“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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#6968 May 13, 2013
how about this? i wrote this when my friend died from a heroin overdose, i wanted to reader to understand the effects of the stuff, so here i go.

So now little man, youíve grown tired of grass
All that damn acid, that cocaine and hash
And someone pretending that he is your friend,
Said ďIíve introduced you to Miss HeroinĒ.
Well honey, before you start fooling with me
Just let me tell you of how it will be.
For I will seduce you and make you my slave,
Believe me Iíve sent stronger men to the grave.
You think you could never become a disgrace,
And end up addicted to poppy seed waste.
You start experimenting one afternoon,
And end asleep in my arms very soon.
Then once I have entered deep in your veins,
The craving will drive you nearly insane.
Youíll need lots of money as you have been told,
For darling Iím more expensive than gold.
Youíll swindle your mother, just for a buck,
And turn into someone whoís vile and corrupt.
Youíll mug and youíll steal for the narcotic charms,
Then feel so content when Iím in your arms.
Then youíll realise the monster inside you has grown,
And youíll solemnly swear to leave me alone.
But if you think that itís easy and youíve got the knack,
Then sweetie, try getting me off your back.
The vomit, the cramps, your guts in a knot,
The jangling nerves screaming for just one more shot.
The hot chill, the cold sweat, the withdrawal pains,
Can only be sawed by my white little grains.
So now you return (just as I foretold),
And I know that youíll give me your body and soul.
Youíll give me your morals, your conscience, your heart,
And now you are mine till death do us part!

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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#6969 May 13, 2013
i win, A+

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#6970 May 13, 2013
Dante,
That was very telling. You told your story well. Sad...

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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#6971 May 14, 2013
Fairy Verte wrote:
Dante,
That was very telling. You told your story well. Sad...
thanks baby girl <3

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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#6974 May 14, 2013
ADRIAN DeVINE wrote:
You dress me with the blackness of your insides living behind your frigid paleness.
You see, I am trapped inside of the gothic castles of your aura.
I am the colorfully colorless ambience that follows you constant and results in your moods.
this is where i survive.
If only you knew the spicy saffron that I smoke that lifts your soul to the heaviness of your dreams-
those godforsaken dreams.
If only you bathed with me in your vampyric black crimsons when your soul felt thirsty.
But when i made love to you in your hidden emeralds,
I trembled inside of your vulva as beautiful death.
completely oblivious as you were, forlorn is what your somber beauty has made me.
I am the sheer blues and grays that fall out of those eyes when you cry,
when we cry.
You are a dark heaven that I breath.
And like the Spanish guitar captivating the worthy souls,
I play the remedy strings when your heart sings the songs of its woes.
When your cheeks kiss the sun and back,
I dance around you and laugh colors of the sky
giving birth to a smile only to
settle it quietly upon your heart
so that it may not disrupt its beating.
Like the earth pulling us to its center,
The heaviness of your black,
Chains me to your orbit.
I only know of your freedom.
Only You.
If you can only hear me,
if you only understood this slave,
I would ask of you to
rest me easily on the surface of the
river of flying white dandelions
And send me adrift towards the skyline
so that i may drink the fire of the sun.
SHUT UP I WIN A+

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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#6989 May 14, 2013
Colorado Chick wrote:
Question Adrian..WHAT CAME FIRST..The SEX..or The POETRY??
*ba dum tiss*

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#6995 May 14, 2013
ADRIAN DeVINE why you didn't make a move.

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Rockin' USA ;)

#6998 May 14, 2013
Adrian...Sooooo DEEP...your thoughts... they keep you from TRULY living your LIFE...ALWAYS having your nose to the Grind stone OR in books... BREAK FREE..Climb a Tree and Tarzan YELL...BE FREE...of the strangulation of WORDS!!..Be a. ACTION FIGURE!!
Sweetie-Pie

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#6999 May 14, 2013
Oh, leave him alone...he's better off there. He with the one he loves the most..himself.

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#7002 May 14, 2013
Sweetie-Pie wrote:
Oh, leave him alone...he's better off there. He with the one he loves the most..himself.
WHOA..best not let him hear ya say that..THEM ARE "FIGHTIN' WORDS" ..
Sweetie-Pie

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#7003 May 14, 2013
Colorado Chick wrote:
<quoted text> WHOA..best not let him hear ya say that..THEM ARE "FIGHTIN' WORDS" ..
Well, he can do that with himself, too. I don't give a F#%K.

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#7005 May 14, 2013
ADRIAN DeVINE wrote:
Warm water waiting,
a sea of emotion eagerly teeming with elation.
My heart bends with the winds of destruction, while my soul mends it again.
This feeling is a plague,
only the best of us know it.
My stomach feels like a drum,
and they are my drummer.
This isn't love, not even close.
What I describe is much worse, infatuation... obsession.
You put yourself out there, only to be knocked back down again.
Get up and get back on the horse they say,
but with a face full of dirt you aren't convinced they understand.
HOT TUB TIME... NEKKID Optional...

“ROCK ON ROCKERS!!”

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#7006 May 14, 2013
Sweetie-Pie wrote:
<quoted text>
Well, he can do that with himself, too. I don't give a F#%K.
Sweetie-Pie...DID Adrian Spurn You???...Is that WHY you are sooooo defensive???
Sweetie-Pie

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#7008 May 14, 2013
Colorado Chick wrote:
<quoted text> Sweetie-Pie...DID Adrian Spurn You???...Is that WHY you are sooooo defensive???
Oh, CC, please..just STFU.

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#7023 May 15, 2013
I could have been in love
but the "ultimatum" didn't set well with me
so I made the choice to leave.
You're not the boss of me
but you could have been.....
Oh God, you could have been.

“From Dusk To Dawn,...”

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#7026 May 15, 2013
Sorrow comes and goes in life,
Tears come in the eyes.
When we are very alone,
Nobody is with us.
Life seems to be very lonely,
Sometimes sorrow makes us laugh,
Sometimes sorrow makes us weep.
When there is no happiness in life,
Sorrow makes our life very restless,
There are a few moments of happiness.
We have to accept all that,
If sorrow comes into our life makes us very sad.

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#7027 May 15, 2013
oh bull shyte.
say what you mean mean what you say.
things don't have to be nearly as complicated as you make them.
that coin will just have to spin...

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#7028 May 15, 2013
Sorry, my reply was to follow this, not you, cjt12 :)
ADRIAN DeVINE wrote:
What is it to deserve another?
Is it a mere vow,
the price of a coveted soul?
Nothing can be so simple,
so dangerously complex,
so contrary,
as puppy love.
I'm standing at the crossroads.
A perfection of ultimatum,
A decision to be made.
I feel regret and remorse,
To choose is to leave one behind.
Flip a coin, heads or tails,
In the air I'll decide.
Don't go with the first,
For the second wouldn't exist.
Debating with possibilities,
Conflicting attractions.
Pulling me towards one.
Pushing towards the other.
Epiphany.
What if I never choose?
To stay here in the plus.
The road less traveled.
The coin lands on its rim,
An everlasting spin.
oh bull shyte.
say what you mean mean what you say.
things don't have to be nearly as complicated as you make them.
that coin will just have to spin

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#7029 May 15, 2013
cjt12 wrote:
Sorrow comes and goes in life,
Tears come in the eyes.
When we are very alone,
Nobody is with us.
Life seems to be very lonely,
Sometimes sorrow makes us laugh,
Sometimes sorrow makes us weep.
When there is no happiness in life,
Sorrow makes our life very restless,
There are a few moments of happiness.
We have to accept all that,
If sorrow comes into our life makes us very sad.
Oh cjt12, this is so true. The dream chamber is but a click away...

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#7032 May 15, 2013
I'm hurt
Hot, cold, hot, cold
I cry
I didn't make the grade

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