The Gap, Australia

#4642 Dec 5, 2012
Gently, intently, I slid to the massive base
Of his tower of power, paused there a moment down
In the warm moist thicket, then began to retrace
Inch by inch the smooth way to the throbbing crown.

Indwelling excitements swelled at delights to come
As I descended and ascended those thick distended walls.
I grasped his root between left forefinger and thumb
And with my right hand tickled his heavy voluminous balls.

I plunged with a rhythmical lunge steady and slow,
And at every stroke made a corkscrew roll with my tongue.
His soul reeled in the feeling. He whimpered "Oh!"
As I tongued and squeezed and rolled and tickled and swung.

Then I pressed on the spot where the groin is joined to the cock,
Slipped a finger into his arse and massaged him from inside.
The secret sluices of his juices began to unlock.
He melted into what he felt. "O Jesus!" he cried.

Waves of immeasurable pleasures mounted his member in quick
Spasms. I lay still in the notch of his crotch inhaling his sweat.
His ring convulsed round my finger. Into me, rich and thick,
His hot spunk spouted in gouts, spurted in jet after jet.

The Gap, Australia

#4643 Dec 5, 2012
PESCreate wrote:
<quoted text>
Some of it is distasteful for some.
Don't read it.
Stay out of his threads with your HATE.
Just sayin'.
Your HATE is who You are -- Stop judging
The MAN.
GET OVER IT already and move on.
Hello Knight DeVine
I wish you well.
Hi Trish....read your valedictory on the previous pages.....thank you.....one day, perhaps, who can tell.....stranger things have happened.

I take little or no notice of my detractors, lead by that lame- brain maligner Laura-Beth......."They could detract little from so solid an argument."

The Gap, Australia

#4644 Dec 5, 2012
She walked along the promenade
With a prolonged gestation of pounding thoughts
The sun was dying spreading blood in the western sea

The sea cried silently ….
By rolling her head over the shore

The sky mourned by covering dark
Clouds around it
The Wild wind chimed the death knoll!

She walked along the promenade looking at the sky
The waves of thoughts impregnated and
Pounded in her cognitive ocean of emotional channels…
The stars scattered like silver flowers
In respect of the day’s demise

She looked at the serene sky in surprise
She looked up the face of the new born moon

There she found many of the little faces, who
left her behind to face the reality of the cruel life!

The Gap, Australia

#4645 Dec 5, 2012
Your eyes glowing in city rain sidewalk
night speak love to me.
They speak love to me.

Our romance in words bounces off
the familiar audio backdrop hum,
traffic sounds of downtowns anywhere.

We could just be anywhere
and it is everywhere
with your kiss hunting eyes glowing on me.

Your eyes glowing and my heart on fire darling.

It's the way you smile coy at me.
The beast I know my man to be.
How they are both equally,
I need them both equally,

The cadence when I say to you
You're beautiful
can move the wind
with the rhythm of your hips,
the force of ships,
in storm.

You're beautiful
Losing your breath mid-sentence;
I know the truth
in that one lost breath.

How the thought of you,
just the very thought of you,
inspires me.

Keeps desire alive in me.
Is demanding so I have to be
the man who is me.

The man god made for woman like She;
this he.

We dip and flow.
We move gracefully.

We beat box cardboard sidewalk
ghetto blaster on shoulder cool.

We opera and Yo-Yo Ma
upper echelon sophisticated smooth love.

This thing, this We, is meant to be.
This love arriving suddenly.

This woman is proof of god to me.

You and I and Sunday’s lover,

I do pray.

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Smiling :o) all the way....

#4646 Dec 5, 2012
Forgive others,not because they deserve forgiveness but because you deserve peace...


Level 8

Since: Mar 11

Rockin' USA ;)

#4647 Dec 5, 2012
Princess Hey wrote:
Forgive others,not because they deserve forgiveness but because you deserve peace...
Soooo DEEP...Princess Hey..but so TRUE...HOW Are YA ROCKIN' today????

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Smiling :o) all the way....

#4648 Dec 5, 2012
hey CC Im good...and yourself??

Only 2 things can change a womans mood.I love you and 50% discount...:O)found this and couldnt resist.

The Gap, Australia

#4649 Dec 5, 2012
Immorality has incarcerated
My concentration
Cynical thoughts raging
Darkness awakens with lunacy
Disavow away to a lifeless residue
How can a man untrue attain himself?
Diabolical tactics
Twisting with no sudden moves
Chances to convert
As another being cleanses a bewildered soul
Tomorrow crease
Figures to be washed
Into ghostly purities of gold
May the spirits spare amuse of confusion


The Gap, Australia

#4650 Dec 5, 2012
and now she'll just work harder.

sweat dripping from every pore, from every crease in her skin and every bend of her bones.

she will become what she has always wanted to be: strong.

her hair is becoming lighter.

one by one, the wavy hairs on her tanned head are being bleached by the sun.

her skin smells like memories of shores and of heat and of bathing suits.

she smells beautifully.

and as her skin tans her smile stretches across her face, beaming and bright.

her stomach is shrinking, her arms are muscular.

she finds new outlets for sadness and rage in pushups and squats.

she lifts weights for fun and does sit-ups to feel the burn of her life slipping away.

she needs new clothes, her old ones don't fit right.

or maybe they fit the way they were always supposed to.

she buys new shirts, new shorts.

she feels good about herself.

and then she breaks and her arms are weak and her legs won't move.

she scratches at her sides, long red marks across her too thick frame.

her thighs are fat and she knows it.

her hair is frizzy and she knows it.

her back is cracked and bent in half and she knows it.

and now she'll just work harder.

The Gap, Australia

#4651 Dec 5, 2012
We are apart
but the memory of this time
this very time this hour
a week ago
last week in fact
so vivid fresh
it must be true
no idle dream
or fancy’s flight
but oh so very real
and very true ...

naked on our bed you lie
for me to draw to sketch
I let my hand and
pads of fingers five
describe those shadows
your body forms and folds -
that dark dark space beyond
your folded arm and resting breast
and then a plateau next
the smooth persuasive lowlands
of your bottom’s rise and just
before descent miraculously
a crease (as if from nowhere) forms
and runs and disappears
deep deep deep into the depths
between your thighs .....

... and then to gaze
at the kind disorders of your hair
hair in which I love to lose my nose
and feel my eye-lids stroked and kissed
by twists and sudden unexpected curls
(and maybe find an ear and with
the tongue’s most tentative touch)
the confluence the turbulence the trace
and thread of nature’s line and stem ...

Know with the mind’s eye
&#8203;these forms I hold entire
and all the while your beauty’s
&#8203;gentle song plays on
&#8203;looping forever in the mind’s ear

The Gap, Australia

#4652 Dec 5, 2012
Cease the peace.
We tease ourselves
with every crease on this paper;
we call our lives.
Folding in ourselves
to make better
when we can do better.

Decrease the least pleasant day
from your mind, only this time
you’ll find a piece of paper, within you.
Written with words.

Not monosyllabic expressions
Of yes, no, and may-be, so

There will now be phrases that erase the seclusion.
Creating, and not copying
Leading, not following

And finally realizing
Humanity is at a loss
A loss from this paper
That is not glossy
Cause it should reflect
Who we are

The Gap, Australia

#4653 Dec 5, 2012
Lust lines crease
Your serpentine eyes
Slits of desire
Smooth and quiet
Not quite
Brash and rough and wet and messy
Thrown together in a backseat
Lust lines crease
My face
From falling asleep on the
Red and puckered
An echo of other images
Remnants of the meshing
Lust lines crease
Your tousled limbs
Form fitting cloth
Whoops. Not yours
Trade and cover the lust lines
Make up on both of us.

The Gap, Australia

#4654 Dec 5, 2012
From all around
They come crawling like crease on the bed sheet
Deeply plunged in me, I
Have held a corner a bit higher with my teeth
I should lift my self too
But my abdomen is heavy
And navel is tied
After shower
It is ecstatic to burst into flames
Long hairs falling on the ear
Feels like roots in the head
You can fall out if you shake it off
You are constantly transforming
Weed, rug, beats etc. etc.
Now you are expert
In how to walk on water with your nose closed
It is dangerous to keep your foot in the ring
Hoping for walls made out of flammable dust
There is spark in the snap of fingers
Dark cold in the chest
Speed is like snail
Slowly slowly
Ejaculation is natural
After the morning yawn
Everywhere falls very delicate leaves
I want to treasure them
I'll put them under my pillow
Tiring courting of night is sitting beside
At the end i counted total spinal vertebra,
Total was twenty-two
Still I needed help to wrap my leg around
'Limitless' saying waves you up on high oscillation
Loneliness is blissful
Silence is for you to fill
You are allowed to catch your breath if you can
You have to loose width of your chest
In attempts to be singular
There is ally full of black color
Red at twilight
Glowing silver at midnight
They come to see, from far countries
And some princess dips her legs in
You start dripping from her heel
Just like a sweat
You have to leave your blackness on her body
Cause only white sweat is allowed here
She gives you a mesmerizing kiss
You keep unfolding it
With both your hands between legs
Both legs are in north and south
And navel.........

Navel is already tied.

“Want A Friend, Be One”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Smiling :o) all the way....

#4655 Dec 5, 2012
If You're not being treated with love and respect, check your price tag.Perhaps you have marked yourself down.Its you who tell people what you're worth by what you accept.Get off the clearance rack and get behind the glass where they keep the valuables. Bottom line value yourself more.If you dont no one else will.!!!!

“Live Each Day and Have Fun !”

Level 4

Since: Nov 12

Where I am at .

#4656 Dec 5, 2012
Princess , you have the right idea don't take nothing less !

The Gap, Australia

#4657 Dec 5, 2012
Spoken--a word implicit.
A concept--broken.
A token, dropped
In the machine--
Time's up.
I have proven over
And again, I am
Tougher than I seem--
A fool still, hopeful.
And you never say
You grant me equal credibility
Or similar delusions.
To believe everything
You say--how can
I give you what I am not given?
But I do--
I would, and I will.
And I let you
Keep pieces of me
Locked, keyed to you
Secretly--only I
Can no longer
Be sure of finding them--
You will tell me,
I or you
Right or wrong.
And this new
Revisionist me
Wants only to be right
And for you to know.

The Gap, Australia

#4658 Dec 5, 2012
The ocean is a blue cliché,
The pink sunset a rough-edged neon light through the smog.
Sand and seaweed scuff my toes in the tender spots,
Pillow the tough heels of my wave-buried feet and
Slowly cover my ankles.
There is sand everywhere,
On my face and hands,
Carried by the waves onto my clothes,
Even in the air as it is flung back,
Back into the sea that will toss and churn it
And round the sharper grains
So that some child's small pink feet
Will one day feel them,
Soft under the soft-skinned toes
Of one not even thought of yet
On our sand grain of a world.

The Gap, Australia

#4659 Dec 5, 2012
We are closest when we are apart.
Each takes tiny steps back when
We are finally together again,
Forced away by the
Thoughts of closeness risen from solitude.
Lonely alone
Lonely together
This is not what I had in mind.
Where fear is the driving force
Fear must be of each other too,
A wedge forever standing
Until we need not be afraid
Which in this stifling, frowning
Disallowing world
Must never happen.

The Gap, Australia

#4660 Dec 5, 2012
Lying fetal on the couch, shivering in summer heat

As everything crashes head-on where no one wants
to look

But we all see, and bite nails to blood, and pray.

The affectation of electrons and magnets--

As visceral as we let it be, the holographic heart

Pumping between insubstantial ripping fingers.

And through the ache of fantastic discord we know

We will hypnotize ourselves again with the tears,

To know that we can still be made to feel.

Take all the hate bottled up in blue

The fear of yellow, the blank white ignorance

And set it on fire with souls denied.

Then what will be in your front yard?

A burning crucifix, to raise the alarm--

Someone without compassion lives here.

But leave your rifles racked, stay inside

As absolutely nothing in your life is broken,

As those you would denigrate pass you silently by.

The Gap, Australia

#4661 Dec 5, 2012
Based on one point the curve changes
Swelling outward with curiosity,
Dormant desire looking for its passage out.
One step short of hungry communion, kept out by
A wall years old growing thinner,
With the rule's exception
Sitting quiescently, mysterious and treasured.
I want to know beyond the telling, the borrowing;
I could never dare, but there is no other way
But to internalize,
And bring forth experience of my own.

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