The Gap, Australia

#5347 Jan 1, 2013

I think my muse has fallen ill

I've lost my inspiration

I sit alone and grasp my quill

In hopeless anticipation

I scribble lines that make no sense

Only to be erased

The air around me becomes intense

The words I choose, a waste

I cannot choose the words I write

The words, they must choose me

Without my muse my words aren't right

As anyone can see

How can I free my tortured soul,

Without my muse's hand?

The words I choose cannot console

They do not understand

I think my muse has fallen ill

My words have been betrayed

The poems I write I cannot feel

My thoughts have all decayed

Level 6

Since: Apr 12

Location hidden

#5348 Jan 2, 2013
DeVINE KNIGHT thanks for your poetic skills.

The Gap, Australia

#5349 Jan 2, 2013

Her heart keeps throbbing

Muscles are weak

Eyes stare forward

Her lips try to speak

Body rolls off me

I still feel its heat

Sweat begins to cool

Head pounds in beat

Her skin is sticky

I start to relax

Eyelids close

She's reached climax


The Gap, Australia

#5350 Jan 2, 2013
I kiss the nectar of her body's tears
Licking the sweet ballad
Told by her constant parallel couplets
Of years that informs me
To take it easy
Allowing our bodies to
Recite an elegy to the death
Of her fear
That grants us the freedom to
Bypass the haiku
Straight into
An endless free-verse
That possess
The humor of a limerick piece

On poetic metaphors
And similes
To describe her unforgettable

"Like the sun kissing
--The sky"

No, not good enough:

"Like Mother Nature - Wrapping
The earth against her bosom
--Day and night,"

Secretly addicted to her moonlight...

The rise of her molten core
Sending warmth to
The tip of a tongue
Flickering and desiring more
Poetic seduction
Waiting on..
Volcanic eruption:

The Gap, Australia

#5351 Jan 2, 2013
Entering the moisture of her dreams
Slowly penetrating walls
Of hidden fantasies
Her body cling
To the
Length of my
--Desire to please her incomplete stanzas
Of purity, she welcomes me
Into her world of poetry

Allowing two
To become one
One to
Create Three
Producing the infant of orgasm's


She says.....

"A sting of pain,
As I welcome the pleasure
of his divine
-- Words....
Over and Over we,

His sexual haiku's
inexplicably excite me,
I close my quatrain's
Around him.

Utilize the free verse,
To explain this combination.
How my poetry had yearned,
Cries out in exhilaration.

Two poets,
Locked together,
On the verge of ----
An ode,
For each other...

The Gap, Australia

#5352 Jan 2, 2013

This is what "she" told me it felt like......

"I closed my eyes-
felt the feeling wash over me
like the sea rushes to the shore
I drew closer and closer
and crashed on the beach
Spilled, but fulfilled
and a kaleidoscope of color
filled the night
the air was a rose garden
and everything was silent
not even a cricket could be heard
only my heart beating
rhythmic, shallow and labored
pounding like twin drums
and I touched lightning
felt the ripples of energy torturing my soul
and I knew that I was alive,

Vibrantly Alive!.....

Oh God YES !!!"


The Gap, Australia

#5353 Jan 2, 2013

Bitter dark coffee use to be one of my obsessions until I met her. She changed me, and my taste in coffee. Whenever I sees caramel colored coffee, I pine for her. Smelling and devouring her as the coffee glides down my throat.

I use to love strong, dark, bitter coffee. Use to, being the operative word. Now I'm a changed man. There is something decadent about mild coffee, with just a touch of cream.

Coffee, the colour of caramel, with just a whiff of chocolate, tasting as sweet on your tongue as a midnight dream. Coffee like the colour of her skin.

I sighs as I see her standing naked before me. Caramel chocolate from her toes to her head. Begging him to taste her sweetness. Inviting me to touch her smooth soft skin. Endless moments of rapture for my enjoyment only.

I cups her heavy delightful breasts and she moans as she bends backward a full half circle. Giving me a magnificent view of the contours of her chest. Excitedly I lower my tongue to her nipple. If she is this supple and limber, tonight will entail the most glorious sex I ever have had in my life!

I suck at her nipples deep into my mouth and she shivers, grabbing my arms for support. I slowly lower her onto the white satin sheets. Just admiring the dream she is portraying, caramel and cream! She lifts her head and those bedroom eyes darkens from ebony to black, pupils as huge as the windows of her soul.

She wants me. Pouty, glossed lips parts in anticipation and she spreads her legs ninety degrees to boths sides. Astonished, I watch as she thrusts her hips invitingly back and forth. Lowering one hand, she touches her clitoris and moans as she parts her labia to give him a better view. A brilliant view of velvety pink glistened lips. My head is spinning and I smell and taste the sweet nectar as my lips devour her offering.

Sweet, caramel coloured coffee, with just a whiff of chocolate, my favourite!

The Gap, Australia

#5355 Jan 2, 2013

In the throes of pleasure you bit into my heart

Tore away the boundaries that made me sane

And plunged me into the den of mania

I crave your touch so much

I bend over twice to bathe in the glory that surrounds you

All I need is to bury my head in your neck

To strangle my fingers through your hair

And pull your lips closer

All I need is to feast my eyes on your smile

Kiss your lower lip with exuberance

And sigh my heart with a breath

All I need is to love you as sweetly and innocently as I came

As wildly and thundering as the pounding in my chest

And as infinite as your being engraved in my spirit.

“Want A Friend, Be One..”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Thanks everyone 4/2/17

#5356 Jan 2, 2013
Its better to be hated for what you are,than to be loved for what you're not.......(Kurt Cobain)

The Gap, Australia

#5357 Jan 2, 2013
You whisper into my ear
Sweet things that make me weak,
Then you look into my eyes
With your mysterious provocative gaze,
Causing you to touch my skin
To feel the burning of your flames,
Caressing me with a love that is real,
Then you kiss me...
As I feel your wet eager lips
Our hungry tongues indulging in their craving,
To feel the poison...
Of your blood boiling throughout your soul
Sending electrify emotions
Stimulating pure intoxication,
As your hands flows over me;
Touching every curve and every part of me...
It seems I move my legs apart automatically,
As you lift me on the mystical ride
While my body you know I will guide,
Just listen to our song
Making love all night long,
The flames of passion, desire and love
Is taking control over us,
You put your hands in my breast,
As I feel a sensation so exciting,
When you kiss my nipples with your eager lips
Every time you do that,
It gets more and more fulfilling
Let me feel those sensations,
As I feel you deep inside me
Feeling a rage so incredible to resist,
As all I want is to let go
Of all this love I have in store,
You got me twisting...
Soaking wet,
I feel you as you are pausing deep inside me
And then I feel you pull out and pull back in,
I moan from pure delight and ecstasy,
I get the shivers,
Is from the fire lit inside my being
My body is slippery everywhere,
I scream...
Please, harder and harder,
I call out your name...
Crying out in anguished bliss
A slight sigh...
''A gasp for air''
This fire is so immense
So full of energy and heat,
Even water could not quench
This fire inside of me,
Cause your love...
Always will remain
Burning there endlessly,
Cause you make my erotic senses rise,
While you take me higher and higher
Than I have ever been
In the mystical ride of yours,
That I just can't get enough
Because without you and your love,
There would not be a hot sexual taste in me.

The Gap, Australia

#5358 Jan 2, 2013
For longer than a taste
- or two,
I will linger;
Lips against lips,
softly against soft.

I will linger

In eyes,
- my prison,
visions of sweetness,
of sweat, of lust;
promisings of ecstasy�s sin
to flower upon my decadent hunger.

Dance soft
- circles across my tongue,
around, across,
awakening and arousing whispers auctioned
in the throes of passions;
drink until my appetite is laid bare
for a moment or two.

Command my civility
- my shadow, my touch,
- my every secret;
into words spoken as prayer,
into words cried
in breaths of consummation.

- as my own is wondered well,
countless times stabs and penetrates
the beast beyond the shatterings of humanity descent
into the salvation of the truth of desire.

The Gap, Australia

#5359 Jan 2, 2013
A touch of skin soft and slippery,
With the hint of hint of sweat.
We fought our resistance beneath the cool sheets,
As the wind flowed from the window above us.
Eyes met briefly and begged for the chance,
To abandon all of our uncertainties.
You began your work on my lips,
Probing gently as if drawing sex,
From a deep well of longing and need.
Then heated tongues met in the midst,
Of hot and quickening breath.
And greedily we drank the wine of our lusts.
Then intoxicated with those spirits,
Our clothes found resting place on the floor.
Piece by piece,
Until there were no hiding places,
For the two glistening and wanting bodies.
Hunger revealed in this hot moment.
Then skin meshed with skin,
As the floor became the stage.
You moved atop of me easily,
And lowered yourself gently.
Kissing me as I was filled with you.
As a gasp broke the kiss,
Your hands stroked the stray strands,
Away from my forehead, then became entangled.
Our slow rhythm gave way,
To urgent and demanding thrusts of passion,
As I arched my body for your comfort,
And you threw me into ecstasy,
With the strength of your blows.
You left me screaming and soaked,
In oblivion again and again,
As you growled my name from the back of your throat,
And our bodies both demanded more,
Each giving to the other,
High on the fluids of foreign substance.
I grasped, then released you,
Grasped then released you,
In effort to relieve you of your control.
The taste of your skin between my lips,
Was like no other.
To hear your cry of mercy,
When my teeth met your warm skin,
Was more breathtaking than you knew.
Yet I still released the control to you.
As you wound your hands in my hair,
And pulled until the flesh on my neck was taut,
You moved with one final and breaking blow,
Forcing our way to the peaks of bliss,
Leaving our screams to echo on like battle cries.
I welcomed the weight of you to crush me,
As you collapsed on top of me,
Still hot and burning,
And I glowing like an ember,
Casting a welcome light,
Should you seek my gifts again.

The Gap, Australia

#5360 Jan 2, 2013
Glistening bodies entwined
in an ageless erotic dance,
seeking pleasures from each other,
seeking wonder and romance.

She touches his face with tenderness.
He draws her body near.
Aching, needing hunger
will make their destiny clear.

Their lips meet in soft kisses,
their tongues begin passion's war.
Forgotten now, the outside world.
All is here, behind this door.

He strokes her body tenderly,
she arches up for his caress.
He finds her silken portal
and her womanly wetness.

She moans in fiery desire
and pulls his hand away,
wishing to end this exquisite torture
and get on with passion's play.

She straddles his waiting body,
eases him into her feminine hollow.
She leads him on a rhythmic dance,
his thrusting hips must follow.

She rides him faster, even then,
to hear his wondrous sighs.
She shows him all the delights
she has between her womanly thighs.

They stare into each other's eyes
and gasp as ecstasy unreels,
and tangles them in a lover's knot
that every answer reveals.

Sated, they lie side by side,
spent but hungering still.
She touches him where their passion came
and tastes their lovers spill.

Their mouths meet in passionate need,
hungry animals once more.
This time he rises above her,
her body to explore.

Their ballet begins again,
as he thrusts his manhood in,
vowing not to end the dance
unless her cries he'll win.

Like beasts of old they become,
riding with desire,
only resting their throbbing bodies
when sated by their fire.

The Gap, Australia

#5361 Jan 2, 2013

Would you kiss me tonight

so soft

so gentle

arouse deep feelings

please, make it so sensual

can you feel a kiss without your heart

so warm your lips, I felt them part

no words can be spoken,

the meaning is true

that kiss will last forever

it's only for me and you

a kiss from the heart


The Gap, Australia

#5362 Jan 2, 2013
I play the game well

I tease, torture, tantalize

I am the Master-

The Master of Disguise.

I am the one, the only,

I am the Irresistible Devine !

You think I'm in control:

I know all the moves, just what to do.

I'm dying to give up power.

I want to surrender myself to you.

Tear down these walls

I've worked so hard to build.

Hold me fiercely

'Til all my doubts have stilled.

Take me gently,

Break my chains,

Remove my fears,

Let trust remain.

The Gap, Australia

#5363 Jan 2, 2013
I'll gently touch your hand,
and you'll give me a look
that could enslave the wildest dream.

I'll raise your lips to be kissed in vain,
and enchant your mouth
with the caress of an eager tongue.

And if you're angered,
I no farther meant than to please you,
release you,
and receive your innocence.

On your electric breasts
I'll lay my hands and create light impressions
to match and twin the marks of submission
which earlier you left on my back.

And your breasts, with a kind warm glow,
they swell and talk with hardened tips.
They stir, and desire to dance under my lips.

They are accompanied by the rhythms of heartbeats
and the melancholy moans
played by instruments of enticement.

And if you distrust me,
I no farther meant than to please you,
release you,
and receive your innocence.

I'll keep my eyes on yours,
on your soft skin my hands will stay.
Look at a face kissed by angels.
feel skin envied by queens.

All of my senses infatuated with you,
each one ravished in delight.
and with my body,
prepare your soul for an eternal night.

In reaction, deep breaths, gasps, sighs.
wetness inside out,
tears from the cries of your erogenous instincts.

These orgasmic hands form the arch in your back.
prisoners of lust sentenced to hold your eyelids closed in ecstasy, my waist surrounded by your legs, the air dipped with the essence of bonded love.

And if you blame me,
to you my goddess penitent I confess.....
I no farther meant than to please you,
release you,
and give only to you my (not so ) innocence.

The Gap, Australia

#5364 Jan 2, 2013

Wet with you

with you

between us

but bubbles

as silently
as we touch

in wetness


“Want A Friend, Be One..”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Thanks everyone 4/2/17

#5365 Jan 2, 2013
Come live in my heart and pay no rent!!!!

The Gap, Australia

#5366 Jan 2, 2013
Princess Hey wrote:
Come live in my heart and pay no rent!!!!
pendulum of perpetual perpetuations

a cyclical cycle of one end touches the begin

never-ending pumping expanding the universe

one get give @ a time

there is no emote en rote

each impulse has neurons beyond the function of touch

the ripple of atomised moments frail in delicate electricity

fornicate like ribbons on the squirrels holy grail

Lost is the scent of the crook of my lover,

Hey Princess, like a broken finger....it hurts

Give me poetry, not quotations, your submissions here fail !



The Gap, Australia

#5367 Jan 2, 2013
This pulsating muscle between my legs
is good for fertilizing your eggs,
but it will never make or break
our love affair.

Although it gives you great pleasure,
and those moments I do treasure,
it will never be the main
way to show I care.

Thus, revealing the fact,
that sex is just an act,
and love is never
anything one should fall into.

I may sound like a fool,
when I say my mind is the tool,
that I'll use
to make love to you.

It may be big, firm, thick, strong,
it may even last long,
but never as long as the images
I leave of me, in your thoughts.

I feel you baby,
when you say all the other misters,
never took you there,
but it ain't my fault.

I love to touch, I love to feel,
but first and foremost,
I love to keep it real -
you know this to be true.

Although our physical acts,
bring you the ultimate climax,
my mind is the tool,
that I'll use to make love to you.

Wondrous emotion
in a mixed up love potion -
a combination of the mental,
and the physical.

Some might think that cybersex
is along the same lines as this text,
but no -
that's way too digital.

1-900...you know the rest,
or at least by now you've heard.

Verbal stimulation,
via phone conversation,
make me laugh it's so absurd.

I need you close to me,
saying something, or saying nothing,
so long as
we're sharing the same breath.

This muscle in which I've been speaking,
is good for steady freaking,
but the thought I leave you with
will last 'til death.

Nothing is sweeter
than when a woman knows her man needs her,
and a man who knows his woman
needs him too.

Let me say in closin',
it's you that I've chosen,
and my mind is the tool
that I'll use to make love to you.

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