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Juliet

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Aug 16, 2012
 
This is my first fanfic, please no haters!!!
Prologue
I guess you could say I am a pretty ordinary girl. I have blueish greenish eyes,dirty blond hair, I am 5'6 and 17 years old. I live in NYC with my mom and I LIVE to dance! And if you saw my room you would probably say that I am upsessed with One Direction! I don't think I'm upsessed more like... A One Direction expert, and there is nothing I want more than to go to the sold out One Direction concert at Madison Square Garden (MSG). But that would never happen in a million years!!........ I hope you liked it!! I'm still working on the story, and I need girlfriends for Zayn, Niall, Liam, And Louis who will also be my best friends!! Comment if you want one of the parts!! First come first serve!!
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Aug 16, 2012
 
I loved it:)
Liveyourlife1D

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Aug 16, 2012
 
Can I be Louis gf my name is Taty I have brown eyes and medium brown curly hair. I'm 5'4 I'm funny smart immature adventurous and out going. I love to read swim play soccer dance barrelrace and hang with friends! I play soccer. I'm am on a dance and swim team. I'm always called the Louis out of my group of friends because I am very random. You don't know what would come out of my mouth I am also very energetic and curious
Lauren

Victoria Point, Australia

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Aug 16, 2012
 
Wowowww your reall talented keep going and can i be Louis gf if u want a description just ask
Lauren

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Aug 16, 2012
 
Lauren wrote:
Wowowww your reall talented keep going and can i be Louis gf if u want a description just ask
wait louis taken Liams please
Lauren

Victoria Point, Australia

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Aug 16, 2012
 
Personality- bubbly, smart, energetic, loyal, loving, sometimes i can be a bit wierd but thats me
Description- Red hair  with pink tips (Ariana Grande colour and the pink tips look really good) and its long and wavy , topaz eyes, tanned, goood height, i dance and model play gutiar and piano
Liveyourlife1D

Magnolia, TX

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#7
Aug 16, 2012
 
Can you guys check out my fan fix called The Crazy World Called My Life thanks loves
Big1Dfan

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#8
Aug 16, 2012
 
Can I plz be Liam's gf my name is Charlotte and this a little about my self ok. I do dancing every Monday I have lots of friends but one is a directioners and so am I am but I really like these fanfics so can I plz be Liam's gf oh and I have dark brown hair and brown eyes plus I also play squash
Juliet

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Aug 16, 2012
 
Liveyourlife1D wrote:
Can I be Louis gf my name is Taty I have brown eyes and medium brown curly hair. I'm 5'4 I'm funny smart immature adventurous and out going. I love to read swim play soccer dance barrelrace and hang with friends! I play soccer. I'm am on a dance and swim team. I'm always called the Louis out of my group of friends because I am very random. You don't know what would come out of my mouth I am also very energetic and curious
Sure!!! I''m working on it right now!!
Juliet

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Aug 16, 2012
 
Lauren wrote:
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wait louis taken Liams please
Sure!! I am working on it!
MIRELA LUVS LOUIS

Plainville, CT

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#11
Aug 16, 2012
 
Niall's gf
Hair: brown long
Eyes: brown
Personalities: help others, caring, & funny:)
I luv your fanfic!!
& if I don't get the part it's fine!:)
Juliet

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Aug 16, 2012
 
Big1Dfan wrote:
Can I plz be Liam's gf my name is Charlotte and this a little about my self ok. I do dancing every Monday I have lots of friends but one is a directioners and so am I am but I really like these fanfics so can I plz be Liam's gf oh and I have dark brown hair and brown eyes plus I also play squash
Sorry, Liam is already taken but if you want Zayn or Niall I don't have GFs for them yet!
MIRELA LUVS LOUIS

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Aug 16, 2012
 
MIRELA LUVS LOUIS wrote:
Niall's gf
Hair: brown long
Eyes: brown
Personalities: help others, caring, & funny:)
I luv your fanfic!!
& if I don't get the part it's fine!:)
I'm very energetic, I luv 2 sing & dance!!
Sports: soccer, volleyball, swimming, & ballet
:)
Juliet

Springdale, AR

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#14
Aug 16, 2012
 
Ok so here is what is taken:
Louis-Taty
Liam-Lauren
Niall-?
Zayn-?
Harry-Me
Juliet

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Aug 16, 2012
 
MIRELA LUVS LOUIS wrote:
<quoted text>I'm very energetic, I luv 2 sing & dance!!
Sports: soccer, volleyball, swimming, & ballet
:)
Ok, so Niall is officially taken by....... Mirela!!
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Aug 16, 2012
 
Juliet wrote:
<quoted text>Sure!!! I''m working on it right now!!
Cool thanks alot love!(:
Juliet

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#17
Aug 16, 2012
 
So now all boys are taken besides Zayn!
Juliet

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Aug 16, 2012
 
Juliet wrote:
So now all boys are taken besides Zayn!
Does anyone want Zayn?
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Aug 16, 2012
 
Juliet wrote:
<quoted text>Ok, so Niall is officially taken by....... Mirela!!
yay!! Thank u!!:)
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#20
Aug 16, 2012
 
Ok I'm gonna post chapter 1. If you want Zayn just comment!!
{Chapter 1}
Hey, Juliet! I heard Joe say a I walked through the door of Joes Fro-Yo. I said Hi back and then said, how's it going? He replied with an enthusiastic good then asked me the same. I said,pretty good and walked over to the yogurt machines. I walked over to the vanilla machine and pulled the lever. I got the usual toppings and then pulled my wallet out to pay. Don't worry about it! Joe said. Are you sure?! I asked. He said it was fine so I said ok and then heard my text sound. I pulled my phone out to see who it was. It was Lauren, one of my BEST friends. She has long, wavy, red hair with pink tips. Like Ariana Grandes red velvety hair, but with with pink tips. She also has the best tan I have ever seen!! Her topaz eyes sparkled beautifully especially, as he says, under the moonlight!! She is the perfect height for a dancer, model, and guitar and piano player. She is bubbly, smart, energetic,loyal, loving, and a bit weird, but that's what makes her,her!! So, anyways I grab my frozen yogurt and start texting her back. I then hear the bells on the door ring, but I pay no attention to it and start walking to a table in the corner. I only look up once to see that it is a boy about my age, I would guess, who was wearing a sunglasses, and a Hollister hoody and is also texting. So I continue walking to a table then all of a sudden I run into the boy, my frozen yogurt slips out of my hands and spills all over my shirt and I slip an fall. OW!! I yell. He stopped texting and put his phone in his pocket. He reached his hand out to me and said, are you alright, love? He said with a thick, but thick, British accent. I would know that accent anywhere!!! It was....... 2 comments for part two of chapter 1!!!

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