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“There Are Angels Among Us”

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love is over for me..Im done..I can love without being in love...thats where I will stay..TY P.P.

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Princess Hey wrote:
love is over for me..Im done..I can love without being in love...thats where I will stay..TY P.P.
LOVE yourself .and Then..WHEN love Finds you..YOU will be dancing on air!!!

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Honestly..tho..WHAT length of time.. Should a Chick give a DUDE..for HIM...to GET HIS HEAD..OUT OF HIS AZZ...to TELL her HE..DIGS her and LOVES Her???

FOR REAL??

THINK A YEAR..is tooooo Looooong???

“So many loons”

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so little time!!

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and adrian...

I'm sure you are confused on the title of the thread...words of love..

not lust..you worthless animal...

:)

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We do not fall in love with the package of the person, we fall in love with the inside of a person..the hear..t that is if th999329at person has one..

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Dream with your heart and love with your soul!!!!

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THE LOVE MACHINE wrote:
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You're talking about Ozzie again ain't you Adrian...tsk..tsk...:)
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Let love free
If it don't come back
It's not meant to be.

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#1889
Jul 3, 2014
 
Ya know..ROCKERS..

We Have had ALOT of POETS..share their LOVE of POETRY with us.

Grace N., ADRIAN DEVINE, Marissa 2, stacked and proud...and our Lovely Princess Hey..and a few others..

KUDOS !!!!

Words of Love....are a Treasure..if they ring True...;)

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#1890
Tuesday Jul 22
 
THIS is a Very Lovely Thread..

WHAT??

Sometimes..YOU don't Need to Say Anything. WHEN..you are With the One You LOVE..

A Glance, a soft Kiss, reaching for their hand to hold or just a SMILE.. SIMPLE Gestures of Love. Can do just as Nicely .as Spoken Words of Love..

Never Take LOVE Lightly.. DIVE in with YOUR Whole HEART..

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Adrian DeVine

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After stepping into the world again,

there is that question of how to love,

how to bundle yourself against the frosted morning—

the crunch of icy grass underfoot, the scrape

of cold wipers along the windshield—

and convert time into distance.



What song to sing down an empty road

as you begin your morning commute?

And is there enough in you to see, really see,

the three wild turkeys crossing the street

with their featherless heads and stilt-like legs

in search of a morning meal? Nothing to do

but hunker down, wait for them to safely cross.



As they amble away, you wonder if they want

to be startled back into this world. Maybe you do, too,

waiting for all this to give way to love itself,

to look into the eyes of another and feel something—

the pleasure of a new lover in the unbroken night,

your wings folded around him, on the other side

of this ragged January, as if a long sleep has ended.

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#1893
Wednesday Jul 30
 
Adrian DeVine wrote:
After stepping into the world again,
there is that question of how to love,
how to bundle yourself against the frosted morning—
the crunch of icy grass underfoot, the scrape
of cold wipers along the windshield—
and convert time into distance.
What song to sing down an empty road
as you begin your morning commute?
And is there enough in you to see, really see,
the three wild turkeys crossing the street
with their featherless heads and stilt-like legs
in search of a morning meal? Nothing to do
but hunker down, wait for them to safely cross.
As they amble away, you wonder if they want
to be startled back into this world. Maybe you do, too,
waiting for all this to give way to love itself,
to look into the eyes of another and feel something—
the pleasure of a new lover in the unbroken night,
your wings folded around him, on the other side
of this ragged January, as if a long sleep has ended.
NICE..Are ya PLAGIARIZING ??
Adrian DeVine

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Your breathing scattered my dreams
Across the acres of pillows that lay between us;
We had drifted across that bed
Defending territory
On small white patches of sheet
That lay so cold in the pale kiss of moonlight.

Somehow, parts of me remained tethered,
Like some brooding stallion,
Tied to every fence your hands had touched,
To every line your fingers had buried in my skin;
My soul stuck solid to the floor
Where you trampled it on your way out the door.

These wounds still bleed
Despite having cut most of us apart;
The stubborn core of me clings like an abandoned child
To every dream you awakened within me,
But now I stargaze alone.
You could only be you and that
Just wasn't good enough anymore
For me.
Adrian DeVine

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Petal Power wrote:
<quoted text> NICE..Are ya PLAGIARIZING ??
Thank you.......

You have my apologies if I'm offending you for thinking I was being serious instead of accurately realizing I was mocking all of my detractors and every one who ever maligned me here on Topix.

The problem begins with the legal fact that authorship is inextricably bound up in the idea of ownership and the idea of language as Intellectual property.

Language and ideas flow freely between people Despite the law.
It’s not plagiarism in the digital age – it’s repurposing.

Copyright law has to give up on its obsession with “the copy”
The law should not regulate “copy’s” or “reproductions” on their own.

It should instead regulate uses – like public distributions of copyrighted work -
That connect directly to the economic incentive copyright law was intended to foster.

~DeVine.

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Adrian DeVine wrote:
Your breathing scattered my dreams
Across the acres of pillows that lay between us;
We had drifted across that bed
Defending territory
On small white patches of sheet
That lay so cold in the pale kiss of moonlight.
Somehow, parts of me remained tethered,
Like some brooding stallion,
Tied to every fence your hands had touched,
To every line your fingers had buried in my skin;
My soul stuck solid to the floor
Where you trampled it on your way out the door.
These wounds still bleed
Despite having cut most of us apart;
The stubborn core of me clings like an abandoned child
To every dream you awakened within me,
But now I stargaze alone.
You could only be you and that
Just wasn't good enough anymore
For me.
YOU really are INTO Yoooou..Aren't Ya??
Adrian DeVine

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Thursday Jul 31
 

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Petal Power wrote:
<quoted text> YOU really are INTO Yoooou..Aren't Ya??
NO...unlike YOU......in no way am I !

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but it is my observation that,

Common sense is like deodorant.........

the people who need it most, never use it.

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Adrian DeVine wrote:
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NO...unlike YOU......in no way am I !
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but it is my observation that,
Common sense is like deodorant.........
the people who need it most, never use it.
Hmmm..THERE YOU ARE..Peter. Oops..Devine (Watching HOOK)..KNEW ya Couldn't Be Sweet fee Too Long..Had to Have Some Fighting' Words Unleashed!
.oh And Thanks for Clarifying The PLAGIARISM NEW Techno Info..Like I give a CRAP!
Device..What OTHER Incogneato Names did ya go bye. Hmmm..NEWBIES wanna Know!!
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Seen Princess Hey.??
Adrian DeVine

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#1899
Friday Aug 8
 
Petal Power wrote:
<quoted text> Hmmm..THERE YOU ARE..Peter. Oops..Devine (Watching HOOK)..KNEW ya Couldn't Be Sweet fee Too Long..Had to Have Some Fighting' Words Unleashed!
.oh And Thanks for Clarifying The PLAGIARISM NEW Techno Info..Like I give a CRAP!
Device..What OTHER Incogneato Names did ya go bye. Hmmm..NEWBIES wanna Know!!
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Seen Princess Hey.??
We dance slowly and it’s broken.

Men shudder and women wail

When I dip you and we don’t miss

We don’t kiss.
Adrian DeVine

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Friday Aug 8
 
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The way your skin prickled -tight- over your hips
and the plunking -wet- noise of water
forced out of a cave
are what I remember about that July, lovely, oh, lovely.

Your -blonde- hair rippled and shook loose
with each ramming pulsation and throb -stab-
but your hair -curled- tight was rough.-Unmoving.-
below, dripped More, now, more.

Your toenails felt like ice -pink, red, buff- on my calf
they drew dragons between the forests of my -leg- hair
circling around, bumping –bruising- and chanting,
Be full, full.

Until –after- we lay limp and glistening in -love- dew
the floors creak and winds scratch -outside- too loud,-empty-
but,
Ah, we,-thought- we are whole.

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Fall in love

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