Lost in a love song ( 1D fanfic )

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“my picture looks crappy ”

Since: Dec 12

Houston tx

#1 Dec 22, 2012
Alright im starting this and ill post auditions later (:
My pov
I was in the pouring rain crying my heart out i really screwed up this time my phone buzzed my blurring vision didnt allow me to see who was calling me i answered the phone
M-hello?
N- how the hell could you do this ?!?! How could you just cheat on me with LOUIS OF ALL THE FUCKING PEOPLE MY BEST MATE WHY?!? Why?
I could hear Niall sniffling my heart tore
M- im sorry please Niall I'm really sorry it was an accident i didn't mean to i.....
I stopped myself before i said i love you because i knew i didn't , i didn't know who i loved Niall or louis...
N- dont save it I'm through with you for good goodbye brooke
*beeep!*
I fell to the ground not caring that i was now completely soaked from the wet ground and the rain beating me .... I went from heaven to hell in one short fall .....
Three years earlier~
I was sitting at my favorite cafe when a guy walked in he had blonde and brunette hair with sparkling blue eyes and a amazing smile he looked over at me and blushed i looked down he walked by me i got up to leave when he fumbled into me " im soo sorry!" i muttered " its ok ummmm.... Whats your name?" He laughed " brooke , brooke imm " i said feeling my cheeks heat up " im Niall horan"he said with a money making smile it took me a minute but i realized this was Niall horan of one direction!! I smiled " well nice meeting you Niall." I turned away to walk out but he stopped me and handed me a folded piece of paper " maybe we can talk later " he said again with that smile of his before leaving back to his table i grabbed my phone to text my best friend .......
TBC
claraloves1d

Crystal City, TX

#2 Dec 22, 2012
More please it good
claraloves1d

Crystal City, TX

#3 Dec 22, 2012
Please write more
Nayeli

Houston, TX

#4 Dec 22, 2012
Write more plz!!!

“my picture looks crappy ”

Since: Dec 12

Houston tx

#5 Dec 22, 2012
Ill write more in a lil bit

“my picture looks crappy ”

Since: Dec 12

Houston tx

#6 Dec 22, 2012
My pov

M-OMFG!!!!!
J-SPILL IT GIRL S.P.I.L.L I.T!
M-I WAS JUST TALKING TO NIALL FREAKING HORAN!
J-NO WAY! Wait your not pranking me ??0.o
M- no jay im not pranking you he gave me his number !
J- are you gonna text him or what?
M-idk ! Should i ? What if its a fake number an he laughing at me for thinking its the real number??!
J- i don't think he would do that brooke -.-"
M- alright ill text him later bye(:
J- you better bye buttercup!

I started at my phone laughing at jaelie buttercup was my nickname from fifth grade i was obsessed with Reeses peanut buttercups so she called me buttercup and i called her carrots she loves carrots we haven't called each other that since middle school i got up to get showered and decided to text Niall later ...

Niall pov

" she was perfect louis ! I mean come on theres nothing better then her !" I said with a smile louis laughed "someones got a case of love bite! And how do you know that lad? I mean what happened to that other chick who was 'the one'? " lou said making air quotations when he said the one i winced remembering how "the one" got away

4 weeks ago~

" I HATE YOU UGLY SCRAWNY ASS!" Alice screamed " all i wanted was the money seeing that your not going to give it over ill just leave you to suffer alone with anyone to love you ." Alice purred as she slammed the door shut i fell on the couch and curled in a ball crying and at that moment i remembered the ring in my pocket i pulled it out and sobbed harder as i got up to hide it away from everyone including the lads

Present time~

" that was a mistake lou" i said " ok but dont be disappointed and say i didnt warn you" louis practically sang " but you didnt lou!" I said laughing " oh thats right!" He chuckled my phone buzzed causing me and lou to fall off the couch and topple on each other " louis ! Your bum is crushing my arm!" I said in between laughs " oops sorry lad " i got up to find a strange number had texted me ...
TBC!!
Jaeli_luvs Josh

White Plains, NY

#7 Dec 22, 2012
more plz!!!
Jaeli_luvs Josh

White Plains, NY

#8 Dec 22, 2012
btw it's JAELI not JAELIE but plz keep goin!!!

“Hai o-o”

Since: Oct 12

Location hidden

#10 Dec 22, 2012
Lol Louis's bum crushed Niall's arm XD IN LOVE WITH THIS!!!!!

“I love Liam<3”

Since: Jul 12

Location hidden

#11 Dec 22, 2012
more! more! more! plz continue!!!!!!!!!!

“my picture looks crappy ”

Since: Dec 12

Houston tx

#12 Dec 22, 2012
Jaeli_luvs Josh wrote:
btw it's JAELI not JAELIE but plz keep goin!!!
IM SOO SORRY!! Stupid ipod i rushed thur that ill try to be more careful from now on (:

“my picture looks crappy ”

Since: Dec 12

Houston tx

#13 Dec 22, 2012
KeiraF0bister 101 wrote:
Lol Louis's bum crushed Niall's arm XD IN LOVE WITH THIS!!!!!
I was laughing so hard i almost fell onto my dog when i wrote that imaging that happen xD

“my picture looks crappy ”

Since: Dec 12

Houston tx

#14 Dec 22, 2012
Ill write one more post then im out for the night guys!

“my picture looks crappy ”

Since: Dec 12

Houston tx

#15 Dec 22, 2012
My pov

My phone buzzed

M- hey niall its brooke the girl from the cafe...
N-hi love!
M- how are you?
N- good you?
M- im fine
N- do you want to meet at the cafe again?
N- just you and me?
M- sure (;
N- night love
M- night niall

I put my phone down and smiled Niall horan wanted to spend time with me and only me i fell asleep to irresistible play for the millionth time i awoke to my phone ten missed calls five from jaeli The rest from niall three texts two from niall one from jaeli
J- SPILL THE DETAILS GIRLY!
J- LIKE NOW
J-WAKE UP!
J- ok last time or ill kick your door down!
M- i texted him and he wants to meet at the cafe .. ONLY me and him tho
J-(; have fun!
M- bye carrot
J- bye buttercup!

I began to check nialls text

N- morning love
N- im at the cafe where are you?
N-brooke?
N- are you coming?
N- im guessing your asleep call when you wake up ...

I called him
Riiiiing ... Riiiiing riiii-

N- hello?
M- hi Niall
N- you scared me!
M-* laughs* how?!
N- i dunno!
M- ill be at the cafe in five
N- ok
*CLICK*

I did my make-up and got dressed curled my hair grabbed my purse and keys and ran out the door .

Louis pov

I was in the mall when i ran smack into a very pretty girl " HEY! Watch it will you ?!" She said " im sorry love" i apologized " hey dont i know you?? Omg your LOU-" i covered her mouth and ran out the doors " please dont scream " i said orating she didnt " your louis Tomlinson! Omg to think my bff is with niall horan and im here talking to louis tomlinson!" She exclaimed " wait your friend is the girl niall is crushing- uh i mean befriending with?" " yea why else would i say that?" " no reason " we exchanged number and parted ways i ought to chat with niall ......

My pov

Me and niall laughed and told childhood stories and weeks we came to the cafe and told stories texted when we were apart wishing that we could see each other till one day he said " brooke its been five weeks since we meet and i wanted to take you to see the boys tomorrow but as my girlfriend." He said with a shy smile " yes!" I almost yelled as i jumped into his arms and lightly kissed him on the lips " ok tomorrow at eleven bring jaeli with ok?" " sure" we parted ways and i texted jaeli

Jaeli pov

" will you be my girlfriend jaeli??" Louis asked " yes! YES !" I yelled louis laughed and kissed me my phone buzzed
B- guess whos dating niall horan!!!?
J- guess whos dating louis tomlinson!?!
B- YOU! Btw at eleven tomorrow we meet harry and zayn and liam (:
J- YOU! An awesome!
B- yup bye carrot!
J- bye buttercup!

I put my phone in my bag and headed for my car just as ...

TBC

“My Music=My Life”

Since: Dec 12

Chicago, IL

#16 Dec 22, 2012
OMG more!!

“I love Liam<3”

Since: Jul 12

Location hidden

#17 Dec 23, 2012
moreeeeee

Since: Dec 12

Traverse City, MI

#18 Dec 23, 2012
Write moreeeeeeee
Jaeli_luvs Josh

White Plains, NY

#19 Dec 23, 2012
more plz & that's ok!!!

“wazzup?”

Since: Oct 12

Schererville IN

#20 Dec 23, 2012
MORE!!!!
Nayeli

Mcallen, TX

#21 Dec 23, 2012
Write more please!!

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