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Question Adrian..WHAT CAME FIRST..The SEX..or The POETRY??

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Princess Hey wrote:
Too whom this may concern....let me refresh your memory..I was the one who took your bullsh!t.I was the one who actually cared for you.I was the one who stuck around even when everyone told me to leave.i was the one who loved you even when you gave me every reason not to.i also was the one who was there for you when no one else was..dont you ever forget that...
Hey there Princess,
I just want to say that as new as I am to Offbeat I've read enough and befriended enough posters to know that these ladies are spot on. Rarely do you know what you're actually getting. It's fun if you let it only go that far. As one who wears their too trustful heart on their sleeve I have already been hurt by lies but I am learning to be tough. Please take care, you're a good soul.

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One of the worst feelings in the world is loving what you can't have and having what you don't love.

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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how about this? i wrote this when my friend died from a heroin overdose, i wanted to reader to understand the effects of the stuff, so here i go.

So now little man, youíve grown tired of grass
All that damn acid, that cocaine and hash
And someone pretending that he is your friend,
Said ďIíve introduced you to Miss HeroinĒ.
Well honey, before you start fooling with me
Just let me tell you of how it will be.
For I will seduce you and make you my slave,
Believe me Iíve sent stronger men to the grave.
You think you could never become a disgrace,
And end up addicted to poppy seed waste.
You start experimenting one afternoon,
And end asleep in my arms very soon.
Then once I have entered deep in your veins,
The craving will drive you nearly insane.
Youíll need lots of money as you have been told,
For darling Iím more expensive than gold.
Youíll swindle your mother, just for a buck,
And turn into someone whoís vile and corrupt.
Youíll mug and youíll steal for the narcotic charms,
Then feel so content when Iím in your arms.
Then youíll realise the monster inside you has grown,
And youíll solemnly swear to leave me alone.
But if you think that itís easy and youíve got the knack,
Then sweetie, try getting me off your back.
The vomit, the cramps, your guts in a knot,
The jangling nerves screaming for just one more shot.
The hot chill, the cold sweat, the withdrawal pains,
Can only be sawed by my white little grains.
So now you return (just as I foretold),
And I know that youíll give me your body and soul.
Youíll give me your morals, your conscience, your heart,
And now you are mine till death do us part!

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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i win, A+

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Dante,
That was very telling. You told your story well. Sad...

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May 14, 2013
 
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Dante,
That was very telling. You told your story well. Sad...
thanks baby girl <3

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ADRIAN DeVINE wrote:
You dress me with the blackness of your insides living behind your frigid paleness.
You see, I am trapped inside of the gothic castles of your aura.
I am the colorfully colorless ambience that follows you constant and results in your moods.
this is where i survive.
If only you knew the spicy saffron that I smoke that lifts your soul to the heaviness of your dreams-
those godforsaken dreams.
If only you bathed with me in your vampyric black crimsons when your soul felt thirsty.
But when i made love to you in your hidden emeralds,
I trembled inside of your vulva as beautiful death.
completely oblivious as you were, forlorn is what your somber beauty has made me.
I am the sheer blues and grays that fall out of those eyes when you cry,
when we cry.
You are a dark heaven that I breath.
And like the Spanish guitar captivating the worthy souls,
I play the remedy strings when your heart sings the songs of its woes.
When your cheeks kiss the sun and back,
I dance around you and laugh colors of the sky
giving birth to a smile only to
settle it quietly upon your heart
so that it may not disrupt its beating.
Like the earth pulling us to its center,
The heaviness of your black,
Chains me to your orbit.
I only know of your freedom.
Only You.
If you can only hear me,
if you only understood this slave,
I would ask of you to
rest me easily on the surface of the
river of flying white dandelions
And send me adrift towards the skyline
so that i may drink the fire of the sun.
SHUT UP I WIN A+

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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Colorado Chick wrote:
Question Adrian..WHAT CAME FIRST..The SEX..or The POETRY??
*ba dum tiss*

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ADRIAN DeVINE why you didn't make a move.

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Adrian...Sooooo DEEP...your thoughts... they keep you from TRULY living your LIFE...ALWAYS having your nose to the Grind stone OR in books... BREAK FREE..Climb a Tree and Tarzan YELL...BE FREE...of the strangulation of WORDS!!..Be a. ACTION FIGURE!!
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Oh, leave him alone...he's better off there. He with the one he loves the most..himself.

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Sweetie-Pie wrote:
Oh, leave him alone...he's better off there. He with the one he loves the most..himself.
WHOA..best not let him hear ya say that..THEM ARE "FIGHTIN' WORDS" ..
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Colorado Chick wrote:
<quoted text> WHOA..best not let him hear ya say that..THEM ARE "FIGHTIN' WORDS" ..
Well, he can do that with himself, too. I don't give a F#%K.

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ADRIAN DeVINE wrote:
Warm water waiting,
a sea of emotion eagerly teeming with elation.
My heart bends with the winds of destruction, while my soul mends it again.
This feeling is a plague,
only the best of us know it.
My stomach feels like a drum,
and they are my drummer.
This isn't love, not even close.
What I describe is much worse, infatuation... obsession.
You put yourself out there, only to be knocked back down again.
Get up and get back on the horse they say,
but with a face full of dirt you aren't convinced they understand.
HOT TUB TIME... NEKKID Optional...

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Sweetie-Pie wrote:
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Well, he can do that with himself, too. I don't give a F#%K.
Sweetie-Pie...DID Adrian Spurn You???...Is that WHY you are sooooo defensive???
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Colorado Chick wrote:
<quoted text> Sweetie-Pie...DID Adrian Spurn You???...Is that WHY you are sooooo defensive???
Oh, CC, please..just STFU.

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I could have been in love
but the "ultimatum" didn't set well with me
so I made the choice to leave.
You're not the boss of me
but you could have been.....
Oh God, you could have been.

“Dream A Little Dream,...”

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Sorrow comes and goes in life,
Tears come in the eyes.
When we are very alone,
Nobody is with us.
Life seems to be very lonely,
Sometimes sorrow makes us laugh,
Sometimes sorrow makes us weep.
When there is no happiness in life,
Sorrow makes our life very restless,
There are a few moments of happiness.
We have to accept all that,
If sorrow comes into our life makes us very sad.

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