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“How can it be I don't care?”

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Aug 16, 2007
 
So here's my new story Hope you like it!

~My Thoughts~
I’m the type of girl that everyone wants to be friends with or weants to date. I have great friends I’m captin of the cheer squad, and one of the best dancers in drill team. My best friends name are Jasmine, Alisa Mia and Sharne. I’m dating the basketball star Rick. All he wants is to get with me but like that ever goinna happen. Rick just makes me wanna scream! I swear he’s so full of himself. Most of the time I don’t know why I’m even with him but then I remember my friends saying we make the perfect cupple. I’m afriad of what people would think of me and if I didn’t date Rick they wouldn’t like me. So I try to be careful to who I talk to and hang out with also. Schools all about who you are, and no one know’s who I am.

~Corbin’s Thoughts~

I’m the loser in school. I’m not good at sports and I’m not really even into them tell you the truth I’d rather dance. I’m smart so I’m knone as a loser. But I don’t care I’m confertable with myself . I like who my friends are they don’t care who I hang out with or date. I’m just plain happy with who I am.

~Morning My POV~

“Come on Barbie we’re gonna be late for school!” Sharne said sitting down on my bed.“Hold up almost done.” I said putting on some lip gloss and blowing a kiss to the mirror.“About time!” Mia said.“Now let’s go” We headed out of the house and to my car. I saw my nabor Corbin walking out of his door. He gave a smile and waved. I gave him a weak smile and got into the car and drove off.“Ew I can’t believe Corbin is your nabor he’s such a loser.” Alisa said.“He’s nice” I said driving off to school.“Nice Hun do you hear yourself? Do you want to go from most popular girl in school to a loser just for talking to him?” Jasmine asked.“No” I said in a sad ton. I don’t like to be mean it’s just not me.“Exactly now let’s go find your man Rick.” Mia said getting out of the car. We walked into school and headed to the basketballs team hall way.“Hey baby” I said giving Rick a kiss.“Hey sexy so tonight wanna have a little fun?” Rick asked wrapping his arms around me.“Can’t busy sorry!” I said walking off.

~Morning Corbin’s POV~
I saw Barbie this morning getting into her car. I waved at her but she just gave me a weak smile. She’s afraid to be seen even talking to me. I wish she knew I liked her. She’s not the type of person to be mean. She’s really nice just scared about what her friends think of her. We’ve been nabors since we were babys, we use to be good friends but then she became a cheerleader and kinda went into a different group of people. I got to school and headed to my locker. I saw Barbie with her boyfriend Rick. He doesn’t like her he’s just dating her cause she’s popular and hot.“Hey dude what’s up?” My friend Craig asked.“Nothing much you?” I asked still looking at Barbie as she walked by.“Dude give it up she’ll never even talk to you. Sorry to say this but she’s out of your leage.” Craig said walking away. Maybe he’s right.

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Since: Aug 07

Jonesboro, AR

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Aug 16, 2007
 
Wow wonderful Barbie!!keep 'em coming chica

“*Guys Are So Dumb...I'm Done*”

Since: Jan 07

ARLINGTON TX.

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Aug 17, 2007
 
Barbrailla wrote:
So here's my new story Hope you like it!
~My Thoughts~
I’m the type of girl that everyone wants to be friends with or weants to date. I have great friends I’m captin of the cheer squad, and one of the best dancers in drill team. My best friends name are Jasmine, Alisa Mia and Sharne. I’m dating the basketball star Rick. All he wants is to get with me but like that ever goinna happen. Rick just makes me wanna scream! I swear he’s so full of himself. Most of the time I don’t know why I’m even with him but then I remember my friends saying we make the perfect cupple. I’m afriad of what people would think of me and if I didn’t date Rick they wouldn’t like me. So I try to be careful to who I talk to and hang out with also. Schools all about who you are, and no one know’s who I am.
~Corbin’s Thoughts~
I’m the loser in school. I’m not good at sports and I’m not really even into them tell you the truth I’d rather dance. I’m smart so I’m knone as a loser. But I don’t care I’m confertable with myself . I like who my friends are they don’t care who I hang out with or date. I’m just plain happy with who I am.
~Morning My POV~
“Come on Barbie we’re gonna be late for school!” Sharne said sitting down on my bed.“Hold up almost done.” I said putting on some lip gloss and blowing a kiss to the mirror.“About time!” Mia said.“Now let’s go” We headed out of the house and to my car. I saw my nabor Corbin walking out of his door. He gave a smile and waved. I gave him a weak smile and got into the car and drove off.“Ew I can’t believe Corbin is your nabor he’s such a loser.” Alisa said.“He’s nice” I said driving off to school.“Nice Hun do you hear yourself? Do you want to go from most popular girl in school to a loser just for talking to him?” Jasmine asked.“No” I said in a sad ton. I don’t like to be mean it’s just not me.“Exactly now let’s go find your man Rick.” Mia said getting out of the car. We walked into school and headed to the basketballs team hall way.“Hey baby” I said giving Rick a kiss.“Hey sexy so tonight wanna have a little fun?” Rick asked wrapping his arms around me.“Can’t busy sorry!” I said walking off.
~Morning Corbin’s POV~
I saw Barbie this morning getting into her car. I waved at her but she just gave me a weak smile. She’s afraid to be seen even talking to me. I wish she knew I liked her. She’s not the type of person to be mean. She’s really nice just scared about what her friends think of her. We’ve been nabors since we were babys, we use to be good friends but then she became a cheerleader and kinda went into a different group of people. I got to school and headed to my locker. I saw Barbie with her boyfriend Rick. He doesn’t like her he’s just dating her cause she’s popular and hot.“Hey dude what’s up?” My friend Craig asked.“Nothing much you?” I asked still looking at Barbie as she walked by.“Dude give it up she’ll never even talk to you. Sorry to say this but she’s out of your leage.” Craig said walking away. Maybe he’s right.
AWESOME!!!!!
Corbinz candie gurl

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#4
Aug 17, 2007
 
U ALWAYS MAKE THE BEST STORIES BARBIE!!!!!

Since: Jul 07

London! WOOP WOOP!

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#5
Aug 17, 2007
 
love it! sounds great can't wait for more! x

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Utrecht, Netherlands

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#6
Aug 17, 2007
 
wow beginnig is already hot and good to go hhahahha keep going barbie love the beginning already!!

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#7
Aug 17, 2007
 
Nice.
Jasmine

Troy, MI

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#8
Aug 17, 2007
 
great start!
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#9
Aug 17, 2007
 
i love you Corbin
me and Corbin had sex

“How can it be I don't care?”

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Smalltown Iowa

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Aug 17, 2007
 
Thank's guy's! I'll write more now!

“hate me or love me. idc.”

Since: Aug 07

bleu city!

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#13
Aug 17, 2007
 
Yay!
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#14
Aug 17, 2007
 
this is way diff.

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Aug 17, 2007
 
StoryLuver wrote:
this is way diff.
Good diffrent or bad diffrent?

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Aug 17, 2007
 
~Science My POV~
Ah I Hate science I don’t get what the teachers talking about, and tell you the truth I don’t really care. Oh great he’s handing back our test. He walked around giving everyone their tests.“Good job Corbin you got an A.” He said handing Corbin his test.*Cough Loser Cough* I looked back at Rick and gave him a shut up look. Everyone started laughing, I looked over at Corbin. He was acting like it was no big deal. Like he didn’t care people were laughing at him. The teacher gave Rick a look and kept handing out the test. When he got to me he said,“See me after class.” I looked down at my test and saw a big F.“Great” I said under my breath.

~Science Corbin’s POV~

I love science! It comes so easy to me. The teacher was handing out our test.“Yes I got an A!” I thought to myself. The teacher said it out loud though, so Rick called me a loser. Oh well at least I have a brain. I looked over at Barbie and she was giving me a look like how come it didn’t bother me about what Rick said. I heard the teacher tell her to meet him after class. I saw her test to F ouch!

~After Class My POV~

“Hey Jaz I’ll see you at lunch.” I said walking up to the teacher.“Alright see ya there!” She said walking out of the room.“You wanted to see me?” I asked when I got to the teachers desk.“Yes you’re failing this class and you have 3 weeks to get your grade up or you can’t go out for cheerleading.” He said looking up at me.“WHAT?” I practically screamed.“What do you mean by not being able to go out for cheerleading? I have to be on the squad, if I’m not my whole life is ruined.” I said, well screamed.“Ok calm down you have 3 weeks to get your grade up and you can do it. Maybe get someone to help you.”“You mean like a tutor?” I asked.“Yeah and if you need any help finding one I have some pretty good ideas.”“No I can’t have a tutor I just can’t” I said starting to calm down a little.“That’s your choice then.” The teacher said going back to his work. I stormed out of there and bumped into someone knocking my books and their books.“I’m so sorry!” I said getting down to pick them up.“No it was my bad I wasn’t watching where I was going.” The person said. I looked up and saw it was Corbin.“Oh hey” I said with a smile.“Hey” he said smiling back.“Wh…” I started “Barbie come on we’re gonna be late.” Alisa said grabbing my arm and pulling me off the ground and to the lunch room. We sat down and started talking.“What were you doing talking to that loser?” Alisa asked.“I bumped into him and helped him pick up his books.” I said eating my lunch.“Are you guys talking about Corbin again?” Sharne asked sitting down.“Yeah Barbie was talking to him.” Alisa said eating her lunch.“Barbie really you need to get it through your head, you’re popular he’s not!”Mia said.“I know” I said rolling my eyes.“So what did the teacher want?” Jasmine asked.“He wanted to ruin my life.” I said with an attitude.“Why what he say?” Sharne asked.“That if I don’t get my grade up in 3 weeks then I can’t go out for cheerleading.““What?” They all said at the same time.“He can’t do that!” Alisa said.“I know but hey I got to go bye.” I said getting up and leaving.
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Aug 17, 2007
 
good diff.!!

“hate me or love me. idc.”

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bleu city!

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#18
Aug 17, 2007
 
I love it! Go with Corbin!

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#19
Aug 17, 2007
 
its good

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beverly Hills, Ca

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#20
Aug 17, 2007
 
i love your story barbie

“I just realized.. I DONT CARE!”

Since: Aug 07

w!t c0rb!n 0r l!l m@m@ 0r b5!

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#21
Aug 17, 2007
 
more and update NOW yung lady!
Jasmine

Troy, MI

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#22
Aug 17, 2007
 
great chapter

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