“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#22 Sep 17, 2012
OMG sorry guys the dashes are "MIA" I wrote the story while I was still doing auditions and I didnt have names for them yet. Sorry guys I'll post the OFFICIAL version brb

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#23 Sep 17, 2012
Ok guys I mest up on the one above this so this is the OFFICIAL one!(:
Part 3
“This is Caitlyn, and this is Mia.I met them at the park,” Niall said.“And how exactly did you meet them?” Louis said “Well, lets just say it got..sorta windy…..” Niall said.“Oh really?” Louis said rubbing his chin. I couldn’t help but giggle.“Aha! She’s giggling! There must be a different story then,” Louis said in a mocking voice.“Tell me.. What was your name again?”“Caitlyn..”“Ah, yes Caitlyn tell me the.. real story.”” Honestly the wind just picked up and his hat flew off.”“ How did u know it was Niall??”“ Well-“ Aha! I knew there was a different story!!”“ No he whipped around real fast and his sun shades fell off.”“ Whatever..” Louis was obviously embarrassed, because he got so worked up over nothing. Just then I got a text message. I didn’t recognize the number, but I opened it anyway.
“Hey, I just wanted to let you know that Im so sorry that Dylan thinks im way better then you. Also im sorry that he thinks you’re the ugliest thing ever. He doesn’t even know what he saw in you. His words exactly!”
“He never said that Chloe. You know he didn’t!!
”She never texted back. That was a good thing because I was so mad. I guess I made a face because everyone was staring at me .“Hey, u ok love? Harry asked “Oh yeah, Im fine..” I was completely lying. I was so hurt. I don’t know why I was even listening to her! I know she was lying. Or did I?“Do you guys wanna come in and sit down or are you just gonna hold the dorrway up?” Louis said with sarcasm. We walked inside. It was a really nice hotel room. It looked nothing like ours, even though it was on the same floor. The boys sat on the floor staring at us while we sat on a couch that was way too soft. It was so hard to sit upright!“ Im hungry! Would you girls like to stay and eat with us?”“ Sure!” We said at the same time. All the boys laughed. I thought it was embarrassing with only Niall laughing. I was now extremely embarrassed. I think Zayn could tell. They all stood up and went into the other room where their phone was. As Zayn walked past me he put his hand on my knee.“You don’t have to be embarrassed. We thought it was cute that you guys both said it at the same time.” I couldn’t think of anything to say so I just nodded. They were whispering in their room. Then Liam walked in and sat down on the ground. He just sat there staring at Mia I don’t think she noticed. She was looking around the room. Then finally she looked at him and he winked at her. She blushed. He got up and sat next to her. They were whispering to each other. I felt really left out! Finally, Niall yelled “Umm….” He whispered but to where I could still here him.“What’s her name again?”“Its Caitlyn,” Harry whispered back.“Caitlyn, Do you think you could come in here for a minute?”“Umm…ok”
Kelseyluvs1D

Braintree, MA

#24 Sep 17, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
Ok guys I mest up on the one above this so this is the OFFICIAL one!(:
Part 3
“This is Caitlyn, and this is Mia.I met them at the park,” Niall said.“And how exactly did you meet them?” Louis said “Well, lets just say it got..sorta windy…..” Niall said.“Oh really?” Louis said rubbing his chin. I couldn’t help but giggle.“Aha! She’s giggling! There must be a different story then,” Louis said in a mocking voice.“Tell me.. What was your name again?”“Caitlyn..”“Ah, yes Caitlyn tell me the.. real story.”” Honestly the wind just picked up and his hat flew off.”“ How did u know it was Niall??”“ Well-“ Aha! I knew there was a different story!!”“ No he whipped around real fast and his sun shades fell off.”“ Whatever..” Louis was obviously embarrassed, because he got so worked up over nothing. Just then I got a text message. I didn’t recognize the number, but I opened it anyway.
“Hey, I just wanted to let you know that Im so sorry that Dylan thinks im way better then you. Also im sorry that he thinks you’re the ugliest thing ever. He doesn’t even know what he saw in you. His words exactly!”
“He never said that Chloe. You know he didn’t!!
”She never texted back. That was a good thing because I was so mad. I guess I made a face because everyone was staring at me .“Hey, u ok love? Harry asked “Oh yeah, Im fine..” I was completely lying. I was so hurt. I don’t know why I was even listening to her! I know she was lying. Or did I?“Do you guys wanna come in and sit down or are you just gonna hold the dorrway up?” Louis said with sarcasm. We walked inside. It was a really nice hotel room. It looked nothing like ours, even though it was on the same floor. The boys sat on the floor staring at us while we sat on a couch that was way too soft. It was so hard to sit upright!“ Im hungry! Would you girls like to stay and eat with us?”“ Sure!” We said at the same time. All the boys laughed. I thought it was embarrassing with only Niall laughing. I was now extremely embarrassed. I think Zayn could tell. They all stood up and went into the other room where their phone was. As Zayn walked past me he put his hand on my knee.“You don’t have to be embarrassed. We thought it was cute that you guys both said it at the same time.” I couldn’t think of anything to say so I just nodded. They were whispering in their room. Then Liam walked in and sat down on the ground. He just sat there staring at Mia I don’t think she noticed. She was looking around the room. Then finally she looked at him and he winked at her. She blushed. He got up and sat next to her. They were whispering to each other. I felt really left out! Finally, Niall yelled “Umm….” He whispered but to where I could still here him.“What’s her name again?”“Its Caitlyn,” Harry whispered back.“Caitlyn, Do you think you could come in here for a minute?”“Umm…ok”
OMG this is SO awesome and AMAZAYN!!!':) wen is the next chapter. Also, could you check out my fanic called true love? I think you will like it!
Maia Payne

Petaluma, CA

#25 Sep 17, 2012
Keep going!!! I love it!!:D I love this story

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#26 Sep 17, 2012
Kelseyluvs1D wrote:
<quoted text> OMG this is SO awesome and AMAZAYN!!!':) wen is the next chapter. Also, could you check out my fanic called true love? I think you will like it!
I think I'll post part 4 tomorrow becuase Im posting faster then im writing lln! And sre thing I'll check it out tomorrow morning. Thanks for reading (:
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#27 Sep 18, 2012
Love it!! Amazing!!:)
Erica loves Louis

Glen Allen, VA

#28 Sep 18, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
<quoted text> Well I think ive got everybody. But I think im gonna add a few backgorund people. Like you could be on the beach and you get to meet your fav 1d boy, or all of them, or you know something like that. Like we are gonna go to a put put place and you could maybe work there and the boys give you an autograph or something. Just let me know if your interested
Sure that sound great! My favorite guy is Louis and uh I have blue and blonde hair! Thanks!
Camryn

Patchogue, NY

#30 Sep 18, 2012
Moree this is good.

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#31 Sep 19, 2012
Part 4
“Hey what about we order room service?” Zayn asked.
“I don’t mind. But we’ll pay for ours,” I replied.
“No No No, its fine. Its on us!”
“No I cant let you guys do that.”
“Yes you can, and you will,” Louis demanded. I knew he was picking. It was funny. I had completely forgotten about Mia and Liam so I walked into the living room. Mia was smiling from ear to ear.
“ Caitlyn, guess what!!” Mia said eagerly
“What……” I said slowly.“Me and Liam.. are dating!!” I just kinda stood there for a second with my mouth to the floor.
“You’ve only been talking for 15 minutes and you’re already dating?”
“Yes, why not?”
“You guys hardly know each other!”
“Caitlyn, calm down! You and Dylan didn’t know each other that well when you guys started dating.
” Yes, and you saw how that turned out!” I couldn’t help but lose my temper.
“Oh, right my bad…… But we are still dating Caitlyn, I can do what I want,” I had enough. How could she bring up something like that. She knew that he broke up with me! What am I saying she probably wasn’t thinking. Caitlyn, you’re not mad at her, you’re not.
“Hey, are you guys gonna tell us what you want?” Harry called out.
“We want two pieces of pizza,” Liam yelled as I was walking into their room.
“Liam and Mia want two pieces of pizza,” I told Louis who was on the phone with room service.“What do you want love?” Harry asked me.
“Umm I’ll take a piece of pepperoni pizza.”
“That’s it?!?!?!” Niall asked almost shocked.
“Well, I don’t want to seem like a hog!”
“She wants three pieces,” Niall told Louis.
“I didn’t say that!”
” Well, then I’ll eat them then!” I rolled my eyes.
“They said it would be twenty minutes,” Louis said.
“I cant wait that long!!” Niall whined.
“So do you live here in England?” Harry asked.
“No, we are here for Mia’s dance competition.”
“ Oh, well how long are you guys staying?”
“A month I think.”
“Well, where do you live?” Zayn asked.
“I live in North Carolina, On a beach actually. Its beautiful!”
“Wow North Carolina. That’s in America right?” Niall asked.
“Yeah, Hey do you guys have any things to do in a month?” I asked
“ I can ask Paul real quick.” Louis said. He talked on the phone for at least five minutes.“He said we have no concerts or anything for three months!”6666333w4
“Well, what if you guys come back with me and Mia?”
“ That would be awesome. Come on guys we have to go. It’ll be fun! Its on a beach!”Niall said “Ok we’ll go,” The rest of the boys said. Then we heard a knock on our door,“ROOM SERVICE,” we heard a young lady yell on the other side of the door.
Sorry guys if it’s boring!
Sorry itys been so long my laptop has been crashing
Maia Payne

Petaluma, CA

#32 Sep 19, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
Part 4
“Hey what about we order room service?” Zayn asked.
“I don’t mind. But we’ll pay for ours,” I replied.
“No No No, its fine. Its on us!”
“No I cant let you guys do that.”
“Yes you can, and you will,” Louis demanded. I knew he was picking. It was funny. I had completely forgotten about Mia and Liam so I walked into the living room. Mia was smiling from ear to ear.
“ Caitlyn, guess what!!” Mia said eagerly
“What……” I said slowly.“Me and Liam.. are dating!!” I just kinda stood there for a second with my mouth to the floor.
“You’ve only been talking for 15 minutes and you’re already dating?”
It's good!!! Keep going!
“Yes, why not?”
“You guys hardly know each other!”
“Caitlyn, calm down! You and Dylan didn’t know each other that well when you guys started dating.
” Yes, and you saw how that turned out!” I couldn’t help but lose my temper.
“Oh, right my bad…… But we are still dating Caitlyn, I can do what I want,” I had enough. How could she bring up something like that. She knew that he broke up with me! What am I saying she probably wasn’t thinking. Caitlyn, you’re not mad at her, you’re not.
“Hey, are you guys gonna tell us what you want?” Harry called out.
“We want two pieces of pizza,” Liam yelled as I was walking into their room.
“Liam and Mia want two pieces of pizza,” I told Louis who was on the phone with room service.“What do you want love?” Harry asked me.
“Umm I’ll take a piece of pepperoni pizza.”
“That’s it?!?!?!” Niall asked almost shocked.
“Well, I don’t want to seem like a hog!”
“She wants three pieces,” Niall told Louis.
“I didn’t say that!”
” Well, then I’ll eat them then!” I rolled my eyes.
“They said it would be twenty minutes,” Louis said.
“I cant wait that long!!” Niall whined.
“So do you live here in England?” Harry asked.
“No, we are here for Mia’s dance competition.”
“ Oh, well how long are you guys staying?”
“A month I think.”
“Well, where do you live?” Zayn asked.
“I live in North Carolina, On a beach actually. Its beautiful!”
“Wow North Carolina. That’s in America right?” Niall asked.
“Yeah, Hey do you guys have any things to do in a month?” I asked
“ I can ask Paul real quick.” Louis said. He talked on the phone for at least five minutes.“He said we have no concerts or anything for three months!”6666333w4
“Well, what if you guys come back with me and Mia?”
“ That would be awesome. Come on guys we have to go. It’ll be fun! Its on a beach!”Niall said “Ok we’ll go,” The rest of the boys said. Then we heard a knock on our door,“ROOM SERVICE,” we heard a young lady yell on the other side of the door.
Sorry guys if it’s boring!
Sorry itys been so long my laptop has been crashing
I love it!! Keep going!!:)
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#33 Sep 19, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
Part 4
“Hey what about we order room service?” Zayn asked.
“I don’t mind. But we’ll pay for ours,” I replied.
“No No No, its fine. Its on us!”
“No I cant let you guys do that.”
“Yes you can, and you will,” Louis demanded. I knew he was picking. It was funny. I had completely forgotten about Mia and Liam so I walked into the living room. Mia was smiling from ear to ear.
“ Caitlyn, guess what!!” Mia said eagerly
“What……” I said slowly.“Me and Liam.. are dating!!” I just kinda stood there for a second with my mouth to the floor.
“You’ve only been talking for 15 minutes and you’re already dating?”
“Yes, why not?”
“You guys hardly know each other!”
“Caitlyn, calm down! You and Dylan didn’t know each other that well when you guys started dating.
” Yes, and you saw how that turned out!” I couldn’t help but lose my temper.
“Oh, right my bad…… But we are still dating Caitlyn, I can do what I want,” I had enough. How could she bring up something like that. She knew that he broke up with me! What am I saying she probably wasn’t thinking. Caitlyn, you’re not mad at her, you’re not.
“Hey, are you guys gonna tell us what you want?” Harry called out.
“We want two pieces of pizza,” Liam yelled as I was walking into their room.
“Liam and Mia want two pieces of pizza,” I told Louis who was on the phone with room service.“What do you want love?” Harry asked me.
“Umm I’ll take a piece of pepperoni pizza.”
“That’s it?!?!?!” Niall asked almost shocked.
“Well, I don’t want to seem like a hog!”
“She wants three pieces,” Niall told Louis.
“I didn’t say that!”
” Well, then I’ll eat them then!” I rolled my eyes.
“They said it would be twenty minutes,” Louis said.
“I cant wait that long!!” Niall whined.
“So do you live here in England?” Harry asked.
“No, we are here for Mia’s dance competition.”
“ Oh, well how long are you guys staying?”
“A month I think.”
“Well, where do you live?” Zayn asked.
“I live in North Carolina, On a beach actually. Its beautiful!”
“Wow North Carolina. That’s in America right?” Niall asked.
“Yeah, Hey do you guys have any things to do in a month?” I asked
“ I can ask Paul real quick.” Louis said. He talked on the phone for at least five minutes.“He said we have no concerts or anything for three months!”6666333w4
“Well, what if you guys come back with me and Mia?”
“ That would be awesome. Come on guys we have to go. It’ll be fun! Its on a beach!”Niall said “Ok we’ll go,” The rest of the boys said. Then we heard a knock on our door,“ROOM SERVICE,” we heard a young lady yell on the other side of the door.
Sorry guys if itÂ’s boring!
Sorry itys been so long my laptop has been crashing
omg!! More!!
Erica loves Louis

Glen Allen, VA

#34 Sep 19, 2012
M-O-R-E!!!!

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#35 Sep 19, 2012
Ok guys I am sooo glad you guys like it! I was so scared that no one would read it and that if they did that it would be awful! But anyways I'm sorry I haven't posted a lot. I've been so busy with doctor's appointment, school, and all this other stuff. I promise I'll post at least two tmrrw. Maybe more (:
Maia Payne

Petaluma, CA

#36 Sep 19, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
Ok guys I am sooo glad you guys like it! I was so scared that no one would read it and that if they did that it would be awful! But anyways I'm sorry I haven't posted a lot. I've been so busy with doctor's appointment, school, and all this other stuff. I promise I'll post at least two tmrrw. Maybe more (:
Ok! What's happening with this whole selena thing? If u don't mind me asking?:-)

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#37 Sep 20, 2012
Maia Payne wrote:
<quoted text>
Ok! What's happening with this whole selena thing? If u don't mind me asking?:-)
Well she started auditions for her fan fic and one girl didnt get picked (Cassidy) and she was acting real rude about not being picked and being mean to Selena and then she created a hate page for her. Selena lost her mom and brother in a car accident and her dad has been diagnosed with cancer and cassidy knows all that but she still acts real mean to Selena. I am soooo tired of all this stuff. I mean it's really starting to get frustrating!! Like the Ruby Dawson fight and all that.( Off Topic) Ruby Dawson is 65 yrs old and on this app being rude to juju styles (writes AMAZAYN fan fics) but still, noboduy needed to create a hate page. So yeah LLN
Maia Payne

Petaluma, CA

#38 Sep 20, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
<quoted text> Well she started auditions for her fan fic and one girl didnt get picked (Cassidy) and she was acting real rude about not being picked and being mean to Selena and then she created a hate page for her. Selena lost her mom and brother in a car accident and her dad has been diagnosed with cancer and cassidy knows all that but she still acts real mean to Selena. I am soooo tired of all this stuff. I mean it's really starting to get frustrating!! Like the Ruby Dawson fight and all that.( Off Topic) Ruby Dawson is 65 yrs old and on this app being rude to juju styles (writes AMAZAYN fan fics) but still, noboduy needed to create a hate page. So yeah LLN
Oh, ok! Thanks.. I was really confused:)
shy(:

Ewa Beach, HI

#39 Sep 20, 2012
Its great!!

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#40 Sep 21, 2012
Maia Payne wrote:
<quoted text>
Oh, ok! Thanks.. I was really confused:)
Yeah, it's just drama that really doesn't need to be happening in my opinion. I'm not saying anything bad about Selena, I'm saying that Cassidy took it a little too far for just not being picked in a fan fic!

“Heyyy!”

Since: Sep 12

Topsail Island, NC

#41 Sep 21, 2012
Ok guys so sorry I've had a lot going on but here's part 5 (:

Part 5
Louis opened the door.
“ It’s about time you got here,” Louis said.
“Im…Im so sorry its just that it took some time to get everything to your specification…” she stuttered.
“You guys are.. are.. from One Direction…right?” She happened to stutter again.
“Yes, Yes now where’s the food?” Louis joked.
“Oh, its right in the ha_
” Well, get it! Im starving!” Louis said again ( He wasn’t being mean he was joking around.)
“ Hey don’t be mean to her. Hi, Im Za-“
“You’re Zayn… Sorry it’s just Im a HUGE fan of you guys. Especially you though .Oh, and I’m Trinity,” She said with a big smile on her face. She had long, beautiful brown hair with golden highlights in a side fishtail braid. She also had these stunning hazel eyes. She was wearing a turquoise blouse with gold around the edges, and a white knee-length skirt (Those were the colors of the hotel). Zayn kept smiling at her. I could tell he thought she was pretty. She was about to hand Louis this huge tray of food but Zayn said “Here let me help you get that.” She handed it to him, and looked at the ground and smiled.“Well, I hope you guys enjoy. Just call back down if you need anything,” Trinity said. Zayn looked at her one last time and smiled. Louis slammed the door.“You don’t have time to flirt Zayn!”“I wasn’t flirting. I was just being nice that’s all.” We started eating and it was so quiet, until Louis broke the silence.“Fifteen minutes yeah right. That was twenty minutes!”“Calm down at least you got your food.” Zayn commented. We all finished eating and we had all these trays stacked up on the floor. I found a note on one of them that said not to put them outside the door, but that we had to walk down to the lobby. I told Niall.“Well, do you want to help me take them down there?”“Sure.” I replied. So we gathered up all the trays and walked to the elevator.“ Oh no!” Niall exclaimed.“What?”“ I left my sun shades in the room!” Just when he said that cameras started flashing all around us. It was so bright I went blind. Then I heard the ding of the elevator. Someone grabbed my arm and pulled me into the elevator.“ Are you alright?” Niall asked “ Im not sure,” I replied.“ I cant believe they were actually just sitting there behind the plants. I mean I didn’t even see them!” I said. As we were going down to the lobby I started to feel how heavy the trays actually were. I guess Niall could tell they were starting to get heavy.“Are those too heavy for you?”“No, Im fine.” Just as I said that the elevator doors opened up. We ran to the front desk and she took them from us. We ran back to the elevator. I didn’t realize how fast we actually were. We were so fast the elevator doors hadn’t even shut yet. We jumped into the doors right before they shut. As we were going up I looked in the corner and realized we weren’t the only people on the elevator.
Sorry guys if it’s boring. Im having a hard time keeping it interesting /:
MIRELA LUVS 1D

Plainville, CT

#42 Sep 21, 2012
Horan_Caitlyn wrote:
Ok guys so sorry I've had a lot going on but here's part 5 (:

Part 5
Louis opened the door.
“ It’s about time you got here,” Louis said.
“Im…Im so sorry its just that it took some time to get everything to your specification…” she stuttered.
“You guys are.. are.. from One Direction…right?” She happened to stutter again.
“Yes, Yes now where’s the food?” Louis joked.
“Oh, its right in the ha_
” Well, get it! Im starving!” Louis said again ( He wasn’t being mean he was joking around.)
“ Hey don’t be mean to her. Hi, Im Za-“
“You’re Zayn… Sorry it’s just Im a HUGE fan of you guys. Especially you though .Oh, and I’m Trinity,” She said with a big smile on her face. She had long, beautiful brown hair with golden highlights in a side fishtail braid. She also had these stunning hazel eyes. She was wearing a turquoise blouse with gold around the edges, and a white knee-length skirt (Those were the colors of the hotel). Zayn kept smiling at her. I could tell he thought she was pretty. She was about to hand Louis this huge tray of food but Zayn said “Here let me help you get that.” She handed it to him, and looked at the ground and smiled.“Well, I hope you guys enjoy. Just call back down if you need anything,” Trinity said. Zayn looked at her one last time and smiled. Louis slammed the door.“You don’t have time to flirt Zayn!”“I wasn’t flirting. I was just being nice that’s all.” We started eating and it was so quiet, until Louis broke the silence.“Fifteen minutes yeah right. That was twenty minutes!”“Calm down at least you got your food.” Zayn commented. We all finished eating and we had all these trays stacked up on the floor. I found a note on one of them that said not to put them outside the door, but that we had to walk down to the lobby. I told Niall.“Well, do you want to help me take them down there?”“Sure.” I replied. So we gathered up all the trays and walked to the elevator.“ Oh no!” Niall exclaimed.“What?”“ I left my sun shades in the room!” Just when he said that cameras started flashing all around us. It was so bright I went blind. Then I heard the ding of the elevator. Someone grabbed my arm and pulled me into the elevator.“ Are you alright?” Niall asked “ Im not sure,” I replied.“ I cant believe they were actually just sitting there behind the plants. I mean I didn’t even see them!” I said. As we were going down to the lobby I started to feel how heavy the trays actually were. I guess Niall could tell they were starting to get heavy.“Are those too heavy for you?”“No, Im fine.” Just as I said that the elevator doors opened up. We ran to the front desk and she took them from us. We ran back to the elevator. I didn’t realize how fast we actually were. We were so fast the elevator doors hadn’t even shut yet. We jumped into the doors right before they shut. As we were going up I looked in the corner and realized we weren’t the only people on the elevator.
Sorry guys if itÂ’s boring. Im having a hard time keeping it interesting /:
omg more!!:)

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