Rate this rap song verse,

Rate this rap song verse,

Posted in the Evanescence Forum

Since: Nov 12

Port Elizabeth, South Africa

#1 Nov 11, 2012
*No name*

My gal can leave now,
She don't blush to anything i say anymore
I try to stay sweet,but maybe my cool ain't sweet
When i look at these thoughts my heart hurts
Shes got a place in there i guess
You used to be loving, thats what she say

Should i jus' let it be,and leave her
Or should i jus' surrender my heart to her
Where does this pride in me come from?
Maybe its the obstacles i conquered in the past
Is it my background or its jus' the way i turned out
Yes im good at what i do,
But without her what will i do
Should i turn to heavens at this time
Why didnt i do that when we used to smile
My pride knows no superior at all

'em other gals seem to understand
They know I can't stand anyone going into my mind
But still they dont stay for long
Can i really compare her to those broods
Shes been around through the long haul

****this is my first rap verse, I need your help****

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