LOVE and OTHER BRUISES

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“Ungood doubleplus duckspeak.”

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Love is not finding the right person to be with but creating the right relationship with the one person you are with.Its not about how much love you have in the beginning but how much love you build in the end..one doesnt see thru pictures you have to let her know express it,tell her.pictures are memories.

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Love's a funny thing
It'll make you cry
It'll make you sing

Then when the first disagreement occurs
All out that intense emotion pours
From the depth of your soul
Your heart shatters at the thought of being apart

Open communication is a must
For 'tis sorely needed

Perchance to develop trust.

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The heart knows more than the mind.
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Words like little graces, blossom and bloom about me,
with effecent charm the alarm is sounded.

Bugles brass and bold, chime high the challenge,
I lie, unmoved intoxicated with a lifeless elixer.

I see yonder, a dream like, a drowse made of fog,
of landscapes.....delusion filled,

Children shrill on the playground of possibilities.

Insidious clowns, exaggerate frowns, tempting my fate with teardrops,
torn, worn and weary, I summon strength to leave this livid leviathan.

Insipid dawn, languid drawn.....rises above my tell-tale intentions,
order obliterated under these chaotic confines of mind......

Maniacal meanderings seems my only means of motion,
this I trust,

While I cantor the banter,

With a just and virile joust !

~DeVine.
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Sweet surrender, subtle
subjugation of all that you
are to the will of another.
Unbound, you bare your soul
to those who devour life and love.
All that you are; all that you can be;
all that you may become
mean nothing. Irrelevance reigns supreme,

except to the poppies,
who grow in the field,
untended, and
all the more
beautiful
for that lack.

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Devine <3
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We were deep in thoughts
of sweet nothings and 'maybe's
wishing our days away
with hopes of love
as if it fell like hailstones
on a stormy day.

We were harbored far
in the voices of a million
hopeful souls calling for peace.
But the human heart is lined with evil
and craves
and wants
with greedy hands
and when we realize that,
this delicate facade might tear down
and we'll find
that love is meant to be cherished
like the last note of a symphony
and that you and I
were never really together.
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This inextinguishable

distinctive, i n f i n i t e feeling

at times indistinguishable from day one


in low moments

it lingers; a lullaby lulling my

return to romantic moments past



at its heights

mortality gains and unknown potency

prompting me to keep you ever closer.
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A candle bleeds


waxen worries wearily pool

fire fuels a not so distant demise


an eerie iridescent glow

grows a calming quiet


flame rocks back and forth

in mellow meditation


sweet scents develop


An enveloping vanilla

aroma takes over composing

beautiful fragrant notes







Fire now flickers on wick



a quickened blissful dance ensues

thoughts of an impending end

disappear swiftly in silken smoke.


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LupyLu wrote:
Devine <3
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Hi

we might have been neighbours (?)

thanks for all the nice things you say about me....

*hugs*
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Adrian.

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PERSONIFICATION DeVINE wrote:
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Hi
we might have been neighbours (?)
thanks for all the nice things you say about me....
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Adrian.
Anything is possible and you are very welcome.
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Thank you for touching my soul.
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In the core of heart,swirls in whirlpools ,

The terrible tempest of desires

Wrecking the strong pillars of good will

Destroying all habitats of peace

Quite a task it is, to tame this storm

That rages devilish, wild and strong

Pray and meditate, a great saint said

Give the soul the strength it greatly needs

Prayer banishes the temptations

Prayer soothes the gullible Heart

Prayer quenches the wicked greed

Prayer vanquishes the darkest need

Strip off all the allies of desire

The tempest shall soon turn to zephyr

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Hey Lupylou ,

It's the pets Assdrain steals from that touches your soul . Read back that old man does use poems from other poets to lure in vulnerable ppl . Chick if you got a real man I suggest you run quick from here .

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Laura Beth wrote:
Hey Lupylou ,

It's the pets Assdrain steals from that touches your soul . Read back that old man does use poems from other poets to lure in vulnerable ppl . Chick if you got a real man I suggest you run quick from here .
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Laura Beth wrote:
Hey Lupylou ,
It's the pets Assdrain steals from that touches your soul . Read back that old man does use poems from other poets to lure in vulnerable ppl . Chick if you got a real man I suggest you run quick from here .
http://www.topix.com/forum/news/weird/TJPTE6L...
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Laura Beth wrote:
Hey Lupylou ,
It's the pets Assdrain steals from that touches your soul . Read back that old man does use poems from other poets to lure in vulnerable ppl . Chick if you got a real man I suggest you run quick from here .
So, you still believe that Adrian is Ozzie, eh?

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Laura Beth wrote:
Hey Lupylou ,
It's the pets Assdrain steals from that touches your soul . Read back that old man does use poems from other poets to lure in vulnerable ppl . Chick if you got a real man I suggest you run quick from here .
Who does he steal from? Do you know? I'd really like to know...
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Laura Beth...I think ya better go get Rosie for this next line of questioning. Maybe stacked and proud, I Won!! I Won!! I Won!,... too.

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Every poet that has ever written a poem .its been going on for years . He plays this sensible guy yet has nothing to say in personal words of his own ..... Besides really nasty words towards women once they figured out his game on topix. Beware !!!!!! He has contacted husbands and ppl's work once he gets real info from your emails. He has done this to many ppl . Trying to ruin their relationships ( asking questions he can contact the husband or wife at their work), to harass , give doubt, exploit and ruin anything he can. It's an old man posing as a gentle heart yet he terriourizes women .

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