Anonymous

Brisbane, Australia

#4512 Nov 28, 2012
the giver gives
delighting delicacies
mental heart wombs
filled
the space between time
and distance closed
alone
with pleasure
hands full
of synonyms
wet with the principles
of promise

the giver
looks into the
eyez of nothing
and births possibilities
scatters scars of
times lost
hurts for everything
hungers for greater
you portions
thrists for your desire
your dreams

the giver
mind talks
paints with the right brush
at the wrong times
wrong by time
envisioned with the glasses
colored by roses
scented with
the smells of the
ancient
lovahs
exalted like
the best days
and nites of youth

the giver
gives
innocence
reparations
reciprocity
nocturnal treats
when blowed by
sensational lipz

the giver gives
to receive
inches of nothing
to be lavished
with unstated praise
to be hum'd too
faint like the dying sounds
of yesterday

will you love
me
for I am
DeVine
the giver ?
Anonymous

Brisbane, Australia

#4513 Nov 28, 2012
I am dry.

Like the sweeping desert sands in their golden float.

I am blown by the wind.

Desperate to taste the breath of the sea.

I am dry.

My blood it boiled in the heat of my desire.

The furnace in my soul shall not die out of coal.

I am dry.

My face it peals like the scraping fibers of hardened leaves.

My heart cries with no water,

It burns off the ashes of my pain into the still world.

Why am I dry?

I taste my tongue as a hard rough rubber

That tears my mouth into little strips of red earth.

I am dry.

Oh fill me with the coolness of your ocean

That I might glide in the tender caress of water.

That I might taste joys before

The lucid reality of despair strikes me down.

Pour your last tear on my lip.

Let it drip down my mouth

And heal my broken tongue with the sweetness of your eyes.

I am dry.

Let me be soaked in the cleansing body of your sea.

Drench my being in the swamp of you’re your being.

I am dry.

I am so dry.

“On The Wings Of A Dove ”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Two Hearts In Love

#4514 Nov 28, 2012
I love my eyes when you look in them, I love my name when you whisper it,Love my heart when you love it,and love my life because you are in it!!!!
Anonymous

Brisbane, Australia

#4515 Nov 28, 2012
"MINDSET."

I amaze your mind
You amaze mine
To you my eyes are gateways of truth
To me, the beholder they are liars
They confuse your beauty for an angel
They lead my approach, unsure of whether I could handle
My eyes played my mind like chess masters
They showed me a challenge anticipating my next move, knowing my ambition to reach knew heights
My eyes may be chess masters but I stand taller as a creator
Anticipation is a law in my book
I read yours like music and despised the hook
Its constant repetition brought out annoyance
My eyes showed me beauty in the physical form
Closing one, I looked for the other two beautiful puzzle pieces to complete the attraction process
Unfortunately your ritual differed
We became one as I traveled up and down your elevator
The constant change in altitude brought about dizziness
Dizziness itself served as host to for the presence of allusion and confusion which stood right between us
Your music played in the background in an unfamiliar darker mood but the ignorant hook stood tall and ugly in darkness clearer than a lit cross
Despised the unwelcome guests, your elevator brought about an undeniable rush
But with every ride the unwelcome guests stood clearer, like dirty water on wait
I stared intensively at the allusion of your lack of purity and questioned your beauty as a whole
Beauty is mind, body, and soul piece together harmoniously like sweet music
Your piece started with body, which reflected heaven
Then it jumped to the mind which was an ignorant piece playing a none-changing, nerve racking, and unbendable role
Your soul must have been was a quiet one, it went by unheard
In completion of my vocal editing “Goodbye Miss possibility”
My escape code still play in her song right before the hook repeats itself

“Geez..”

Level 3

Since: Oct 12

Greensburg, IN

#4516 Nov 28, 2012
JUST SEX and POETRY

Poetry have many words and Sex have only a few short words (YES!, AH, BABY, OH, CUMIN, GOD!)
Anonymous

Brisbane, Australia

#4517 Nov 28, 2012
juggheaD wrote:
JUST SEX and POETRY
Poetry have many words and Sex have only a few short words (YES!, AH, BABY, OH, CUMIN, GOD!)
Lune candide vous brillez moins que les hanches
De mon amour
Aubes que j'admire vous tes moins blanches
Aubes que chaque jour
J'admire hanches si blanches

Il y a le reflet de votre blancheur

Au fond de cet aluminium

Dont on fait des bagues

Dans cette zone ogne la blancheur
O hanches si blanches.

~DeVine.

“On The Wings Of A Dove ”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Two Hearts In Love

#4519 Nov 28, 2012
She'll cry and get over it.She'll hate you then love you again,but one day she'll leave and she won't come back....

“Geez..”

Level 3

Since: Oct 12

Greensburg, IN

#4520 Nov 28, 2012
Roxie Dear wrote:
<quoted text>
Just seven short one syllable words.
Do that to me one more time.
LOL

“Geez..”

Level 3

Since: Oct 12

Greensburg, IN

#4521 Nov 29, 2012
Knight DeVine wrote:
<quoted text>
Lune candide vous brillez moins que les hanches
De mon amour
Aubes que j'admire vous tes moins blanches
Aubes que chaque jour
J'admire hanches si blanches
Il y a le reflet de votre blancheur
Au fond de cet aluminium
Dont on fait des bagues
Dans cette zone ogne la blancheur
O hanches si blanches.
~DeVine.
Look devine do you think ppl read poetry while having sex?

Woman: is it inside yet?
Man: Not yet hunny, I haven't finish this mcbeth
Woman: SIGH!!
Anonymous

Brisbane, Australia

#4522 Nov 29, 2012
juggheaD wrote:
<quoted text>
Look devine do you think ppl read poetry while having sex?
Woman: is it inside yet?
Man: Not yet hunny, I haven't finish this mcbeth
Woman: SIGH!!
Jugghead, some people get lost in thought because it's such unfamiliar territory,...... however, a great many people think they are thinking, when they are merely rearranging their prejudices, and it could be considered an elegant incognito devised to save males like you, from the vexation of thinking.

You ever have such problems ?

“On The Wings Of A Dove ”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Two Hearts In Love

#4523 Nov 29, 2012
A true man doesnt need to romance a different girl every night, a true man romances the same girl for the rest of his life.!!!!

“Geez..”

Level 3

Since: Oct 12

Greensburg, IN

#4524 Nov 29, 2012
Knight DeVine wrote:
<quoted text>
Jugghead, some people get lost in thought because it's such unfamiliar territory,...... however, a great many people think they are thinking, when they are merely rearranging their prejudices, and it could be considered an elegant incognito devised to save males like you, from the vexation of thinking.
You ever have such problems ?
LOL you need to light up a bit, everybody had a problem.

Here I quote you "Words, words just a mere word." peace :)
Level 6

Since: Jan 12

Location hidden

#4525 Nov 29, 2012
Princess Hey wrote:
A true man doesnt need to romance a different girl every night, a true man romances the same girl for the rest of his life.!!!!
atta girl!!
Level 6

Since: Jan 12

Location hidden

#4526 Nov 29, 2012
juggheaD wrote:
<quoted text>
LOL you need to light up a bit, everybody had a problem.
Here I quote you "Words, words just a mere word." peace :)
I agree with Juggie.

Take a chill pill.

“Geez..”

Level 3

Since: Oct 12

Greensburg, IN

#4527 Nov 29, 2012
QuiteCrazy wrote:
<quoted text>
I agree with Juggie.
Take a chill pill.
You too, lay off the nuts. ;)(kidding)

“On The Wings Of A Dove ”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Two Hearts In Love

#4528 Nov 29, 2012
When Passing through the storms of life, please remember ,it could be worse and it will get better.
Stay strong focus on what you can do,not what you can not,and know that the clouds will soon part,
and the sun will return again.!!!!

“ROCK ON ROCKERS!!”

Level 8

Since: Mar 11

Rockin' USA ;)

#4529 Nov 29, 2012
Princess Hey wrote:
A true man doesnt need to romance a different girl every night, a true man romances the same girl for the rest of his life.!!!!
Princess Hey..THAT IS SOOOOOO..SWEET! How are ya Chick?

“On The Wings Of A Dove ”

Level 9

Since: Mar 12

Two Hearts In Love

#4530 Nov 29, 2012
Hey girl Im good how are you doing and TY..have missed ya..LY

“ROCK ON ROCKERS!!”

Level 8

Since: Mar 11

Rockin' USA ;)

#4531 Nov 29, 2012
Princess Hey wrote:
Hey girl Im good how are you doing and TY..have missed ya..LY
Chick, I am soooooo A-Okay! Tmail me if ya want to..computer issues ya know..LY ya also..Have FUN on the threads..going over to the Night Owl Saloon in a bit..wanna come along??? Bring Adrian with ya, if ya like..
Anonymous

Brisbane, Australia

#4532 Nov 30, 2012
"COPULATION."

She said: "when I woke up next to you, feeling like a ice pop
and I kissed your vermilion border, gave you my half of the sheets
you whispered in my ear, "no, I want you to be warm"
grabbed your jacket and placed it on my frame
you're so sweet like two stevia packets emptied on to my tongue
lemons and oranges couldnt be squeezed as good as your huggies
that one night, in my room, under the blacklight
my jokes were corny but I saw that paperwhite smile glow
along with your hippie acid tripping mushroom posters
remember when we ate out those few times
it made me happy when you enjoyed your food
I liked it when you enjoyed anything
those sparkling eyes your face carried always sunk me in deep
like an anchor approaching the ocean floor on top of hills that are really steep
when you were inside of me,
yeah... yeah, at first it hurt
then it progressed like my grades in junior high
but I'd like to not see you go now
double negative, I can't not see you anymore
it felt right, you felt left, so you left
just like the leaves depart from december twenty-first branches
you should be back soon and I'll wait
when you return, could we remake a copy of our last copulation?
in the backseat of your car or mine if I eventually get one
in your bed or even my own
behind the open house party next to that tree
me on top or you on top of me
link your pinky to my pinky and promise that you'll stay
just a little longer so we can grow for a bit
so we can be cacoons and become butterflies together
you can be high all the time,
in the sky I prefer....

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