me up and held onto me while carrying me downstairs to the kitchen. I wrapped my arms around his neck and then released when he plopped me on the kitchen chair. "Goodmorning babe" Harry said while giving me a cheeky grin. "Goodmorning" I lazily said as I rubbed my eyes. "You sure look good in that shirt" Harry winked. "Haha veeery funny flirty pants" I joked around. Louis then laughed. We all began eating French toast. "Oh my... Who made these?!?" I said is awe. "Harrrrrry!" Louis said. "Harry you are really good!" I commented. Harry blushed a bit. "I'll teach you my secret when we have time". 

  I was walking to my dance class. "Hey Kim!!" Erin cheerfully said pulling me into a quick hug. "Hi!" I replied. We began stretching and then warm-ups. Then our big routine. Danielle was paired up with me again so we had to be partners for the show.. Which means we had to be constintally together. I looked to my left where the window was and saw Liam and Niall. I waved and when they saw me they smiled and waved back. Liam then took his eyes off of me and started to stare at Danielle.... I think someone has a little cruuuuush.
Renee

Navarre, FL

#307 Sep 25, 2012
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Mady

New Brunswick, NJ

#308 Sep 25, 2012
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CamiMarieStyles

Millington, TN

#309 Sep 27, 2012
When are you going to write more?(:

“ One Direction Is My Life <3”

Since: Jul 12

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#310 Sep 29, 2012
Chapter 12
  I was laying in bed. I don't know why but I kept thinking about Harry. I couldn't get the picture of him smiling at me out of my head. Was I falling for him? No. I can't be. My thoughts been interrupted by a knock on my door. "Come in" I said loud enough for them to hear me. It was Louis. "Hey babe. Have you seen Harry? He isn't here" he questioned. I sat up. "No. Are you sure he isn't sleeping?" I replied. He just nodded his head. "And you tried calling him?" "Yes but he won't answer! I'm very worried" Lou said. I couldn't take it. I got up and brushed my hair and pulled Louis with me downstairs. "Where are we going?" he asked. "We are going to find him... Somehow..". I tried looking for the car keys but they were no where. "Wait. Check if the car is outside" he quickly said. I ran outside and there was no car. "Damit Harry. Where are you?" I mumbled under my breath. "Where would Harry go if he wanted to go out?" I asked Lou desperately. "The coffee shop!" he
smiled. "Nono it's not open this late" I sighed. "Umm the park around the corner" he pointed. I grabbed his hand and we began running towards the park. When we got there, there was no sign of Harry or his car. We tried shouting his name but no sign of him. "It's really late babe. We
Should really go back home. He will show up" he said tugging on my arm. "no! What happends if he is in trouble?!?" I cried. Tears wanting to come out. Louis pulled me into a nice hug, making me feel safe and warm. His soft scent of cologne ringing in my nose making me not wanting to seperate the hug. He kissed my forehead and pulled my hair out of my face. "Where would he go if he is mad or sad?" I asked.. "The.... Oh my gosh... The bar" he said and with that we began running towards the closest bar.

~comment if this post shows :) thx~
Zara

Leeds, UK

#311 Sep 29, 2012
Oh please please hurry up
CamiMarieStyles

Millington, TN

#312 Sep 29, 2012
Awww (:
I love this story(:
Mrs Liam Payne

Hurst, TX

#313 Sep 29, 2012
Its awesome I so want more :D

“ One Direction Is My Life <3”

Since: Jul 12

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#314 Sep 29, 2012
Omg guys thanks a lot!:) I'll post more as soon as I can because I'm really busy. I'm getting all prepared to write my Season 2 chapters for my story "There For you" so if you like a long story then I recommend you read that because it has 70 chapters and now I'm on season 2 xD haha it's a great story so check that out and thanks for the comments on here! I promise I'll upload soon :) I love you guys :)~Karen xxx

“ One Direction Is My Life <3”

Since: Jul 12

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#315 Oct 1, 2012
 Chapter 13
   "Whaaaat's uuuuuup you guuuuys?!?" Harry laughed holding a drink in his hands. "Harry your drunk. We need to get you home" I said pulling him towards the exit. "Waa waaaa wait beautiful babe! You need a drink to chiiiiill out!" he said. I laughed a bit because he was funny when he was drunk. "No no . Nobody needs to drink" Louis said helping me push Harry out the door and into the car. Harry was leaning on me and fell asleep. "Eeew Harry!! Your drooling on me!" I screeched. Louis who was driving began laughing insanely. When we got home We both got Harry upstairs to his bed. "I'll be making him some tea. Can you stay with him?" Louis asked. I nodded my head and tucked Harry into bed. His beautiful features made me gaze non-stop at him, leaving me in a trance. I softly brushed his curls to a side with my fingers. His hair was so silky and smooth. "Here you go" Louis said, putting the tea on Harry's dresser. "You can go to sleep. I'll stay with Harry" I gestured. Louis nodded "goodnight babe" he kissed my head and walked out of the room. "Harry? Love? Can you wake up and drink some tea? It'll make you feel better" I smiled, softly petting his cheek with the back of the fingers. He fluttered his eyes open and slowly sat up, making a pained face. "Your head hurts doesn't it?" I asked. He nodded and clutched his head. "here. Drink this" I passed the tea to Harry who kept shaking his head, not wanting the tea. "Please? For me?" I pleaded. He just kept shaking his head. I got the tea spoon and held it up to his mouth. "Just a sip?" I continued. His eyes were still closed but he managed to open his mouth. I placed the spoon in his mouth just like I would do to a baby. "good?" I asked. He smiled and nodded his head. "Yay now drink the rest" I held the tea cup towards him. He shook his head saying no. "But Harold.." I whined. He chuckled. "You're just too lazy!!" I giggled. He continues to silently chuckle. "Well then I'll go. Goodnight" I pecked his cheek but before I could take my second step towards the door, Harry grabbed my hand.
Lauren

Brisbane, Australia

#316 Oct 1, 2012
Keeep going!!!
CamiMarieStyles

Millington, TN

#317 Oct 1, 2012
Continue (:
Kakalina99

Repentigny, Canada

#318 Oct 1, 2012
Keep going it's really good!!!
mArLeY

Kitchener, Canada

#319 Oct 1, 2012
Soo good every fanfic you write is amazing!!!(:

“ One Direction Is My Life <3”

Since: Jul 12

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#320 Oct 1, 2012
mArLeY wrote:
Soo good every fanfic you write is amazing!!!(:
omg thank you Marley!!

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