I know it's really long, but the scripts for episodes would have to be long, other wise it would be a really short episode. If you were to read a page of this, it wouldn't take that long.
I know it's not as good as what the HM writers could come up with, so please don't compare it to theres. Of course it won't be as good. I just want to know what you think of the script and stuff.
the idea was really good about the school and stuff but yo need to think more about how the actors talk and their tones of voice and stuff otherwise you've got great potential.