Am I ready ( one direction fan Fic)

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Sep 10, 2012
 
Hope u enjoy (note: this may not be apropetite for younger ages)
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Sep 10, 2012
 
Desiree's POV

I was gonna jump and end this torture forever. I tweeted my last goodbyes to my all time favorite band one direction. They had helped me this far but now it's too much to handle. I was gonna do it. I was gonna end my life. I jumped into the Ice cold water below. I felt something hit my head then it all went black.
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Sep 10, 2012
 
When I get 1 comment I will continue. Btw if u want 2 b in my story u name the guy ( not Harry or Niall) and I might pick u!!!;)
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Sep 10, 2012
 
Plz comment if u do I'll let u in my story if u comment 1st 2nd 0r 3 rd I'll let u pick from the guys minus Harry and Niall :)
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Sep 10, 2012
 
It's good write mOre please...
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Sep 10, 2012
 
Can I be lou's Gf .... Please
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Sep 10, 2012
 
More!!!!
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Sep 10, 2012
 
Thanks I will!!!!!
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Sep 10, 2012
 
I woke up to someone blOwing air into my lungs. I could here their husky yet familiar voice. He was yelling " breathe, breathe. For me please!" it sounded like he was crying. I coughed uP water and opened my eyes. My vision was blurry and I couldn't see anything. I heard the stranger he said" thank god, are you okay"?!!? I tried to run away but I just managed tO stand up. I touched my head and my hand got wet. I looked down at my hand... Blood. Suddenly I felt weak and collapsed, I closed my eyes and my head hit the ground again, this time even harder. I passed out from pain the second time today.

MORE?!?!?
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Sep 10, 2012
 
Lexi luvs 1D wrote:
Can I be lou's Gf .... Please
Yes u may!!:)
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Sep 10, 2012
 
Stranger POV

I was at dinner with my lads and I excused myself for fresh air by the bridge.all the sudden I see the most beautiful girl I had ever seen standing on the edge. I was walking over to be careful and ask her her name, but then she jumped.....

Sorry it's soo short I ran outa ideas since this one is soo short I only want five comments to continue!:)
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#12
Sep 10, 2012
 
Never mind here's more!!!
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Sep 10, 2012
 
YO here it is

Am I ready?

Stranger POV

I saw her sinking into the water not even struggling. I waded into the water and dragged her out. Her head was bleeding badly I knew she was gonna need stitches. I layer her on the grass. She wasn't breathing. I plugged her nose and blew into her mouth. Again and again, nothing happened. I tried one more time thankfully she spit up water. " thank god, are you okay"?!?! She didn't reply she just stood. I was suprised to see she could in her condition. She touched her head then started getting a little tipsy. She fell on the ground just before I could catch her and she passed out again.
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Sep 10, 2012
 
More!!!!! Can I be Liam or Harry gf?
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Sep 10, 2012
 
Maliyah wrote:
More!!!!! Can I be Liam or Harry gf?
U can b Liam's gf :)
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Sep 10, 2012
 
Desiree POV

I heard a rumbling sound. I opened my eyes to find out that I was in a car. And my head was on somebody's lap. I tried to open my eyes but I couldn't. I lifted my head up but it was quickly pushed down by somebody... But who? " keep your head down love, Liam said not to let you move." his accent was amazing but who's Liam? I open my eyes to see that I was only in my bra and underwair. I looked around and saw five boys staring at me. Who could they be? Wait...did he say Liam, that means that... No it can't be... It is... Omg I'm in a car with one direction and my head is in Harry styles lap! I hear Niall say "she's awake"! Liam shushed him" shush, you'll make her sick with all this yelling. Then I fall back asleep. In my sleep I could here the boys talking " Liam do you think she'll live"? Harry asked worried." I dont. Know her heads still bleeding pretty badly and we almost to the hospital it could go either way...". " oh god I hope she makes it she sure it a beaut"Niall said. "guys her head started bleeding again we need something to stop it" 'doctor' Liam said. Then I heard tearing of fabric and I felt someone tying cloth to my head. " uhhhh"I moaned from the pain. Then I felt Harry rub my back and say" it's okay we're almost to the hospital, love. And with that I go to sleep and wake and I couldn't breathe. It felt like suicide all over again.
XX

AN Hope u like love u all it's kinda funny how I came up with this story cuz I was just sitting in art class today wAiting for the teacher to come check my work and I started writing classy right!;) LLN
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Sep 10, 2012
 
Lauren wrote:
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U can b Liam's gf :)
Thank u so much!!:) btw I luv ur story
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Sep 10, 2012
 
Keep going please
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Sep 10, 2012
 
Lauren wrote:
Desiree POV
I heard a rumbling sound. I opened my eyes to find out that I was in a car. And my head was on somebody's lap. I tried to open my eyes but I couldn't. I lifted my head up but it was quickly pushed down by somebody... But who? " keep your head down love, Liam said not to let you move." his accent was amazing but who's Liam? I open my eyes to see that I was only in my bra and underwair. I looked around and saw five boys staring at me. Who could they be? Wait...did he say Liam, that means that... No it can't be... It is... Omg I'm in a car with one direction and my head is in Harry styles lap! I hear Niall say "she's awake"! Liam shushed him" shush, you'll make her sick with all this yelling. Then I fall back asleep. In my sleep I could here the boys talking " Liam do you think she'll live"? Harry asked worried." I dont. Know her heads still bleeding pretty badly and we almost to the hospital it could go either way...". " oh god I hope she makes it she sure it a beaut"Niall said. "guys her head started bleeding again we need something to stop it" 'doctor' Liam said. Then I heard tearing of fabric and I felt someone tying cloth to my head. " uhhhh"I moaned from the pain. Then I felt Harry rub my back and say" it's okay we're almost to the hospital, love. And with that I go to sleep and wake and I couldn't breathe. It felt like suicide all over again.
XX
AN Hope u like love u all it's kinda funny how I came up with this story cuz I was just sitting in art class today wAiting for the teacher to come check my work and I started writing classy right!;) LLN
So classy!!! Write more!!!!:D lol
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Sep 10, 2012
 
Maliyah wrote:
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So classy!!! Write more!!!!:D lol
Thanks but cuz I just came up with it today I'm stuck soo I'll upload more tonite or tomarow afternoon cuz I have school

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