Fan Fic-Caitlyn
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#144 Oct 3, 2012
I love it!! & wait a minute..am I Ella? Im so confused right now...

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#145 Oct 3, 2012
MIRELA LUVS 1D wrote:
I love it!! & wait a minute..am I Ella? Im so confused right now...
Yes you're ella. Remember we took the last three letters of your name and put it as Ella? Oh and sorry it took so long to actually get you in it!!
MIRELA LUVS 1D

New Britain, CT

#146 Oct 3, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
<quoted text>Yes you're ella. Remember we took the last three letters of your name and put it as Ella? Oh and sorry it took so long to actually get you in it!!
Oh yeah!! I'm sorry about that!!:( Ooops my bad

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#147 Oct 3, 2012
MIRELA LUVS 1D wrote:
<quoted text>
Oh yeah!! I'm sorry about that!!:( Ooops my bad
No problem! If I get two more comments Ill post part 19!
MIRELA LUVS 1D

New Britain, CT

#148 Oct 3, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
<quoted text>No problem! If I get two more comments Ill post part 19!
Ok:)
Maia Payne

Petaluma, CA

#149 Oct 3, 2012
Keep going!!:D

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#150 Oct 3, 2012
Part 19
We were at the part when the toys were about to fall into the fire, the part where Liam gets the most emotional. I looked over at Liam and Mia. Mia had finally woken up and had her head on his shoulder. Louis and Ella had already come back and were sitting in his room watching something “not rated PG,” Louis had said earlier. Harry was in the shower getting ready for his date with Kelsey. Zayn was in my hotel room taking a shower for his date with Trinity, because Harry was in theirs. The movie finally ended. Mia had fallen asleep again. I decided this was pretty boring.
“Liam?” I said
“What?” He replied
“You and Mia aren’t going anywhere tonight right?”
“Well we actually were gonna go to an Italian restaurant.”
“Oh, ok.” I said I said with disappointment in my voice.
“Why?” Niall asked
“Well, it seems like everyone is doing something tonight so I think I’ll just go see a movie.” I said
“By yourelf?” He asked with his eyebrows raised
“Umm… yes. Why?”
“Can I come with you?” Niall asked
“I don’t see why not.” I said. I was kind of happy. I honestly wanted him to come with me but I wasn’t going to tell him that. It would be awkward…
“Well, do you want to get dinner too?” Niall asked
“OK. That sounds fine. Where do you want to go?” I asked him
“I don’t know…. Nandos?” Niall said with a puppy dog face. I laughed.
“Ok, wherever you want to go.” I said with a smile
“Well, I’ll go wait for Harry to get out of the shower and I’ll take one.” Niall said getting up and walking towards the bedroom. I started to play on my phone when Liam asked,“ Aren’t you going to go and get all dressed up?”
“I mean I’ll change but there is no used to getting all dressed up. I mean we are just going as friends… right?” I said with confusion
“Don’t ask me. Why don’t you ask Niall,” Liam said with a grin
“No way,” I said. Liam laughed. Just then Harry walked in he was in grey sweat pants and a black shirt.
“Why aren’t you dressed?” I asked Harry
“ My hair is still wet.. see,” Harry said as he walked right in front of me and shook his head like a dog, getting me wet.
“Harry!” I screamed while laughing. He sat next to me and put his arm around me. Not in that kind of way, but as a friendly way.
“Do you like Niall?” Harry asked completely random
“I don’t know! Why?” I said too fast. He laughed
“ Well, it seems like you do.”
“It’s that obvious?”
“So it’s true?” He asked with his eyebrows raised
“No.. well I don’t know.”
“Hey, at least you’re not denying it.” Harry said laughing.“ You should see what he picked out. It’s nice?
“Really?”
“Yeah. You should probably go and start getting ready.” Harry said gesturing for me to walk out of the door.
“Ok.” I got up and started to walk out
“Hey, I’ll walk over and let you approve of me.” Harry said laughing. I gave him a room card and he got up to get ready for his date. I walked over to my hotel room. I stood there for at least five minutes not knowing what to do or wear! I figured I had about thirty minutes. Ok first thing is first, take a shower. So I jumped in the shower and took a five minute shower. I jumped out and started blow drying my hair, that took about ten minutes. I did my makeup: Gold eyeshadow (it resembled ella’s a little), with gold eye liner as well. I put on a light/ neautral pink lip stick. I have done my makeup for so long that it only took me five minutes. Now here was the hardest part.. Finding something to wear!

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#151 Oct 3, 2012
I looked through my drawers trying to remember what I packed. I finally found a green off shoulder shirt with gold designs on the front and a gold tank top underneath. I had read in a magazine before that green was his favorite color. I hope he doesn’t think it’s weird.. I also put on some ripped dark wash skinny jeans and gold sandals. I put on some perfume and looked at the time with only five minutes to spare. I was about to walk out when Harry busted in through the door.“Oh good you’re dressed. How do I look?” Harry asked. He was wearing a red shirt with a black blazer and black pants.
“You look snappy.” I said laughing
“Thanks, You look good too! Niall sure is lucky,” Harry said
“What do mean? We aren’t dating Harry.” I said
“ I know. You should though.” Harry said. He looked at his watch ,” Oh my gosh Im late!!!!” He said as he ran out the door. I heard the running footsteps stop and then run back towards my room,” Thanks for the approval!” Harry said laughing. Then he ran to the elevator to get Kelsey. I walked to the boys hotel room door. I hesitated to open it, but right before I turned the handle it swung open.
“I was just about to come get you,” Niall said. He looked.. I cant even explain how he looked. He was wearing white pants with a green shirt. Oh my Gosh a green shirt! We were that couple. Wait we aren’t even a couple, but now we were matching!
“I like your color shirt,” Niall said laughing
“Niall we are matching.” I said with a serious face
“I can go change,” he said
“I’m joking. We are going to be in a movie theatre anyways no one can see what color we are wearing.” I said smiling
“Come on let’s go,” Niall said. He shut the door and we started walking down the hallway towards the elevator. As we were walking he grabbed my hand. It startled me at first, but I looked at him and he smiled. I smiled back. The elevator doors opened and we couldn’t believe who we saw on the elevator…..
Sorry if it’s getting boring.. Im getting writers block!

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#152 Oct 3, 2012
Sorry guys it only posted the bottom half!! Ill go get the other part!

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#153 Oct 3, 2012
Crap nevermind! My laptop keeps messing up so forget the earlier post lol
Maia Payne

Petaluma, CA

#154 Oct 3, 2012
Ok haha lol!!:P
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#155 Oct 4, 2012
Aww.. Cute!!:) LOVE IT!!:)

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#156 Oct 4, 2012
One more comment and I'll post more after school! Oh and sorry if it's getting boring! Like I said before Im getting writer's block!
Carrot Lover

Lititz, PA

#157 Oct 4, 2012
It's not getting boring keep going

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#158 Oct 4, 2012
Ok guys sorry... again! I've been packing for my vacation! YAY! But i wont be able to post until next Friday ): I'm gonna write the story while I'm there. Oh and guys can you check out my sister's fan fic? She doesn't have a lot of people reading it. It would mean a lot!! Its called No name fan fic by Brianna Garris 1999
Kelseyluvs1D

Braintree, MA

#159 Oct 4, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
Ok guys sorry... again! I've been packing for my vacation! YAY! But i wont be able to post until next Friday ): I'm gonna write the story while I'm there. Oh and guys can you check out my sister's fan fic? She doesn't have a lot of people reading it. It would mean a lot!! Its called No name fan fic by Brianna Garris 1999
Lucky you!! Take me with you!!! Haha lol hope u have fun!

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#160 Oct 5, 2012
Kelseyluvs1D wrote:
<quoted text>Lucky you!! Take me with you!!! Haha lol hope u have fun!
LOL you actually made me laugh haha. We are about to leave now! Wish I could post more but I wont have wifi!): YOU GUYS BE CHECKING FOR MORE ON FRIDAY!!

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#161 Oct 14, 2012
Sorry it took so long guys! I was grounded so I couldnt use the computer! SO SORRY!!

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#162 Oct 14, 2012
Part 20
It was the two boys who shot Niall. They took of their hoods, and all I saw was long hair. They weren’t boys! Those are girls. They walked out of the elevator and before we could get on they grabbed the back of our shirts and pulled us back. I watched the elevator doors close.
“How’s your arm?” The blonde one asked Niall
“Umm… it’s fine. How about you let go of the back of our shirts? Niall asked
“What are you doing out of jail?” I asked the blonde one with blue tips
“ Let’s just say we get what we want. At least we soon will.” They both said looking at each other with evil grins
“Well, what do you want.” Niall asked concerned. The hesitated
“You.” They said in unison. I looked at Niall and he looked back at me. We were still holding hands. All of a sudden they jerked us and started pushing us towards a room. They slid a card and opened the door. I realized this was the hotel room right in between the boys and mine. They put us in chairs and tied our arms to the back of it. We were back to back in the chairs.
“What do you want with Niall?” I asked
“How about we just tell you a little story first?” The one with blue tips said. Before we could say anything she started talking.
“We’ve been following you Niall. We watched you while you were in the park. We were going to go over and say ‘Hi’ but then she walked over to you and sat down,” They said looking at me and adding emphasis to the ‘She’.“Then we saw you walking her and her friend back to go meet the rest of the boys. We watched you go in your hotel room and saw that the one next you was empty so we got it. We noticed you were really starting to hang out with her. We got angry about that. We realized something had to happen, had to go. We watched you guys take down the trays and we were waiting for just the right moment to get rid of the unwanted.” She said with an evil grin. Niall was really quiet. Both of us were.
“That’s why you were only aiming for me. Niall was even trying to click the buttons but you still didn’t aim for him,” I said
“Why would we kill him? We want you gone! Not him!” She said raising her voice
“Anyways, when we came around the corner we aimed right for you, but you had to move and make me hurt him. You were supposed to get hurt not him.” She said walking over towards Niall and playing with his hair. They were really getting on my nerves.
“So what are we going to do with you?” They both said while standing in front of me. The blonde one got a text and whispered to the other one.
“We’ll be right back. Don’t get any ideas of escaping!” They said while walking out of the door
“Niall do you have your phone in your back pocket?” I asked the second they walked out fo the door
“Yes why?” Niall asked. I reached into his back pocket and grabbed his phone.
“Do you have any of the boys on speed dial?” I asked trying to feel for where each number was
“Yes 1-4 are all them. I don’t know who is who.” I pressed a button that felt like the number two. Harry answered.
~Harry’s POV~
I was at a restaurant with Kelsey. She looked amazing! She had her hair down and straight. She was wearing a blue tank top that faded out and got dark again, white shorts, and blue sandals. She was wearing a dark blue eye shadow with white eyeliner. We were eating our appetizers.

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#163 Oct 14, 2012
“You know I’m really glad that you decided to come out with me.” Harry said
“ Me too.” She said.
“So what do you want to go see?” I asked her
“I don’t know. We’ll see when we get there.” Kelsey replied. Just then my phone rang. I answered it. It was Caitlyn. She sounded like she was scared,“ Harry! Help us, we are in room 817. The door is unlocked. Please Hurry!” she hung up
“Kelsey we have to go.. Now!” I said. I grabbed her hand and put some money on the counter,” Keep the change.” We got in my car and drove to the hotel. We were only about five minutes away so we got there fast.“Stay in the car,” I told Kelsey. She nodded her head. I turned around and ran toward the hotel. There was a long line for the elevator so I ran to the stairs. It was a long run, but I finally made it to the 8th floor. I ran to room 817 and swung the door open. I saw Caitlyn and Niall tied up to chairs. I ran over to Caitlyn and united hers first, she said she could get her feet, so I untied Niall’s. I stood up and Caitlyn jumped out of the chair and wrapped her arms around my neck. I hugged her back and Niall yelled,” Come on they could be back any minute!” We ran to the boys room and Liam and Mia were dressed and about to walk out.
“We should go to the police station soon.” I said. Caitlyn agreed and Niall nodded his head.
“Not yet. They could be back any minute. If they find us something bad could happen. They might not miss this time.” Caitlyn said
“What are you guys talking about?” Liam asked. We all sat down on the couch while Caitlyn and Niall took turns telling the story.

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