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#186
Oct 2, 2012
 
NOOOO!!!:'(
write more i need to know what happens!!
Rachel Tomlinson

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#187
Oct 2, 2012
 
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Poor you and poor Lou!!!!! haha that rhymes!
Hahah it does rhyme! Lol :D
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#188
Oct 2, 2012
 
I will write more either today or tmw. Sorry for the wait for the last few parts, I've been like dead busy. :(
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#189
Oct 3, 2012
 
Part 30
"I..I can't.. I have to... Help her." He says, breaking down into uncontrollable tears. Someone pounds at the door and yells "Open! It's the ambulance!" Bridget runs to the door and opens it. They rush in and tell Louis to leave me to them. "No! No!" He says, hugging me again. "It's ok, we'll take her to the hospital where she will get help." They explain to Louis. "Sir, if you want, you can come in the ambulance with her." The paramedics say. "Of course!" He says. "We'll all be there as soon as we can!" Maddy says. I feel my limp arms swinging back and forth as Louis runs with me still tightly held in his arms. They put me on the stretcher and close the door. Louis grasps my hand tightly, quietly whispering "I'll never leave you. I promise."
I wish I could move or even speak, I wish I could tell him I love him back. Why did I do that? I shouldn't have taken that many...

We arrive at the hospital and I get rushed into the emergency ward. Louis is still holding my hand, running alongside the stretcher as they push me down the hall. They take me into a strange room and hook me up to stuff. They begin taking tests on me and taking some of my blood to examine. After a few hours of that, I get taken into a room, a private room. Louis must have paid for this. Louis sits on the chair next to my bed and talks to me. "I'm not sure if you can hear me, but if you can, please give me a sign. Anything." He says, his voice turning to a whisper. "Please." My arms doesn't feel numb anymore, I wonder if I can move. I think to myself. I gently squeeze Louis's hand and he gasps. "Rach?! Rach! Are you awake?! Are you ok?! Two squeezes for yes, one squeeze for no!!" He yells excitedly. I squeeze his hand twice and I feel his warms arms wrap around my shivering body. The room is so cold, I don't understand why Louis isn't cold. "I love you, you know that don't you?" I say, in a raspy voice. "I know, I love you too." He says, kissing my cheek.
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#190
Oct 3, 2012
 
Please continue

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#191
Oct 3, 2012
 
keep it going please!!
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#192
Oct 3, 2012
 
Awwwwwwwwwww! I love it!!!
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#193
Oct 4, 2012
 
Hey guys before I start the next part I need a favour. See one of my friends Kelseyloves1D started a fanfic, but she wants more people to read. Pls can u read her fanfic? I can't remember the name thou lol Ill ask her then ill tell u then u can read it!:D
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#194
Oct 4, 2012
 
I LIVE IT SOOO MUCH!!!
And ermm your kelsey's friend?
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#195
Oct 4, 2012
 
Mona wrote:
I LIVE IT SOOO MUCH!!!
And ermm your kelsey's friend?
I'm glad u like it Mona! Lol. And yes I'm Kelsey's friend why?
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#196
Oct 5, 2012
 
Yeah lol and never mind we got into a big fight when I was defending myself from Cassidy and she started cussing me out and threatening me but it's all over now Kelsey and i are friends but I will never ever forgive Cassidy she thinks she's been through alot just because her dog died but she doesn't know half the things I've been through! But anyway keep going I love the crappies you've written so far and I posted on "a lovely story" also you forgot about the international love fanfic but ive got bad news you've been replaced because you forgot to write :( I tried telling them to wait but the story had to go on :( sorry babe. I'm sad because your a really good writer and i wanted them to see that.
Mona

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#197
Oct 5, 2012
 
*chappies not crappies sorry lol
Rachel Tomlinson

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#198
Oct 5, 2012
 
Mona wrote:
Yeah lol and never mind we got into a big fight when I was defending myself from Cassidy and she started cussing me out and threatening me but it's all over now Kelsey and i are friends but I will never ever forgive Cassidy she thinks she's been through alot just because her dog died but she doesn't know half the things I've been through! But anyway keep going I love the crappies you've written so far and I posted on "a lovely story" also you forgot about the international love fanfic but ive got bad news you've been replaced because you forgot to write :( I tried telling them to wait but the story had to go on :( sorry babe. I'm sad because your a really good writer and i wanted them to see that.
I didn't even know I was in the fanfic! Lol. I'm glad u and Kelsey r friends now.:D (don't listen to Cassidy she's been annoying sayin that she's dating Harry styles! If she was it would be on the news!!
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#199
Oct 5, 2012
 
Please post more!!<3
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#200
Oct 5, 2012
 
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I didn't even know I was in the fanfic! Lol. I'm glad u and Kelsey r friends now.:D (don't listen to Cassidy she's been annoying sayin that she's dating Harry styles! If she was it would be on the news!!
oh lol I guess that's alright then and yeah what a little liar!
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#201
Oct 6, 2012
 
Write more.
Rachel Tomlinson

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#202
Oct 7, 2012
 
I can't write just now I'm at my pals house :)
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#203
Oct 7, 2012
 
Hey sorry I haven't wrote in ages. I'll write 3 whole parts today I promise !!

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#204
Oct 7, 2012
 
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Hey sorry I haven't wrote in ages. I'll write 3 whole parts today I promise !!
YES!!! CANT WAIT!!
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Oct 7, 2012
 
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YES!!! CANT WAIT!!
Hahaha :)

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