Ghost life Niall Fanfic
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Ally_Tomlinson

Horseheads, NY

#1 Dec 22, 2012
Uh I'm gunna start I guess
Ally_Tomlinson

Horseheads, NY

#2 Dec 22, 2012
Intro
I'm Allison I have blonde hair with purple and green tips my eyes are blue/green and I'm not normal my parents killed there selves after......well I'll tell u

My Pov
I was walking to school and I was kinda floating cuz I'm a ghost and I have no friends cuz the rest of the people in my school think I'm weird you can't even tell I'm a ghost unless u try to touch me you'll go right through me ha kinda funny though its sad so when I get to school I go to my locker and there is a boy next to my locker he was never here before he said to me uh hi I'm Niall I'm new here I just looked behind me and said r u talking to me? He said who else would I be talking to? Well u said I don't have friends he said oh ill be your friend

Niall's pov
I saw a beautiful girl standing by my locker her locker was next to mine she had pretty blonde hair with purple and green tips her eyes were a bright blue and green she was really pale almost like pitch white her name was Allison I saw her locker had her name in it she had no friends when I asked her to be her friend her face lot up I tried to shake her had but she didn't let me touch her
My Pov
He tried to shake my hand oh god I was his friend yay but oh no
**lunch**
I was sitting alone at my table everybody avoiding me I saw Niall sitting with a few boys in the school he saw me and waved I waved back and turned around again I could here them say why did u wave at that slut? Or what the fuck Niall why r u friends why her? I started crying Niall must have saw me I heard some yell SHUT UP!!!! It was Niall he ended up beating up the boys and running or to me he put his hand on my back but it went right through me he looked surprised and said what the hell? I said listen I'm a ghost I'm not alive ill come alive if someone loves me like I used to love my life which is a lot I can't get over not living! I got up floated off the ground and flew out the door crying

Niall's pov
She's a ghost wow no wonder she was so pale I loved her like nothing else in the world I beat up 4 or 5 boys for her of course I love her if only I knew where she lived........
Uh 2 comments I guess tell me if it was good I only need one part my twin
U have to have blonde hair shoulder length and blue or green eyes thx and say a boy u want if someone auditioned before you to bad don't ask I'm ten and annoyed by that

“AUSTIN POWERS FARGA!!! hahaha!”

Since: Nov 12

Bundaberg

#3 Dec 23, 2012
I'll be your twin!!! and this is really good!!

“AUSTIN POWERS FARGA!!! hahaha!”

Since: Nov 12

Bundaberg

#4 Dec 23, 2012
I'm nine and your ten!!!! judt felt like saying that for te second comment so plz write more now!!

Since: Dec 12

Traverse City, MI

#5 Dec 23, 2012
Write more!

“no”

Since: Oct 12

kansas yk like dorothy

#6 Dec 23, 2012
Write more!!

“Niall horan!! <3 ”

Since: Oct 12

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#7 Dec 23, 2012
More!! It's amazayn
Ally_Tomlinson

Horseheads, NY

#8 Dec 23, 2012
Thx guys ill write more in a few when my dad leaves to go to work in a few minutes I promise

“no”

Since: Oct 12

kansas yk like dorothy

#9 Dec 23, 2012
Is he gone yet???
Ally_Tomlinson

Horseheads, NY

#10 Dec 23, 2012
Niall's pov
I tried to follow her I did but then I lost her on a street called dark falls ave (facepalm) OF COARSE! I run up to a purple and aqua house assuming that was her house cuz her locker was purple and aqua I knocked on the door and she opened it and froze and floated away crying again she looked like a mess puffy bloodshot eyes hair messed up and crinkled up I followed her to her room she wasn't there I look in the mirror she has in her room and when I look in it I see a reflection of her instead of me I laughed and so did she. She had the most beautiful laugh I sat on her bed and she kinda floated over to me she said to me the only way people can touch me is on my lips nose cheeks forehead and hair and my neck and my waist. I smiled in order of knowing I could kiss her. I kinda leaned in slowly and slid over a little she put her head on my shoulder and she gave me a hug and she felt so nice I made her look me in the eyes then I started to lean in and she kinda did to our lips touched and it felt like fireworks it felt like sparks were going everywhere it was a slow nice passionate kiss it was wonderful I bet it was her first kiss it wasn't mine but I couldn't tell her that
My Pov
Niall kissed me sweet but that was my first kiss and I could tell how it wasn't nialls first kiss that why it was a wonderful kiss he had some experience

Since: Dec 12

Traverse City, MI

#12 Dec 23, 2012
Awe wright more!
Eloves1Dandcarro ts

Brunswick, OH

#13 Dec 23, 2012
Right more I love it!!!
Ally_Tomlinson

Horseheads, NY

#14 Dec 23, 2012
Klingon ill write more
Ally_Tomlinson

Horseheads, NY

#15 Dec 23, 2012
My Pov
I was sad yet happy. Happy cuz I just kissed Niall and said cuz it wasn't his first kiss as it as mine I just let a single tear slide down my face and I put my head back on nialls shoulder and just sat thee and then said Niall let me guess that wasn't your first kiss yes your right but plz let it be your last first kiss (see what I did there) I smiled and said ok I promise I said do promise this to be your last first kiss? I did my puppy dog face and he said definitely I smiled

Niall's Pov
I just blurted out of nowhere Allison will u go out with me when I said that she said of course and she kissed me after that kiss there was a bright light it was Allison she was floating and spinning she fell on the floor and opened her eyes she was a human but she still had some pale skin you could touch her but she still had the powers of a ghost cool she looked at me and said Niall this is not possible I'm a human but I still have powers of a ghost awesome then she said wait does that mean- I cut her off and said yup I love you more than u loved being alive she hugged me her skin was warm her eyes were bright and she looked so happy I spun her around and kissed her I'm the most luckiest guy alive but then………
Ok srry If it was boring uh 2 comments I guess tell me if I should keep goin

“AUSTIN POWERS FARGA!!! hahaha!”

Since: Nov 12

Bundaberg

#16 Dec 23, 2012
write more!!!
Fred

Brisbane, Australia

#17 Dec 23, 2012
write more!!

“AUSTIN POWERS FARGA!!! hahaha!”

Since: Nov 12

Bundaberg

#18 Dec 23, 2012
hahahahahaahahah I was fred!!

“no”

Since: Oct 12

kansas yk like dorothy

#19 Dec 23, 2012
Moooore

“no”

Since: Oct 12

kansas yk like dorothy

#20 Dec 24, 2012
Little tip though, writer to writer, you might wanna add some more punctuation. Like when they talk use quotes ".." So it's easier to understand who'd saying what. Just an idea.
Ally_Tomlinson

Horseheads, NY

#21 Dec 24, 2012
Thx ill write more ill write some now and maybe more tonight have to sleep downstairs cuz my sister and her boyfriend are in my room so yeah it sucks

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