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ADRIAN DeVINE

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embers of coal wrote:
Not me for I
wonder lust of youth saw me pass
old and grey, wrinkled and bold
say but for one, she did a day
waded through ages, not find faded
glimpsed a time, a wisp
Lass, did she wonder
'i' for eye?
mind for thine??
Was the youth behind me.
certainly together
they saw the best in one another,
certainly at that first point,
they had each other’s
full support,
certainly in the beginning,
there was no one in mind but
the other and
that was all “right” and “good”
until that moment at which
the strength of one’s skill
came into question.

it doesn’t matter what the skill is,
doesn’t matter what was said---
what matters is that when things were
blissful, it went without saying that
there was encouragement,
there was someone in the world who would
stand by and go down with the ship if
necessary,
but unlike the movies,
the credits did not roll---rather,
wreckage began to form when honestly allowed
one of the two to admit that
the skill in question,
had been bested by another and
this burnt a scar into the very heart of the
loved one,
so deep that suddenly
everything else came into question, and
the sky began to fall.
ADRIAN DeVINE

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Jan 27, 2013
 

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Ch0rtle wrote:
that writer makes me hot
that writer makes me wet
kiss me here alongside my neck
worked your way down to my erect nipple
kiss my belly, kiss my ass, then kiss my
mouth before I pray you'll want to kiss me
down south (throbbing pink pearl)
hot and wet I anxiously await
your kiss and then I want to kiss
you all those places before you pound the every loven
horny right out of me and maybe one more kiss on my mouth
X
Ch0rtle now
salt in milk
crow among peacocks
thorn amidst flowers
is like doubt in relationship
it spoils it all........

you feed my goldenrod
that blooms in your mouth
those petals of pleasure
thick and sweet
swirl down my throat

sunny from the surface
twisting and felt
coating warmly
in a poem needed,
swallowed

again for our pleasure

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ADRIAN DeVINE wrote:
<quoted text>
salt in milk
crow among peacocks
thorn amidst flowers
is like doubt in relationship
it spoils it all........
you feed my goldenrod
that blooms in your mouth
those petals of pleasure
thick and sweet
swirl down my throat
sunny from the surface
twisting and felt
coating warmly
in a poem needed,
swallowed
again for our pleasure
You're quite the thief there...a drain...
Reported...
ADRIAN DeVINE

Brisbane, Australia

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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Ch0rtle wrote:
your every word I wish to devour
like the cum you produce over me you shower
lick it quick lick it with vigor
your words intoxicate quicker than liquer
sex and porn they are all new to me
I'll strip naked in the moonlight for you to see
ram me hard from behind if you wish
taste me like you're hungry and pretend I'm your favorite dish
touch me there poke me here both at the same time would be nice
suck me there like you are trying to swallow me and then if you would please f Uck me twice
your words turn me on
I want my man to talk to me this way
I want my man to be your a day
The vision of your shape
Connected

The feel of your pores
Narcotic

The smell of your body
Elixer

The sound of your ecstacy
Rhapsody

The taste of your skin
I feast upon you

This is our playground

There are no rules
There are no secrets
There is only...us.
ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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Sleepless, I lay yearning
Trapped inside your soul.
Aching to feel the slightest touch
A kiss so powerful, I lose control.
Feverish and unyielding
Crashing deep inside of you.
Passion igniting my heart
The flames all brand new.
Body trembles, moisture seeps
Tears faintly falling.
Bound together forever more
Spirits crawling.
Taste the depths of my being
Chase the moon tonight.
Dance among the stars with me
Hold me close, everything's just right.
Your eyes lost in mine
Sacred caresses capture me.
A hunger consumes my body
Sensuality set free.
Carry me forever deep
Hold on to tomorrow's dream.
Reach out to me, complete me
Your heart's fury redeemed.
ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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She Said.....

"Fill me,
Like the hand fills the glove,
Putting your fingers deep into the velvet that you wear so well.
Fill me,
Like the coffee fills the cup,
Pouring your hot love into my delicate china that you never will break.
Fill me,
Like nail fills the wood,
Driving your hard metal into my wall until the hole is stripped.
Fill me,
Like the fish fills the ocean,
Swimming inside my waters so delicately finding your home.
Empty me,
Like you empty the tub,
Draining my existence of all it’s wetness,
Until it pours right down the drain."
ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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In a long hot shower; with a grin you ask for some help
I’ll step in to wash your back and in my hands you will melt

I’ll turn you to face me, so a single spot I won’t miss
As our bodies press together, you’ll feel the hunger in my kiss

When I sink to my knees, with my lips I will trace
Every inch of my way to the most intimate place

One leg draped over my shoulder, caressing flesh from calf to waist
I will be lost in crafting your pleasure, and I will savor your taste

You’ll beg for release from the torture of my tongue
But I will take my sweet time as the night is still young

When I’ve teased you enough, I’ll look up through the steam
To see the look on your face in anticipation of your scream

When you lose control of your being, I’ll ease you to the tile
And watch your expression change to a weak and shaky smile

As the water starts to cool and clears up the steam
You’ll come back to your senses and know it wasn’t a dream

I’ll wrap a warm towel around you, hair still dripping wet
Then carry you to the bed. I’m not done with you yet
ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL

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The way you sway your hips
brings a smile to my lips
as you slowly undress
beneath her sweet caress.

I want so much to join
the finger at your loins
which taps out a tattoo
endearing her to you.

I fight against my chain
out in the pouring rain
while dry under the porch
your love burns like a torch.

I simply cannot share
the Sapphic love so rare
that animals take heed
of your feminine need.

I listen to your cry
rising up to the sky
and crashing down on me
because I am not free.

I want so much to touch
the one I love so much
but this night is for you
to share your sacred dew
with the lovely Rose
who helped you from your clothes.
ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL

Brisbane, Australia

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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desire thoughts visuals
heat craving lust
love-making intimacy night
whispers pillows torn-panties
skin candles moonlight
meeting knowing sharing

is not enough,
more!
needing more...
taking more...
I am hungry
ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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My c ock is hard,
So very hard,
I need a c unt to f uck.

Now Mary Lou,
She has the flu,
And doesn't want to f uck.

I rang up Sue,
She says we're through
Since I've been f ucking Mary Lou!

Barbara Jane
Now she is game,
But she said; "NO."

"You've been f ucking Mary Lou!"

My c ock is hard,
So very hard.
So what am I to do?
ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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Baby can I lick your lips?

Can I feel the sway of your hips?

Can I bathe in the flow of your love?

One moments kiss, takes me to this ejaculatory
feeling.

Your breath upon me, feeding my fire, don`t stop..
Can I lick your lips?

Above and below...let me taste the flow...

Shockwaves of exstacy electrifying my mind.
Groans of pure pleasure as I grab you from behind.
I fill you up...first fast and then slow.

My moments in the place I call heaven below.

Legs entwined, as we become one, no rest, just
pure lust till the night is done.

Can I take a walk in your mind taking you on paths
of unadulterated bliss?

Talking of things to make you forget your
name...putting XXX movies to shame.

Kissing places you never knew you had.

Quaking orgasms...you got me feening bad.

Love motions, potions, and juices mixing as we
slowly grind.

First action coming, before I had your body......

I made love to your mind
ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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Nightstand,
iridescent in vacancy flicker,
holds glistening oil dreams
that suggest unfastening
and slickness around any offer.

But you brush away persuasion,
let tubes fall to the wastebasket.

Sweat.

You want lubrication
from effort:

Palms pressing the sherbet shag,
wondering what hippie decorated
with butterscotch naugahyde.

Then a crawl through thick orange,
clinging to not-really-butter shade leather.

Sweat,
until my skin is exuberant
and cleavage beckons your slide.

ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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You lie beside me, naked
As I hold you in my arms.
And my eyes and hands and tongue
Explore your treasures and your charms.
My hands explore your pouting breasts
And taste their hardening peaks,
And my tongue injects its pleasure
‘Tween those bright red lips it seeks.
As your thighs spread ever wider
And you raise your arching hips,
My eager tongue starts drinking
From your nectar-laden lips,
And as the fount increases
And my mouth is filled with wine,
I know the sighs within you
Say I’m yours, and you are mine.

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL wrote:
My c ock is hard,
So very hard,
I need a c unt to f uck.
Now Mary Lou,
She has the flu,
And doesn't want to f uck.
I rang up Sue,
She says we're through
Since I've been f ucking Mary Lou!
Barbara Jane
Now she is game,
But she said; "NO."
"You've been f ucking Mary Lou!"
My c ock is hard,
So very hard.
So what am I to do?
Reported...

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL wrote:
Baby can I lick your lips?
Can I feel the sway of your hips?
Can I bathe in the flow of your love?
One moments kiss, takes me to this ejaculatory
feeling.
Your breath upon me, feeding my fire, don`t stop..
Can I lick your lips?
Above and below...let me taste the flow...
Shockwaves of exstacy electrifying my mind.
Groans of pure pleasure as I grab you from behind.
I fill you up...first fast and then slow.
My moments in the place I call heaven below.
Legs entwined, as we become one, no rest, just
pure lust till the night is done.
Can I take a walk in your mind taking you on paths
of unadulterated bliss?
Talking of things to make you forget your
name...putting XXX movies to shame.
Kissing places you never knew you had.
Quaking orgasms...you got me feening bad.
Love motions, potions, and juices mixing as we
slowly grind.
First action coming, before I had your body......
I made love to your mind
Reported...

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL wrote:
The way you sway your hips
brings a smile to my lips
as you slowly undress
beneath her sweet caress.
I want so much to join
the finger at your loins
which taps out a tattoo
endearing her to you.
I fight against my chain
out in the pouring rain
while dry under the porch
your love burns like a torch.
I simply cannot share
the Sapphic love so rare
that animals take heed
of your feminine need.
I listen to your cry
rising up to the sky
and crashing down on me
because I am not free.
I want so much to touch
the one I love so much
but this night is for you
to share your sacred dew
with the lovely Rose
who helped you from your clothes.
Reported...

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL wrote:
She Said.....
"Fill me,
Like the hand fills the glove,
Putting your fingers deep into the velvet that you wear so well.
Fill me,
Like the coffee fills the cup,
Pouring your hot love into my delicate china that you never will break.
Fill me,
Like nail fills the wood,
Driving your hard metal into my wall until the hole is stripped.
Fill me,
Like the fish fills the ocean,
Swimming inside my waters so delicately finding your home.
Empty me,
Like you empty the tub,
Draining my existence of all it’s wetness,
Until it pours right down the drain."
Reported...a...drain...
ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL

Brisbane, Australia

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Jan 28, 2013
 

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Talking to her girlfriend, Madeline;;
She said she'd call this two-part harmony

"There is this guy, whom I had never met before
He was a very sexy guy called DeVine, one I could adore
Who caught me by surprise by saying,“Hello”
And handed me a rose, the color of, yellow
He said,“This is for your beautiful hair”
He put another yellow rose on the other side to make it fair
I gazed into his eyes
Oh how I could feel my heat rise
You put your arms around me
Ever so tight, so I couldn’t flee
Your lips brushed across my cheek
Testing me, if I would further seek
My head turned to meet your lips
As I could feel my clothes begin to slip
My fingers running through your hair
And you could smell the perfume like pears
With our lips joined together
Our tongues began to dance within each other
Your thumb brushes against the nipple on my breast
Raising it to its crest
The flooding sensations you make me feel
Your tender touch, is so real
You press your body into mine
And I just wait for your next line
You bend your head down and kiss my nipple
My body goes into a huge ripple
You gently began to suckle
As I feel my knees beginning to buckle
You lead me to the bed
Removing your clothes, as nothing needs to be said
My eyes began to wonder
Staring at your swollen cock with ponder
You gently lay me down with care and ease
My eyes telling you, yes please
Your lips reaching down to mine
While your hand is caressing my breasts, ooh that feels so fine
The inner lightening begins its heat
The sensations something you just can’t beat
Your tongue running down my stomach
My hips rise to tell you of my ache
Your tongue finds my vulva lips
My stomach is doing all kinds of flips
I grab your head with both of my hands and pull you in
And the waves of passion begin within
Your tongue finds my sensitive clit
I feel like I am ready to split
My hips rise above ever so high
The spasms taking me way into the sky
With one spasm after another
Your tongue enters me and I flutter
While you lick my sweet juices
My body begins to relax and there are no excuses
For the pleasure I felt
How you my dear, make me melt
You reach behind you, and you pull out a red rose
Brushing it across my toes
And up my legs
Again, you can see my eyes beg
You move it to my inner thighs
Throwing me again into a high
You brush it against my sweetness and up to my belly
Turning my body into jelly
You brush it over my forehead and then to my eyes
And you can hear, my big sighs
Down across my cheeks and over my lips........

(More c umming)
ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL

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..........Your mouth reaches down and you give me a tender nip
You move the rose down my chin and neck
Not missing any flesh, not even a speck
The rose brushes both nipples with your tender loving touch
I feel my fists began to clutch
And you lay the red rose between my breasts bare
To show just how much you care
As we lay beside each other, so close and cuddly
The feeling of satisfaction felt so utterly
My soft tender lips meet yours for a kiss
My hand on your heart I feel it go amiss
I feel your cock on my thigh beginning to throb
So my hand reaches down to grab it and rub
Our kisses become deeper as lust hangs in the air
The hunger we feel is almost too much to bear
Our tongues touch each other as we explore
The tasteful liquid we both have come to adore
The sliding of our tongues as we go in and out
This is the start of what making love is all about
My fingers running through your hair
Not forgetting to touch every strand that you bare
As my finger traces your chin
Your sensuous mouth turns into a grin
My hands running over your strong body
Feeling your muscles and thoughts of being naughty
I slowly to move to your ear
Whispering softly the words you love to hear
“Let me love you my darling, so tender and sweet”
“Just dream of heaven because it will feel so neat”
My lips find the curve in your neck
While constantly rubbing your cock and not missing a speck
Mmmmmm my love you make me hot
For I am so wet in my special spot
My finger runs inside my lips and I load it with my honey
Then rubbing it on your cock to let you know its worth, more than money
My tongue finds your tiny nipples
As I nip with my teeth and lick you with my tongue, sending you waves of ripples
I feel your hips arch up a bit
I know you can’t wait for what you are about to get
My pointed tongue runs down your belly
Watching your body flex and turn into jelly
I stop and hand you a surprise gift
Asking you to open it, hoping you don’t get rift
You gently pull on the first string of the bow
With a little more urgency you give the second string a go
I watch as you remove the cover
And inside you find the caramel from your lover
You twist the cover to remove the lid
We began to feel like two new kids
I dip my finger into the topping
For now we know, there is no stopping
And I place the caramel on your cock
Your balls beginning to show stock
Filling with fluid of a salty nature
From inside your body, you are the creator
My tongue finds your cock very amusing
And the caramel adds to the flavor, which is absolutely refusing
My tongue flickers over your sensitive head
The movements becoming more and more on the bed
I surround your cock with my wonderful mouth
Your fluid relocation becoming a passion of wealth
As I suck the caramel from your swelling dick
Your hips rise higher as my tongue continues to flick
I began to suck with a harder passion
In and out, in such a fashion
Mmmmm long tender strokes baby
Your body in my control, and just maybe
The faster I go the closer you get
In reaching your climax, my wondrous pet
Now with long, hard, and faster sucking motions
I feel your body tense with all your inner emotions
Your body begins to jerk and feel the sudden spasms
Reaching that wonderful feeling of an orgasm
I suck you and suck you dry my sweet
For we both collapse, as we are totally beat
We sleep in each other’s arms
Resting up for the next alarms
The stirring of your body begins to arouse me
Your handsome face looking relaxed as can be
My fingers gently stroke your ear
Touching your body helps me to be near
I hear you make a groan
My tender lips kiss you before you utter a moan
Your body moves closer to mine
That’s what I wanted from you, was a sign
Your eyes flutter open, now I know I don’t need to beg

( OMG....almost there !)
ADRIAN DeVINE LeORIGINAL

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.......As my foot starts moving up and down your leg
We tighten our hugs to each other
Our tongues exploring within one another
My hands gently rubbing your back
For there is no love here that we lack
Your hands wandering over my soft skin
I want you to take me where I have been
Those great waves of passion begin to swell
Over that rainbow we both know so well
My hips begin to move from desire
Only you can put out that fire
You grab my ass then squeeze my cheeks
Pulling me closer to you as you speak
“I feel the love you have to give”
“Yes my love, for we have yet to live”
“Under one condition”
“We will satisfy us both, so you will move into the sixty-nine position”
I straddle my legs over your lips
You grab my ass and pull down on my hips
You use your tongue and take one long lick
From top to bottom, all in a flick
My pussy becomes so wet
Your tongue drives deep and you take all you can get
My mouth comes down around your cock
Sucking you in and out, our mouths too full for any talk
We both begin to moan and groan with pleasure
Because we both know, we are each other’s treasure
You grab my ass and turn me around
My heart rapidly begins to pound
You lay me gently on my back
Then you grab my legs swinging them over your shoulders with such a knack
You rub your cock against my love spot, and enter me slow
You look into my eyes and see that glow
My hips rise to the occasion
Wanting to feel all of you, mmmm and oh the sensation
Your hips begin to pick up a rally
Slamming your cock deep in my valley
Oh baby yes, take me I am yours
Sending waves and waves of passion galore
Our bodies lurch as the explosions take place
Over and over as we hit home base
Well this night was great, we both will say
Too bad it had to end this way
So you go your way and I'll go mine
With the hopes of doing this one more time.

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