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Alien Suffering

Malay, Philippines

#2381 Aug 8, 2013
So I have written a song about revenge and I wanted to post it somewhere. I would really appreciate some constructive criticism but please no hate. I have posted it somewhere else but I got a lot of hate and took it down so please be gentle. My song is about a girl who was bullied and then cracked. This is not real, I have not actually done this. So don't call me crazy. But yes I did come up with this song and wrote it on my own. Some parts do not rhyme. I'am aware of that but this is a hard rock/screamoish kind of song. Those parts are not supposed to rhyme. In my opinion anyway.I'm 14.The things in ** are sound effects or noises that I'm are in the song but this is just written so...
Here we go.

Silenced them all

As the crow watches me I wash my hands of this madness
I was my hands and his life goes down the drain
I wash my hands and I wash my sanity away with it

One too many insulting words
One too many painful blows
So I wield my sword
And now I'm lost in blood
And now I'm finally
VICTORIOUS!!

I have silenced them
I have silenced them
I have silenced them once and for all
I have finally ended it
Ended the fight
And now it's time
Time for revenge

Tie them up
Lock the doors
Now the wolf's pup all grown up
Let them out and shoot them all
We won't have no prisoners of war

One too many insulting words
One too many painful blows
So I wield my sword
And now I'm lost in blood
And now I'm finally
VICTORIOUS!!

I have silenced them
I have silenced them
I have silenced them once and for all
I have finally ended it
Ended the fight
And now it's time
Time for revenge

Don't be fooled by my innocent complexion
I don't have any innocent intentions
Now you are part of my collection
It's now time for your detention

Now i'am far from perfect
Maybe cause i'm broken
And maybe it's cause I'm wrecked
And even though it's unspoken
We both know that your the suspect!

One too many insulting words
One too many painful blows
So I wield my sword
And now I'm lost in blood
And now I'm finally
VICTORIOUS!!

I have silenced them
I have silenced them
I have silenced them once and for all
I have finally ended it
Ended the fight
And now it's time
Time for revenge

*Evil Laugh*
And your next
*Girl Scream**Chrashing sound*

Hope you liked it A

A.T (My code name)
Flowing

Las Pińas City, Philippines

#2382 Aug 13, 2013
Alien Suffering wrote:
So I have written a song about revenge and I wanted to post it somewhere. I would really appreciate some constructive criticism but please no hate. I have posted it somewhere else but I got a lot of hate and took it down so please be gentle. My song is about a girl who was bullied and then cracked. This is not real, I have not actually done this. So don't call me crazy. But yes I did come up with this song and wrote it on my own. Some parts do not rhyme. I'am aware of that but this is a hard rock/screamoish kind of song. Those parts are not supposed to rhyme. In my opinion anyway.I'm 14.The things in ** are sound effects or noises that I'm are in the song but this is just written so...
Here we go.
Silenced them all
As the crow watches me I wash my hands of this madness
I was my hands and his life goes down the drain
I wash my hands and I wash my sanity away with it
One too many insulting words
One too many painful blows
So I wield my sword
And now I'm lost in blood
And now I'm finally
VICTORIOUS!!
I have silenced them
I have silenced them
I have silenced them once and for all
I have finally ended it
Ended the fight
And now it's time
Time for revenge
Tie them up
Lock the doors
Now the wolf's pup all grown up
Let them out and shoot them all
We won't have no prisoners of war
One too many insulting words
One too many painful blows
So I wield my sword
And now I'm lost in blood
And now I'm finally
VICTORIOUS!!
I have silenced them
I have silenced them
I have silenced them once and for all
I have finally ended it
Ended the fight
And now it's time
Time for revenge
Don't be fooled by my innocent complexion
I don't have any innocent intentions
Now you are part of my collection
It's now time for your detention
Now i'am far from perfect
Maybe cause i'm broken
And maybe it's cause I'm wrecked
And even though it's unspoken
We both know that your the suspect!
One too many insulting words
One too many painful blows
So I wield my sword
And now I'm lost in blood
And now I'm finally
VICTORIOUS!!
I have silenced them
I have silenced them
I have silenced them once and for all
I have finally ended it
Ended the fight
And now it's time
Time for revenge
*Evil Laugh*
And your next
*Girl Scream**Chrashing sound*
Hope you liked it A
A.T (My code name)
This really sucks. Your a terrible wannabe writer
A song

Flowery Branch, GA

#2383 Aug 14, 2013
I leave the grass uncut and i don't give a shitBecause i don't have to do
and I'm not asking you to like me because i don't really give as fuck
you say class and swag well thats the stuff i don't need because i get girls that like me for me
I dont have much just the bare necessities and
Im harder than most because i have to work for what i have so try and fuck with me
so say something and see what happens you just might end up napping
Theres to much hate in the world and i used to think i friend was gay till i found it wasn't really a choice i still don't know but i just know that the lord loves us all
We all say we don't judge but we call each other fags just for fun
But whats the point in trying to change who you are for people you don't even love
I might say change for the lord but wheres your proof were killing each other for something thats not proven to be true
America the big and bad known for putting its nose were it doesn't belong
Are soldiers die for another mans fight I'm talking about the Sunnis and shiites
Add a bull and drop a i and e And you get bull shit thats what this wars really about just some religion that keeps women hidden
Young drigger

Ashburn, VA

#2384 Aug 19, 2013
*Chorus*
when im gone don't step way fo0t traps couse i gonner step on you to0 and after i mourn my rejoyce don't you hear what i gatta say i influx control and don't realise me on my party and kn0w the s0und will be laying on the beat n0thing of me matches of them i mean it and i do what i gat to d0 on the day i keep walking and i gat few arts so don't do that wherels you do take your own way
verse
i do say that couse im growing fat i do audiance to be sad like a rat on the hole and when im gone everything of mine will be under control as im thinking it dose'nt work with petrol an im healed with blood of god his spirit is blowing on me and i do pray him all the time
*Chorus*
when im gone don't step way fo0t traps couse i gonner step on you to0 and after i mourn my rejoyce don't you hear what i gatta say i influx control and don't realise me on my party and kn0w the s0und will be laying on the beat n0thing of me matches of them i mean it and i do what i gat to d0 on the day i keep walking and i gat few arts so don't do that wherels you do take your own way
verse
i do say that couse im growing fat i do audiance to be sad like a rat on the hole and when im gone everything of mine will be under control as im thinking it dose'nt work with petrol an im healed with blood of god his spirit is blowing on me and i do pray him all the time
*Chorus*
when im gone don't step way fo0t traps couse i gonner step on you to0 and after i mourn my rejoyce don't you hear what i gatta say i influx control and don't realise me on my party and kn0w the s0und will be laying on the beat n0thing of me matches of them i mean it and i do what i gat to d0 on the day i keep walking and i gat few arts so don't do that wherels you do take your own way
Kitty Eden

Perth, Australia

#2386 Aug 26, 2013
I've written a song of my own, I am goin on a school camp to Rottnest.

I'm sick of winter and a-waiting around,
Man! It's September so I'm skipping this town,
Hey its no mystery, theres nothing here for me now..
I gotta get back to Rottnest,
I gotta go with my school,
I gotta get myself to Rottnest,
Where everything is so cool,
Back to quokkas and magpies,
And other cool beasts,
To camping and cycling,
and campfire feasts,
Its all that I love and all that I need,
At RottnestRottnest,
I think I'm going back.
Crystal Stout

Battle Creek, MI

#2387 Oct 14, 2013
Wow! amazing
Mystcol

Europe

#2388 Oct 14, 2013
Pamela by Mystcol - LYRICS

Yo Pam

This is what i feel for you and i should let you know that i love you (lets go) yeah (right)

Nice and polite gal
You look so nice and polite gal
Nice and polite gal
I waana hold you so tight gal

Nice and polite gal
You look so nice and polite gal
Nice and polite gal
I waana hold you so tight gal

Leitmus paper

Inspiration i was inspired by yo beauty
In addition yo walking style leaves me in total confusion
If i went wrong my gal this my confusion
Eeh, My gal touch on body temperature is getting rising gal
If never ever, No Babilon gal come touch you now
I like it more when yo smiling gal (eeh)

Nice and polite gal
You look so nice and polite gal
Nice and polite gal
I waana hold you so tight gal

Nice and polite gal
You look so nice and polite gal
Nice and polite gal
I waana hold you so tight gal

P A M E L A pam (pamela) whenever i mention yo name
Baby gal am crazy
Yo the most beautiful gal have ever seen
They say am running mad baby gal when yo smiling
You look so interesting, cause yo so amazing (aah)
Truth baby you make me speechless without you gal, my life flashes (yeah)
Gal i should let you know
That i love you so much (aah)

Leitmus paper gal
Leitmus paper

Nice and polite gal
You look so nice and polite gal
Nice and polite gal
I waana hold you so tight gal

Pamela

Leitmus paper
Crystal Stout

Battle Creek, MI

#2389 Oct 16, 2013
wow. How should I start writing songs about falling in love someone.? Help
Methods

Gaborone, Botswana

#2390 Oct 27, 2013
I dont know if your back with him but i sure hope you feel like me
I'm trying to know the truth but no one else shows me the proof
why i love you its so hot like stew and you just fainted yesterday i was the only one who was there in the hospital cause you just stole my heart
its just to hard to explain why im still worried even though im so away like yards
uh I've had it for the last time, your actions get my hot like my last rhyme
and i dont know what to say so i use signs
all you say is " Fuck you, i hate you so much"
then i laugh cause girls only say fuck you to the guys that they love
ya I look at my phone and i see messages known as shit
so i decide to flush it then i flash back to the day when you said you love my and all this
but now i know what the truth is
so you decide to im sorry and sis
and also that you want to jump on my dick
i say thats shit she says its bullshit
so i add you to my ex's list
then i look at my bleeding wrist and find out that you never dumped you just said lets
but know i tell you its just way to late cause

(Chorus)
you said you left me but know i left you
cause all you ever did was prepared my some stew
i say fuck you
you say no wait
i say its to late to end all this
so all you can do is to wait and listen to this
danial

Ashburn, VA

#2391 Nov 11, 2013
song name-love you
{start now}
hey! beyby,
you so preeti girl,
yaaaah!
Hey!Beyby you so
sveet,
oooooh!
I love you you know
that,
you know i like all at,
and you know you so
lovely,
and baby this is for you,
yaaeaeaah!
Yah!
This is for you,
only love's you
yah! only love's you,
oooh! Only love's you,
(love's you,love's
you,love's you,love's
you)
yeaaeaah!
(love's you,love's
you,love's you,love's
you)
uh!
Only Love's you!
Baby i think for you agin,
(some fast) and i don't
know what you fill for
me,
for me,
yaaaah!
You know that i love
you,
and i know that i like i
love you love more,
and you love me what
you full sure!
Yaaah!
And i allways love's you,
and my crue say!
Oh! man say you
uh!
And i say you
ok!
I love's you,
yah!
only love's you,
only love's you,
only love's you,
yaaah!
Only love's you,
only love's you,
only love's you,
oooh!
oh! god,
oh! god,
oh! god,
only love's you,
only love's you,
only love's you,
yah!
(only only love's you,
only only love's you,
only only love's you)
so listin baybe,
only love's
youuuuuuuuuo
so only love's you
yah!
Oh!
Love's you
;-(the:-)end:-D
danial

Ashburn, VA

#2392 Nov 11, 2013
Danial Trėn
Maker-Danial trėn:-) n
conor phil:-D
sportted by-facebook
song name-make fake
lover
boy:-babye do listin
what i say
girl-i don't care what
you say
boy-but why?
Girl-you don't ask me
this that i can't replay
of your message
boy- i don't care what
you replay and can't
replay i brakeup with
you make new fake boy
friend you are a fake
lover
i hate u;->
girl-what? i'm fake lover
boy-yah!
Start now!
Babye i care every time
you,
oooooh!
I think every time you,
yeeeeaah!
....That you say where
you go,
i'm go with you from,
you don't care me but i
care you,
aaaaaall!
but how i explain my
filings for you!
aaaaall!
Continue- Yaaaah! Now
make big trubble,
so make fake lover,yah!
You make fake lover
(fake lover,fake
lover,fake lover,fake
lover)that you make
fake lover
oooooooh!
Yaaeeeaah!
You make fake lover!
are you know you don't
know about me all,
oooh!
That speak slowly and
explain me all!
That why you make
this i say please! Please!
..........
..........that you make my
claver
ooooh!
So! you make fake
lover,
you make fake lover
(fake lover,fake
lover,fake lover,fake
lover,fake lover)yah!
Fake lover fake lover,
so! babye you make
fake lover
;-(the end
boy-hey what's up
girl-think about you
boy-what?
Girl-i'm sorry that i hart
you
boy-ok! what go with
me on drive
girl-you hold my hand
boy-yah!
Girl-where i'm coming
tonight
boy-im pick up u i think
aaaaa........
...08:00pm
girl-ok i'm waiting
;-(the;-(end;-(
danial trėn & conor phil
danial

Ashburn, VA

#2393 Nov 11, 2013
Danial Trėn
Danial Music song 2
song name-love time
fake
danial trėn n conor phil
get start
Is time time fake,
get started with you,
oooh!
You never mind,
i kiss your chiks,
baby!
I'm every time see you,
n you every time see
me,
n totime im thinks you,
that my hard say to
break,
the love time is fake,
love time is fake,
love time is fake,
then,
love time in,
love,love,love,
love,love,love,
love,love,love, love
love time is fake,
yaaah!
I'm not thinks for you,
is not true,
and is true,
i'm not leave without u,
n the love garden in me
n youuuooooh!
and you hug me and i
hug,
youuuoooh!
That
My friends r calling me
to go drive,
yeeeeah!
I started my radio,
And i see road in you,
and
the radio in started
my music
sooooong!
And i say the,
love time is fake,
love time is fake,
(yaaaaeeeya)
love time is fake,
love time is fake,
(oooooooooh,yaa
aeeeyaaaaa)
love time is fake,
love time is fake,
yaaaaaaaaaaaah!
Love time is
faeeeeeeeeeek,
love time is
faeaeeaeeaeaeek e!!
Write by-danil trėn
music tone-conor phil
like-with my friends n
more:-)

about me more to log in and sing up now
https://m.facebook.com/rohit.kohli.3576...
nikki

Durban, South Africa

#2394 Nov 21, 2013
hello I know u don't know u but im a big fan for your music and talent

from:nikki
nikki

Durban, South Africa

#2395 Nov 21, 2013
could u teach me ur talent wow im im pressed
nikki

Durban, South Africa

#2396 Nov 21, 2013
wow I like ur talent
TyreekaJ

Miami, FL

#2397 Nov 22, 2013
A song I wrote not too long ago

I'm a caged bird
A symbol of freedom
But I'm trapped

I'm a white noise
As loud as I can be
But still no one see me

Stuck in my dreams
Waiting to meet reality
Torn at the seams
Not the most perfect she

I'm the girl who dreams
Bigger than bigger
Want to see the world
And gold and glitter
Wanna see all the greens
Fly across the sea
But those dreams seem
So out of reach

I'm a lost soul
Can go anywhere I want
But I'm stuck can't go to the other side
Stuck in my fantasies
Waiting to leave my daydream
Torn at the seams
Not the most perfect she

I'm the girl who dreams
Bigger than bigger
Vanessa

Karachi, Pakistan

#2399 Jan 1, 2014
BULLET4mySORROW wrote:
<quoted text>So far, it's pretty good. I'm having my friend help me, the one who writes the vocals for our band and he might sing the heavy parts.
I'm almost done.
u have a band?thats so cool!!
Alex Garcia

Oakland, CA

#2400 Jan 1, 2014
Make my name known,share and try to get the world spread ... If this happens I will write some better lyrics
Amastarz

Manchester, UK

#2401 Jan 20, 2014
Never let it go , never let it goo
Hold on to the feeling
You got it all
Shine It oooon
Spread it out
Cause you are the change

The change in my heart and the change in my dream ,
The change of the world so never let , never let goooo

Your as precious as a flower and greater than you think , and even in the darkest of the moments your still there to fix. So hold on , don't let it goo cause you got it all you got it allll. You are the change

Don't go away , please stay I can't help to know if you go I'll be alone alone , darling I still need you even when I'm gone so don't let goo cause you got it all.

You got the future , you got the hopes you got the dreams to never let goo come and make it true and you will see that you Are the change.

Lyric by amastarz
First try at this so it probably not good but it's a working progress
Nicole marie

Paducah, KY

#2402 Jan 27, 2014
'Forever and always'

We were sitting at our favorite spot in town. You asked me what could it be but the light I see sparkle in you're eyes. People say it won't last forever but I say forever and always. I look into your big blue eyes and think about what we could be if you gave me a chance we could call it forever and always. I've dated jerks who didn't understand how to treat a girl like she desurved a real man, but they're nothing compared to what you mean to me. Our favorite song was playin' on the radio summer was hot and the pool was cool I was wishin' I was at the ocean wraped in your arms holdin' me tight and I look into your big blue eyes and think about what we could be if you gave me a chance we could call it forever and always. I've dated jerks who didn't understand how to treat a girl like she desurved a real man, but they're nothing compared to what you mean to me

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