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The man who fears
His own front door
Will build you a cage
And you will have
Everything you need
Except a key.

So you will grow to hate him
Your plasmolysised heart
Pumping blood
Salty as desert piss
Until your veins
Are as desiccated
As paper streamers.

And when your face
Is as shriveled
As a purple prune
He will set you free.

Free
Because you have
Nowhere to go
And nothing to go too.

The woman who nurtures you
By offering comfort
In a poultice of pus
Has a smile
Like a curved scabbard
She will open all your sores
And brew Coumadin tea
Which you will drink
While you slowly
Bleed to death.

The man who looks at the clock
Will cum when he comes
Smelling of his wifeís
Apple dumplings
So you read
Because she cooks
But when he opens your legs
Heís not looking
For the science section
Of the New York Times
Your labia isnít attached
To your prefrontal cortex
And his dick is hard.

Better get the Visine
For your red eyes
Heíll tolerate your pedanticism
But if he needs emotion
Heís got the wife and kids
At home.

The one who got away
Will crawl around
In your brain
A worm
That eats up your love
So that you have nothing left
For the suitors who call
And then thereís that day
When you open the parlor door
And its empty -
Except for the cobwebs
Poor you!

Now you are an oddity
Neither prime nor composite
Kids will taunt you on
Halloween
And call you crazy
Once you were Jane Eyre
Now you are Bertha Mason.

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I believe in a thing called love,

in toxic oxytocin tears and

jagged daggers of emotions

that hit hard and quick and deep

leaving lovers dazed and aroused

on kitchen tiles and sticky dance floors.

I do believe in love, I do,

in blood filled love potions

you put so much of yourself into it

that she just has to love you

she has to, she must,

and she does, she does,

ugly crying but damn,

for you, all for you,

please just hold on

she pleads -

mucus filled tears

cascading down her face,

breasts,

thighs,

pooling on the floor,

making the doctors

both cringe with disgust and

simultaneously lean forward with interest

swaying in non-existent breeze -

and you die with your first kiss in your fist

and a piebald smile

that splinters her inside forever

but I guess that isn't your fault, right?

I do believe in love, I do, I do,

in unfettered devotions

in pimp-that-guy,

the quality relationship improvement show,

because you want to be a lover

but the guy ain't right

so just make him up

and use a real guy as his outside

you love him sanded, smoothed, buffed, painted

with rims and an inexplicable 48 inch lcd screen

you'll officially get hitched but don't cry

divorce is common and either way it doesn't matter

just look pretty and make sure to squint.

I do believe love, I do

I believe in

poisoning yourself for Juliet

rather than taking her pulse

to taking dear John's heart and

jumping on it happily

because you love him sooooo much

but like, the world has conspired against you,

not with guns and bombs and videotape

but with, like, freely made decisions,

peer pressure and jagermeister

his blood makes pretty patterns on your

milk white thighs and I guess that

he sticks around for the show

oh boy, I believe in love, I do, that

6 and 9 aren't meant to be together

they just fit, that

there's no place for 'pure'

in love cos it's all

pain and sperm and spit

as for 'star crossed lovers'

the stars are always crossed

else eclipses would be boring and

each lost lover on a course

I do believe in love, I do,

in the sweetheart who lispes

licking earlobes and bottom lip biting

of metal snakes, happy fates

and piscean traits,

exuding high fructose glucose syrup

instead of saliva

so kiss them carefully or you'll

sugar high and sugar low

and sugar crash and burn

with every cosmic turn and

oh, I believe in love, lovers, oh I do, I do,

in the swirls of black and white that

play ying and yang

that kiss and grate and fornicate

forming a pasty grey

declaring that their grey is the

greyest, greatest, gayest grey

I do believe in love, I do,

bridezilla has destroyed new york in the

quest for the perfect dress as

otherwise her,

sorry,

their,

day will be ruined

milan and paris are

shaking in their loius vuittons

praying they will be passed over

oh anna wintour,

just one more working day

please let the cake be next on it's list,

deliver us, oh lagerfeld, from

polyester blend shrouds in hideous off white,

amen.

but yeah,

I do believe in love, I do,

in philosophers that never tire

who'll be debating whether

kpattz, robsten, or my name for it,

sorry, them,

pattenwart,

really love each other

or are merely feeding off the media shit storm

to soothe their fragile bodies

and appease their shiny deities.

so yeah, I know what it involves

every ingredient labelled and shelved

sampled and sicked up and

given five star reviews on amazon

with words of advice

and I do believe in love.

I do.

oh, I do

so friends,

hold out your bleeding hearts

apply some anti-skeptic

your wounds will heal in thirty days

give or take a century.

Anonymous

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Youth is a bit cruel, isnít it?
A sparkling future is calling me.
I want to be selfish,
but I canít even chase you too far.

Iím waiting for a chance,
quietly waiting for a chance
Iíll wait forever,
but it canít end like this, can it?
I love you so much but time won't stop.
I want to grow old with you like this.

Kindness is cruel, isnít it?
It throws my heart into confusion
Iíve fallen in love.
You probably havenít noticed, have you?
I thought for sure that it would pass
in the blink of an eye.

I probably know you better than I did before,
but I want to know you more.
I hope I can call you my friend.
I've decided I'll accept your past and everything.

I canít go on like this. Well, can I?
Iím doing nothing but creating fantasies.
I need you, I've realized.
There's no way I can go back to the past.

I canít move on
so I want to have faith that miracles exist.
Even the truth contradicts itself.
Iíd rather believe in groundless dreams
than try to figure out the truth

"Which way to tomorrow?"

After you, there is no sense to it anyway.

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She said to him....

"A soft sound
escapes my lips
when you touch me,
I yearn for you here,
beside me,
inside me,
my teeth bite
into the soft skin
where your neck meets
your shoulder,
you sigh into my hair,
we are not making love,
because you dont love me,
we are just having sex,
because you are
the only one
who can hit all my spots..."
Pepper Jack

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Southern Woman Learns A Skill

On your knees whore
I said on your knees
Good girl
This is called soap
No, not "sayyoope"- soap
You take the wrapper off
Mix it with water
Clean yourself
Now
Good girl
You get a sardine
Beg, beg
Good girl
Now back in your cage
No, no drugs
In an hour successful business men
Much higher on the food chain
Than you
Will pay money
To blindfold whip and beat you
Then you can have your drugs
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It is inevitable,
to fall in love with you.
It is an inexcusable,
ludicrous, voluptuous, lunatic,
inside

So sacred our head
full of love, courage and compassion.

There are only fragments of dead,
wasted and full of hatred.

There are only a few,
who will do what we need to.

Let us decipher the lies and the phony cries
before , before we die...

So it is a rhyme that I crave to put it all away

Surrogate
Prostate
Devious
Oblivious
Candidate

The audacity of letting these fuckers lead,
When they cannot see, you or me...

Counterfeit
Redemption
Congratulation
Resurrection

New direction
contemplation
intention
reflection

I don't want to be paralyzed
unable to recognize
what lies inside
is all but my
demise

Hey beautiful
Take your chance, and dance...
with that old romance...
Circumstance is the balance
of the most meaningful poetic utterance.

Behold I hold the infinite universe in a microscopic piece of my finger...
Bigger still are the dreams that linger...

Rain drops the size of Jupiter.
Evaporate way too late.
Flooding the milky way,
with...

Toxic Creature.
Artificial Nature.
Followed the sign
to find the divine
Sublime elegance
of this existence.

I am the reactor

I am the watcher

It is not always clear

and it is not always real

and I can hear your cry

and you can heal yourself

and I can affect you

see your fear disappear
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I'm feeling out of balance
circumstance has me in a trance

you know it's times like these
that we should dance & dwell in romance

take me all the way
making our short days
reasons to play

wake the dead
like my head
and
turn this water
divine red

now the adrenalin starts to spread
see the dead alive instead
and the rocks turning to sweet bread

I've only had a glance
at your eminent importance
without you I'm out of balance
my circumstance holds me in a trance
it's here we will have to fucking dance

I really know what I need
you've already begun to feed
this feeling no longer a seed
and I have no more blood to bleed

can you feel me?
eight inch high, an risin'

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juggheaD wrote :

same like you, you can't backup your accusation to devine aren't ya?

Beth writes :

Matter of fact I can . In his words and the words of other women that have written about it here on topix . If I get bored at some point I'll PM you those words of others. It's not that hard . Just put in his name and read the comments from others about his abuse .

“Geez..”

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Laura Beth wrote:
juggheaD wrote :
same like you, you can't backup your accusation to devine aren't ya?
Beth writes :
Matter of fact I can . In his words and the words of other women that have written about it here on topix . If I get bored at some point I'll PM you those words of others. It's not that hard . Just put in his name and read the comments from others about his abuse .
we shall see about that, buzz me when you do.

“Just a lil' humor there.....”

Since: Sep 12

OR NOT .... <[;-)

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She said to him....
"A soft sound
escapes my lips
when you touch me,
I yearn for you here,
beside me,
inside me,
my teeth bite
into the soft skin
where your neck meets
your shoulder,
you sigh into my hair,
we are not making love,
because you dont love me,
we are just having sex,
because you are
the only one
who can hit all my spots..."

My fantasy fuckers didn't love me
they just loved to fuck. The men I
dated loved to have sex though I don't
know that it was love.

I believe I would have made a good wife.
When I was younger I was more shy than I
am now. I like joking around in a sexual
way and I love the shock and awe it inspires.
I know what the men like to hear. They like
to hear a girl who appears sweet who is also
able to talk about COCKs without blushing.
I do however ... still blush.

“Just a lil' humor there.....”

Since: Sep 12

OR NOT .... <[;-)

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SHC!T -- I had only meant to cut and paste that!

To send it out in personal email. Please Topix remove it. It wasn't meant to be here.

I'll expect to loose my account now.
It was a mistake and it wasn't meant for the public to see.

“Just a lil' humor there.....”

Since: Sep 12

OR NOT .... <[;-)

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We know only grayboxes and few others can get away with language like that. D@ng, no typos!

Just remove it topix, it truly was a mistake.
I've seen graybox posts removed and you can just remove that. I hadn't intended on posting it out here.

I'm like the woman many men like.
Lady in public and a slut in the bedroom.
:O

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Must be Love wrote:
Maybe I will come back another time.
What's wrong this time. I am waiting.
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LMBO.. you can't tell? Oh gosh.. lol
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PESCreate wrote:
SHC!T -- I had only meant to cut and paste that!
To send it out in personal email. Please Topix remove it. It wasn't meant to be here.
I'll expect to loose my account now.
It was a mistake and it wasn't meant for the public to see.
Don't think they'll do it. I think they enjoyed it. Plus... I happen to agree with it.
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I've seen alot worse on here PESCreate.

I'm waiting for the encore.

“I Say Love, It Is A Flower,”

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~~And You, Its Only Seed~~

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PESCreate wrote:
We know only grayboxes and few others can get away with language like that. D@ng, no typos!
Just remove it topix, it truly was a mistake.
I've seen graybox posts removed and you can just remove that. I hadn't intended on posting it out here.
I'm like the woman many men like.
Lady in public and a slut in the bedroom.
:O
Hello, PESCreate.
I do believe your poem was redirected to my box.
Topix is funny like that.

I'll see what Kevin can do for you.
((Hugs))

“I Say Love, It Is A Flower,”

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~~And You, Its Only Seed~~

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Laura Beth wrote:
juggheaD wrote :
same like you, you can't backup your accusation to devine aren't ya?
Beth writes :
Matter of fact I can . In his words and the words of other women that have written about it here on topix . If I get bored at some point I'll PM you those words of others. It's not that hard . Just put in his name and read the comments from others about his abuse .
You are on the Just Sexy and Poetry thread, no??

Please refrain from posting any further disruptions to the sexual rhythms expressed. I don't have much time left on this earth to enjoy such delicacies.

This is your last warning.

“Just a lil' humor there.....”

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Winnie the Pooh1 wrote:
<quoted text>
Hello, PESCreate.
I do believe your poem was redirected to my box.
Topix is funny like that.
I'll see what Kevin can do for you.
((Hugs))
YOU! You're too funny. I realize all the implications
my posts are making. Ooops!
;~)
Just still learning how to get along.
LOL
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A little sex here and there doesn't hurt anyone.. it's sea salt.. Mrs. Dash... whatever..

LOL .. It's only DeVine, he lives for it.

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