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Noah Vail

CatMomDu

stacked and proud

Sweetie-Pie

Marissa2

Hippichick

Purple Gurl

Adrian DeVine

Any Troll I Can Copy

Write In

Lawd-ham-Mercy

Norcross, GA

#5342 Aug 26, 2015
inbox is a euphemism wrote:
<quoted text>Your inbox, madam or sir, is huge and stretched out. Ewwwwww!
U sick m-f*r.
*smh*

“"My Book of Many Shadows"”

Since: Apr 15

Reincarnate; Volver a encarn.

#5344 Aug 31, 2015
"HOLY TRINITY."

Man of science,
Only sees what is there,
Wants to build the fence.

Man of religion,
Out of nothing sees everything,
Wants to envision the fence.

Man of philosophy,
Out of everything sees nothing,
Wants to sit on the fence.

“"My Book of Many Shadows"”

Since: Apr 15

Reincarnate; Volver a encarn.

#5345 Aug 31, 2015
I hear echoes that have no voice,
Sad before the vaulted tongues
Over brimmed, who spill on shunted ears
The sour milk of pressed pictures
And sooted lights of lime
And the golden knobs taste
Jarring-dry to their saw dust toes.
Must the babe be chosen
By its mother?

*
*

The sea dirt is lined with woollen shawls
And the chasm shout shall dig our graves,
Throated hollow, to the abyss, we sink our six
And spade the dirt, call not them the spades.

*
*

I hear echoes that have no choice,
But to skim the moated land
And wash well eyes with leaven walls
That tease and prod the sum to crushing
Columns lifted shoulder
High by zeros of kneeling numbers
Worming in bedded slumber.
Must the maker of builders
Be dismantled?

*
*

The sea dirt is lined with woollen shawls
And the chasm shout shall dig our graves,
Throated hollow, to the abyss, we sink our six
And spade the dirt, call not them the spades.

“"My Book of Many Shadows"”

Since: Apr 15

Reincarnate; Volver a encarn.

#5346 Aug 31, 2015
A troll did go trolling
in a pretty poetry glade
his tormenting trolling
'twas not pleasant of escapade

poets were most distressed
at him calling at their digs
which did constantly ruffle
all the nest's sprigs and twigs

of little concern 'twas
the writer's haven of tranquillity
the troll kept on trolling
in his usual vogue of incivility

one is aware and alert
to the troll's taunting patrol
he's haunting omnipresence
is well out of control

'tis a safe bet that he'll appear
when he chooses to do so
which will cause all the poet's
stacks to explosively blow

“"My Book of Many Shadows"”

Since: Apr 15

Reincarnate; Volver a encarn.

#5347 Sep 3, 2015
Set free my captive mind
The pen needs no water nor light
It spills the ink of my soul in letters
The blunt lines and dark smudges
Staining my fingertips as I rub to blur it out
Making it look soft and old
A part of the past
I can still see the grooves where the ink ran out
Of when I wrote you for myself
And in a candle lit room
When I tilt the paper
I can make out the laugh in your smile
And see where we hug
So what if it's barely visible
I don't believe in bad omens

“"My Book of Many Shadows"”

Since: Apr 15

Reincarnate; Volver a encarn.

#5348 Sep 7, 2015
who is the stranger with the anger in her bones,
who finds hiding places in oversized sleeves
and tension in the clenching of her jaw.

chipped teeth cannot cause the damage they seek;
like chipping bark off of the still, silent trees
and walking away feeling easy and free.

but those who are beloved are blameless.
discarded gum pulses on the pavement,
trapped beneath heaving, unconscious soles;

marrow turns to iron as skin turns to dust
anger does its very best to help us rot

pale beyond recognition, peace is sand in your throat,
once exposed flesh adopts shame like a growth.

“"My Book of Many Shadows"”

Since: Apr 15

Reincarnate; Volver a encarn.

#5349 Sep 7, 2015
"SUMMATION of BEING."

I need to turn these days
into attractive dust
moments left abandoning
a selfish recreation
of secrets employing
their own role in
a landscape of desperate longing

Like an angel whose inconsistent stability
will disappoint the
courts of categorical righteousness
tossing into the wind of verdicts
a rebel leaf that will
someday find its way
into the bedrooms of anxious jurors
showing once and for all
the impermanence of contentment

“Purple girl in a purple world”

Level 8

Since: Apr 08

Plum, Purplonia

#5350 Sep 8, 2015
Thanks for the votes. Now, should I come back to the forum?

“"My Book of Many Shadows"”

Since: Apr 15

Reincarnate; Volver a encarn.

#5351 Sep 8, 2015
Poor Carly, the short bitch,
sits forcibly knitting the air.

Although nothing takes shape,
it does so palpably.

She works with ferocious
concentration, never
dropping a stitch
and the nothing she is making
assumes every aspect of creation
except form and substance.

People marvel at its
complexity, its structure,
cunning and connivance.

She merely continues the work,
the focus of the undertaking
engendering its own reward.

Art may be a delusion
plied by idiots,
but the world doesn't know that
and we scholars don't care.

“So it's not you, It's them?”

Level 9

Since: Jun 11

Location hidden

#5352 Sep 8, 2015
Purple Gurl wrote:
Thanks for the votes. Now, should I come back to the forum?
That'd be your decision. It seems like you never left. Lol
Potted Squrl

Chicago, IL

#5353 Sep 8, 2015
Purple Gurl wrote:
Thanks for the votes. Now, should I come back to the forum?
Who are you?

“"My Book of Many Shadows"”

Since: Apr 15

Reincarnate; Volver a encarn.

#5354 Sep 9, 2015
"FLAMINGO."

Where solar lips are parted
and crescent nipples hardened
cobalt fire licks your name off its oldest breath
this virgin hollow bends its neck through thermal skies and sand
scarlet waves of heat off your (sweet ancestral) hand
come inside, the door is open...... the answer's always yes

Medusa’s gaze would turn to sand
if she knew the stony glories spanned
within rock candy walls ablaze
flood plains carry hydrogen freight
from your abyss' collapsing weight
the broken hymen flowers rusting in the haze

Long stem bows in the cut orchestral
steal blood from the times ancestral
the ink has spilled and left a stain
under folded layers of skin
that the mirror reflects from views within
your eyes are naked lights, innumerable and plain.
retrofitted, edited and re purposed......like, simultaneously...
Franie Frank

London, UK

#5355 Sep 10, 2015
Da troof wrote:
<quoted text>
U beez jealuz!
I don't think it's right to change your name like that to tell another a truth and especially that lame one. I know many do it and even more are accused of doing it ... but not all will be fooled and they'll know just who you resemble and give you much less in return when you use your registered profile. Please don't tell me you don't have one.:)
Franie Frank

UK

#5356 Sep 10, 2015
Purple Gurl wrote:
Thanks for the votes. Now, should I come back to the forum?
You have been associated with Topix long enough to know the pros and cons of that? I do not believe I will stay on Topix for that many years ... but I can relate to returning now and again. I believe their best days around here are gone and Topix is pretending they don't know how to make it better ... or just refusing to do the right thing more often. JMHO tho.

LOVE the avatar.
Franie Frank

UK

#5357 Sep 10, 2015
KNIGHT DeVINE wrote:
"FLAMINGO."
Where solar lips are parted
and crescent nipples hardened
cobalt fire licks your name off its oldest breath
this virgin hollow bends its neck through thermal skies and sand
scarlet waves of heat off your (sweet ancestral) hand
come inside, the door is open...... the answer's always yes
Medusa’s gaze would turn to sand
if she knew the stony glories spanned
within rock candy walls ablaze
flood plains carry hydrogen freight
from your abyss' collapsing weight
the broken hymen flowers rusting in the haze
Long stem bows in the cut orchestral
steal blood from the times ancestral
the ink has spilled and left a stain
under folded layers of skin
that the mirror reflects from views within
your eyes are naked lights, innumerable and plain.
retrofitted, edited and re purposed......like, simultaneously...
I would read you more often, if and when I knew you could actually write something and in the same way the authors you copy and paste out here. I'll give you a 'B-' for capturing others attention and being soulful enough to know where to find all the poems/stuff you post out here.

Even your personal notes come off as fake, but maybe that really is who you are.
You are a beautiful woman, why did you take down the pic?

“"My Book of Many Shadows"”

Since: Apr 15

Reincarnate; Volver a encarn.

#5359 Sep 10, 2015
Lonely
Is my soul
For it does not see itself

Opaque
Are my eyes
For they can not feel the light

Trembelimg
Is my heart
For it does not know the way

Severed
Is my mind
For it can not met my soul

“"My Book of Many Shadows"”

Since: Apr 15

Reincarnate; Volver a encarn.

#5360 Sep 10, 2015
Hi there,
Below I copy a humorous hiabun, which I shared as an exercise to mentor enquiring and inspired poets to learn, so they might adopt and try different techniques and then give a critical analysis together with awesome comments...

Yes, I used the words sex, sexual and sexy for context the rest was left to an individual imagination as in good poetry!

It included reflective commentary encompasses innocent classification terminology used in the critique, reading, examining, appreciating, understanding and writing of poetry for example:

POETIC DEVICES (enjambement, duality, keriji, images, collocation, semantic, oxymoron, repetition, listing etc.), STORY (personification, characterisation, subject, context, voice etc.),

IMAGERY (synaesthesia),

STRUCTURE ( linearisation, breaks, syntactic etc.),

SOUNDS (syllables, rhyme, alliteration, pace, musicality, phrasing, beat, assonance, onomatopoeia, mouthed rhythms, patterned) and,

WORDS (preposition, determiner, verbs, adverbs, lexical, nouns, adjectives) used by poets, critics and academics...

And here it is :

Sexy tongue-in-cheek haibun - a reflective commentary on writing a popular tanka

Eye lashes flicker
a shared urgent interest
parting - dancing smile

My first inspiration was sex, passionate life squeezing screaming sex, the thumping wall musicality of sex, exhaustingly inventive sweaty and wet.

I wanted to make it a senryu but for duality the female characterisation demanded two more lines each extending to seven syllables.

Arousing images captured her moaning splashing loneliness in unusual collocation.

I was first excited by the placement of a hovering extended enjambment to give life to my final line, whilst also considering the satisfaction in using noisy mouthed rhythms.

I believe I easily hid the wet aroused context with a watery semantic field, that suggested she would choke and drown.

So in my last line I had ‘pleasures’ as a cutting keriji to make clear the dominating sexual context, having previously used a preposition and determiner to maintain duality!

Exhausted shivers
in windowed naked currents
unfolding sinking
then surfing vital wavelets
drowning screams -
pleasures wet bite
SB 277 is BS

United States

#5361 Sep 13, 2015
Not a one of you anymore.
SB 277 is BS

United States

#5362 Sep 13, 2015
Mostly come to say my goodbyes.

And leave toxic topix way behind.

I am beginning to forget you.
SB 277 is BS

United States

#5363 Sep 13, 2015
California has worn me quite thin

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