JUST SEX and POETRY

[PESCreate]

Nfreebird wrote:

I read that last line ALL wrong but it does fit... o.O
Don't knock Adrian, just either enjoy the poetry with what you know or write some to post. Besides it seems we have someone else whether accidentally posted or not has some talent as well.

I agree, we should just enjoy all this poetry.

***Hmmmm, wonder who they were referring to with that last sentence.**
;~)

[QuiteCrazy]

Good grief... everyone reads but won't contribute, well some have... but not as much as we get... <rolls up sleeves>Alright... I'll go first!

o_O

[QuiteCrazy]

PESCreate wrote:

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I agree, we should just enjoy all this poetry.
***Hmmmm, wonder who they were referring to with that last sentence.**
;~)

Me too!! But I'll give it a try.. so I'll crash and burn.. it's the only way to learn to fly sometimes..

[juggheaD]

she say "I was confused",
it was just a question not an abused,
no even referred
to you,
Sigh! let just have it!

[PESCreate]

Okay QC, I'll try again. I'll stay within the guidelines this time. I'm not a poet, but here goes ...

It's just sex and it's not meant to be corny
You just never know what words will make some horny

She said she wanted you to go deep
She said by all means wake me if I'm asleep

He said I love your mouth, how deep shall I go
He said I love it when you let me push you ... to and fro

Haha - I told you I wasn't a poet.
;~)

[juggheaD]

from what I think is was not a confusion,
it's merely a harsh and careless conclusions,

well Legs, what ever you got up against me,
let brings it all in here. ;)

[juggheaD]

correction:

from what I think it was not a confusion,
it's merely a harsh and careless conclusions,

well Legs, what ever you got up against me,
let brings it all in here. ;)

[juggheaD]

And this why I hate poetry!

[juggheaD]

And this why I hate poetry!
I could become heartless and ruthless to thee.

[juggheaD]

Yes Legs, I'm trolling you,
Coz you accused me of something that I didn't do,

I'm not gonna just drop this,
I'm gonna take this to the finish,
until it all through,

Congratulation you just add yourself another troll.

[juggheaD]

Come on Legs, is that all you can do,
Why don't you just stop running and face the true,

or maybe what LBeth said about you is true??

stop pretending you feels blue,
to me it's just anthoer boo hoo.

[juggheaD]

<to me it's just "anthoer" boo hoo.>

=>> to me it's just "another" boo hoo.

[QuiteCrazy]

she was untouchable
a wisp here nor there
only words, two, three
swore we'd not graze skin
embers pulsed, throbbed ...then everywhere
deaf was I to all she would say

"mea culpa"
"mea culpa"
"mea culpa"

dried leaves crunched beneath me
I settled in the cold
let autumn swallow me whole
til I saw it pass me
a wisp here,..there
dash, pause, turn to meet my eye, lovely deerskin
bit my lip and slowly aiming
blood mine, vin
never malign.. I

"mea culpa"
"mea culpa"
"mea culpa"

her words ricochetted
my shot echoed
warm bloody hands, moist tongue that had flickered
like cobras we had intertwined
burnt wood and honeysuckle aromas mingled

my dearest meltin in my arms
my deer dying in my bloody arms
that last breath
"mea culpa"

"mea maxima culpa"
"mea.... maxima.... culpa,...mea dama"

by QC
titled Dama

[QuiteCrazy]

alright... shoot me now LOL, hey... that'stuff it da*n hard!

[QuiteCrazy]

Juggie, PC.. you were doing fine... don't listen to the jealous judgits!

<sigh>I give,... this is definately DeVine's gig... night folks <yawn> have fun

[QuiteCrazy]

Alright... <hands on hips>what the heck was all that Juggie and PC... that was poetic fighting.. riiiiiiggghhht? <nodding,... shaking head... tilting back and forth>wow... I'm gone.. night, I can't make sense of it...

[PESCreate]

QuiteCrazy wrote:

Juggie, PC.. you were doing fine... don't listen to the jealous judgits!
<sigh>I give,... this is definately DeVine's gig... night folks <yawn> have fun

QC, that was a brilliant poem.
I have no idea what juggheaD is after here. I have a hard enough time just understanding what he? is even saying half the time. I didn't accuse them of anything. Whatever....

D@ng, Adrian needs to get back and tickle us with more of his poetry.

[juggheaD]

PESCreate wrote:

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QC, that was a brilliant poem.
I have no idea what juggheaD is after here. I have a hard enough time just understanding what he? is even saying half the time. I didn't accuse them of anything. Whatever....
D@ng, Adrian needs to get back and tickle us with more of his poetry.

playing to be dumb, huh?

[Princess Hey]

Life never turns out the way we want,but we live it the best way we can.There is no perfect life,but we can fill it with perfect moments!!!!

[KNIGHT DEVINE]

Were we divided at birth
in that water of creation?
In those violent beginnings of earth
were we marked for separation,
neither part whole?

What else could explain the deep divide,
the bitter disparity of diversification,
the widening gulf of opposite sides,
the threat to our foundation
that will inevitably take its toll?

Why are ones blessed with prosperity
so blind to those mired in poverty?
When did they stop seeing the desperate?
How did the powerful turn on the weak, separate
themselves, use others for gain or control?

Why must we always criticize?
How do we approach the other side?
Where do we find the will to compromise?
When will we learn to put vanity aside?
When.... will we seek humanness for all souls?