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"Come on my heart, cruel and insensible soul,
My darling tiger, beast with indolent airs;
I want to plunge for hours my trembling fingers
In your thick and heavy mane;

In your petticoats filled with your perfume
To bury my aching head,
And breathe, like a faded flower,
The sweet taste of my dead love.

I want to sleep, to sleep and not to live,
In a sleep as soft as death,
I shall cover with remorseless kisses
Your body beautifully polished as copper.

To swallow my appeased sobbing
I need only the abyss of your bed;
A powerful oblivion lives on your lips,
And all Lethe flows in your kisses.

I shall obey, as though predestined,
My destiny, that is now my delight;
Submissive martyr, innocent damned one,
My ardor inflames my torture,

And I shall suck, to drown my bitterness
The nepenthe and the good hemlock,
On the lovely tips of those jutting breasts
Which have never imprisoned love."
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The many things that happen, the many forms that life takes on, are of an ephemeral nature. They are all fleeting. Things, bodies and egos, events, situations, thoughts, emotions, desires, ambitions, fears, drama … they come, pretending to be all-important, and before you know it they are gone, dissolved into the no-thingness out of which they came. Were they ever real? Were they ever more than a dream, the dream of form?”

“We are a lonely people, a morbid, crazed herd thrashing about in a zealous frenzy, trying to forget that we are not what we think we are, not really united, not really devoted to one another, not really listening, not really anything, just digits shuffled about by some unseen hand in a calculation which doesn’t concern us.”

“Question your thoughts.
Question your stories.
Question your assumptions.
Question your opinions.
Question your conclusions.
Question them all into utter emptiness,
stillness and joy.
The keys to freedom are in your hands.
Use them.”
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Colorado Chick wrote:
<quoted text>. WHAT A FREAKIN' AZZWIPE ASSUMPTION, DUDE!! Adrian had many alias names..BUT ONE thing STANDS out..HIS Passion for Poetry. Whether it is taken from long dead poets OR his own work...HE is SHARING..the Beauty of Ages past and of the present. Reading his prose, transports you to a time where all was pristine and pure..NEVER letting the door cracked for Hatred to seep through...His exquisite taste of words, sensually placed to captivate your very being...just as a Man's tender caress on a Woman's breast... touches your inner soul of delight... YOU ROCK, Adrian!!
Thank you honey, you know I love you.....

I believe in the worlds inside your mind.
I know how it feels to want to be everywhere at once-
all around the world on every level and
I know it's exhausting, being.

It feels as though you are
everywhere except your own body.

Your soul can't hear itself.

But when you are
in your life
present in your body and
your soul knows your mind
and the worlds there
and you are here
you know this existence is fascinating.

It won't stop compelling you to open your eyes.
this Is what it means to live?

I'm just trying to ride the waves I'm given.

Welcome family, if you need anything just ask.

. my philosophy.

. demandez-moi quelque chose

CC I think that you're very beautiful.

~Adrian DeVine.

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Colorado Chick wrote:
<quoted text>. WHAT A FREAKIN' AZZWIPE ASSUMPTION, DUDE!! Adrian had many alias names..BUT ONE thing STANDS out..HIS Passion for Poetry. Whether it is taken from long dead poets OR his own work...HE is SHARING..the Beauty of Ages past and of the present. Reading his prose, transports you to a time where all was pristine and pure..NEVER letting the door cracked for Hatred to seep through...His exquisite taste of words, sensually placed to captivate your very being...just as a Man's tender caress on a Woman's breast... touches your inner soul of delight... YOU ROCK, Adrian!!
If you think Addnothing has ever had any poetry you are truly the azzwipe..

here ya go
http://books.google.com/books...
its last works..

it is called plagiarism...

if it bothered to give source of its cut & paste I would care not...but if you believe it writes anything...you are a fool.
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NB:-If you use a sprat to catch a mackerel, you make a small expenditure or take a small risk in the hope of a much greater gain....

IT WORKS ALL THE TIME

Hey Einstein, where did I say I wrote it ?

I NEVER DID.......

"Come into my parlour said the spider to the fly.........and in your case, you're the blow-fly."
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The ego says,‘I shouldn’t have to suffer,’ and that thought makes you suffer so much more.

It is a distortion of the truth, which is always paradoxical.

The truth is that you need to say yes to suffering before you can transcend it.

~Eckhart Tolle

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She was not tall, but so boldly erect was her slim figure that she looked it…She danced, she spun, she whirled on an old Persian carpet thrown carelessly down at her feet, and each time she spun and her radiant face passed in front, her great black eyes flashed lightning.

Around her, all eyes were fixed and all mouths agape; and as she danced, to the drumming of the tambourine she held above her head in her two pure, round arms, slender, pale, quick as a wasp, with her golden, unpleated bodice, her billowing, brightly colored dress, her bare shoulders, her slender legs, uncovered now and again by her skirt, her black hair, her fiery eyes, she was indeed a supernatural creature.

Truly thought Gringoire, it’s a salamander, a nymph, a goddess, a bacchante from Mount Menelaus.

At that moment, one of the salamander’s plaits of hair came down and a yellow copper coin that had been fixed to it rolled to the ground.

Ha, no it’s not,

he said, it’s a gypsy girl!

All illusion had vanished.

She began dancing again.
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justaguess wrote:
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If you think Addnothing has ever had any poetry you are truly the azzwipe..
here ya go
http://books.google.com/books...
its last works..
it is called plagiarism...
if it bothered to give source of its cut & paste I would care not...but if you believe it writes anything...you are a fool.
More and more frequently the edges
of me dissolve and I become
a wish to assimilate the world, including
you, if possible through the skin
like a cool plant’s tricks with oxygen
and live by a harmless green burning.

I would not consume
you or ever
finish, you would still be there
surrounding me, complete
as the air.

Unfortunately I don’t have leaves.
Instead I have eyes
and teeth and other non-green
things which rule out osmosis.
So be careful, I mean it,
I give you fair warning:

This kind of hunger draws
everything into its own
space; nor can we
talk it all over, have a calm
rational discussion.

There is no reason for this, only
a starved dog’s logic about bones.
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Each heart has its haunted chamber,
Where the silent moonlight falls!
On the floor are mysterious footsteps,
There are whispers along the walls!

And mine at times is haunted
By phantoms of the Past
As motionless as shadows
By the silent moonlight cast.

A form sits by the window,
That is not seen by day,
For as soon as the dawn approaches
It vanishes away.

It sits there in the moonlight
Itself as pale and still,
And points with its airy finger
Across the window-sill.

Without before the window,
There stands a gloomy pine,
Whose boughs wave upward and downward
As wave these thoughts of mine.

And underneath its branches
Is the grave of a little child,
Who died upon life’s threshold,
And never wept nor smiled.

What are ye, O pallid phantoms!
That haunt my troubled brain?
That vanish when day approaches,
And at night return again?

What are ye, O pallid phantoms!
But the statues without breath,
That stand on the bridge overarching
The silent river of death?

~Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

(happy now?)

saves you looking, huh ?

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justaguess wrote:
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If you think Addnothing has ever had any poetry you are truly the azzwipe..
here ya go
http://books.google.com/books...
its last works..
it is called plagiarism...
if it bothered to give source of its cut & paste I would care not...but if you believe it writes anything...you are a fool.
justaguess...you got to be embarrassed to even think you have a say.
PesTrish

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It just amazes me to see all the different story lines out here at OFFBEAT and TOPIX forums.

So much history and even new comers joining the shows. I so badly want to write about some of the stories.

I'll admit I find Adrian to be the most interesting story and mystery out here.
Why do they all gang up on Adrian?
How many woman has this man charmed and then disposed of? How much of this is actually his own words?

What happened to break up all the so called friendships out here and cliques?

These are more entertaining than any Soap I ever watched.

“New & Improved..”

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PROFILE DeVINE wrote:
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More and more frequently the edges
of me dissolve and I become
a wish to assimilate the world, including
you, if possible through the skin
like a cool plant’s tricks with oxygen
and live by a harmless green burning.
I would not consume
you or ever
finish, you would still be there
surrounding me, complete
as the air.
Unfortunately I don’t have leaves.
Instead I have eyes
and teeth and other non-green
things which rule out osmosis.
So be careful, I mean it,
I give you fair warning:
This kind of hunger draws
everything into its own
space; nor can we
talk it all over, have a calm
rational discussion.
There is no reason for this, only
a starved dog’s logic about bones.
And even when assaulted with the truth you come at me with words of M Atwood...not even your own...

a shadow looks at you and says f&ck that..!

without even giving her credit..you should change your name to' Add Drain the Divine'..I don't believe you could possibly be more of a loser.

give your very air to someone that lives.

“New & Improved..”

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Roxie Darling wrote:
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justaguess...you got to be embarrassed to even think you have a say.
when I am done laughing at your statement I'll send you a pm...wait for it..

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Roxie Darling wrote:
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justaguess...you got to be embarrassed to even think you have a say.
Enjoying yourself Trish?

My my my the little webs you weave..........
PesTrish

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Poision- Ivy wrote:
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Enjoying yourself Trish?
My my my the little webs you weave..........
Lol

Trish Trish Trish

No, that's not me either, but thanks for the laugh.
And

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Colorado Chick wrote:
<quoted text>. WHAT A FREAKIN' AZZWIPE ASSUMPTION, DUDE!! Adrian had many alias names..BUT ONE thing STANDS out..HIS Passion for Poetry. Whether it is taken from long dead poets OR his own work...HE is SHARING..the Beauty of Ages past and of the present. Reading his prose, transports you to a time where all was pristine and pure..NEVER letting the door cracked for Hatred to seep through...His exquisite taste of words, sensually placed to captivate your very being...just as a Man's tender caress on a Woman's breast... touches your inner soul of delight... YOU ROCK, Adrian!!
You're an idiot, lifeloser-PEST-Pie. Why don't you go the hell away like you keep promising to? And take your run-on sentences with you.

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PesTrish wrote:
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Lol
Trish Trish Trish
No, that's not me either, but thanks for the laugh.
Darling, how long shall you play the spider? Be careful how you play
for the scorpion stings my dear........

http://www.youtube.com/watch...

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Laura Beth wrote:
It just amazes me to see all the different story lines out here at OFFBEAT and TOPIX forums.
So much history and even new comers joining the shows. I so badly want to write about some of the stories.
I'll admit I find Adrian to be the most interesting story and mystery out here.
Why do they all gang up on Adrian?
How many woman has this man charmed and then disposed of? How much of this is actually his own words?
What happened to break up all the so called friendships out here and cliques?
These are more entertaining than any Soap I ever watched.
Ha Ha Ha .. Remember when you said you are Ireasonably ? Now you say yor not Check my Pulse ? You are one delusional freak ! Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha
I am Check Your Pulse LB. I am going to open my location. I am going to keep it open for you. I am not Trish nor is she me.

You are going to think what you want of course. If you would like additional information you may email me. I will be happy to send you my portfolio- Then you will have no doubt as to who I am.

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Furthermore,
I realize you and Trish have had an ongoing argument on Topix.
I do not have a nickle in that dime. That is between the two of you.
I came here at the prompting of a friend in the forum I am registered in. I did not come here to fight and bicker with anyone nor do I wish to now that I am here. I do not fit her behavioral profile....I will leave you to think about that one.

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If Trish has told any truth..... She is telling the truth when she is telling you that she is not me.

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