Would You Like Some Fries With That?~ A Niall Horan Fanfic by Emma

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Emma

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Dec 28, 2012
 
Chapter 1: The Messy Meeting
"Jordan, orders up!" Ugh the lovely words that tell the story of my life. I'm waitress at a greasy little diner in London. Business is slow as usual until a rowdy group of boys walks in an just have to sit at a table I serve. I walk over and say, "What can I get you?" They all order hamburgers except the Irish blondie on the end who ordered half the menu. "Would you like anything else blondie?" I ask in a sarcastic/flirtatious voice. "I don't know what else do you got?" He replies. Oh, two can play at that game, "Can't you read or is that too much?" A dude in suspenders goes, "Oh, you just got burned!" I smile stupidly and say "Your food will be right up."

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Dec 28, 2012
 
More!

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Dec 28, 2012
 
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Dec 28, 2012
 
More .

“HOSPITALS ARE STRESSFUL. Fahck”

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The land of Ooo ;)

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Dec 28, 2012
 
lol! imma call niall that now :) blondie ;) lol more please!

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Dec 28, 2012
 
More!!! Plz!
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Dec 28, 2012
 
omg so good so far!!!:)) keep going plz!! oh and could you read my fanfic Pretty little liars fanfic. If you want to or if you have time could you read my other 2 its called uncharted, a lovely story :) they are all not done yet! THANKS AGAIN FOR THE PART =)
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Dec 29, 2012
 
I go back to the table to bring them there food. But what I didn't see was the "wet floor" sign. As I'm walking over there, my feet slip from under me. During the three seconds I thought I was gonna die, I feel hands quickly grab me before I drop. I turn around after a few sighs of relief. And then there's that blondie. "You know, a simple thank you would be nice," he says. "I was gettin to it. Well, there goes your food. I can bring you guys out another tray." "Ok go ahead. We'll be waiting right here." We'll the next time I bring the tray out, I take notice of the sign. I walk over hand them there food then finish my rounds with the other tables. I glance to see if they're still over there. They left money on the table and something else... It was a slip of paper that said, "Call me sometime -Blondie" and it had his number on it.
Huh, who knew slipping up could get you a cute guys number?

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Dec 29, 2012
 
More :)

“HOSPITALS ARE STRESSFUL. Fahck”

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Dec 29, 2012
 
Emma wrote:
I go back to the table to bring them there food. But what I didn't see was the "wet floor" sign. As I'm walking over there, my feet slip from under me. During the three seconds I thought I was gonna die, I feel hands quickly grab me before I drop. I turn around after a few sighs of relief. And then there's that blondie. "You know, a simple thank you would be nice," he says. "I was gettin to it. Well, there goes your food. I can bring you guys out another tray." "Ok go ahead. We'll be waiting right here." We'll the next time I bring the tray out, I take notice of the sign. I walk over hand them there food then finish my rounds with the other tables. I glance to see if they're still over there. They left money on the table and something else... It was a slip of paper that said, "Call me sometime -Blondie" and it had his number on it.
Huh, who knew slipping up could get you a cute guys number?
lol everyone that are in love movies! lol xD

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Dec 29, 2012
 
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Dec 29, 2012
 
Emma wrote:
I go back to the table to bring them there food. But what I didn't see was the "wet floor" sign. As I'm walking over there, my feet slip from under me. During the three seconds I thought I was gonna die, I feel hands quickly grab me before I drop. I turn around after a few sighs of relief. And then there's that blondie. "You know, a simple thank you would be nice," he says. "I was gettin to it. Well, there goes your food. I can bring you guys out another tray." "Ok go ahead. We'll be waiting right here." We'll the next time I bring the tray out, I take notice of the sign. I walk over hand them there food then finish my rounds with the other tables. I glance to see if they're still over there. They left money on the table and something else... It was a slip of paper that said, "Call me sometime -Blondie" and it had his number on it.
Huh, who knew slipping up could get you a cute guys number?
AHHHH!! love it ahaha i love the attitudes of you and him :P anyway this is great, please continue :) and thank you for complementing me on my fanfic i will read your other one :)
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Dec 29, 2012
 
Hey guys! I won't be able to get on until Tuesday or Wednesday!
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Dec 29, 2012
 
Nooooo I love this fanfic

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Dec 29, 2012
 
I love this! Keep goig

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Dec 29, 2012
 
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Dec 30, 2012
 
Ooo :) more plz
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Dec 30, 2012
 
MORE PLZ!!!!!
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Jan 2, 2013
 
Chapter 2: Everyone Freaks Out
Ok, so I didn't think this whole thing was a big deal. But when my sister and waitress-in-training, Amani, saw me she nearly passed out. "Whoa there, Amani! Are you alright?" "Yeah, but do you know who the heck you were talking to?" "No why?" "That's Niall from One Direction!! OMIGOSH! You even got his phone number?!" I was looking at her and thinking, who the heck is One Direction? They sound like a girly boy band. But considering my moment with, Blondie I decide its worth a shot. I called him and I hear his sweet Irish accent, "Hello?"
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#21
Jan 2, 2013
 
Guys, I need a little help. I don't remember who the people were for my fanfic, if you could let me know who Jordan's sister, friend, and music teacher was tht would be awesome!

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