my latest poem

“Towards Spring”

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#1 Apr 9, 2012
once there was a very fat cat.
the very fat cat often sat on a mat.
I asked my friend what he thought of that
he said he thought it was as odd as a bat

then i heard the phone start to ring
and when i answered a voice began to sing
and it reminded me of another time with another thing
and i decided on what id bring

i let out a cheer
as 'twas all so queer.

(thinking of publication- its a post moder piece examining the human condition in post war capitalism. I realize that its a little off the wall but id appreciate your feedback. Thanks GN)

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