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Jul 12, 2013
 

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INIQUITOUS wrote:
What is it men in women do require?
The lineaments of gratified desire.
What is it women in men require?
The lineaments of gratified desire.
……………………….William Blake
Man says:
A man wants what every woman wants:
intimacy, belonging, satisfaction,
understanding, connectedness,
listening, support, fulfillment,
pleasure, contentedness,
and a touch that leaves him
breathlessly knowing he's loved
and desired, given to and needed.
Woman says:
A woman wants a man to be
hard but soft at the same time
leaving his softness on her skin,
conversation, connection, love,
truth, passionate, feeling, and
lustful, with his arm wrapped
around her succulent body
as she rests on him.
Man says:
A woman wants a man to be
a certain way to her
and a man wants for her
what he wants for himself;
the difference here is that
men are needed to meet
a woman's needs,
and a man wants to meet needs
and be appreciated for having met them.
Woman says:
A man wants to be satisfied
and know he meets the
needs of a woman leaving her
fulfilled so he can be fulfilled
wanting her to support him
and have confidence in him.
Man says:
A man in whom a woman has no confidence
is a man who cannot perform,
and a man who cannot perform
does not see himself as a man at all,
but rather as a thing, unfulfilled, his mission failed,
and a woman who revives such a man is a goddess
of the highest order, a woman whom a thing
can become a man for again, who can then make a decision
and know that her confidence in him
will make whatever he does something worthy of a man.
Woman says:
A woman that doesn't believe in a man
will get what she gives, nothing, feeling
lonely and unloved, sadness and misery
take over, a woman that can build a man
up and be strong for them both is a
powerful person, together they can be
a great force.
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Jul 12, 2013
 

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INIQUITOUS wrote:
<quoted text>
THE DOUGH PUNCHER'S LAMENT.....
Lacking latitude
Mercator a map
maker a shaper
of great currents of
continents on paper
seen from whatever
angle resembled
a tangle of embryos
half-formed reassembled
near strangled by
0circulus equinoctialis
tropicus capricorni, swaddling
bands of a terra infantilis
born out of theodolite
NO imagination
and the declivity of
faint constellation
grown to surprising
on screen
stature? on paper
by nature,... a proper
tantrumtaker!
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Jul 12, 2013
 

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I'm learning you cannot make someone love you.All you can do is be someone who can be loved. the rest is up to them.I've learned that no matter how much I care, some people just dont care back, and its not the end of the world...
Sickofyourcrap

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#7897
Jul 13, 2013
 

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INIQUITOUS wrote:
Ha, you think I write these poems
for you, f uck off dreamer
they're all for me, but I gotta say
I do care what you think
hell baby I'm just a ham radio operator,
hold the mustard and onions,
searching for a human signal
sure they ought to zip it up sometimes
but you know it's no different than a disease,
can't keep their mouths shut
just gotta spit it out all over the screen
in living color, even HD
and s hit don't you know, they're megalomaniacs, every fucking one of them
wait a minute, I'm a poet damn it !
Reported, numbnuts.

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Jul 13, 2013
 

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Sweet revenge is spoken then
in the twilight it is gone
to living lies with no escape
Lord I'd rather be alone
I press my fingers to the wood
to tell you of my dreaming
to sing you songs of older times
to keep the love light gleaming
cause there is a place where we can go
where we will not be parted
and who alone will enter there
only the broken hearted..!!!!

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#7912
Jul 17, 2013
 
Del Cuatro wrote:
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On different flowers the bee will cling
And make its honey from everything......
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#7913
Jul 17, 2013
 
Del Cuatro wrote:
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Poetry food for the soul
Is without a doubt a passion
The putting together of letters
Rhythmical hearts that beat words
Creation of love and pain
Of which I have a need
Beauty and darkness spilling onto paper
In moments where time stands still
Words are so very powerful
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#7914
Jul 17, 2013
 
Del Cuatro wrote:
Faintest of light a silver sliver
thinnest of thread silken quiver
slightest of hope,to be,delivered
strongest of faith golden envisioned.....
Polluted waters clouded vision
deluded cause create division
obtrusive force denies cohesion
abusive nature cries are legion
Assimilation is their call
diversification is the all......
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Jul 18, 2013
 

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Our problem has never been not knowing what we should do. Our problem has always been that we lack the ability to do what we should do.....

the net...:O)
Pastor Dale Lee McFarland

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Jul 18, 2013
 

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True love is anything goes.
Miami Nice

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Jul 20, 2013
 

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steve wrote:
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Get over it!! U will never be more than what u r now!
Actually I've seen that you contribute very little here, you show no outward signs of being much of an achiever or of being upwardly mobile yourself, steve.

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Jul 20, 2013
 

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Relationships are like crystals, you don't realize how much you love it untill it breaks.....
U R Reeeeeeeee

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Jul 21, 2013
 

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Del Cuatro wrote:
You jet-set go getter
You've been around the world
And back again
Dipping your fingers
In the international
Platter du jour
With au jus
A la carte
Materialistic society
chases you from airport
to airport as if you were
Carmen Santiego,
running from the
skeletons in your
closet cum backpack
Skeletons called
privileged upbringing
and western society
You can't get away
but you can keep running
Tokyo, Manila, Rome
Brisbane, Amsterdam, Shanghai
You've seen the worst life has to offer
Brown skin with black soles
Beds made from cardboard
Makeshift toilets in flower pots
that divide four lane highways
Hanoi, New Delhi, Cork
Luxor, Kathmandu, the Hague
You've seen a three thousand dollar sweater
Paid a dollar for an oil massage
Haggled over carpets you couldn't possibly carry with you
and made friends with people who
couldn't possibly understand you.
Burning optimism at both ends
you propel yourself across bridges
leaving the heat to burn the timbres
Gotta keep moving because
in those long breaks between destinations,
Receiving free socks in fuselage
Rattling in the cage of a jeepney
Sleeping on sailors' cots
the haunting creeps in and tries to get you.
tries to pry apart
the crevices in your grey matter.
Hong Kong, Nairobi, Seoul
Bangkok, Athens, Oslo
Gotta keep moving.
Gotta keep moving because
if you touch down in enough airports
ride enough boats
see enough poverty
taste enough strange foods
somewhere you'll find meaning,
right?
Somewhere,
between slurps of noodles in a soba shack
between the meaty ends of a blood pudding
you'll taste your own blood
find solutions to the doubts,
like beggars in Dakar,
that never leave your heels,
Right?
Right?
Ported.

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Jul 21, 2013
 

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how do you move on??When your heart realizes and understands that there is no turning back......

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#7968
Jul 21, 2013
 
Juan del Cuatro wrote:
this was almost a love poem
when you smile,
the universe has multiple orgasms.
when you laugh,
the moonlight sticks to your teeth.
when you cry,
birds fall dead from the electrical lines.
when you blink,
it feels like a cloud has momentarily
blocked out the sun.
but, when you tap your pen on the table like that,
the entire Earth and I would like to bathe you
in flames.
~DeVine.
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Jul 21, 2013
 

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Pray for those that hurt you. It may not be easy at first, but make the choice and stick with it, and God will take care of the rest...

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#7973
Jul 21, 2013
 
Juan del Cuatro wrote:
You are lawyering through desert
thirsting for a wetter mystery
in a sea of wet mysteries
the parched fun of your mouth
a lure to the slain blue room
where your earring or platform or ability
to fuck for longer than eight minutes
lives sans love or even contempt
but for the hollow and humorous [afterglow]
rotty grotto of mirth, the miraculous
mischief of children who refuse to stop
laughing and hitting each other
in the staving off of fog and boredom.
The blue debut was not savaged
by vowels or valentines, only the brief
malpractice of teeth and sheets murdered by
a love of whiplash / our Achilles heel.
What impossible sea
blue heart caught us, sharked us
cast us back into dark waters
still hooked and bleeding from the mouth?
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#7976
Jul 21, 2013
 
Juan del Cuatro wrote:
"CIRCE."
The f uck you in me crosses the street to
avert the f uck you in you. This f uck you
subverted gnaws the hasp of my liking you
until I don’t really like you and woe
is we. The former us in me would like
to be jettisoned too or at least have
a deck to leap from. The you I knew sticks
around in spite of the editions luck
would have of me and you. My memory
is quite specific: f ucking you in the
garden at night at last. F ucking you-me
Edenic with no future like the present.
A good fuck you to give fucking some love
too, looking back when it hasn’t happened yet.
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#7977
Jul 21, 2013
 
Juan del Cuatro wrote:
"DEEPER PLAY."
Say this sign’s
shorting out,
a string of sparks,
hot
illuminated falling.
Did I hang it there?
It was the texture
and experience of anyone
smoldering over the forge / forgery / creationfog
hovering / a cursor / casting
weird / trochaic / tetrameter-wise
done and / done and / not un / undone
redemptive as a billboard.
Forward motion—
that’s me!
Everything moves
<< e.g., the blogosphere >>
until the lights come on—
you missed it!
There are users / downloaders
pain-bodies
wanting to be seen
in repetition / rituals of violence
when I am the sunny sleeping
Australian Guy
watched
by watchers of pain-bodies.
Monitor on.
Now I’m the naked man
obscured by ice cream,
vanilla interloper
monitoring sensation:
cement wedding cake
lit << desired >> from within / eaten down to rebar
monologing to collective thought / crowd
cheering a stage:
End of Days!
The way they counted
then went to seed?
Or eminent domain
either side of impermanence
finding an organizing passion
believing I still prefer
love / foraging the ready fridge
mockingbird
sick of the mock / the tune
unspooling
at the pulled dollstring / dolly-soul
leaking iron and piss,
spark catching in wheel wells
light passing
out of range?
Time’s finishing
the life on this plate again
time makes a deliberate
strategy of / moving forward
into live editing of / marrying
the forgery of forward—
so it appears
I’m continuum with antennae
wireless sandwich print receipt again
for red vase found in recycling and chandelier
etched by finger on the frost
I’m a site human resourced to
refake / reword / process
ephemeral installation
cranking out identifying finites
up they’ll burn
Reported.

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#7979
Jul 21, 2013
 
Juan del Cuatro wrote:
"LETTER TO THE DARK MIRROR."
"I'm getting to know you
one orifice at a time,"
you said, after we'd talked long
distance about sex and voyeurism.
I knew our relationship would always
be virtual. No magical bewitching
of twisted syllables and sheets woven
into replicas of our muscles.
No poppy-slaughter orgasm.
But it didn't matter. I was going for
the Audrey Hepburn Gestalt. Gaunt,
but never naked, stripped of Givenchy
with her wrists tied to a bedpost.
You thought you could ransom my desire
over the telephone?
My hearing's too good for that.
These days I sit for hours, watch the swan
drag his dark mirror behind him.
Learn to eat what I'm handed.
Last summer before I met you, I rode in the ambulance and felt the centrifugal force of my life wanting to re-enter my body.
Sorrow, after all, being commonplace,
I didn't know I'd have to let the arrows go.
~DeVine.
Reported.

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