JUST SEX and POETRY

Since: Feb 13

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#6912 May 9, 2013
I have the sweetest love hangover
I don't want to get over....

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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#6913 May 9, 2013
Fairy Verte wrote:
I have the sweetest love hangover
I don't want to get over....
That's cute

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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#6915 May 9, 2013
AdrianDeVine wrote:
<quoted text>Don't waste your time. The writer you call "brilliant" is nothing but a thief. All of the peoms he posts are plagiarized. Don't tell him where you post your work, he'll steal yours, too.
Thanks :)
Then

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#6916 May 9, 2013
ADRIAN DeVINE wrote:
I am not my sister!
Why the hell are you wearing her clothes????

Since: Feb 13

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#6926 May 11, 2013
ADRIAN DeVINE wrote:
It wasn’t about them, you, or me
knowing what happened under Our sun roof
and how I could see the moonlight in your tears
while trying to fix everything with a few words.
It wasn’t about trust, pain or lying.
Trust was already gone, never to return
to us as we mouthed the lies in our hearts.
Lies our lips had practiced so very well.
It wasn’t about trying to hurt you
It was about saving you from me
It wasn’t about trying to hurt you
It was about saving you from me
It was the growing decadence, and the thought of Hell
that hung from the cobwebs in hot movie theaters,
the heat tormenting my soul like an ageless fire.
It was a catharsis, my surrender to nature
though we both cried on different shoulders
and older sisters could never compare.
It was the fail-safe mistake, my last ditch effort
where I ruined everything, keeping you blameless,
only to sacrifice Us for You
It was the end of something perfect
It wasn’t supposed to end like this
It was the end of something perfect
It wasn’t supposed to end like this
you are wanted.
nothing can change that
don't shield her for she does not deserve it
she always knew it would be this way.
there is a wound in her heart
her spirit is draining away
but love is there still

Since: Feb 13

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#6928 May 11, 2013
ADRIAN DeVINE wrote:
<quoted text>
Perhaps, if you only knew the real reason, about who it is, and why I've been so silent, you might understand and show me a little more compassionate empathy......just saying,..... but, hey don't ask for any more details, as they will not be forthcoming.
Warm Regards,
DeVine.
Forgive me, I am so very sorry. It was meant for another person and I butted right in....

Since: Feb 13

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#6934 May 11, 2013
ADRIAN DeVINE wrote:
<quoted text>
Thank you for the apology, but really it was not at all necessary.....however, I'm also sorry because I do not understand the last sentence of your message ?
It doesn't matter now.

“Want A Friend, Be One”

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Since: Mar 12

Valentines Day coming Soon

#6955 May 13, 2013
Too whom this may concern....let me refresh your memory..I was the one who took your bullsh!t.I was the one who actually cared for you.I was the one who stuck around even when everyone told me to leave.i was the one who loved you even when you gave me every reason not to.i also was the one who was there for you when no one else was..dont you ever forget that...
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#6956 May 13, 2013
Hey Princess...the bottom line is..

Some people are just not worth the breath of air it takes to say their name. People don't change. They just find new ways to lie to you.

“ROCK ON ROCKERS!!”

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Since: Mar 11

Rockin' USA ;)

#6957 May 13, 2013
Sweetie-Pie wrote:
Hey Princess...the bottom line is..
Some people are just not worth the breath of air it takes to say their name. People don't change. They just find new ways to lie to you.
GOT THAT FREAKIN' RIGHT.. Sweetie Pie!!.. Sometimes I WONDER.. WHO Would treat you WELL??....LIVE up to your expectations??.. Take care of you to your standards??.. WHO would give you their UNDIVIDED attention??.. WHO would LOVE you for WHO you really are inside??... Hmmm...THE BOTTOM LINE is YOU!!!...YOU would do ALL the above.. NEVER allowing YOURSELF to go without.. YOU are the PERFECT. PAL, SPOUSE, SISTER, LOVER and PLAYMATE..WHY PUT UP..with LIARS!!..WHO only make YOU CRY and GET angry at yourself BECAUSE you TRUSTED THEM??...NAH, I rather convince MYSELF that I can STREAK through the Mall.. UN-NOTICED!!!.. If I DO get caught..I only have to ANSWER to Me, Myself and I...WHY THE FREAK did I TEMPT myself,??.. Hmmm, these Orange Jumpers sure have a lot of room...THIS JAIL had NO FASHION SENSE!!!
..

“ROCK ON ROCKERS!!”

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Rockin' USA ;)

#6958 May 13, 2013
Question Adrian..WHAT CAME FIRST..The SEX..or The POETRY??

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#6959 May 13, 2013
Princess Hey wrote:
Too whom this may concern....let me refresh your memory..I was the one who took your bullsh!t.I was the one who actually cared for you.I was the one who stuck around even when everyone told me to leave.i was the one who loved you even when you gave me every reason not to.i also was the one who was there for you when no one else was..dont you ever forget that...
Hey there Princess,
I just want to say that as new as I am to Offbeat I've read enough and befriended enough posters to know that these ladies are spot on. Rarely do you know what you're actually getting. It's fun if you let it only go that far. As one who wears their too trustful heart on their sleeve I have already been hurt by lies but I am learning to be tough. Please take care, you're a good soul.

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#6963 May 13, 2013
yes 1220
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#6964 May 13, 2013
One of the worst feelings in the world is loving what you can't have and having what you don't love.

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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#6968 May 13, 2013
how about this? i wrote this when my friend died from a heroin overdose, i wanted to reader to understand the effects of the stuff, so here i go.

So now little man, you’ve grown tired of grass
All that damn acid, that cocaine and hash
And someone pretending that he is your friend,
Said “I’ve introduced you to Miss Heroin”.
Well honey, before you start fooling with me
Just let me tell you of how it will be.
For I will seduce you and make you my slave,
Believe me I’ve sent stronger men to the grave.
You think you could never become a disgrace,
And end up addicted to poppy seed waste.
You start experimenting one afternoon,
And end asleep in my arms very soon.
Then once I have entered deep in your veins,
The craving will drive you nearly insane.
You’ll need lots of money as you have been told,
For darling I’m more expensive than gold.
You’ll swindle your mother, just for a buck,
And turn into someone who’s vile and corrupt.
You’ll mug and you’ll steal for the narcotic charms,
Then feel so content when I’m in your arms.
Then you’ll realise the monster inside you has grown,
And you’ll solemnly swear to leave me alone.
But if you think that it’s easy and you’ve got the knack,
Then sweetie, try getting me off your back.
The vomit, the cramps, your guts in a knot,
The jangling nerves screaming for just one more shot.
The hot chill, the cold sweat, the withdrawal pains,
Can only be sawed by my white little grains.
So now you return (just as I foretold),
And I know that you’ll give me your body and soul.
You’ll give me your morals, your conscience, your heart,
And now you are mine till death do us part!

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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#6969 May 13, 2013
i win, A+

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#6970 May 13, 2013
Dante,
That was very telling. You told your story well. Sad...

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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#6971 May 14, 2013
Fairy Verte wrote:
Dante,
That was very telling. You told your story well. Sad...
thanks baby girl <3

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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#6974 May 14, 2013
ADRIAN DeVINE wrote:
You dress me with the blackness of your insides living behind your frigid paleness.
You see, I am trapped inside of the gothic castles of your aura.
I am the colorfully colorless ambience that follows you constant and results in your moods.
this is where i survive.
If only you knew the spicy saffron that I smoke that lifts your soul to the heaviness of your dreams-
those godforsaken dreams.
If only you bathed with me in your vampyric black crimsons when your soul felt thirsty.
But when i made love to you in your hidden emeralds,
I trembled inside of your vulva as beautiful death.
completely oblivious as you were, forlorn is what your somber beauty has made me.
I am the sheer blues and grays that fall out of those eyes when you cry,
when we cry.
You are a dark heaven that I breath.
And like the Spanish guitar captivating the worthy souls,
I play the remedy strings when your heart sings the songs of its woes.
When your cheeks kiss the sun and back,
I dance around you and laugh colors of the sky
giving birth to a smile only to
settle it quietly upon your heart
so that it may not disrupt its beating.
Like the earth pulling us to its center,
The heaviness of your black,
Chains me to your orbit.
I only know of your freedom.
Only You.
If you can only hear me,
if you only understood this slave,
I would ask of you to
rest me easily on the surface of the
river of flying white dandelions
And send me adrift towards the skyline
so that i may drink the fire of the sun.
SHUT UP I WIN A+

“a man chooses, a slave obeys.”

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#6989 May 14, 2013
Colorado Chick wrote:
Question Adrian..WHAT CAME FIRST..The SEX..or The POETRY??
*ba dum tiss*

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