“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#124 Oct 1, 2012
MIRELA LUVS 1D wrote:
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It's fine don't be sorry :)
Thanks I just didnt want ppl to get mad cause Im not posting anything. I promise Ill try to post at least one tonight!!
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#125 Oct 1, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
<quoted text>Thanks I just didnt want ppl to get mad cause Im not posting anything. I promise Ill try to post at least one tonight!!
Ok :)
Maia Payne

Petaluma, CA

#126 Oct 1, 2012
Kelseyluvs1D wrote:
<quoted text> exactly! especially when our minds r filled about 1D!!! ;)
So true!!! You are a GENIOUS!!:P
Kelseyluvs1D

Braintree, MA

#127 Oct 1, 2012
Maia Payne wrote:
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So true!!! You are a GENIOUS!!:P
XD Finally! Someone who gets me!* highfives phone* ow.. Well that hurt lol

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#128 Oct 2, 2012
Part 16
“Girls, girls! Please I just want to swim.” Harry said. The boys had girls all around them except for Niall.“Come on.” Niall said. He seemed disappointed. I don’t know why, I mean he had me. What am I talking about?! He doesn’t even know I like him…I think. He took off his shirt and laid it in a lounge chair. I laid my towel next to his shirt. I walked over to the edge of the pool. I was about to jump in when I felt two hands wrap around my waist. We were in the air for a second and then I felt cold water rush all the way up over my head. I felt the ground and kicked off, rushing to the top. My head popped out of the water and I saw Niall pop up right after I did. He was laughing. I swam over to the side, jumped up, and sat on the edge.
“Why did you do that?” I said laughing
“Well, you didn’t look like you were gonna jump in, so I helped you.” Niall said swimming over to the side. He jumped up and sat next to me. I looked over at the boys and the girl were still around them. They were giving the girls autographs. There was one girl that Harry was talking to, he couldn’t stop smiling while he was talking to her.
~Harry’s POV~
I was talking to this beautiful girl named Kelsey. She had long brown hair in two French braids with stunning blue eyes. She also had a gorgeous smile. I couldn’t stop staring at her smile! I didn’t want to ignore the other girls, but I wanted to get to know Kelsey. I gave the girls autographs and they walked away. Me and Kelsey sat down and started talking. She told me about how her boyfriend dumped her a month ago and she was just starting to get over it. I could tell she was kinda shy but after a while she was really starting to talk more.
“Hey, do you wanna go see a movie tonight?”
“With you?” she asked
“Yes.” I replied
“Oh, I’m not sure.”
“Why not?”
“I just don’t know if I’m ready to start a new relationship yet.”
“No, I didn’t mean it like that. I just wanted to take you to go see a movie.”
“Ok, sounds good. Here’s my phone number. I’m staying in room 515.”
“Ok, I’ll pick you up around 6?”
“So it’s gonna be dinner and a movie?”
“If that’s alright with you.”
“Sure.”
“Bye Kelsey.”
“Bye.” I got up and walked over to Niall, Caitlyn, and the boys.
Sorry its short this time!
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#129 Oct 2, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
Part 16
“Girls, girls! Please I just want to swim.” Harry said. The boys had girls all around them except for Niall.“Come on.” Niall said. He seemed disappointed. I don’t know why, I mean he had me. What am I talking about?! He doesn’t even know I like him…I think. He took off his shirt and laid it in a lounge chair. I laid my towel next to his shirt. I walked over to the edge of the pool. I was about to jump in when I felt two hands wrap around my waist. We were in the air for a second and then I felt cold water rush all the way up over my head. I felt the ground and kicked off, rushing to the top. My head popped out of the water and I saw Niall pop up right after I did. He was laughing. I swam over to the side, jumped up, and sat on the edge.
“Why did you do that?” I said laughing
“Well, you didn’t look like you were gonna jump in, so I helped you.” Niall said swimming over to the side. He jumped up and sat next to me. I looked over at the boys and the girl were still around them. They were giving the girls autographs. There was one girl that Harry was talking to, he couldn’t stop smiling while he was talking to her.
~HarryÂ’s POV~
I was talking to this beautiful girl named Kelsey. She had long brown hair in two French braids with stunning blue eyes. She also had a gorgeous smile. I couldnÂ’t stop staring at her smile! I didnÂ’t want to ignore the other girls, but I wanted to get to know Kelsey. I gave the girls autographs and they walked away. Me and Kelsey sat down and started talking. She told me about how her boyfriend dumped her a month ago and she was just starting to get over it. I could tell she was kinda shy but after a while she was really starting to talk more.
“Hey, do you wanna go see a movie tonight?”
“With you?” she asked
“Yes.” I replied
“Oh, I’m not sure.”
“Why not?”
“I just don’t know if I’m ready to start a new relationship yet.”
“No, I didn’t mean it like that. I just wanted to take you to go see a movie.”
“Ok, sounds good. Here’s my phone number. I’m staying in room 515.”
“Ok, I’ll pick you up around 6?”
“So it’s gonna be dinner and a movie?”
“If that’s alright with you.”
“Sure.”
“Bye Kelsey.”
“Bye.” I got up and walked over to Niall, Caitlyn, and the boys.
Sorry its short this time!
I love it!!! & I thought I was going 2 be in part 16 :(. Ehhh it doesn't matter as long as I get 2 read this awesome fanfic ill be fine :)
Kelseyluvs1D

Braintree, MA

#130 Oct 2, 2012
I love love love it!!!!! Do more soon!

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#131 Oct 2, 2012
MIRELA LUVS 1D wrote:
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I love it!!! & I thought I was going 2 be in part 16 :(. Ehhh it doesn't matter as long as I get 2 read this awesome fanfic ill be fine :)
Yeah I am soooo sorry about that. I had this whole fan fic already typed out and saved to Microsoft but somehow the whole thing got deleted so I had to re-wrtte it but you are defiantly in part 18. I know that for sure!!

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#132 Oct 2, 2012
Part 17
~My POV~
The girls around Zayn and Louis got their autographs and left. The boys walked over to me and Niall. Louis jumped off the diving board splashing me and Niall. He climbed out of the pool next to me, stood up, and shook his hair like a dog right next to me. He walked over to his cell phone and he called someone or they called him.
“Ok I’m out at the pool. See you in a sec.” Louis said talking into his phone
“Who was that?” Zayn asked Louis
“Ella.” Louis said. He grabbed his things and ran into the hotel.
“Well, are you guys gonna get in? I asked Harry and Zayn
“Can’t swim.” Zayn said
“I know that I meant Harry and Niall.”
“Oh my bad. I would but I’m just gonna lay out here.” Zayn said
“Are you gonna get in the pool if I get in? Niall asked me
“I don’t know. I guess you’ll have to jump in and find out.” I said. He laughed. Harry went up to the diving board and did a front flip. He climbed out as me and Niall stood up. I was standing on the edge again and Niall and Harry were whispering. I turned around just in time for them to both pick me up, carry me up to the diving board, and throw me off of it. This time I opened my eyes. The pool was crystal clear. I could see Harry and Niall looking at me while standing on the diving board. All of a sudden Niall pushed Harry into the water. He landed right next to me. I was running out of air so I kicked off the ground going up towards the top. I took a big breath of air and then I felt someone grab my feet and pull me back down. It was Harry, he pulled me down to the bottom. He saw I was struggling so he kicked off really hard towards the top and we both took big breaths of air.
“Didn’t mean to drown you.” Harry said
“Oh no, it’s fine .” I replied. Niall was sitting on the edge of the pool.
“Why aren’t you getting in?” I asked Niall
“I was waiting on you.” He replied
“For what?”
“I want you to jump off the diving board with me.”
“Ok.” We walked over to the diving board holding hands. I stepped up on the diving board but he didn’t follow me. He just sat down on the edge of it.
“C’mon!” I said
“No.” he replied
“What?” I said confused
“Get on my shoulders.”
“What? No!!” I said
“C’mon!!” Niall whined
“No way!”
“Then I’m not jumping in!” Niall said stubbornly. I sighed,” Fine.” I walked over to where he was sitting and got on his shoulders. He stood up and walked to the edge. I pinched my nose as he jumped in. When we were in the water I got off of his shoulders. He leaned in and kissed me on the cheek. I kissed him back. We both smiled and popped up to the surface.
“I saw that!” Harry said smiling. We all laughed. We all swam around (except Zayn) in the pool for about thirty minutes. We got tired and laid in the lounge chairs. Niall fell asleep. I walked over to Harry,“ Hey, Niall fell asleep.” Harry did a evil smile and we made a plan. We grabbed a bucket we found in the corner and filled it with pool water. We walked slowly over to Niall and dumped it on him. He jumped up screaming.
“C’mon guys! Well I’m tired let’s go inside and watch movies.” Niall said
“Ok, I am too. Ill go up to my room and get dressed.” I replied. They nodded their heads. I went into my room and Mia was asleep on the couch while Liam was watching tv next to her.
It wouldnt all post so Ill post the the other part to this in a sec

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#133 Oct 2, 2012
“You guys are back soon.” Liam said
“Yeah, we got tired.” I replied.
“Well, what are you guys gonna do now?”
“Niall asked if anyone wanted to watch toy story and we said yes .”
“Toy story?” Liam asked with a frown
“Yes. Do you wanna come watch it with us?”
“Yeah let me wake Mia up.” Liam tapped on her arm until she woke up. She opened her eyes and then closed them again. He shook his head and picked her up bridal style.
“Hey could you open the door for me?” Liam asked. I nodded and walked over to the door.
“Thanks,” Liam said. I grabbed my grey sweatpants and a white tank top. I pulled my hair into a messy bun and walked over to the other room. Niall was already putting in the movie and everybody else was on the couch. I sat next to Harry and then Niall sat on the other side of me.
“Where’s Zayn?” I asked
“Trinity came out to clean up around the pool. Zayn stayed out to help her.” Harry replied
“Oh, you know they’re going out tonight.” I asked Harry
“Really? I didn’t know.” The movie started playing, and everyone got comfortable on the couch. I just then remembered about Louis and Ella. I hope they’re having a nice lunch.
Ok Im gonna try a new thing! Three comments and Ill post part 18!!
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#134 Oct 2, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
<quoted text>Yeah I am soooo sorry about that. I had this whole fan fic already typed out and saved to Microsoft but somehow the whole thing got deleted so I had to re-wrtte it but you are defiantly in part 18. I know that for sure!!
Ok & it's ok :)
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#135 Oct 2, 2012
MIRELA LUVS 1D wrote:
<quoted text>Ok & it's ok :)
That sounded weird
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#136 Oct 2, 2012
Omg I love it!! BEST FANFIC EVER!!!:)
Maia Payne

Petaluma, CA

#137 Oct 2, 2012
Kelseyluvs1D wrote:
<quoted text> XD Finally! Someone who gets me!* highfives phone* ow.. Well that hurt lol
Omg haha!*high fives iPad* soon painfull!!:P
Kelseyluvs1D

Braintree, MA

#138 Oct 2, 2012
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!:I'm very hyper right now lol!)
Maia Payne

Petaluma, CA

#139 Oct 2, 2012
*soooo

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#140 Oct 2, 2012
Hey guys I know I said three comments and I'll post more but my twin won't let me use our laptop. Yes we have to share it. I hate that but I promise I'll post more tmrrw!!
Carrot Lover

Lititz, PA

#141 Oct 2, 2012
Okey dokey as long as you post somfin
Kelseyluvs1D

Braintree, MA

#142 Oct 3, 2012
Maia Payne wrote:
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Omg haha!*high fives iPad* soon painfull!!:P
haha. U have a iPad?!?! SuPer jealous now....:P ;)

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#143 Oct 3, 2012
Part 18
~Louis’ POV~
Me and Ella were sitting at a booth in a restaurant. She was looking at her plate while eating her salad. She had her hair in a curly updo, with gold eye shadow and eye liner, and a glittery gold dress that was slightly above her knees. She looked absolutely gorgeous. She looked up from her plate,” Why are you staring at me?” Ella said with a smile.
“I just cant believe how stunning you look!” I replied
“Thanks, you look good yourself.” Ella told me. I smiled, just then the waitress walked over to get our order. She looked at me and gasped,“ Oh my gosh! You’re Louis Tomlinson!! From One Direction!!” she squealed
“Umm, yes.... Id like a-” I said before she cut me off
“I just cant believe it’s really you!!” she squealed again
“I’d like-“ Ella said before the waitress cut her off.
“Now hold on I wasn’t talking to you yet.” The waitress said rudely.
“Hey! Don’t talk to my girlfriend like that!” I yelled
“Now now don’t get all upset. But you know you could do a lot better.”
“That’s it we’re leaving.” I said. I grabbed Ella’s hand and pulled her out of the booth.
“You didn’t pay for your salads and drinks!” the waitress yelled as we were walking out. I pulled some money out of my pocket, crumpled it up, and threw it on the ground. We got in my car and drove off, back to the hotel.
~My POV~
We were all watching a movie when Louis and Ella stomped into the hotel room and slammed the door.
“That was a short lunch.” Harry said
“ There wasn’t any.” Louis said angrily
“What do you mean?” Harry asked
“The waitress was extremely rude!” Louis yelled
“Hi, you must be Caitlyn. I’m Ella.” Ella said holding out her hand
“The boys tell me a lot about you.” I said gently shaking her hand. She had soft hands, making me self- conscious about mine.
“Could you hand me the lotion beside you?” I asked Ella
“Sure.” She handed me the pink lotion bottle named ,”Paris in bloom”. It was Mia’s she brought over from our hotel room.
“Wow, that smells awesome! Do you mind if I use some?” Ella asked me. I handed the bottle to her. She squeezed the bottle delicately.“Come on Ella. Let’s go get something to eat.” Louis said
“Ok, bye Caitlyn. I’ll see you when I get back?” Ella said
“Yep, I’ll be right here.” I said. She smiled and walked out of the door with Louis.

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