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Annie_BIGGEST_Za ynFan

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#1
Nov 23, 2012
 
Hey so this is my new fan fic idea!!! I thought I would make it cause I just got the idea too!! Now I know I don't update as much usually but I have a confession.... I didn't want to say it but I will ause I think if I tell my readers you guys would understand more;)
So I am dislexic and it makes me mix my words and spelling really bad and it's really hard for me to make fan fics but I do it for chuuu!!! 1 <3 U guys :)
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#2
Nov 23, 2012
 
Sorry guys but I have parts all ready if your wondering, I made it up in my head so I know what I wanna do already:)
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Nov 23, 2012
 
"Mom look at her she's so beutifull", "she looks just like you Maria""I know look at her tiny little fingers and her beutifull brown eyes" "welcome to our world Baby Annabelle, I'm your grandma" "aww mom she likes you""give me my granddaughter Maria I have to hold her once more before I start work","goodbye baby Annabelle<3"
"bye mom" "goodbye Maria", "ooh come on baby girl lets go bye bye in the car""were gonna go see Rina, she has a baby girl the same age as you" looking into my babies' eyes and talking to her as if she was able to respond was something I always did with her,"ooh whos my babie girl come on sit in your baby seat uff stop squirming", she was buckled in as we drived to Rinas house, "Your gonna meet my best friend Baby Annnabelle, her names Rina we met when we were just your age, Rinas baby girls name is Amee, you were born the same day" "Maria!, how are you!", Rina runs out her house with Amee in her arms to our car in her driveway, "Oh I'm good Annabelle is so fussy she has this mirror toy and she won't stop looking in it","how is Amee?" "She a nice plump healthy baby alright a little to plum, she is always overrating her formula" "It's ok Rina she's safe that all that matters their not in highshcool yet", picking up Annabelle we get out of the car and walk inside Rinas house, "ooh come here baby Amee who's my baby girl" Rina comes and picks up Amee and Annabelle, she puts them in a play pin together "Are these sofa...", right in the middle of my scentence me and Rina look over at Amee and Annabelle they said their first word together, "Besties"
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Nov 23, 2012
 
-------Kindergarten-------
(Maria's and Annabelle's house)
"Oh it's you first day of school are you sure you wanna go I mean school is a scary place?" "no mommy I wanna go" "ok Annie bannannie", "Yay come on mom let's go let's go let's go!!!" Don't forget your lucky Mirrior!" "tank you mommy(I skipp to the car and sit in the back seat)
Maria's POV
I got the car keys! And I run to the car! "come on Annie lets do this!" "yay"
-------Rina's & Amme's House-----
"NOOOOOO I Dont wanna gooooo!!!! Ahhhhh!!!"
"come on Amee we have too" Amee shakes her head no "mmmm mmm noooo!!" "Ugh come on Amee!!" "Nope!" "Annie's gonna be ther" "Annie? She is!!?, Ok!:)" "ugh oh Amee don't forget your Lunch Box!" "thanks momma" "k come on" Amee sits in the back of our car and we drive to her first day at school,
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"Goodbye Amee, Bye Bye Annie" Both our moms leave us at this school "hii Amee" "Hi Annie!!, I don't like this place.." "I doo!!" it's fun!"
"OK Kids Time To Color!!"
Me and Annie sit right next to each other and color with the same paper "it's a princess,", we both say
"I like pie Annie", "I like purple and pink and orange and frogs and pigs and..", "I LOVE FOOD!! Annie" "me too!" we rub our bellys and think of pie and candy and cake and yummys!,
"Lunch Time Tiny Children!!!"
"Give me a carrot Amee I don't wanna eat", "ok"
"nummy!!" "Nummm Nummms" "Annie you want some pudding I have to cups of it?""YEAHH!!!!" I say almost bouncing out of my chair, "Mrs M?",(our teachers name) "yes Annie?" can I sing somfin me and Amee sing songs together all the time we wanna be rockstars when we grow old!" Amee his behinde a table, she was shy.. "so can I?" "sure Annie go ahead" Mrs M chuckled,
" Let's go Crazzy Crazzy Crazzy till we see the sun! I know we only met but lets pretend it's LOVE!" "wow Annie that was Great!" "heh tanks but would've been better with Amee" "sorri Annie you know I don't sing with anyone but you.." "yeah"
----------end of Day---------
Rina Came and picked us Both up
Emily luvs Bryce

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Nov 23, 2012
 
I really love it!
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Nov 23, 2012
 
Manny Years Later in grade 9~~
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"Yo Amee wait up!!" I ran out of my car and tackle Amee in our school courtyard "Hey Wifey!" "Hay Bay Bay!", Amee says back," So exited!! Amee aren't you!! I can't wait for te schools talent show"
"eh..? Annie you know how I'm shy when I sing "
"Come on Amee please we have to show of our god given talent!!" I said making a dramatic hand gesture with my whole body, "eh?" sinces Amee isn't Givving in I tried plan B. "PLEASE!!! PLEASE!! Ahhh FIRE!! CHILD MOLESTER AHH!! PLEASE!!..." amee takes her hand and covers my mouth "Ugh fine!!! Annie just shut upp, I don't need to be arrested befor I'm 18" "haha ok yay!"
"Amee My moms gonna pick us up Today!! The talent show is tonight and we need to have our looks ready!!" "ok!!"
----------END OF THE DAY!!!-------
"come on Amee I see my MOMMA!!!" I grab he wrist and run to tr car, "hey mom!" "hey girls come on you have to get ready for your show!" "yeah Amee come on" "wow annie what did I possibly do?" "haha nothing:)"
We both put our hair in messy Buns with a small side bangs, black see through nylons with white bootie shorts and supper cute blue and purple top for Amee and a Rainbow one for me, we wair heavy eyes liner with a Wing and dark lipstick
"oh yeahhhhh were ready to rock GORGEOUS!!" "Oh yeah me ARE!!!!", replied Amee.
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Nov 23, 2012
 
Emily luvs Bryce wrote:
I really love it!
Thank You!!;)
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Nov 23, 2012
 
----At The Talent Show----
We were waiting in the line till our turn "Annie in so nervous I don't know if I can do this!!!" "of course you can!!! Your a goddess at singing!, just imagine your a gracefull unicorn pooping skidles!"
"haha ok annie I totally will!" "haha fantasico!, at least you don't have to dance, sing and play guitar!!" your just have to sing and dance!", "haha yeah I suck at instruments" "Ahhh! It's our turn!"
(Amee solo while I play guitar)"lately I found my self thinking that dreaming about you a lot,and up in my head I'm you girl friend but that's one thing you've all ready got, she drives to school every morning I walk alone in the rain shed kill me with out any warning if she took a look in my brain!(me and Amee start singin together and dancing now)
Would she say she's in the L-O-V-E well if it was me I would... I would!!..." we made it through the whole song and everyone clapped amazed
"Thank you Thank you!"
We came off the stage and was congratulated by Tim's and TONS of students and teachers,
Later At Amees House--------
"Annie!!! I Got and Email From Ed Sherin!!!!" "You What!!!" "here I'll read it out loud"
"Dear Annie and Amee,
I hear about your highshcool preformance singing one directions "I would" and you to are very talented!! I would love for you to meet me in new york while I'm touring with 1D to overview some song lyrics for you too and start up your careers!,
Signed, Ed Sherin

"Wow"
Emily luvs Bryce

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#9
Nov 23, 2012
 
I would is like my favorite song!!!! Gosh you're not just talented in singing, more like writing!

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#10
Nov 23, 2012
 
OMG!!! I love this fanfic. People need to read this!!!
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#11
Nov 23, 2012
 
Write more!!!!!

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#12
Nov 23, 2012
 
WHY DID I JUST NOW FIND THIS!!!!!!! Annie it's really amaZAYN! Lol once my friend was chasing me and was screaming "RAPE RAPE!!!!" Lol

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#13
Nov 23, 2012
 
But yeah more plz! ;)
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Nov 23, 2012
 
Amee's House------
Annie was flipping out having a heart attack! "Amee! We're gonna be famous!!", "you don't know that Annie, he said he wants to meat us and if he likes us then he wants to write us songs" "Whateves we know he will love us!!, I mean who wouldn't?" Annie flipped her hair,"ya that is true"
"so wait?, how are we getting to new york? We live in Arizona?", "well he said he was on a tour with those one direction guys so he will be able to send us a private plane from the tour" "Cool Beans!!!" annie Scrame, "Wait we're is my Mirorr?!!! I need it or we will die on te plane ad he won't like us we will have bad luck without it!! Were is it!!!" "Annie.. It's in your hand" "oohh... Thanks!" "I swear your such a blond! I even say that and I'm Blond!!!" we start laughing "Yeah it's like I should have your blond hair and you should have my light brown hair" "totally" "ooh! Amee look at this bug!! It's so cool!" "Eeww!!! Ahhhh!!! Annie GET IT AWAY!!!!!" Annie knows I hate bugs, Bleh I just *shivers* hate them their so groose!! It's like tiny deformed alien people in a gone wrong science experiment!, "Amee look our favorite T.V show is on!!" we sit on the big couch and lay back
THE T.V SHOW----------
"You think I should use the butter sock?"
"did she just say butahh sock?"
"a sock?"
" full of butahh!?"
"Do you guys want to hear my idea!?"
"douse it involve the butter sock?"
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#15
Nov 23, 2012
 
Thank chu Guys!! It means a lot that you like it:)
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#16
Nov 23, 2012
 
Ugh sorry posted that twice..

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#17
Nov 23, 2012
 
Lol!!!!! I'm laughing like soo hard right now!! I love it Annie!!
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Nov 23, 2012
 
Lol thanks!!! Look at the link I posted on "A twist"

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#19
Nov 23, 2012
 
I did! It was sooo funny!! BATTAH SOCK!!!

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#20
Nov 23, 2012
 
Lol the Buttah Sock!! XD more woman!!

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