Spinosaurus Story 2
First Prev
of 5
Next Last

“The Spine Grinder”

Since: Dec 11

Somewhere on Earth!

#1 Mar 1, 2012
Spinosaurus Story

Chapter 1-The Lunatic Mother

In the Cretaceous period, 95 million years ago, a mother is laying her eggs, a mother Spinosaurus about 18 meters long and 20 tons, it is a huge carnivore, rivaling many sauropods in size. In the dry season, water is a scarce resource, the dinosaurs have to thrive in extreme climate, and other predators, but the Spinosaurus did not have to worry about this, because, being on the top of the food chain means they are apex predators.  These huge carnivores eat large sauropods and fish, a vast forest covered the land in the distance, shrieks and howls are heard around the forest.

Carcharodontosaurus are also on the prowl, at 12-14 meters long, they rivaled  
even T. rex in size, but still not as big Spinosaurus. As the mother lays her eggs, another one watches her, a female, at exactly 16.99 meters long, it is massive, fortunately, the mother is slightly larger. The other Spinosaurus hides in the forest, after a few seconds, an ear splitting roar had been let out, by a Spinosaurus, Pterosaurs flapped madly with their wings, squeaking in horror. Then, the bushes rattled and a tree fell over as the other Spinosaurus rushed out of the forest, the mother stood her ground, staring angrily at the other Spinosaurus, the mother charged at the smaller Spinosaurus, subsequently knocking it over, it's arms caught it from falling. The smaller Spinosaurus tries to flee, but the angry parent didn't give up, it chased after it, and caught up, it bit the other Spinosaurus' neck, it collapsed to the ground, subsequently made a huge roar, and died.

“The Spine Grinder”

Since: Dec 11

Somewhere on Earth!

#2 Mar 1, 2012
Chapter 2-Hatchlings

A few days later, the eggs hatch, 3 little hatchlings emerge, the 3, Spino,_____,___

Can some people come up with the other names?
Fusionsaurus Rex

Waltham, MA

#3 Mar 1, 2012
AWESOME STORY!

“The Spine Grinder”

Since: Dec 11

Somewhere on Earth!

#4 Mar 1, 2012
Can you give the names, and for your imformation, the user that creates the two names that I pick get a free story with their favorite dinosaur. :D

“DoubleTheClaw, DoubleThePain”

Since: Aug 11

Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam

#5 Mar 1, 2012
I would recommend some names like Uhm... Terror Sail?Or Bloody Sail,maybe Metal Claws or just want simple word,Tyrant.

“The Spine Grinder”

Since: Dec 11

Somewhere on Earth!

#6 Mar 2, 2012
nice one, alright, balaur wins

“The Spine Grinder”

Since: Dec 11

Somewhere on Earth!

#7 Mar 2, 2012
Chapter 2-Hatchlings

A few days later, the eggs hatch, 3 little hatchlings emerge, the 3, Spino, Terror Sail, and Metal Claws. Once fully grown, these hatchlings will become super predators. They are unaware of a stalker. A Deltadromeus charges into the nest, the mother hears the calls of its babies, and is running back, at the nest, the mother spots a Deltadromeus. She grabs it in her mouth bringing it far of the ground, and the mother swings it to the ground, the dizzy Deltadromeus lays on the ground, stunned.

A few days later, the babies go hunting with their mother, they learn by copying her. The babies try catching a dragonfly, they squeak and call as the attempt to grab the dragonfly.
Fusionsaurus Rex

Waltham, MA

#8 Mar 2, 2012
Awesome!!!

“The Spine Grinder”

Since: Dec 11

Somewhere on Earth!

#9 Mar 2, 2012
Fusionsaurus Rex wrote:
Awesome!!!
Thanks, I wanted to make another one.

“The Spine Grinder”

Since: Dec 11

Somewhere on Earth!

#10 Mar 2, 2012
Fusionsaurus Rex wrote:
Awesome!!!
Bonus fight for u? It is a Spino vs T.rex, I will make t. rex win!

“DoubleTheClaw, DoubleThePain”

Since: Aug 11

Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam

#11 Mar 2, 2012
Cool story,keep it up.

“The Spine Grinder”

Since: Dec 11

Somewhere on Earth!

#12 Mar 2, 2012
Wait got a lesson
Fusionsaurus Rex

Waltham, MA

#13 Mar 3, 2012
Andrink wrote:
<quoted text>Bonus fight for u? It is a Spino vs T.rex, I will make t. rex win!
T. Rex doesn't have to win, how about each back down so each win! Just to make it fair.

“The Spine Grinder”

Since: Dec 11

Somewhere on Earth!

#14 Mar 3, 2012
Ok

A Spinosaurus is on the prowl, it has not eaten for 3 days. At the same time, a fierce competitor is also on the prowl, a male Tyrannosaurus Rex, at 13 meters long and 7 tons, it is huge even for its species. The T. rex has been the center of attention in paleontology since it has been discovered, the massive Spinosaurus senses danger, and sure enough, as it turns around the T. rex lets out an almighty roar. These two are arch enemies, as the T. rex closes in, the Spinosaurus slashes it right on the face, spilling blood on the ground. The T. rex is extremely cautious, knowing that one wrong step could fatal and mean almost certain death. The T. rex bites the Spinosaurus on the neck, the 8 tons of force sliced some of the thick skin of the Spinosaurus, luckily for the Spinosaurus the bite did not crush it's neck. The Spinosaurus let's out a ear splitting roar, Pterosaurs poured into the sky, swarming everywhere. The T. rex is now extremely scared, and wanted to flee, but it remembered that one wrong step could mean certain death, it tried to bite the Spinosaurus on the neck, but it missed, the T. rex roars, so loud that the ground shook. The Spinosaurus made a even louder roar! These two roars made the dinosaurs in the forest panic and run everywhere, the two stopped fighting, the Spinosaurus took this opportunity to bite the T. rex in the neck, though strong, it is not as strong as the T. rexes bite, Spinosaurus bites were only at 4-5 tons at the most, it was still strong enoughto mortally injure the T. rex, it was mortally injured now. The T. rex backed of, and the Spinosaurus did too, they both slowly made it back home. The End

“The Spine Grinder”

Since: Dec 11

Somewhere on Earth!

#15 Mar 3, 2012
"Enough to." XD My bad

“The Spine Grinder”

Since: Dec 11

Somewhere on Earth!

#16 Mar 3, 2012
Anyway, what do you think about the fight, Fusion Dude?

“DoubleTheClaw, DoubleThePain”

Since: Aug 11

Ho Chi Minh City, Vietnam

#17 Mar 4, 2012
Some inaccuracies but since it's your story,OK

“The Spine Grinder”

Since: Dec 11

Somewhere on Earth!

#18 Mar 4, 2012
Yah, like the joined wordsXD
Andrink

Central District, Hong Kong

#19 Mar 7, 2012
What do you think about the bonus fight?

“'SPOT' The Diplodocus”

Since: Feb 12

Cheshire UK

#20 Mar 7, 2012
Andrink wrote:
What do you think about the bonus fight?
Basically well thought out good battle scene. But bit rushed. You need to be a bit more descriptive.
Searing pain through the body. Pounding heart. Etc. Also more use of the environment. Swaying trees. Sun baked dusty ground. Etc.
And I take it Spino won coz T'rex was MORTALLY wounded.

Tell me when this thread is updated:

Subscribe Now Add to my Tracker
First Prev
of 5
Next Last

Add your comments below

Characters left: 4000

Please note by submitting this form you acknowledge that you have read the Terms of Service and the comment you are posting is in compliance with such terms. Be polite. Inappropriate posts may be removed by the moderator. Send us your feedback.

Dinosaur Discussions

Title Updated Last By Comments
Baragon vs. Elephant In Who Would Win 14 hr Kiryu2013 1
Some Dino Book I Can't Remember Mon Ateesiks 3
African Bush Elephant vs. Centrosaurus apertus Jan 14 Kiryu2012 1
Hugo vs. Indominus Rex - The Notre-Dame de Pari... Jan 13 animals 1
News Giant orange dinosaur in Massachusetts saved fr... (Sep '16) Jan 13 Ateesiks 8
Anyone left? Jan 12 Fartosaurus Rex 17
The Lost Thunder Island creatures Jan 6 souund 1
More from around the web