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Pod
Kirknewton, UK
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Bedchamber Melodies of castles Unicorns and sun Happy memories falling From where they begun Just a little girl then I'm no different now Nothing could replace the Happiness I've found When I'm in my chamber Things are brought to life In a state of horror But the darkness sees me through... All this light In my eyes But the darkness sees me through I can't wait 'Til the death, my love But the darkness sees me through Candysticks and chocolate Tasty on your tongue Everything's delightful Gripping everyone Look in my bedchamber You have never seen So much joy and smiling That has ever been Underneath the floorboards There my secret lies There I cannot touch it But the darkness sees me through... All this light In my eyes But the darkness sees me through I can't wait 'Til the death, my love But the darkness sees me through And if you ever think And if you ever know Then I will have to end you too But until then The darkness sees me through No You cannot run any more No You are the one I adore No You cannot run any more Now You must go under the floor All this light In my eyes But the darkness sees me through I can't wait 'Til the death, my love But the darkness sees me through And if you ever think And if you ever know Then I will have to end you too But until then The darkness sees me through Melodies of castles... Melodies of castles... I will end you! (Btw I didn't write any of this from experience!)
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BULLET4mySORROW
Coatesville, PA
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That is so good. I could never write one like that.
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Disenchanted
Buffalo, NY
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Brian,I'm sure u could,if u try.
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BULLET4mySORROW
Coatesville, PA
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Disenchanted wrote: Brian,I'm sure u could,if u try. I doubt it. You post another song. Yours are good too.
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Disenchanted
Buffalo, NY
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Nuh-uh...Not yet. But,thank u tho. *gives Brian a brownie*
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BULLET4mySORROW
Coatesville, PA
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Disenchanted wrote: Nuh-uh...Not yet. But,thank u tho. *gives Brian a brownie* Thankyou for the brownie. I will come up with a song then post it.
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Disenchanted
Buffalo, NY
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ur welcome. God. I bet it'll rock! =]
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BULLET4mySORROW
Coatesville, PA
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Disenchanted wrote: ur welcome. God. I bet it'll rock! =] So far, it's pretty good. I'm having my friend help me, the one who writes the vocals for our band and he might sing the heavy parts. I'm almost done.
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Disenchanted
Buffalo, NY
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YAY!!!!!!
*Standing ovation*
UR ACTUALLY WRITING A SONG!!!!! WOOOOO!!!!
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BULLET4mySORROW
Coatesville, PA
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Disenchanted wrote: YAY!!!!!! *Standing ovation* UR ACTUALLY WRITING A SONG!!!!! WOOOOO!!!! With help from a song writer, but I'm making up the lyrics, he's mostly putting it in order.
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Disenchanted
Buffalo, NY
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BULLET4mySORROW wrote: <quoted text>I doubt it. You post another song. Yours are good too. *no name 4 it yet* Death iz in the air. And even tho we're still here, The pain brigs us back, To it all.... Never knew what 2 say, And never cared about how much, I loved u... And didn't know what 2 do. All 4 u... And even tho ur still away, I find myself thinking about u every day... And what we could have been together... Cuz now my tears,they won't stop, And go on forever. Never knew what 2 say, And never cared about how much, I loved u... And didn't know what 2 do. All 4 u... We never knew that just 1 kiss, Would tear us apart just like this. And we're still holding hands, In my dreams... For all 2 c... Never knew what 2 say, And never cared about how much, I loved u... And didn't know what 2 do. All 4 u... Can we just relive 1 night, And wake up where every thing's alright? In each others arms,with out a care... And when I come back 2 life, Ur still no where... Near me... If killing u wuz all I had 2 do, Then here in hell I would search 4 u... Never knew what 2 say, And never cared about how much, I loved u... And didn't know what 2 do. All 4 u... Death iz in the air. And even tho we're still here, The pain brigs us back, To it all....
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BULLET4mySORROW
Coatesville, PA
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Disenchanted wrote: <quoted text> *no name 4 it yet* Death iz in the air. And even tho we're still here, The pain brigs us back, To it all.... Never knew what 2 say, And never cared about how much, I loved u... And didn't know what 2 do. All 4 u... And even tho ur still away, I find myself thinking about u every day... And what we could have been together... Cuz now my tears,they won't stop, And go on forever. Never knew what 2 say, And never cared about how much, I loved u... And didn't know what 2 do. All 4 u... We never knew that just 1 kiss, Would tear us apart just like this. And we're still holding hands, In my dreams... For all 2 c... Never knew what 2 say, And never cared about how much, I loved u... And didn't know what 2 do. All 4 u... Can we just relive 1 night, And wake up where every thing's alright? In each others arms,with out a care... And when I come back 2 life, Ur still no where... Near me... If killing u wuz all I had 2 do, Then here in hell I would search 4 u... Never knew what 2 say, And never cared about how much, I loved u... And didn't know what 2 do. All 4 u... Death iz in the air. And even tho we're still here, The pain brigs us back, To it all.... There's no way I can top that. It should be called "The Suffering of Your Abscence"
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Disenchanted
Buffalo, NY
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Brian,I'm sure u can.
Boyz do have more imagination than girls.
Yeah,that would be a good song name,thx!
*hugz and gives a brownie*
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BULLET4mySORROW
Coatesville, PA
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Disenchanted wrote: Brian,I'm sure u can. Boyz do have more imagination than girls. Yeah,that would be a good song name,thx! *hugz and gives a brownie* I don't know about that. Really? Thankyou.
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Disenchanted
Buffalo, NY
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Yees.$th grade science,the teacher said y there r more male train drivers,then female.
Apparently,imagination haz a lot 2 do w/ driving a train.
Ur welcome,and Thank you iz 2 words.
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BULLET4mySORROW
Coatesville, PA
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Disenchanted wrote: Yees.$th grade science,the teacher said y there r more male train drivers,then female. Apparently,imagination haz a lot 2 do w/ driving a train. Ur welcome,and Thank you iz 2 words. Well that's because guys like playing racing games and it gets them good at driving in real life. How does a train and imagination go together? Not in my dictionary.
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Disenchanted
Buffalo, NY
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Guyz ain't the only ppl on this earth who can play racing gamesz u know!!!
IDK y...
lol.
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BULLET4mySORROW
Coatesville, PA
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Disenchanted wrote: Guyz ain't the only ppl on this earth who can play racing gamesz u know!!! IDK y... lol. Can you?
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Disenchanted
Buffalo, NY
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Yees. Sadly,my brother sold all hiz racing games....and bought sum even kooler 1's...hee hee.
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BULLET4mySORROW
Coatesville, PA
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Disenchanted wrote: Yees. Sadly,my brother sold all hiz racing games....and bought sum even kooler 1's...hee hee. Cool, like what?
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