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“ One Direction Is My Life <3”

Since: Jul 12

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#1 Aug 10, 2012
 Chapter 1
   Kimmie's POV
     "5, 6, 7, 8!" my choreography teacher instructed. It was time for Danielle and My solo dance part. We were practicing a hip-hop routine for someone's music video. "Alright ladies! Well done! You are free to go! Remember to come back next week on time for dress rehearsals! Bye!" my instructer MaDonna said while leaving the big room. I ran to my bag to grab my water bottle. When I finished drinking I let my wavy hair down and it rested  over my shoulders. I grabbed my sweater and slipped it on over my crop top and stood up. "Wanna come to my place?" Danielle asked. She was my new friend. She had curly pretty brown hair and tanned skin. She was older then me though.... I am 18. "No thanks. I'm going out to grab some coffee. But thanks anyways" I said. "Alright no problem! Maybe next time" she said with a smile and walked away. I grabbed my bag and went to the bathroom. As I was washing my hands I stared into my hazel green eyes and then smiled quickly before I left. 
  There was a cold breeze running threw my hair as I was walking to my favorite coffee shop. It was winter here in London. My arms were wrapped over my chest trying to create warmth. I walked up to the door and pulled it open. The bell tied to the door made a noise as I walked in. "Ah, Kimmie! How are you dear?" Bobby asked. We knew each other very well since I always come here. "Doing very well thankyou! How are you?" I asked with a shaky smile because I was still cold. "I'm good thank you! So the usual?" he asked me knowing I would like my usual which is a mixed coffee. "yes!" I said with a cheeky smile. I walked over to a little table near the fire place and sat down. 
   This coffee place used to be my moms cafe. Its been a hole in the wall for many years. Its named after her. Rosa was her name. She died when I was 13. She was at stage 4 in her Brain cancer and there was no way to stop the spreading. So she had to leave my dad and me. "Kimmie!" Bobby yelled. I walked over and grabbed my coffee. I thanked him and sat back down.
   I thought I was the only one in the cafe but then I saw 5 guys sitting in the corner looking at me. I looked back into all of their eyes. It felt awkward so I got up to leave. "bye Bobby!" I called out and waved at him while opening the door. "Bye bye Kimmie! Say hi to your dad for me!" he said waving back. "Will do!" I answered back. While I was walking home I kept thinking about those boys... They seemed oddly familiar.

~~~ please comment! Thankyou!~~~

Levittown, PA

#2 Aug 10, 2012
Keep going! U should date harrrryyy!!
Maya Horan aka Meemers

Chicago, IL

#3 Aug 10, 2012
Am I the first one to comment if I am COOL! I like it!! My life depends on u adding more!!!!!! Xx

“ One Direction Is My Life <3”

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#4 Aug 10, 2012
Tara wrote:
Keep going! U should date harrrryyy!!
haha you will see what happends :D

“ One Direction Is My Life <3”

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#5 Aug 10, 2012
Maya Horan aka Meemers wrote:
Am I the first one to comment if I am COOL! I like it!! My life depends on u adding more!!!!!! Xx
Haha I'll add more tomarrow :) I need more comments :P

Levittown, PA

#6 Aug 10, 2012
Darn!but keep going!

“ One Direction Is My Life <3”

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#8 Aug 11, 2012
Chapter 2
  Kimmie's POV
    "Dad? Are you drunk?" I asked while closing the front door as I walked in. He looked at me with bloodshot red eyes. In one hand he had a beer bottle and in the other he had a picture of my mom. I could tell her was crying because his eyes were swollen and I could tell he got mad because the glass of the picture frame was broken. I walked up to him to grab the beer bottle out of his hands but he didn't want to let it go. Instead he shoved me and I fell to the floor. He stood above me ready to hit me with the bottle. "NO! DADDY! Please!" I yelled. When he saw the fear in my eyes he dropped the bottle and began sobbing in his hands while sitting back down on the couch. "Who Am I?!?" he whispered to himself. I wanted to comfort him but I could tell he was drunk and so I didn't want to be in danger again so I ran up to my room and climbed in bed with all the lights off. I kept hearing breaking glass hit the floor. I squeezed my eyes shut and my head under my  pillow and eventually I fell asleep.

  When I woke up I grabbed my clothes and went to take a shower. I rinsed my hair and climbed out. I changed and finished drying my wavy brown hair and started putting on natural looking make-up. I walked downstairs. Glass from cups and bottles were scattered all over the floor. "Dad? Daaad?Daddy?" I began calling him... But no answer. I guess he wasn't home. 
   After I swept the floor I grabbed my money and headed outside to the cold misty air. I began walking to the cafe. "Ring Ring" the bell rang as I entered the coffee shop. "Welcome back Kimmie!" Bobby said full of glee. "Hello! May I have the usual?" I asked. He nodded and headed to the back to brew the coffee. I sat at the nearest table and began looking around the empty room 'till I saw the same 5 boys at the corner like last time. They were staring at me again. This time I didn't look back. Instead I turned around and watched Bobby as he poured the brown steamy liquid into a mug. "Here you go Kimmie!" Bobby said sliding the mug to the counter. I got up to grab it. I was about to pull my money out when Bobby said "on the house darling!" he said. I smiled, thanked him, and sat back down. I kept feeling there eyes on me... Why were they staring at me?? I finally finished my coffee and began walking outside. 

   I was heading to my house and then all of a sudden I see ambulances, fire trucks, and police cars surrounding my house. I ran and shoved everyone out of my way. I went under the "CAUTION" tape and that's when I saw my dad.... He was being covered by a white sheet over his head. 

~~~Please Comment! ThankYou~~~
AllisonLovesHarr y(:

Columbia, SC

#9 Aug 11, 2012
Rachel Tomlinson

London, UK

#10 Aug 11, 2012
Pls continue!!

Brisbane, Australia

#11 Aug 11, 2012
This is really good

Brooklyn, NY

#12 Aug 11, 2012
0: please continue its interesting
Harry lover

Cochrane, Canada

#13 Aug 11, 2012
OMG u have to continue

Since: Aug 12

Beirut, Lebanon

#14 Aug 11, 2012
)-: so sad and AWESOME
louis is mine

Auburn, Australia

#15 Aug 11, 2012
this is really good
plz keep going

Fontana, CA

#16 Aug 11, 2012
keep going

Levittown, PA

#17 Aug 11, 2012
Keep going!
Ashly Payne

Blue Ridge, GA

#18 Aug 11, 2012
Keep goin!!!

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#19 Aug 11, 2012
Gurrlllll did fanfic be craycray

Loljk it's really good!

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#20 Aug 11, 2012
I love this!! Please keep going!:)
Katie styles

Manassas, VA

#21 Aug 11, 2012
Keep going its so good

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