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Sep 6, 2007
 

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Bedchamber

Melodies of castles
Unicorns and sun
Happy memories falling
From where they begun
Just a little girl then
I'm no different now
Nothing could replace the
Happiness I've found

When I'm in my chamber
Things are brought to life
In a state of horror
But the darkness sees me through...

All this light
In my eyes
But the darkness sees me through
I can't wait
'Til the death, my love
But the darkness sees me through

Candysticks and chocolate
Tasty on your tongue
Everything's delightful
Gripping everyone
Look in my bedchamber
You have never seen
So much joy and smiling
That has ever been

Underneath the floorboards
There my secret lies
There I cannot touch it
But the darkness sees me through...

All this light
In my eyes
But the darkness sees me through
I can't wait
'Til the death, my love
But the darkness sees me through
And if you ever think
And if you ever know
Then I will have to end you too
But until then
The darkness sees me through

No
You cannot run any more
No
You are the one I adore
No
You cannot run any more
Now
You must go under the floor

All this light
In my eyes
But the darkness sees me through
I can't wait
'Til the death, my love
But the darkness sees me through
And if you ever think
And if you ever know
Then I will have to end you too
But until then
The darkness sees me through

Melodies of castles...
Melodies of castles...
I will end you!

(Btw I didn't write any of this from experience!)
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Sep 6, 2007
 

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That is so good. I could never write one like that.
Disenchanted

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Sep 6, 2007
 

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Brian,I'm sure u could,if u try.
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Disenchanted wrote:
Brian,I'm sure u could,if u try.
I doubt it. You post another song. Yours are good too.
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Nuh-uh...Not yet.

But,thank u tho.

*gives Brian a brownie*
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Disenchanted wrote:
Nuh-uh...Not yet.
But,thank u tho.
*gives Brian a brownie*
Thankyou for the brownie.

I will come up with a song then post it.
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ur welcome.

God.
I bet it'll rock!
=]
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Disenchanted wrote:
ur welcome.
God.
I bet it'll rock!
=]
So far, it's pretty good. I'm having my friend help me, the one who writes the vocals for our band and he might sing the heavy parts.

I'm almost done.
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#9
Sep 6, 2007
 
YAY!!!!!!

*Standing ovation*

UR ACTUALLY WRITING A SONG!!!!!
WOOOOO!!!!
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Sep 6, 2007
 
Disenchanted wrote:
YAY!!!!!!
*Standing ovation*
UR ACTUALLY WRITING A SONG!!!!!
WOOOOO!!!!
With help from a song writer, but I'm making up the lyrics, he's mostly putting it in order.
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Sep 6, 2007
 

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BULLET4mySORROW wrote:
<quoted text>I doubt it. You post another song. Yours are good too.
*no name 4 it yet*

Death iz in the air.
And even tho we're still here,
The pain brigs us back,
To it all....

Never knew what 2 say,
And never cared about how much,
I loved u...
And didn't know what 2 do.
All 4 u...

And even tho ur still away,
I find myself thinking about u every day...
And what we could have been together...
Cuz now my tears,they won't stop,
And go on forever.

Never knew what 2 say,
And never cared about how much,
I loved u...
And didn't know what 2 do.
All 4 u...

We never knew that just 1 kiss,
Would tear us apart just like this.
And we're still holding hands,
In my dreams...
For all 2 c...

Never knew what 2 say,
And never cared about how much,
I loved u...
And didn't know what 2 do.
All 4 u...

Can we just relive 1 night,
And wake up where every thing's alright?
In each others arms,with out a care...
And when I come back 2 life,
Ur still no where...

Near me...

If killing u wuz all I had 2 do,
Then here in hell I would search 4 u...

Never knew what 2 say,
And never cared about how much,
I loved u...
And didn't know what 2 do.
All 4 u...

Death iz in the air.
And even tho we're still here,
The pain brigs us back,
To it all....
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Disenchanted wrote:
<quoted text>
*no name 4 it yet*
Death iz in the air.
And even tho we're still here,
The pain brigs us back,
To it all....
Never knew what 2 say,
And never cared about how much,
I loved u...
And didn't know what 2 do.
All 4 u...
And even tho ur still away,
I find myself thinking about u every day...
And what we could have been together...
Cuz now my tears,they won't stop,
And go on forever.
Never knew what 2 say,
And never cared about how much,
I loved u...
And didn't know what 2 do.
All 4 u...
We never knew that just 1 kiss,
Would tear us apart just like this.
And we're still holding hands,
In my dreams...
For all 2 c...
Never knew what 2 say,
And never cared about how much,
I loved u...
And didn't know what 2 do.
All 4 u...
Can we just relive 1 night,
And wake up where every thing's alright?
In each others arms,with out a care...
And when I come back 2 life,
Ur still no where...
Near me...
If killing u wuz all I had 2 do,
Then here in hell I would search 4 u...
Never knew what 2 say,
And never cared about how much,
I loved u...
And didn't know what 2 do.
All 4 u...
Death iz in the air.
And even tho we're still here,
The pain brigs us back,
To it all....
There's no way I can top that.

It should be called "The Suffering of Your Abscence"
Disenchanted

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#13
Sep 6, 2007
 
Brian,I'm sure u can.

Boyz do have more imagination than girls.

Yeah,that would be a good song name,thx!

*hugz and gives a brownie*
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Sep 6, 2007
 
Disenchanted wrote:
Brian,I'm sure u can.
Boyz do have more imagination than girls.
Yeah,that would be a good song name,thx!
*hugz and gives a brownie*
I don't know about that.

Really?

Thankyou.
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Sep 6, 2007
 
Yees.$th grade science,the teacher said y there r more male train drivers,then female.

Apparently,imagination haz a lot 2 do w/ driving a train.

Ur welcome,and Thank you iz 2 words.
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Sep 6, 2007
 
Disenchanted wrote:
Yees.$th grade science,the teacher said y there r more male train drivers,then female.
Apparently,imagination haz a lot 2 do w/ driving a train.
Ur welcome,and Thank you iz 2 words.
Well that's because guys like playing racing games and it gets them good at driving in real life.

How does a train and imagination go together?

Not in my dictionary.
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Sep 6, 2007
 
Guyz ain't the only ppl on this earth who can play racing gamesz u know!!!

IDK y...

lol.
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Disenchanted wrote:
Guyz ain't the only ppl on this earth who can play racing gamesz u know!!!
IDK y...
lol.
Can you?
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Yees.

Sadly,my brother sold all hiz racing games....and bought sum even kooler 1's...hee hee.
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Disenchanted wrote:
Yees.
Sadly,my brother sold all hiz racing games....and bought sum even kooler 1's...hee hee.
Cool, like what?

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