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#146
Nov 20, 2012
 
Hayley's POV-
All of us were standing outside Niall's house. I just wish Mirela's birthday plan works out. Okay, so her idea is to 'kidnap' Niall, cover his eyes with a piece of cloth and just take him somewhere and start the party. "Don't worry, this will totally be memorable for Niall", she kept saying to us. "Yeah, it sure will be but in a bad way", Louis kept responding. "So, let's ring the doorbell", Melissa said. "Is everyone here? Erin, call Niall's family and old friends up and tell them to meet us near the beach", I said. "Yeah, they'll be there", Erin said as she hung up.So, here goes nothing!" Liam joked as we went near Niall's door.'Oh, shut up", Mirela said. "Wait, it's not locked", Zayn said. "Niall's such a fool", Harry said as he laughed the hell outta him. "Harry, don't say that about him", Mirela said, trying not to laugh. We sneaked in, tiptoeing and finally reached Niall's room. "He's sleeping", Sarah whispered. yeah, Sarah was the one who had the keys to the room where Zayn was locked up. We don't really know her but Harry 'likes' her so she's here, with us. "Perfect", Zayn said as he lifted Niall up and blind-folded him.
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#147
Nov 20, 2012
 
Anushka_loves1D wrote:
Hayley's POV-
All of us were standing outside Niall's house. I just wish Mirela's birthday plan works out. Okay, so her idea is to 'kidnap' Niall, cover his eyes with a piece of cloth and just take him somewhere and start the party. "Don't worry, this will totally be memorable for Niall", she kept saying to us. "Yeah, it sure will be but in a bad way", Louis kept responding. "So, let's ring the doorbell", Melissa said. "Is everyone here? Erin, call Niall's family and old friends up and tell them to meet us near the beach", I said. "Yeah, they'll be there", Erin said as she hung up.So, here goes nothing!" Liam joked as we went near Niall's door.'Oh, shut up", Mirela said. "Wait, it's not locked", Zayn said. "Niall's such a fool", Harry said as he laughed the hell outta him. "Harry, don't say that about him", Mirela said, trying not to laugh. We sneaked in, tiptoeing and finally reached Niall's room. "He's sleeping", Sarah whispered. yeah, Sarah was the one who had the keys to the room where Zayn was locked up. We don't really know her but Harry 'likes' her so she's here, with us. "Perfect", Zayn said as he lifted Niall up and blind-folded him.
Ooh!!!! More!!!!

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#148
Nov 20, 2012
 
Anushka_loves1D wrote:
Hayley's POV-
All of us were standing outside Niall's house. I just wish Mirela's birthday plan works out. Okay, so her idea is to 'kidnap' Niall, cover his eyes with a piece of cloth and just take him somewhere and start the party. "Don't worry, this will totally be memorable for Niall", she kept saying to us. "Yeah, it sure will be but in a bad way", Louis kept responding. "So, let's ring the doorbell", Melissa said. "Is everyone here? Erin, call Niall's family and old friends up and tell them to meet us near the beach", I said. "Yeah, they'll be there", Erin said as she hung up.So, here goes nothing!" Liam joked as we went near Niall's door.'Oh, shut up", Mirela said. "Wait, it's not locked", Zayn said. "Niall's such a fool", Harry said as he laughed the hell outta him. "Harry, don't say that about him", Mirela said, trying not to laugh. We sneaked in, tiptoeing and finally reached Niall's room. "He's sleeping", Sarah whispered. yeah, Sarah was the one who had the keys to the room where Zayn was locked up. We don't really know her but Harry 'likes' her so she's here, with us. "Perfect", Zayn said as he lifted Niall up and blind-folded him.
Ohh this is going to be interesting more please

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#149
Nov 21, 2012
 
Melissa's POV-
"Where are you taking me?" Niall yelled on the way to the beach. We tried not to laugh at the way he was whining and trying to escape. He was still blind-folded. "Why don't you reply? Where am I?" he yelled again and we decided to stay quiet. "Tell me!" he screamed louder than ever. "Why didn't we tape his mouth?" Louis whispered to me as he covered his ears. "Shut up you little kid!" Liam exclaimed in a manly and weird voice. That's when Mirela couldn't take it anymore, she started laughing loudly. Zayn covered her mouth and Niall said," Mirela, is that you? Have they kidnapped you too? Shit, I can't let this happen to you." "Whoever you are, kidnapper, please for God's sake, let Mirela go and kill me if you want. I will give you whatever you want but just leave her, now!" 'Aww' Mirela mouthed to me with a huge ear-to-ear grin on her face. "Mirela! Why don't you respond? What's he doing to you? Just tell me if even comes near you, I'm just gonna slash him into little pieces", Niall said again. Louis face-palmed, "how much does he talk?" he whispered. "Just a few more minutes and we'll reach", I whispered back. "What the hell-" Harry covered his mouth with his palm and whispered," peace, finally." "Aw, he loves you", Erin whispered to Mirela. Mirela just blushed and looked at Niall and gave him a little kiss on his cheek when we reached. Niall managed to remove the piece of cloth off his eyes and said," oh my gosh! It's you guys." "You're so protective Nialler", Hayley teased as he looked down and went redder than a tomato. "Happy birthday Niall", Mirela said as she hugged tight. He kissed her forehead and said," I know that the party hasn't even started but this is the best birthday ever." "It's planned by Mirela." He saw his parents and school friends and ran up to hug them. That's when we realised that Sarah and Harry were having their own 'cosy' time alone, in the car. "Oh how I wish that was me", Louis sang and made Erin punch him on his shoulder. "Did you forget that you're mine now?" Erin said. "When did that happen? Anyway Erin I think he's dating you just to make Harry jealous", Zayn teased. "..and now, Harry's make you jealous", he added. "I pity myself and Sarah, we actually think that you guys are in love with us", Erin said sarcastically. Louis hugged her and said," even thought I love Harry as my brother, you'll always be my number one priority. I love you." Liam started making kissing noises and made us laugh. "Mirela, I want you to meet my parents", Niall said as he grabbed her by her hand. "Wow, Mirela will soon have to arrange an engagement party", I joked. "For Erin and me?" Louis asked as I distracted him. "You want one too? Great", Liam said. Aww, I am happy that my sister finally found someone totally right for her. Where's my Mr. Right?
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#150
Nov 21, 2012
 
Awww!!! More please!!!:)
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#151
Nov 22, 2012
 
More plz plz btw can I be like a little sis or something I'm 10 and I love climbing trees skate boarding and music and singing and swimming
I have blonde hair blue/green eyes

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#152
Nov 22, 2012
 
^ You're Niall's sis (: and um..tell me if you wanna be someone else's sis
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#153
Nov 22, 2012
 
Keep going!!!!! And did the paparazzi catch me and Harry's 'cozy' time. lol

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#154
Nov 22, 2012
 
Mirela's POV-
"Niall, what can I do to impress them?" I whispered to Niall as he pulled me towards his mom. "Just be yourself", he whispered back. "So, you're Mirela, huh?" Niall's dad asked. I just nodded. "Where do you live?" "Scotland", I said without even looking up. "With?" "My sister, Melissa." "Where are your parents?" "I don't know. They've just left us alone", I said. "What do you guys do for a living?" "Melissa and I work at a bakery." "A bakery? Interesting", his dad said. I don't know why but I thought that they didn't like me. "Mom, dad, you're scaring her. Stop asking so many questions", Niall said, patting me on my back. "Oh, sorry. How about some orange juice?" "Sure", I said as I took the glass his mom was giving me. "Mirela, how old are you?" his mom asked. "seventeen, why?" "Sorry, you look younger than fifteen", she said. What? I was taller than a normal seventeen year old girl. "How many boyfriends have you had before?" "None", I quietly said. "Mom, if you're done asking her those stupid questions, can Mirela and I just go to my school friend?" Niall asked, saving me from deathtrap he had set for me. "I'm sorry for those questions. My mom's just too protective", Niall said. "It's okay. I just got scared and I think my first impression wasn't good enough", I said. "Aww, don't say that. My mom wants me to find a girl who can cook, who has a nice job and who's smart", Niall said as he hugged me. "So, I'm not the right girl for you, right?" I asked. "Ofcourse you are", he whispered into my ear, sending chills down my spine. "Guys, this is Mirela, the best girl in the world", Niall introduced me to a bunch of kids from his old school. "Oh, she's pretty" A cute boy said, making me smile. "She's mine!" Niall exclaimed. "Mirela?" I heard someone call me. I turned around and saw Niall's mum. I got a bit nervous and spilled the orange juice all over her dress. She shot me a disgusted look and I apologized. Niall went with her to clean her dress up. "So, she ain't liking you, huh?" a girl in pink asked me. "No", I whispered. "Aw, it happened with us, his friends, too. But eventually she will get used to you and start liking you", she said, patting me on my back. "Yeah, I hope so."

"You already know the boys so I don't think i should introduce them. Well, this is Erin, Hayley and this is Melissa", Niall introduced the girls to his mom. "Melissa", Niall's mom repeated. "Yeah, Melissa", Niall said. Melissa just stood there, confused while Niall's mom was watching her from head to toe. "Can I talk to you for sometime?" Niall's mom asked Melissa. Melissa nodded and went with her. "What's happening?" Melissa mouthed to me as she turned around. I just shrugged my shoulders. "Your mom seems to like Melissa more", I whispered to Niall who was kinda upset.

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#155
Nov 22, 2012
 
Sarah wrote:
Keep going!!!!! And did the paparazzi catch me and Harry's 'cozy' time. lol
hahah, you're lucky, no!:)
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#156
Nov 22, 2012
 
MORE!!!! Now!!! I need to know what's going to happen...
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#157
Nov 22, 2012
 
Please write more

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#158
Nov 22, 2012
 
More!! Please write more!!
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#159
Nov 22, 2012
 
It's cool! Write more please(:
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#160
Nov 23, 2012
 
Anushka_loves1D wrote:
^ You're Niall's sis (: and um..tell me if you wanna be someone else's sis
me oh yay when do I come in
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#161
Nov 24, 2012
 
This is really good!! I love this fan fic!!

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#162
Nov 24, 2012
 
Keep going!!!
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#163
Nov 24, 2012
 
Morree!!

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#164
Nov 26, 2012
 
Erin's POV-
I sat near the sea, watching the waves while everyone was out there partying. "Are you missing that retard?" Louis asked as he sat beside me. I shook my head and just then, a tear fell down my eye. "I'm not gonna waste my tears on Jan", I said, more to myself than to him. "That's the spirit, girl", Louis said as he hugged me. "Why aren't you dancing?" he asked. "I don't know how to and I'm not really interested in beach parties, I mean, I don't like any kinds of parties", I said. "So what if you can't dance? Who's stopping you from dancing?" he asked. "Well, I like staring at the waves", I said. "Why aren't you dancing?" I asked. "Because you don't know how to and I don't dance alone", he said. "Aw, well, let's go!" I exclaimed as we got up. He put his arm on my waist and we started dancing slowly then like wild animals locked up in a cage. After we both got tired, we stopped dancing and just stood there, looking into each other's eyes. "Your eyes!" Louis exclaimed, coming closer to me. He put his hand on my chin and kissed me passionately, under the moonlight and near the sea, it was perfect. "I love you", I whispered into his ear. Just then, he started singing Little Things to me and I put my head on his shoulder, looking at the stars.

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#165
Nov 26, 2012
 
Anushka_loves1D wrote:
Erin's POV-
I sat near the sea, watching the waves while everyone was out there partying. "Are you missing that retard?" Louis asked as he sat beside me. I shook my head and just then, a tear fell down my eye. "I'm not gonna waste my tears on Jan", I said, more to myself than to him. "That's the spirit, girl", Louis said as he hugged me. "Why aren't you dancing?" he asxeked. "I don't know how to and I'm not really interested in beach parties, I mean, I don't like any kinds of parties", I said. "So what if you can't dance? Who's stopping you from dancing?" he asked. "Well, I like staring at the waves", I said. "Why aren't you dancing?" I asked. "Because you don't know how to and I don't dance alone", he said. "Aw, well, let's go!" I exclaimed as we got up. He put his arm on my waist and we started dancing slowly then like wild animals locked up in a cage. After we both got tired, we stopped dancing and just stood there, looking into each other's eyes. "Your eyes!" Louis exclaimed, coming closer to me. He put his hand on my chin and kissed me passionately, under the moonlight and near the sea, it was perfect. "I love you", I whispered into his ear. Just then, he started singing Little Things to me and I put my head on his shoulder, looking at the stars.
irony is im dating louis on topix.... Lol

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