JUST SEX and POETRY

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#4832 Dec 9, 2012
Whichever way you want to go.. just write something! I think Adrian is taking the day off. Don't be intimidated by DeVine. Go ahead and jump in..

Nfree, you have the honors, YOU FIRST!

ROTFLMBO

PESCreate

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#4833 Dec 9, 2012
Nfreebird wrote:
I read that last line ALL wrong but it does fit... o.O
Don't knock Adrian, just either enjoy the poetry with what you know or write some to post. Besides it seems we have someone else whether accidentally posted or not has some talent as well.
I agree, we should just enjoy all this poetry.

***Hmmmm, wonder who they were referring to with that last sentence.**
;~)

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#4834 Dec 9, 2012
Good grief... everyone reads but won't contribute, well some have... but not as much as we get... <rolls up sleeves>Alright... I'll go first!

o_O

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#4835 Dec 9, 2012
PESCreate wrote:
<quoted text>
I agree, we should just enjoy all this poetry.
***Hmmmm, wonder who they were referring to with that last sentence.**
;~)
Me too!! But I'll give it a try.. so I'll crash and burn.. it's the only way to learn to fly sometimes..

“Geez..”

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#4836 Dec 9, 2012
she say "I was confused",
it was just a question not an abused,
no even referred
to you,
Sigh! let just have it!

PESCreate

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#4837 Dec 9, 2012
Okay QC, I'll try again. I'll stay within the guidelines this time. I'm not a poet, but here goes ...

It's just sex and it's not meant to be corny
You just never know what words will make some horny

She said she wanted you to go deep
She said by all means wake me if I'm asleep

He said I love your mouth, how deep shall I go
He said I love it when you let me push you ... to and fro

Haha - I told you I wasn't a poet.
;~)

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#4838 Dec 9, 2012
from what I think is was not a confusion,
it's merely a harsh and careless conclusions,

well Legs, what ever you got up against me,
let brings it all in here. ;)

“Geez..”

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#4839 Dec 9, 2012
correction:

from what I think it was not a confusion,
it's merely a harsh and careless conclusions,

well Legs, what ever you got up against me,
let brings it all in here. ;)

“Geez..”

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#4840 Dec 9, 2012
And this why I hate poetry!

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#4841 Dec 9, 2012
And this why I hate poetry!
I could become heartless and ruthless to thee.

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#4842 Dec 9, 2012
Yes Legs, I'm trolling you,
Coz you accused me of something that I didn't do,

I'm not gonna just drop this,
I'm gonna take this to the finish,
until it all through,

Congratulation you just add yourself another troll.

“Geez..”

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#4843 Dec 9, 2012
Come on Legs, is that all you can do,
Why don't you just stop running and face the true,

or maybe what LBeth said about you is true??

stop pretending you feels blue,
to me it's just anthoer boo hoo.

“Geez..”

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#4844 Dec 9, 2012
<to me it's just "anthoer" boo hoo.>

=>> to me it's just "another" boo hoo.

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#4845 Dec 9, 2012
she was untouchable
a wisp here nor there
only words, two, three
swore we'd not graze skin
embers pulsed, throbbed ...then everywhere
deaf was I to all she would say

"mea culpa"
"mea culpa"
"mea culpa"

dried leaves crunched beneath me
I settled in the cold
let autumn swallow me whole
til I saw it pass me
a wisp here,..there
dash, pause, turn to meet my eye, lovely deerskin
bit my lip and slowly aiming
blood mine, vin
never malign.. I

"mea culpa"
"mea culpa"
"mea culpa"

her words ricochetted
my shot echoed
warm bloody hands, moist tongue that had flickered
like cobras we had intertwined
burnt wood and honeysuckle aromas mingled

my dearest meltin in my arms
my deer dying in my bloody arms
that last breath
"mea culpa"

"mea maxima culpa"
"mea.... maxima.... culpa,...mea dama"

by QC
titled Dama

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#4846 Dec 9, 2012
alright... shoot me now LOL, hey... that'stuff it da*n hard!

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#4847 Dec 9, 2012
Juggie, PC.. you were doing fine... don't listen to the jealous judgits!

<sigh>I give,... this is definately DeVine's gig... night folks <yawn> have fun

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#4848 Dec 9, 2012
Alright... <hands on hips>what the heck was all that Juggie and PC... that was poetic fighting.. riiiiiiggghhht? <nodding,... shaking head... tilting back and forth>wow... I'm gone.. night, I can't make sense of it...

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#4849 Dec 9, 2012
QuiteCrazy wrote:
Juggie, PC.. you were doing fine... don't listen to the jealous judgits!
<sigh>I give,... this is definately DeVine's gig... night folks <yawn> have fun
QC, that was a brilliant poem.
I have no idea what juggheaD is after here. I have a hard enough time just understanding what he? is even saying half the time. I didn't accuse them of anything. Whatever....

[email protected], Adrian needs to get back and tickle us with more of his poetry.

“Geez..”

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#4850 Dec 9, 2012
PESCreate wrote:
<quoted text>
QC, that was a brilliant poem.
I have no idea what juggheaD is after here. I have a hard enough time just understanding what he? is even saying half the time. I didn't accuse them of anything. Whatever....
[email protected], Adrian needs to get back and tickle us with more of his poetry.
playing to be dumb, huh?

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Thanks everyone 4/2/17

#4851 Dec 9, 2012
Life never turns out the way we want,but we live it the best way we can.There is no perfect life,but we can fill it with perfect moments!!!!

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