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“not selena gomez just a fan ”

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#1 Jan 4, 2008
Please add on to this and make it a long story. You can add as much as you like, but give others a chance. Thanks. I'll start it off.

One day, when I got out of school, I walked home in the scorching heat. Suddenly.......

Valkyrian Ride

“Say hello to my M203 ...”

Since: Jul 07

You wanna play rough?

#2 Jan 4, 2008
...a black man jumped out and stabbed me with a knife. So I...

“I was a Grim Reaper”

Since: Apr 07

But now I take antidepressants

#3 Jan 4, 2008
soccerplayah wrote:
Please add on to this and make it a long story. You can add as much as you like, but give others a chance. Thanks. I'll start it off.
One day, when I got out of school, I walked home in the scorching heat. Suddenly.......
A giant eagle eagle flew down from a tree,then suddenly........
hjs

Blue Mounds, WI

#4 Jan 14, 2008
Please add on to this and make it a long story. You can add as much as you like, but give others a chance. Thanks. I'll start it off.
One day, when I got out of school, I walked home in the scorching heat. Suddenly, I burst into flames but luckily a.......

“not selena gomez just a fan ”

Since: Jan 08

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#5 Jan 14, 2008
ummm hjs,
ur supposed to add to what the story already has
Aluminaughty-ic litter

Cerritos, CA

#6 Jan 14, 2008
....a car pulled up and a guy jumped out with a fire extinguisher and put the fire out before i got too badly burned, but my eyes got full of the chemicals and i went blind, so got taken to the hospital to be operated on and then the anasthiesiologist fucked up and overdosed me and i hovered above myself watching the flat line....

“Augusy '16”

Since: Dec 06

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#7 Jan 14, 2008
Billy R wrote:
<quoted text>A giant eagle eagle flew down from a tree,then suddenly........
It dropped a small silver ring at my feet, and flew away, when I took the ring in my hand, it dazzled and sparkled, right then I knew I was in the possession of a
Aluminaughty-ic litter

Cerritos, CA

#8 Jan 14, 2008
Grace Nerissa wrote:
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It dropped a small silver ring at my feet, and flew away, when I took the ring in my hand, it dazzled and sparkled, right then I knew I was in the possession of a
...Illuminata.....

“Augusy '16”

Since: Dec 06

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#9 Jan 15, 2008
Aluminaughty-ic litter wrote:
<quoted text>...Illuminata.....
This only urged me to try on the ring, when I fitted it on, I was immediately
transported to another kingdom, I found myself sitting in a room which seemed
to be entirely made from chocolate sweets, it was warm there, even a green fire in the corner.. but this chocolate did not seem to melt.. The first sound I heard in this strange kingdom was ...

“I was a Grim Reaper”

Since: Apr 07

But now I take antidepressants

#10 Jan 15, 2008
Grace Nerissa wrote:
<quoted text>
It dropped a small silver ring at my feet, and flew away, when I took the ring in my hand, it dazzled and sparkled, right then I knew I was in the possession of a
beautiful cracker jack toy. Man,how those prizes took me back to my childhood. Why I remember when..........
Veronica

Amstelveen, Netherlands

#11 Jan 15, 2008
soccerplayah wrote:
Please add on to this and make it a long story. You can add as much as you like, but give others a chance. Thanks. I'll start it off.
One day, when I got out of school, I walked home in the scorching heat. Suddenly.......
I began feeling not my normal self, who would, in this heat especially since I had walked out of an airco building, I seem to be a bit light headed, cold sweat broke out, I was kind of disappearing into myself. I looked down at my nikes it seemed to be fluctuating losing its shape and going back into it. Even the sidewalk had a see-saw motion I looked left and right of me, the buildings were doing this same see-saw, expanding, contracting dance. Fear grab hold of me, shit I’m losing my mind, what the hell did I eat, or am I hungry. I decided to seek shade under one off the trees lining the sidewalk, holy cow the trees are doing the same thing, I was sure then that I had somehow entered the twilight zone. Stretching my hand toward the tree to balance my self, I noticed even my hand was not solid anymore, yet it felt solid, in any case I braced myself against the tree trunk and slide down to the ground. The ground felt solid but it too was moving up and down, expanding, contracting. A few kids I knew past me by laughing and talking, they were showing the same symptoms as everything else, yet they were not effected as I seem to be. I wanted to say something to them but decided to shut up, all those aliens movies came rushing into my mind. I wanted to get up and rush home, home suddenly became a safe haven. I shook my head with eyes closed a couple of times to clear my mind, this just made it worst everything shook with me, that’s when I became aware of some pretty strange sensations inside of me. It was inside yet outside of me. I was tranquil, yet hyper active, I lost all sense of space and time, I was flowing in and out of everything, was expanding and contracting, I somehow sensed/ felt what everything felt like, opening my eyes and looking around me I knew then I was seeing everything as it really is for the very first time I thought, yet this was not the first time. I have always seen everything this way I realise. Memory came rushing back with an immense speed, I was transported back in time, yet not back but in the same present time. I felt myself breathing, expanding, contracting, energy, power, desire was all me. I felt, what I now call the first dawn, fresh, new, pure, alive filled with energy and expectations, I was joyously happy seeing ….
Veronica

Amstelveen, Netherlands

#12 Jan 15, 2008
Aluminaughty-ic litter wrote:
....a car pulled up and a guy jumped out with a fire extinguisher and put the fire out before i got too badly burned, but my eyes got full of the chemicals and i went blind, so got taken to the hospital to be operated on and then the anasthiesiologist fucked up and overdosed me and i hovered above myself watching the flat line....
Thinking does this mean I’m dead. What the heck how can I be dead and still see everything around me. I wonder what Mom and Dad will do, Mom will cry I’m sure and dad would be screaming about suing the hospital …
Veronica

Amstelveen, Netherlands

#13 Jan 15, 2008
Billy R wrote:
<quoted text>beautiful cracker jack toy. Man,how those prizes took me back to my childhood. Why I remember when..........
When I got caught stealing one from the neighbourhood store
Veronica

Amstelveen, Netherlands

#14 Jan 15, 2008
Grace Nerissa wrote:
<quoted text>
This only urged me to try on the ring, when I fitted it on, I was immediately
transported to another kingdom, I found myself sitting in a room which seemed
to be entirely made from chocolate sweets, it was warm there, even a green fire in the corner.. but this chocolate did not seem to melt.. The first sound I heard in this strange kingdom was ...
Eat me, eat me, you like me, I like teeth, you eat me I eat your teeth

“Augusy '16”

Since: Dec 06

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#15 Jan 22, 2008
Veronica wrote:
<quoted text>Eat me, eat me, you like me, I like teeth, you eat me I eat your teeth
said the sticky new honey yellow lollipop with a high percentage of sugar..

“Augusy '16”

Since: Dec 06

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#16 Jan 23, 2008
Grace Nerissa wrote:
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said the sticky new honey yellow lollipop with a high percentage of sugar..
Not many people know this .. but .. sugar also has the unusual advantage of ..
House

Seattle, WA

#17 Jan 23, 2008
the

“I was a Grim Reaper”

Since: Apr 07

But now I take antidepressants

#18 Jan 23, 2008
Veronica wrote:
<quoted text>When I got caught stealing one from the neighbourhood store
Suddenly,everyone thought I should run for a political office.But wait I told them.........

“I was a Grim Reaper”

Since: Apr 07

But now I take antidepressants

#19 Jan 23, 2008
Grace Nerissa wrote:
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Not many people know this .. but .. sugar also has the unusual advantage of ..
Carmelizing under the right conditions. Of course,this involves lots of heat,so..........

“stand up and be counted”

Since: Apr 07

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#20 Jan 23, 2008
Nonononono. HOLD IT.
The idea of the thread is that you follow the LAST post, not one from halfway up the page.
The true last post mentioned SUGAR. In case anyone should forget what I've said, THIS is sugar too.........


Please.... follow the last post. Innuendo and fun are encouraged. If you don't like the song, dance.

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