New Corbin Bleu Fanfiction

New Corbin Bleu Fanfiction

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Since: Sep 07

Luton, Bedfordhsire, UK

#1 Aug 14, 2011
Hey Guys

I writing a new fanfic.

any 1 wants to be in it?

Will be writing part one soon.

Since: Sep 07

Luton, Bedfordhsire, UK

#2 Aug 14, 2011
Chapter 1:

Complicated

Corbin POV:
Just getting ready for work. Felt like a normal day. I was feeling more free and single than ever.
Having my space felt better than it was before my loveless marriage. Not to mention sometimes if you kept working it out it would be torture, emotionally draining.
Picked up my work brief case and Macbook in a rucksack. Was about to walk to the door and the letterbox flapped to have envelopes spilling out. I walked slowly to pick them up. Bill, Bill, Bill and there it was an official documented envelope. I slowly opened it, it was the decree absolute, and I was a single man legally. No more married Corbin Bleu Reivers.
I headed out the garage and walked towards his land rover car heading to the office to meet up with the agents at the office. I listened to some Prince and continued driving. I was having flashback of how me and my newly found ex wife were happily in married bliss But then the lows of marriage flashed over the bliss. The marriage suffered from both sides. It was a nightmare for it to carry on.
I pulled in the office’s car-park and locked me car, sighing and nervously ready to face the music. As I headed to the corridor associates greeted me like normal. I reached the office to meet a few collgeues and associates and my Dad David Reivers. I sat down and talked with the associate about the upcoming schedule head of me. I tried to have the right frame of mind and look forward to the future. Being a divorcee is a new chapter of my life.
After the meeting...
I walked out of the meeting a lil bit exhausted and heading to McDonald’s to get some food before heading home.
“Hey Corbin” someone called. I turned round to my friend Chad running up to me.“Hey Chad what’s up?” I replied.“Just wondering seems that you’re a single free man want to go out clubbing?” He suggested.“I dunno if I’m in the mood to go out Chad” I replied “come on Corbin You gotta let loose and enjoy you freedom and move on” Chad remarked.
There was no way He was gonna let me have my way “Ok... We’ll go out tonight” I sighed.

TBC

“TSL:tha slnglee lifee”

Since: Sep 07

Baltimore

#3 Aug 16, 2011
KEEP GOING

Since: Sep 07

Luton, Bedfordhsire, UK

#4 Aug 16, 2011
Part 2
Corbin’s POV
I was out of the shower, heading to the walk in closet. What to wear I pondered. I was thinking of dressing to get laid. I put on my boxers and aftershave then picked out this nice French connection shirt. I found some nice suave trouser with some nice shoes. I grabbed my wallet and checked my hair and placed on my shades not forgetting my jacket. Outside I hailed a cab and directed the driver to the club. Hello to Mr. young and free.
At the nightclub.
I met up with my homeboys and got into the V.I.P queue which let us in straightaway much to the chagrin of the other clubbers in the standard queue. I handed my coat to the cloakroom assistant and started climbing upstairs to the party. Man there was a lot fun going on a lot of clubbers grinding, drinking and having fun. Me and the guys sat down and Chad came back from the bar with a bottle of alizee with some wine glasses. Each of us grabbed a glass of drink.“Here’s to beginning of bachelor life” Chad toasted. We raised our glasses and clinked them. I took a sip and saw something from the corner of my eye. A Young sexy thing, Black wavy hair, wearing a figure hugging dress with heels on. She was hot! She was with some friends chatting by the bar. The girl turned around and looked at me smiling with a bit of blushing. The girl and her friend scurried onto the dance floor and were shaking their tail feathers. As I was watching I couldn’t help but wondering if she was noticing me staring.

Since: Sep 07

Luton, Bedfordhsire, UK

#5 Aug 16, 2011
Denetta’s POV.
I was dancing laughing at my friends silly moves whilst we were dancing. I felt that someone was staring at me from afar. I stayed on the dance floor for a while and a bit thirsty and headed off the dance floor. As I headed to the bar I could hear some wolf whistles typical, I could see this young guy similar age to me but hot. I walked past him trying to not stare at him. I got a few WKDs and some redbull and vodka and headed to where my girls were sitting. I smiled at him whist I sat down to sip my drink. As I turned to my friends I could sense him smiling and staring at me. I was still feeling thirsty and went to buy some drinks, I headed up to the counter, and I could hear him and his mates talking and him being egged on to talk to me.
I just walked toward where my friends were sitting; he jogged up towards and tapped me on the shoulder.“Hey” he greeted,“I...” I replied. I’m Corbin he introduced himself.“Hi Corbin, I’m Denetta” I greeted back. We shook hand as I was about to move my hand he lifted it to his lips and kissed my hand. I blushed a bit but wondered if HE had noticed.“Wanna dance?” he asked. I was so nervous I nodded enthusiastically. We headed to the dance floor. He wrapped his arms around me. The warm feeling was going right through me like ecstasy. God I must be dreaming. But it wasn’t a dream he was actually dancing close to me. After a few songs, we headed down to some seats near our friends. He chatted and was better acquainted. I smiled and laughed when he talked about some funny moments. He mingled and then exchanged number, I really a bit sceptical as some blokes would leave a girl hanging. I just took the hook and did so. He leaned over and kissed me on the cheek. I felt my legs tremble underneath me. I walked off to my friend after saying goodbye. Me and my girls chatting as he headed to get our coats. They wanted to be filled in of what went on between me and Corbin. I told them before they giggled and congratulated me and pulling a hunk like him. As the girls got their coats I see him chatting to his friends and him sneaking a look at me when I looked away. Me and the girls headed outside and hailed a cab. We all bundled into a cab for safety in numbers. One or two of us left the same time and live near each other. I got out and headed round the corner and a few blocks. I walked upstairs to the entrance and walked up 2 flights of stair to my flat. I unlocked my door and shut the door quickly behind me. I threw my keys into the bowl on the kitchen side table. I headed to the bedroom to dress down to my jammies. I thoroughly wiped off all make up on my face. I looked like ghosts without little make up not mention a lot. As I climbed into my bed, My Iphone beeped. Thinking it was one of my friends’ texting to see if I got home ok. To my surprise it wasn’t “Hey Denetta, nice meeting you, Hope we could go out sometime just me and you like on a date. Corbin xx”. I smiled to myself and laid into bed to sleep.
TBC

“TSL:tha slnglee lifee”

Since: Sep 07

Baltimore

#6 Aug 17, 2011
aww... update

Since: Sep 07

Luton, Bedfordhsire, UK

#7 Aug 19, 2011
Writing up part 3 now. Who wants to be in it? reply asap

Since: Sep 07

Luton, Bedfordhsire, UK

#8 Aug 28, 2011
Part 3
Denetta’s POV

My alarm rang which startled me out of my daze. I pounded the stop button and ragged myself out of bed. Stretch like a creased up shirt and dragged myself into the bathroom. Ran the tap and jumped in another day at the office oh joy. I laid out my work clothes and creamed myself with palmer’s cocoa butter. I had applied some straighteners onto my hair. I got dressed and headed out towards the kitchen side were I have my keys stored. I walked down the stairs to my car. As I didn’t get any coffee I drove to starbucks to and got a caramel macchiato. I had to drive a 20 minutes into work. I pulled in to swipe myself in and drove up many levels in order to get off to work in the car park. I walked into the corridor to be greeted by hi and what’s up. I smiled and replied and headed to the office. I switched on my Mac and placed my personal effect down under my desk. I logged into my computer and loaded up my work and read my emails and memo. I leaned back into my chair I couldn’t stop thinking about Corbin I should focus on work but he took my breath away. All of a sudden there was knocking on the door. It was my colleague..........Ready for the presentation in a few minutes”. I nodded with confidence. I disconnected my portable hard drive and headed off to the meeting. I was confident in my approach to my design idea and know how to back it up.
Corbin’s POV
I really couldn’t stop thinking about Denetta, her smile, her eyes and that body, she was amazing. She made me feel like none other than before. Not like my ruined beyond repair marriage. I felt like she was the one and she was rocking my world. As I was taking break from all that basketball training I sat down and pulled out my phone to text her and see how she was doing. I typed out a message to her. I wasn’t sure if she was busy so I took the risk and texted her. I wrote; “Hey Denetta its Corbin just texting ask whenever you’re free to have dinner with me some time. I would like to get to know you more. Love Corbin” I hit send and rejoined the guys on the basketball court.
Later that day
I was sitting down watch telly, I was tired out because of all that training. I watched a few channel programs and thinking about Denetta. She was on my mind I needed to know if she liked me back. I was a free and single guy and I was glad I was divorced because it would have put her off if she knew I was still married and in process of getting a divorce. I was getting to the program until my phone rung out. It was a message I opened it to see it was from Denetta “Hey Corbin. How’s you Hun. I am free Friday till the weekend if you wanna link up and spend some time. Let me know when and where. Denetta :D xxx. I smiled to myself. I was on cloud nine when she replied back to my message. I had to think when we could go out and where. I had an idea how about where to go. I had a brainwave how the restaurant where I go when working. I texted her back saying:”How about Friday at 7pm at.......... Love Corbin” I laid back down onto my sofa thinking about Denetta and wondering if she would text back. I felt my jump when I got a text message back from Denetta.“Look forward to hooking up Hun. Denetta xxx.” I was so looking forward to our first date.

TBC
Chapter 4 the date
Corbin’s POV
I was anxiously getting ready for our date together. I was wondering what the hell to well to the date. I know I had to wear underwear. Just what shirt I wanted to wear but not be over confident or too laidback. I chose this pale blue one which a bit like a denim one. I put on my jean like trousers and shoes. Spray some CK perfume selected my best jacket and checked how money if had. I picked up my keys and made a bee-line to the door.

Since: Sep 07

Luton, Bedfordhsire, UK

#9 Aug 28, 2011
I headed to my car and drove to the restaurant. I got a phone call on my phone, Unknown number. I wanted to answer it but no way was I getting caught using my phone in motion. I got to the restaurant a few minutes early. Parked my car and headed inside. I put my phone silent so no-one except Denetta would disturb our date. I checked out my reservation and was guided to my table. Ordered some wine for Denetta despite not knowing what she would drink. Denetta came in looking beautiful as ever. I waved to her and watched her approach me. She was looking really fine. She smiled and kissed me on the cheek.
TBC

“TSL:tha slnglee lifee”

Since: Sep 07

Baltimore

#10 Aug 29, 2011
Update please :)

Since: Sep 07

Luton, Bedfordhsire, UK

#11 Sep 3, 2011
Pt 4
Denetta’s POV
The date was starting off really well. Corbin escorted me to my seat and let me order first.“I’ll have the chicken with some salad dressing and garlic bread” I said to the waiter. I blushed when Corbin smiles at me. Corbin ordered his food and let the waiter sort out our order. I looked around nervously as Corbin poured some wine which was given to us. We chatted about life, nothing too serious such as our personal life. I told him what I did for a J.O.B and he didn’t need to tell me what his occupation was. We got our meals and tucked in them, I eat mine but couldn’t help Corbin was looking at me. I tried avoiding his gaze he noticed I was seeing him stare at me. The date was going great but I couldn’t help but really being into him. I really like being in his company. As we had some wine we toasted to getting to know each other. We smiled at each other, laughed at each other embarrassing moments etc.
We finished off with desert and waiter for the bill. I was going to contribute to the bill but Corbin insisted he would pay for it. That was the kind of guy i was into a gentleman. We paid the bill and headed to the exit. I was going to get a cab home but Corbin wanted to drive me home. Who knows how I would feel about me being in a car with him alone. I directed him to where I lived and drove for at least 20 minutes. We reached my place I didn’t want to leave the car. Corbin came out first and opened my car door. I came out but so close to him I wanted kiss him badly. I was feeling really weird but who knows what happens. I thanked him for a great night after he walked me to by my door. Corbin leaned over and kissed me on the cheek which leads to me leaning over to kiss him passionately on the lips. I was surprised when he responded, we kissed for a few minutes and then we broke away. I said bye and walked up to my door. I couldn’t stop thinking that he must really like.
I sat down on my bed after changing down to my PJs, I got a text message. I had an ideas that my mates wondered what happened etc. It was Corbin it read:“Had a great night 2nite. Would like to take you out again. Corbin xxx”. I smiled and replied:“It was a great night with. I hope we could see each other again.” I fell back into my bed and went to sleep, possibly dreaming of Corbin.
Corbin's POV
Got up the morning after our date, was still thinking about Denetta. I had the day off thank god I thought. I had some time to myself but what to do, so I decided to do some cleaning and chilling out. I was bored and decided to ask Denetta up for a coffee or lunch. I rang her to see if she was free, she was a little bit surprised I was calling her. I asked her to meet me at the cafe a few blocks from mine.
An hour later...
I met Denetta at the cafe, she looked stunning even if she was dressed casually with her Uggs. She sat down opposite me after hugging me. She smelled nice; we order some coffee and some food. We talked for a while. As we had almost run out of things to say I offered to take her to mine and show her round my place. We headed to the car I received a phone call probably was work. I answered as Denetta was leaning by the bollard.“Hello?” No answer,“Hello”. The caller hung up to my confusion.“Shall we?” I motioned to Denetta. She smiled as I escorted to the passenger side of my car. Denetta got in and I shut the door behind her. I got in a drove her to my place. It had been a while since I have been inviting a girl over. I’m young free and single, it wasn’t like I was attached or married.
TBC

“TSL:tha slnglee lifee”

Since: Sep 07

Baltimore

#12 Sep 4, 2011
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.. .....
keep going:)

Since: Sep 07

Luton, Bedfordhsire, UK

#13 Sep 10, 2011
Part 5
Me and Denetta got very comfortable in my living room. She seems quite nervous being alone with me in my place. I broke the ice a little by sitting down and listening to music. We chatted and laughed. I really enjoyed her company. I was really into just like I was with my ex wife but more.
Denetta smiled as I put my arm around her. We had a very intense moment of silence until my phone rang. I apologized to Denetta but she didn’t seem to mind, is answered my phone but no answer. What the hell was going on? I shook the thought out of my head and carried on talking to Denetta. Denetta blushed it was weird her acting like that towards me but it in a good way.
Denetta’s POV
I couldn’t help but feel weird inside when me and Corbin were so close up to each other. I was really in to him. It only has been a few days we’ve have been interacting and becoming in the process of dating. There was some tension between us even sexual tension. I really want to take things slowly in case this would jinx anything but I could help but wan to kiss him again. The feeling was a bit mutual the way Corbin looked at me. I leaned back and surprisingly Corbin leaned his face towards mine. Our lips were half an inch apart. I leaned forward and felt his smooth lips overlapping mine. I moaned a little bit at his tongue was prising to open my mouth. We were kissing for minutes until we stopped. We looked at each other with complete shock but then we smiled and resumed kissing. I felt Corbin’s hand on my lap. As much as I wanted to take it further I couldn’t rush things. We looked back at each after kissing for ages. We adjusted ourselves and continued conversing with each despite feeling awkward.
A few hours later...
Corbin and me decided to stay in together. We wanted to get to know each more and more. We order take a away. We wanted to know each other secrets our most embarrassing moments I wanted to really know him inside out. I even admitted fancying years ago.“Do you fancy me know” he asked. I blushed and nodded yes.“That’s ok I like you too” he smiled. We ended up in a passionate embrace kissing a few minutes more.

TBC

“TSL:tha slnglee lifee”

Since: Sep 07

Baltimore

#14 Sep 10, 2011
awww.... this is cute!!!!! Keep going!!!!
nameless

Mount Holly, NC

#15 Sep 21, 2011
Woah what happened to the update? It's good lol
Moon

Pittsburgh, PA

#16 Sep 26, 2011
Hey Deana. i love the new story very good.

Since: Sep 07

Luton, Bedfordhsire, UK

#17 Oct 11, 2011
Hey peeps
Sorry for the lack of updates will be soon putting up the next chapter.

Denetta

“TSL:tha slnglee lifee”

Since: Sep 07

Baltimore

#18 Oct 11, 2011
Denetta_A wrote:
Hey peeps
Sorry for the lack of updates will be soon putting up the next chapter.
Denetta
yay

Since: Sep 07

Luton, Bedfordhsire, UK

#19 Oct 14, 2011
Months Later
Corbin’s POV
I was on cloud nine when I get together with Denetta. We were taking our time in this relationship. I really respect her as graceful young woman. I really was in a happy place when we started dating. I really was falling love with her. We spent time together in each other’s houses etc. We went out to dine together. I wanted her to move in one day. Depending on how the relationship was blooming I was careful not to rush her.
Denetta’s POV.
I was waking up to get up for work by the ringing ear numbing sound of my phone alarm. As I stopped it I paused to look at my man on my phone wallpaper. I sighed and got out of bed to have a shower. I was so looking forward for a night in with Corbin after work. I loved being in his company more than ever. I loved being in a relationship after so many years of being single. I loved for a while but it got a bit old. I needed to move onto the next chapter. I had a shower but was in a minx way of daydreaming. I was thinking about Corbin being behind me, massaging my back and being so close to me. I had to shake the thought out of my head and get on with getting dressed for work. I got out and laid out my garments. I creamed my moist body and added some body spray and deodorant. I got dresser before applying my eyeliner and lip gloss. I made sure I had my keys and portfolio work for the big meeting. Off I headed to work.

That evening....
Me and Corbin were having a night in with the telly and some takeaway. We were really in a fun mood and had a laugh or two. I was really into Corbin’s closeness at the moment. I waited for him to make the next move and kiss me hoping it will lead to something. Corbin leaned over for a passionate kiss and we finally connected. We kissed like there was no tomorrow. Something inside was thinking maybe it was time to take the next step in our relationship. It depended on who was ready for it. I felt Corbin’s hand on my knee giving me the urge to take the hint and take it to the next level. As I felt him kissing my neck and tugging on my top, I needed to plan when we would start sleeping together,“Corbin...” I said, Corbin stopped and looked at me puzzled but he knew That I wasn’t ready for us to be having sex despite being together a few months now.“Yes Denetta?” He replied.”You know I want to but I am ready and I want to make it really special for use to have sex.” I remarked. He smiled and stroked my face.“Sure Honey, I can wait until you’re ready”. I smiled and we carried on kissing until Corbin’s phone rang. As he lifted it up to see who was calling, I peered at the screen discreetly and realized it was an unknown number. Corbin answered but seeing the confusion on his face, the caller said nothing and hung up on him leaving an ominous dial tone.

As we lay in bed I felt a tremble static go through me as Corbin got comfortable. I was ready but I wanted it to be very special. I could feel his presence and his arm moving to stroke my face. I smiled with my eyes closed. It felt like ecstasy as he stroked his hand on my face and kissing my cheek.

Since: Sep 07

Luton, Bedfordhsire, UK

#20 Oct 14, 2011
Next Day...
I got up getting ready for work. I got dressed after having a shower as I was in the shower I could sense Corbin stirring and getting. Boy did I hate going to work and not being by his closeness and having his body next to mine I was in heaven when we were in bed. I was getting dressed as He got into the shower. I peered through the door as he was in the buff in the shower cubicle. I was feeling a little flustered seeing him with his boxers. Maybe tonight was a right time for us to be making love. I could not help myself I really loved him and I was keen on being with for as long as I wanted him.

In the Office...
I was thinking about both Corbin and work, I was concentrating on my assignment of this specific deigns for a client. I experimented with the layers etc. I was drinking as much caffeine in order to concentrate. I really am in love Corbin and it was no doubt about it. He had come out of a relationship before we got together. I just wondered if it was his ex ringing to reconcile with him. I shook that thought out of my mind. I knew he was into me in many ways. It was getting boring concentrating on work, I needed a break. I was gonna pop out to get something at a nearby deli as I was starving. As I grabbed my bag my phone rang, I picked it up to see the caller id. It was Corbin,“Hey Corbin.” I answered the phone,“hey Baby, How’s work?” he asked “I trembled at his smooth voice,“Good. Just off to have a break, my brain needs energy.” I moaned.“Aww sorry about that babe. Wish I could make it better for you” He replied.“Well let’s just say Tonight will be great.” I hinted,“Oh ok. Well what time you want me to come over?” Corbin asked.“Come about 7.” I suggested.”Well see you tonight Babes, Love you” Corbin said.“Love you too.” I replied.
I couldn’t believe it Corbin said He loves me.

TBC

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