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Crystal Malik

Lufkin, TX

#1 Jul 26, 2012
I was trying on clothes at a very fancy store in the local mall , i would pick clothes after clothes trying to find the best outfit . My boyfriend had tooken me shopping for our 1 year aniverserary. As i tried on what seemed the perfect outfit which was a pink strap-less dress with rimstones all around , as i looked in the mirror , i saw Harry with one leg on the wall with his arms crossed he smiled as he saw that i had seen him , he rapped his arms around my waste and whispered with his sweet voice , " This is the one." then kissed me...
-:D hey guys.!!! Tell me what you think.!!! I'll be hosting auditions for Niall's Girlfriend in a few .! Please tell me what you think and tell me if i should continue .!!!:D xx
Marissa

Tampa, FL

#2 Jul 26, 2012
Yeah it's rlly good) and u should continue!

Since: Jul 12

Westford, MA

#5 Jul 26, 2012
Keep writing!! I like it so far!!!! Btw if things don't work out w/ Harry...I'm ur backup! Lol jk....but really!!! Keep going!!!

Since: Jul 12

Location hidden

#6 Jul 26, 2012
I like how instead of starting off with how you met him you started in the middle of your relationship. This is going to be awesome!:)
Brooke wants a horan hug

United States

#7 Jul 26, 2012
It's good so far I want to read more!!
Crystal styles

Lufkin, TX

#8 Jul 26, 2012
JuJu Styles wrote:
Keep writing!! I like it so far!!!! Btw if things don't work out w/ Harry...I'm ur backup! Lol jk....but really!!! Keep going!!!
lol. Thank you soo much .! This means a lot coming from you.! Please continue your Fan fic as well.! I'm addicted.!!
Crystal styles

Lufkin, TX

#10 Jul 26, 2012
Part 1 1/2
I smiled , i was staring at the celing as i thought of one thing... Marrige . I've heard from Niall Harry's got a huge surprise coming up. And in my heart i could tell that was it. I turned and kissed harry. he smiled inbetween the kiss . I loved him with all my heart and just couldn't believe it's been a year.
***Harry's prov***
she was beautiful... I just couldn't wait too ask her the big Question tomorrow night at our date. I could wait to change her name , Crystal Haley Styles. The name brought such a smile to my face as we kissed .
" want to grab a bit babe.?" i asked " up for some McDonalds.?" she nodded and as i drove rain started forming , i saw Crystal look at her phone shocked . " Whats wrong.?" she stared in fear , "Harry , this storm is huge. Its really powerful.!" "Don't worry we have only a mile left til McDonalds me stop their and stay in the buliding till the storm calms." i didn't know a mile could cause such damage. As i drove the last thing i saw was lights , and then everything went black..
-Should i continue.?? Comment.!!:D 1-2 comments,!! Please
Crystal styles

Lufkin, TX

#11 Jul 26, 2012
Sorry that i had change my last name. My friend was just my phone for a week . And i gorgot to change it

Since: Jul 12

Location hidden

#12 Jul 26, 2012
Keep going its so amazing I'm hooked!
Crystal styles

Lufkin, TX

#14 Jul 27, 2012
Part 2:
**Harrys prov**
as i was starting to wake up i felt stiff i couldn't pick a finger up... Then i saw the prettiest girl i've ever seen , her name tag said Danielle , she a nurse i think , as i look over ... I saw the most horrible thing , i saw Crystal laying in the bed with scratches all over, a case in her arm and leg her lip was busted .. I started too cry i remember what had happened , we had crashed and it was all my fault .! The nurse came to me and asked what was wrong .. I didn't responded . I only stared and cried . She was beautiful her eyes just made me melt , but i was about to propose too Crystal.! Maybe Danielle will get out my mind ...
**Danielle prov**
Ehh.!!! He's staring at me,!! I can't believe it.!
"Is she gonna be alright" he asked . His british accented just made me die , "ummm , i don't know she just in a comma and don't know when she will wake up or if she will be okay" i said sadly even tho she was dating the man of my dreams , she was in horrible shape. I saw him starting to cry more "Why.!" he yelled , i conforted him and wiped his tears "Its gonnna be alright , it wasn't your fault the storm was soo huge." he looked at me and then turned "I guess, but it doesn't take the gulit out of me.!" i frowned , i looked at the time i was falling behind .. " Harry don't worry she will be fine." i walked to the next room and did my chores.,
^^1-2 comments please.!!
Savannah

Birmingham, AL

#16 Jul 27, 2012
I really like this and can I be nialls gf?? Hey I know you!!! Your the one I was talking to on my fanfic long time,no see!!
Savannah

Birmingham, AL

#17 Jul 27, 2012
Wait whoops sorry wrong girl but I'd still like to me nialls gf?
Marissa

Tampa, FL

#18 Jul 27, 2012
Yea this is super good! I <3 it
Louis_carrot_gir l

Encinitas, CA

#21 Jul 27, 2012
Ya I like this one!!! Can I be Louis gf?? Sry if u arnt taking requests or if u already hav Louis gf but :3 plez? I'm Kyla I have long brown hair and brown eyes. I love surfing (training for competions) and I play the piano and kinda guitar. I lovd just to have fun!:) I love to laugh and love guys who can make me laugh ;) I love romantic but fun guys. Thanks!!:)
Paigeluvsniall

Collinsville, IL

#22 Jul 27, 2012
Can I be nialls gf I luv him
Crystal styles

Lufkin, TX

#23 Jul 27, 2012
Louis_carrot_girl wrote:
Ya I like this one!!! Can I be Louis gf?? Sry if u arnt taking requests or if u already hav Louis gf but :3 plez? I'm Kyla I have long brown hair and brown eyes. I love surfing (training for competions) and I play the piano and kinda guitar. I lovd just to have fun!:) I love to laugh and love guys who can make me laugh ;) I love romantic but fun guys. Thanks!!:)
um i'll like to inclued you but i story thought out , i'm sticking with the real deal. But thanks asking i'll include you in a part if you like.
Crystal styles

Lufkin, TX

#24 Jul 27, 2012
Part 3
**Crystal's prov **(From no on it will be Crystal's prov unless i sat its no.)
i starting waking up too the sound of Laughing and Talking , i opened my eyes too see 4 handsome boys , I saw another boy in a bed like me he was in a bad condition. I saw a black headed guy stare at me at point at me , he was gorgeous his eyes were beautiful and he's face look angel-like. Every boy turned to me. They all came running towards my bed "Crystal are you alright.?" asked a boy with an Irish accent . I nodded my head , "Who are you guys.?" they all looked at each other .. I saw the guy in the bed , he seemed hurt " You mean you don't remember me.?!" he sounded hurt and sad . "no" i responded "In fact why am I in a bed what happened too me ." ... The boys soon explained to me then intruduced themself i kept staring at the Zayn boy. He was just hot , it turns out i'm presently dating the curly boy named hair . I paused at this . He was cute but i could tell he wasn't my type. I couldn't have dated him...
^^Two comments.?.. I'll make the Parts longer as i progress .!

Since: Jul 12

Location hidden

#27 Jul 27, 2012
Two okay write more!:) lln
Erica

Prince George, Canada

#28 Jul 27, 2012
Moreee that's 2 comments js :)
Louis_carrot_gir l

Vista, CA

#30 Jul 27, 2012
Crystal styles wrote:
<quoted text> um i'll like to inclued you but i story thought out , i'm sticking with the real deal. But thanks asking i'll include you in a part if you like.
It alright! I understand ur the writer! And sure I guess just occasionally being a background character is awesome!:) Idc!

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