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Since: Mar 11

Cookeville, TN

#1 Jul 18, 2011
chapter one: the clan
In a deep part of eterna Forrest lived a clan of eevees. Their names were umbrion the leader, espion his mate, and all there kits named (from oldest to youngest) flareon, jolteon, vaporion, leafion, glacion, and last but not least eevee.
They were the last of there clan, and the protectors of the forest. They kept every thing in balance. Made sure there were no evil pokemon or humans that would harm there Forrest.

Since: Mar 11

Cookeville, TN

#2 Jul 18, 2011
This is just the introduction of the story I hope u liked it ^_^ if not tell me if so also tell me ^_^

Since: Mar 11

Cookeville, TN

#3 Jul 18, 2011
No one likes my story :( I'm sad now

Since: Mar 11

Cookeville, TN

#4 Jul 18, 2011
Chapter 2: assembly

It was a hit summer day. All kinds of pOkemon were enjoying the weather. There were budew, wormple, ext. Under a huge oak tree lived the eevee clan. They protected this Forrest with their lives. But also in doing so they enjoyed life.

* Jolteon pov*

I was running to practice on my speed. It was just, well, to slow at home for me. Everyone there is slow. I'm the fastest and best runner in the whole Forrest. No one is a match for.........THUMP!!!! Jolteon hit a tree and was uncontis.

*3rd person Pov*

Everyone was getting ready for a huge gathering. But no one was in a hurry.
Flareon:oh where did Jolteon go off to now? He's gonna miss the assembly.
Vaporion: maybe you just worry too much. I'm sure he is fine.
Leafion: ya she's right, you no Jolteon, always running off calling everyone slow.
Flareon:I hope your right.
Suddenly they heard a scream.

Since: Mar 11

Cookeville, TN

#5 Jul 19, 2011
No one likes it :(

“MY COOKIES!!!”

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#6 Jul 19, 2011
I like it. :D

“KORRASAMI IS CANON!”

Since: Oct 10

DAY IT BECAME CANON:12/19/14

#7 Jul 19, 2011
I read it on my phone. Only if my dad let me stay on my laptop for five more minute I would of been able to read and comment. Anyways Its very good so far.

Since: Mar 11

Cookeville, TN

#8 Jul 19, 2011
Thanks darkpika

You really think so latias I thought urs was better though :) but thank you lol ^_^
Anonymous

Las Piedras, Puerto Rico

#9 Jul 19, 2011
I LOVE IT

Since: Mar 11

Cookeville, TN

#10 Jul 19, 2011
Chapter 3: the visiter

Flareon: what was that
Vaporion: I don't no but what ever it was it sounds like it's in trouble
Leafion: then let's go help it. I'll go this way,( he points to the left) flareon will go that way,( points to right) and vaporion will go straight.
All:got it
Flareon:let's go

They all went there ways, hoping to find what was in need of assistance.

*flareon's pov*

I was running with all my might. I needed to no what needed my help. I'm just hoping it's not Jolteon again. He always gets into trouble. Oh please god let me find..........

*3rd person pov*

Flareon suddenly saw a pokemon she has never seen before. It was pink and had a long tail. It was trapped in a human net! She had to go help it.
???:help me someone help!
Flareon:don't worry I'm on my way!
Flareon jumped off the bolder she was on and went over to the pokemon.
Flareon: stay still I don't wanna burn you.
She used flamethrower on the net. It burned and the pokemon was released.
???: thank you ever so much for saving me.
Flareon: no problem it's my job. So what were you doing near that net any way?
???: I was trying to find the eevee clan.

Flareon looked surprised.

Flareon: I'm part of the eevee clan
???: really? Well I must speak to your leader right away.

*3rd person pov*

When they made it back to the clan the mystery pokemon was talking to their leader.

Umbreon: I'm umbreon the leader.
???: I'm mew. I came here with news
Umbreon: what kind of news?
Mew: it's about...... The prophecy.

Since: Mar 11

Cookeville, TN

#11 Jul 19, 2011
This is the new chapter hope you like it ^_^
Anonymous

Las Piedras, Puerto Rico

#12 Jul 19, 2011
Best story EVER!:D I want your autograph!

“KORRASAMI IS CANON!”

Since: Oct 10

DAY IT BECAME CANON:12/19/14

#13 Jul 19, 2011
I knew it was Mew.

Since: Mar 11

Cookeville, TN

#14 Jul 19, 2011
HNNDNR wrote:
Best story EVER!:D I want your autograph!
Lol it's not that good ^_^ but thanx and how can I lol

Since: Mar 11

Cookeville, TN

#15 Jul 19, 2011
LatiasFan19 wrote:
I knew it was Mew.
Lol ya I kinda gave it away when I said pink and a long tail lolz ^_^

Since: Mar 11

Cookeville, TN

#16 Jul 19, 2011
If anyone has any ideas for who the villain should be plz tell me not out of the clan btw but any pokemon

“Team Jenova”

Since: Jul 11

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#17 Jul 19, 2011
dude ... thats neat man ! but yur chapters are to short ? and they all seem to be one big chapter not 3 ? and try adding more detail ? like the swaing grass as the flareon leaped threw the forest searching for the sound. as flareon came up closer she was surprised to see the unknow pokemon to be traped by one of the wreched humans and she knew she had to do her best to save the pokemon ... as she leaped over the enormouse boulder and under the broken log she ignited the net lettign the unknown pokemon free .... but thats my opion >.>

“Team Jenova”

Since: Jul 11

hg fc 0862-6189-7239

#18 Jul 19, 2011
the villian could be something like feraligatr ? or maybe charizard ??-.-

Since: Mar 11

Cookeville, TN

#19 Jul 20, 2011
Lol ok I'll try more details and the reason there short is because it takes up alot of space on here and I'll use charizard

“Prepare to be fooled!”

Since: Jun 11

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#20 Jul 20, 2011
0.0 It's a really good story. I have a story about Zelda written on my computer. I'll put it up on here for you all to read!^-^

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