“POTATO!!”

Since: Aug 12

Starwars

#1 Feb 11, 2013
Chapter 1
I stare Out through my window the warm breeze coming in. The summer sun Almost blinding me. I draw new sketches of the outside in my Sketch book. Green mixing with blue. Orange and yellow Binding. I stare at the finish work of art and smile.
"Eliza!" My mother calls I stare at the door
"Coming!" I call back I place my sketchbook in my drawer and head downstairs.
"Yeah mom...?" I ask She was fixing her hair in the Mirror
"James is coming over For dinner tonight. I want you to behave! Hes bringing his Son harry Bout your age 17" My mom tells
17? Well im 16 Perfect! Not....
"I will..." I smile lightly.
~*~*~*~*~*
*Dinner time*
I head downstairs Ripped pale Skinny jeans and a Coffee color shirt that hangs off my shoulder. My Black hair in a messy bun I help my mom set up the table while she cooks. The doorbell rings.

Sorry its short! 4 comments. Will post more tomorrow!

“Hai o-o”

Since: Oct 12

Location hidden

#2 Feb 11, 2013
More plz!!
LeoValdezLover

Rancho Cucamonga, CA

#3 Feb 11, 2013
OMG more more more!!
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WRITE NOW WOMAN!! Lol
Emma_Tomlinson

Rotherham, UK

#4 Feb 11, 2013
More NOW!!!

“my picture looks crappy ”

Since: Dec 12

Houston tx

#5 Feb 12, 2013
THAT'S FOUR COMMENTS NOW WRITE MORE!!!! Pls??

“POTATO!!”

Since: Aug 12

Starwars

#6 Feb 12, 2013
Chapter 2
I walk over to the Door and open it. A tall man stands in a black suit and tie short brown hair and green eyes
"Hello you must be eliza?" He smiled I nod alittle and smile back
"Come in!" my mom walks next to me james hands my mom some Flowers and sits. I also Noticed his british accent hmm..classy. As I close the door I hear someone
"Stop!" I hear a Husky voice say I open the dor wider and see a boy standing messy brown curls amazing green eyes.
"Sorry".i say quickly he jusy glares at me and sits at the table.

Sorry its short will have more later! 3 comments

“my picture looks crappy ”

Since: Dec 12

Houston tx

#7 Feb 12, 2013
MORE!

“wazzup?”

Since: Oct 12

Schererville IN

#8 Feb 12, 2013
1D_Foreveryoung1 wrote:
Chapter 2
I walk over to the Door and open it. A tall man stands in a black suit and tie short brown hair and green eyes
"Hello you must be eliza?" He smiled I nod alittle and smile back
"Come in!" my mom walks next to me james hands my mom some Flowers and sits. I also Noticed his british accent hmm..classy. As I close the door I hear someone
"Stop!" I hear a Husky voice say I open the dor wider and see a boy standing messy brown curls amazing green eyes.
"Sorry".i say quickly he jusy glares at me and sits at the table.

Sorry its short will have more later! 3 comments
More please
Emma_Tomlinson

Sheffield, UK

#9 Feb 12, 2013
More plz!!!!

Since: Dec 12

Location hidden

#10 Feb 13, 2013
1D_Foreveryoung1 wrote:
Chapter 2
I walk over to the Door and open it. A tall man stands in a black suit and tie short brown hair and green eyes
"Hello you must be eliza?" He smiled I nod alittle and smile back
"Come in!" my mom walks next to me james hands my mom some Flowers and sits. I also Noticed his british accent hmm..classy. As I close the door I hear someone
"Stop!" I hear a Husky voice say I open the dor wider and see a boy standing messy brown curls amazing green eyes.
"Sorry".i say quickly he jusy glares at me and sits at the table.

Sorry its short will have more later! 3 comments
More!!:)
Lydia directioner

Maxville, Canada

#11 Feb 13, 2013
More!
Skye

Rotherham, UK

#12 Feb 16, 2013
Please more I love it
Anonymous

Waipahu, HI

#13 Feb 16, 2013
Its great . Keep going pleasr(:
Lydia directioner

Apple Hill, Canada

#14 Feb 17, 2013
More!!!!!!!

“POTATO!!”

Since: Aug 12

Starwars

#15 Feb 24, 2013
sorry i havent really updated but i will now!!

Chapter 3
"that was odd" i whisper to myself but brush it off and sit next to harry cause that was the only seat left. my mom brings over her cooked pasta and chicken atleast she can cook or i would be dead. "dig in!" she says as she sits down across from james. they give eachother winks and smiles so big. "Mom stop thats Gross." i say "what?" she ask a innocent smile "if you two wanna have sex or something just go upstairs" i bluntly say james and my mom stare at eachother and dash for upstairs i sigh "shes such a slut i swear" i laugh harry just sits at the table and stares at his plate. weirdo..... i run uptairs and get changed nice short white booty shorts neon blue tank top and black sandals and i let my wavy black hair with dark blue tips down. i job downstairs and grab the car keys. hey curly!" i yell harry looks up at me "wanna party?" i smile he ponders a second but gets up and walks out with me perfect.....

sorry i keep typing sucj short and shitty chapter but im so lazy lol and my resources to get on the internet are very limited lol

Since: Dec 12

Location hidden

#16 Feb 24, 2013
1D_Foreveryoung1 wrote:
sorry i havent really updated but i will now!!

Chapter 3
"that was odd" i whisper to myself but brush it off and sit next to harry cause that was the only seat left. my mom brings over her cooked pasta and chicken atleast she can cook or i would be dead. "dig in!" she says as she sits down across from james. they give eachother winks and smiles so big. "Mom stop thats Gross." i say "what?" she ask a innocent smile "if you two wanna have sex or something just go upstairs" i bluntly say james and my mom stare at eachother and dash for upstairs i sigh "shes such a slut i swear" i laugh harry just sits at the table and stares at his plate. weirdo..... i run uptairs and get changed nice short white booty shorts neon blue tank top and black sandals and i let my wavy black hair with dark blue tips down. i job downstairs and grab the car keys. hey curly!" i yell harry looks up at me "wanna party?" i smile he ponders a second but gets up and walks out with me perfect.....

sorry i keep typing sucj short and shitty chapter but im so lazy lol and my resources to get on the internet are very limited lol
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“Hezzooooooo!!I'm Rachel! XD”

Since: Oct 12

Chesapeake

#17 Feb 24, 2013
It's good!:)
Emma_Tomlinson

Leeds, UK

#18 Feb 24, 2013
More!!
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Manheim, PA

#19 Feb 24, 2013
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