JUST SEX and POETRY

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Thick paper, creamy and smooth like old china.
Soft shadows, graphite shapes and curves already dress the surface.

The brush sweeps in simple forms, rough hewn black bass notes.
The rhythm and balance of space holds its truth in anticipation,
waiting for the story to wrap its personality to the page.

A simple sequence of panels emerges:

A dark landscape, the patient crosshatching of lawn
weaves through the foreground. The sky is softer, cloudy
perhaps a storm, but with sunlight escaping to catch
the edges of the afternoon.

A figure silhouetted, walks between the gum trees and
their calligraphic shadows. A house waits ahead.

Two stories, bay windows, the house hangs like a puppet
from its chimneys. Old fruit trees, quince, apple, loquat
wallpaper over the faded paint with their shadows.
From here the edge of the lawn is closer.

Walking across the grass, the ground slopes away.
A cliff rips the edge of the garden, ragged stone
falling to the ocean below. These waves are not tame.

The rocks are under siege.

Facing the house, the door is slightly ajar.
Pushing open the door, stirring the still air.
The shadowy hallway holds four doors and a curved staircase.....

A pinboard flutters with eclectic messages.

Feet on the carpet, old roses still weave their pattern
in the corners. The path to the stairs is worn smooth.

Fingers find the banister, waking the dust and
showing the warm timber beneath.
The stairs creak, but feel solid.....

Upstairs there are also four doors,
two each side of the hallway.

This door is open, a wash of sunlight
laps through the door.
The room is long and wide. Perhaps a ballroom?

The bay window faces the ocean.
Walking through the emptiness
imagining this space in busier times.

Stepping towards the sunlight
Watching the dust and light moving at the window.
The floor moves.....

Softens, distorts and is elastic.
Falling through blackness.

Fresh dark wet ink.
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Lying on my bed naked as the sky.
Pillows like billows of clouds
crisscross across.
Covering, revealing and covering again
as they move around me.

Your hands caress like the spring breeze
sneaking in through the window.
The wind fades away; though your fingers don't.
The way they move, perhaps it'll rain.
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You're the only one that she lets in
close enough to stain her skin.
But even you can go no deeper
although her shield is paper thin.

Through her guard you glimpse her heart
and how she holds it far apart
from the world outside and all its dangers;
Whole and pure and left unmarked.

I watch as your ink bleeds through
underneath her skin.
And although she doesn't know it she
has slowly let you in.

“Geez..”

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PESCreate wrote:
juggheaD asked the question so many of us wonder as well. You've got a bad rap and reputation around here and I may not be the only one that misunderstands your intent. Take care.
As for the icons - I wasn't set out to be mean to you and I hope you appreciate and believe that.
Hey legs I appreciate your honesty.
I'm not much care about any rep on virtual world, I don't take sides or any plot you have in here, I'm a free man comes and goes any time I want but when my insting say go for it, I go for it.

So it's your icons LOL!! like Mr Tallyho said so childish but none taking, that's ok if you want to mean to me as long that's the true you, let it all out. ;)

Being honest is not a crime, to be honest:

1. yes, your bud post do look like spam, hurts the eyes he should cut it each paragraph to make it look more neat.

2. appreciate someone works it's a must!!!!! No EXCUSES!!

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Knight DeVine liked you Polyamoury bit and what an explanation, to the point and correct.
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You'll always be one step behind me and I'll always know you're there,
You'll find me on the pavement, face down when you're not there.

You'll light up the darkest times with one miasmic smile,
You'll subsume me with the poison from your electromagnetic vile.

For all your faults and sinful ways, I'm drawn like moth to flame,
With your stab, your pinch, you caress every inch;
I am driven by this engrossing game.

Reason escapes me and all judgment is clouded, transfixed by this noxious passion,
An affair with the sun as she surrenders to night, as they writhe in tempestuous fashion.

And with one gasping breath, the climatic decent now etched in the oblique of my mind,
Adrenial moans and Pineal tones, spiral spectrums to render you blind.

In reverie I sit now, glowing brighter and fixed; a mirage of blush and sweat,
Barricading my thoughts, a thousand or more, of impudence and lack of regret.

Dilated this iris, forcing itself to be asphodel, a burst of fašadious bloom,
I twisted the knife, heard a smashing of white, iridescent as all walls of this peregrine room.

It's drawn to a close, leaving all to suppose, as we bask in it's sublime phantasm,
From the foreplay of Uadjet, to the thrustings of Zeus, satistfied by it's ceaseless orgasm.
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Liberty now

A lady stripped bare

Greeting newcomers

In her cucumber hue

With a torch of false fire

Meant to inspire

Them to dream

But it seems

Dreams are not

What they used to be...
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Quiet stillness
surrounds
one would think
it would bring peace
only brings questions
and what if's
my soul is barren
filled with hollow
laughter and melted
happiness.
cynical thought
departed long ago
its aura evaporated
and its long hands
tethered no more
to my psyche
But this is different
matter to matter
we rehearse images
scenes that could have been,
i.e.,should have been.
are we just fooling ourselves
or is time our taskmaster
bestowing us with unlimited space
and nothing to fill it
the cruel joke with no
punch line and no point
cannot be retold
within social galas
to regale the torture
and thus
put it in its place
instead its heaviness
lingers and psthisis
intrudes and decimates
an already conquered soul
but this is different.....

“Geez..”

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ok legs, here it goes:

I once said that you easily jump to a conclusion.
<interesting, is this for real?> that's merely a question.
is not an accusation.

your eyes only sees an optical illusion.
again <interesting, is this for real?> that's only a question
if you sees different, maybe it's just your dellusions.

“Geez..”

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Come on legs, don't disappoint me,
You open the wraps, let's just finish this,
Tell me what's up?

I'm a christian, Ain't mad at ya,
I don't make distract just gettin back at ya, ;)

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Knight DeVine, what a thought.
Even though I've mentioned your name but amazing poets are here. JuggheaD.

“I Wish 4 U Always Blue Skies”

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Love is the grestest feeling.when felt from the heart.Love is like a play,with you the main cast. Love is what I feel for you,each and every day.
Love is Like a smile,you cant erase.Love is like a song, you hear from within.Love is a great emotion that keeps us going.I love with my whole heart..
body and soul.I love the way I keep loving,like something you cant control.Remember if and when your eyes meet mine I love with my heart and I have poured my entire soul into you,right from the very start way down deep within my heart.

“Just a lil' humor there.....”

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juggheaD wrote:
Come on legs, don't disappoint me,
You open the wraps, let's just finish this,
Tell me what's up?
I'm a christian, Ain't mad at ya,
I don't make distract just gettin back at ya, ;)
I never considered myself a stupid woman.
If anything I was too quick to believe others were.
I can act stupid on occasion and I don't like when I do.

JuggheaD, I have no idea what you are asking of me.
I was having a conversation with Adrian because we'd been
getting acquainted for a time and I was confused on a few
matters. You and I have mailboxes and if you would further
like to discuss this you know where to reach me.

I had already closed my machine down before I saw any posts
after the one I had written.

You all have a nice day.
:)

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Eny,meany,miney,moe,
I stumped my little toe.

THANK YOU
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Lick me, bite me suck me fu ck me
It is a mantra that runs through my head,
Do what you will, as long as it pleases me.

Until that release comes that I seek I am at your mercy,
I follow willingly as you guide me
Ever so close to orgasm.

In and out, deep and shallow, hard and soft-
My only focus of the moment,
Nothing interfering only the internal battle,
Do I withhold, do I surrender?

As I match move for move
There are so many carnal impulses,
Overwhelmed by the pleasure that consumes me,
I sink and soar with every touch.

Just let me have my release.

Please

Lick me, bite me, suck me, f uck me
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She said:....

"YOU LOOK AT ME,
and feelings of sensuality stir up.
Might as well never been looked at before,
as female, girl, woman. My awakening is
primordial. I'm the first enchanted,ready
to give,to flow,to surrender to a stem,
tender,juicy,thick that'll open,bloom in
me into a seed bearing flower.

I'm thirteen,you are the boy on the next
block whose name I never knew or maybe
the years have erased it from my memory.

I'm sixteen you are the one who serenaded
me under the weeping willow on the meadow
at the edge of the stream. I'm nineteen,
married,you're the husband I always wanted.

I'm a young mother,I watch the world burst
with life in my baby's eyes. I'm twenty-nine
alone and looking for you in all the men I meet.

I'm here now to tell you,look,just look at
me. It's all I need to feel sensual,female,
girl,woman,primordial,enchante d. To remember
how I felt at thirteen,sixteen,nineteen,
twenty-nine.

Ready to taste,a stem,tender,juicy, thick,as if for the first time,that will open,
bloom in me into a seed bearing flower.
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Born on a stage,

but we are not actors.

sustainable, incorruptible,

methodical constructors.

survivors, with masks,

worn thin from being

worn for far too long.



Patrons of direction,

linear contemplation.

forgiven misconception

conceived by lack of

contraception.



Malnutritious jurisdiction,

inadmissible diction

of a script which we lead,

not by malice or greed,

but as the mask wears

thinner we wear our

feathers and our creed,

figments of our fiction

brewing in our mind.



All the worlds a stage,

but you may find

not the script or props

but the set is to be set

on fire, burn higher,

not with self-desire

but with the truth

needed to fuel

the pen.



For too long revisions

have been hidden,

scrapped, bed-ridden,

the director dictates

his dictatorship and

we, his cast and crew

far from true,

recite the prose

we've been fed

on this set of lies,

no compromise.



Mistaken identity

but not anymore,

not we! Born on stage

but not to die, not today!



A new script fit to

act upon, to breathe on,

to pray on, prey on,

cry on, stand on, feed on,

live on as we live on,

and love on, as love

goes on.



Off stage but never

off, fight the right

to write the right words,

tongues may twist

but the mind more so,

and so, off the stage,

and onward, we go!
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Ink and lust with fiendish trust,
lips ashen with peculiar dust.

Her body moves throughout the night,
desire so strong, that it should fright.

That girl is a demon,
She'll devour your soul.

Her emerald eyes burn with want,
perfect legs she strides in taunt.

Vibrant hair and enchanting lips,
crimson nails and calling hips.

That girl is a demon,
She'll devour your soul.
She'll give you her body,
at a terrinle toll.

She's going to plunge you down
to the Pits of Flame,
morph into a mindless slave
without your name.

The lies that spread
of sinners rule below you'll see
vicious tricks
so the minions of Hell can be.

She's in your bed,
she's in your head.

She's kissed your skin,
she'll let you in.

She moans for you,
her words feel true.

She feeds off lust,
she twists your trust.

Pleasure.
It pulses through your entire body,
one last night of immeasurable,
incomparable joy.

Torture.
It pierces every fiber of your being,
now, forever,
you're her little Damned toy.

That girl is a demon...

“I Wish 4 U Always Blue Skies”

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All I ever wanted was to be part of your heart,and for us to be together,to never be apart.No one else in the world can even compare,you are great and so is this love we share.We have so much more than I ever thought we would,I love you more than I ever thought I could.I will give you all I can give to you.I will do my best for you as long as I can give.I pray that one day you'll come to realize how great you are when seen thru my eyes.

“Geez..”

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PESCreate wrote:
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I never considered myself a stupid woman.
If anything I was too quick to believe others were.
I can act stupid on occasion and I don't like when I do.
JuggheaD, I have no idea what you are asking of me.
I was having a conversation with Adrian because we'd been
getting acquainted for a time and I was confused on a few
matters. You and I have mailboxes and if you would further
like to discuss this you know where to reach me.
I had already closed my machine down before I saw any posts
after the one I had written.
You all have a nice day.
:)
wow this is almost sounds like a deja vu,
all you can think of is 'I've no clue........'
this not about you acquainting with who.

what ever you have up against me,
let's have it in here.

need a clue?,
read it all again before it over due!

dumb dumb sounds like an empty drum,
all over the sudden, a simple question becoming a bump ;)
(like I said lets finish this)

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