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“Just a lil' humor there.....”

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OR NOT .... <[;-)

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QuiteCrazy wrote:
A little sex here and there doesn't hurt anyone.. it's sea salt.. Mrs. Dash... whatever..
LOL .. It's only DeVine, he lives for it.
I agree with you. However, to be truthful cybersex does very little for me. If I'm going to be turned on and still be in the room by myself, then I don't need any encouragement from some out there.

I've never seen this thread at the top before and of all the days.
DANG! Come on Adrian - get back in here and bury these last few pages.
;~)
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PESCreate wrote:
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I agree with you. However, to be truthful cybersex does very little for me. If I'm going to be turned on and still be in the room by myself, then I don't need any encouragement from some out there.
I've never seen this thread at the top before and of all the days.
DANG! Come on Adrian - get back in here and bury these last few pages.
;~)
LOL, on no.. don't tell him to bury it him might take it somewhere else with that line...

I wasn't talking about cybersex! LMBO!! <shakes head> I don't even get how people would do it! Well... not people, person... ugh, I don't want to think about it. lol

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How lucky one can be. Getting both, sexual pleasure and loving poetry. I must have committed some sin's in my past life and paying for my Karma.

“We All Have A Look A Like”

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he is okay...makes for a good night to read..Like them..:O)...
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Since Adrain DeVine is actually trying it out.. <ahem>Someone else should pick up and write something, finally, original and erotic..

good ahead.. shoot

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I read that last line ALL wrong but it does fit... o.O

Don't knock Adrian, just either enjoy the poetry with what you know or write some to post. Besides it seems we have someone else whether accidentally posted or not has some talent as well.
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Whichever way you want to go.. just write something! I think Adrian is taking the day off. Don't be intimidated by DeVine. Go ahead and jump in..

Nfree, you have the honors, YOU FIRST!

ROTFLMBO

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Nfreebird wrote:
I read that last line ALL wrong but it does fit... o.O
Don't knock Adrian, just either enjoy the poetry with what you know or write some to post. Besides it seems we have someone else whether accidentally posted or not has some talent as well.
I agree, we should just enjoy all this poetry.

***Hmmmm, wonder who they were referring to with that last sentence.**
;~)
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Good grief... everyone reads but won't contribute, well some have... but not as much as we get... <rolls up sleeves>Alright... I'll go first!

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PESCreate wrote:
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I agree, we should just enjoy all this poetry.
***Hmmmm, wonder who they were referring to with that last sentence.**
;~)
Me too!! But I'll give it a try.. so I'll crash and burn.. it's the only way to learn to fly sometimes..

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she say "I was confused",
it was just a question not an abused,
no even referred
to you,
Sigh! let just have it!

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Okay QC, I'll try again. I'll stay within the guidelines this time. I'm not a poet, but here goes ...

It's just sex and it's not meant to be corny
You just never know what words will make some horny

She said she wanted you to go deep
She said by all means wake me if I'm asleep

He said I love your mouth, how deep shall I go
He said I love it when you let me push you ... to and fro

Haha - I told you I wasn't a poet.
;~)

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from what I think is was not a confusion,
it's merely a harsh and careless conclusions,

well Legs, what ever you got up against me,
let brings it all in here. ;)

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correction:

from what I think it was not a confusion,
it's merely a harsh and careless conclusions,

well Legs, what ever you got up against me,
let brings it all in here. ;)

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And this why I hate poetry!

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And this why I hate poetry!
I could become heartless and ruthless to thee.

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Yes Legs, I'm trolling you,
Coz you accused me of something that I didn't do,

I'm not gonna just drop this,
I'm gonna take this to the finish,
until it all through,

Congratulation you just add yourself another troll.

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Come on Legs, is that all you can do,
Why don't you just stop running and face the true,

or maybe what LBeth said about you is true??

stop pretending you feels blue,
to me it's just anthoer boo hoo.

“Geez..”

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<to me it's just "anthoer" boo hoo.>

=>> to me it's just "another" boo hoo.
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she was untouchable
a wisp here nor there
only words, two, three
swore we'd not graze skin
embers pulsed, throbbed ...then everywhere
deaf was I to all she would say

"mea culpa"
"mea culpa"
"mea culpa"

dried leaves crunched beneath me
I settled in the cold
let autumn swallow me whole
til I saw it pass me
a wisp here,..there
dash, pause, turn to meet my eye, lovely deerskin
bit my lip and slowly aiming
blood mine, vin
never malign.. I

"mea culpa"
"mea culpa"
"mea culpa"

her words ricochetted
my shot echoed
warm bloody hands, moist tongue that had flickered
like cobras we had intertwined
burnt wood and honeysuckle aromas mingled

my dearest meltin in my arms
my deer dying in my bloody arms
that last breath
"mea culpa"

"mea maxima culpa"
"mea.... maxima.... culpa,...mea dama"

by QC
titled Dama

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